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Werra wrote:Go on.

I take it the Wonderkid didn't make it and humanity now has to make do with whoever K is?

Yeah, that just about covers the situation.

L-U-C-Y Chapter 1: You're not the good guy here. You know, nobody’s perfect. Everybody has an off day; and anyone's liable to make terrible mistakes. Everyone knew this, and none more so than K: Lieutenant Junior Grade aboard the Bellarmine, Scout Corps , TCA academy alumnus and Highschool graduate...

Thanks for the quick answers. I have some more clarification questions on some of them since I'm interested in stuff like this. At this tech level, small sensors and transmitters are extremely easy to conceal. However, without faster than light communication, any intelligence gathered is limited to ...

No. According to the insider essay about the Jump Drive , you'd jump on the wrong side of the reality plane (spacetime) right away, as you're starting downwards. http://www.well-of-souls.com/outsider/images/hyperspace_badjump.gif (imagine a continuation of the " deep jump "green arrow to get what I...

Just some miscellaneous questions. I wasn't sure what thread to put them under so I made one to place them in. 1) At this tech level, what sort of spy technologies do the combatants have? Would they be able to install micro cameras/microphones on people without their knowledge for example? 2) How do...

When we're talking about powerful Loroi families, strictly speaking, we're mostly talking about the warrior class. Most civilians are not permitted to reproduce; the majority of civilians were born to warrior families, with which they no longer associate, and so actual biological civilian families ...

Beryl was born aboard a cruiser during the Semoset offensive. As a baby she was taken off the ship at the first port of call (a frontier colony in the Steppes), and her mother died shortly thereafter. Her mother was of no important family, she was taken into state custody and eventually transferred...

I had some questions about Loroi culture, just point me to the webpage if these have already been addressed however. 1) Do Loroi have a war exemption clause for designated persons, ala Mosely. For instance, would any potential Einstein be shielded from battle, if so would this be a restriction of sa...

Is there any particular pattern to the way spoken names are said in Trade?

Hey guys, no new chapter yet, but I'm close to finishing the next one. Although, If any of you are interested in beta reading, feel free to message me as I'm running into the most roadblocks when I'm trying to figure out if what I'm writing makes sense. To be clear, I'm not looking for an editor, ju...

From The Heavens Above Part III Chapter 2 I never made it a habit to get into trouble. In fact, it was my number one priority when doing anything not to get into trouble. I was always particularly sensitive to that. Nevertheless, I have gotten into trouble, big trouble at times. And with my experti...

From The Heavens Above Part III Chapter 1 From The Heavens Above Part III Chapter 1 My name is Angus, and...well... It was a surreal moment, really. I’d thought that I’d accepted my strange new reality, was prepared for the unexpected to strike, that I was fully aware of my residence in the Twiligh...

From The Heavens Above Part II Chapter 2 “Where am I?” Angus wondered idly before a spark, and the following smoke, quickly drew his attention back and raised his heart rate. “Come onnnnn, come onnnn,” Angus whispered nervously as he tentatively coddled a pile of dry grass, speckled with white spot...

It's not all in one place that is easily postable, but is spread across multiple hundred-plus page documents. And no, the 788-page main notes document is not suitable for public consumption. :D Guess I'll just have to keep pestering you with questions then, :) . Speaking of which, do Loroi have to ...

Did you mean "de-clogged nose"? Yes, thanks for the head's up. It's fixed now. The text would be much, much easier to read if you'd assemble sentences together as paragraphs. Now, when I want to note something I noticed down, it takes me LONG to refind the spot I was..... (really follow Siber's hin...

Do you have an idea of what the moons of Deinar look like? Their sizes, orbital periods etc...

Would you be willing to post your notes somewhere, even if they aren't complete?

From The Heavens Above Part II Chapter 1 ...like shit. Angus felt like shit. Feeling as if someone had rubbed onion juice into his eyes, Angus, again, tried to crank his painfully teary eyes open a sliver, glimpsing a blurred landscape before he quickly shut them again, recoiling in pain. Angus hun...

I've been having trouble finding information on the Loroi worlds.

For example, what the gravity and atmosphere are like on Deinar.

Fair, the chapter was really only meant to introduce the two characters and there was a lot of fluff. I might have gotten carried away 8-) . As for the writing style, this particular chapter was meant to be written from the point of view of a Loroi, a lot of the setting description is actually a sub...

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