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by Starne
Wed Nov 07, 2018 4:56 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 142-143: Tsk, here's mommy
Replies: 65
Views: 36446

Re: Page 142-143: Tsk, here's mommy

In all likelihood, Tempo and the others are just talking about the situation in the way that's most efficient for Loroi. Alex being kept out of the loop might be a little rude, but Beryl likely informed Tempo that Alex was fine long before she entered the cockpit and discussing the situation clearly...
by Starne
Wed Jun 21, 2017 6:05 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Replies: 2709
Views: 1629025

Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

A possible story direction occurred to me a long time ago, and seeing Beryl's shocked reaction brought it back to me: what if the shuttle gets shot down, and Alex and company have to survive on a hostile world? This trip to Seren is supposed to take "many days." Weeks' worth of conversation on a sh...
by Starne
Sat Jun 17, 2017 4:51 pm
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page: 118
Replies: 105
Views: 104233

Re: Page: 118

Marginal and situational authority, she can talk to and converse the alien diplomat about official business but she can't order the others around on anything that doesn't have to do with diplomacy or espionage. Given that the Loroi are dealing with a first contact with a previously entirely unknown...
by Starne
Sat Jun 17, 2017 12:21 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page: 118
Replies: 105
Views: 104233

Re: Page: 118

I'm not sure if this has been commented on... But if I'm not mistaken, practically every Loroi who has had any kind of prolonged contact with Alex appears to be aboard the shuttle. The only exceptions being the two medical personnel who treated him and were present when he first regained consciousne...
by Starne
Wed Jun 14, 2017 12:53 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page: 118
Replies: 105
Views: 104233

Re: Page: 118

Alex isn't exactly in a position to make the Umiak an offer, is he? Likewise, actually defending Humanity against the Umiak isn't a factor because the Umiak don't know where humanity is, and aren't likely to know until one of three things happen: 1: Humanity aligns with the Loroi and the Loroi start...
by Starne
Wed Jun 14, 2017 12:06 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page: 118
Replies: 105
Views: 104233

Re: Page: 118

Alex is definitely making the right call in being cooperative and forthcoming. Being non-cooperative and not forthcoming in his situation would be a quick way to ensure that he and likely humanity would be treated with even more suspicion at best, and as hostile at worst. As Stillstorm demonstrated,...