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by novius
Mon Dec 02, 2019 7:09 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 167: This one's out early
Replies: 40
Views: 19559

Re: Page 167: This one's out early

That's hardly getting uppity, it's a science officer telling a foreign diplomat not to let the superstitions of the soldiery give him a false impression of the loroi as a culture. Yay culture! Little does Beryl know that hearing about a few minor superstitious traditions will make Alex more comfort...
by novius
Fri Nov 29, 2019 7:13 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 167: This one's out early
Replies: 40
Views: 19559

Re: Page 167: This one's out early

After all, Talon did suggest that they all "get cozy-like", though mainly for added comfort during a longer storytelling, she did come up with it when Alex mentioned the dropping temperature...
by novius
Tue Nov 26, 2019 6:53 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Replies: 2709
Views: 1803270

Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

I just realized something: that's beryl and Spiral in the original poster. Are they going to get into a girl fight over a male? Not as much. They are more in disagreement over the right way to treat a male. Beryl seems to favor the "coddle and tuck them away safely" type, but Talon is - interesting...
by novius
Mon Nov 25, 2019 7:21 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: I think there is more to come
Replies: 35
Views: 12093

Re: I think there is more to come

Its been a while since I read the Loroi page, but they really don't ave a concept of romantic love. Lust, attachment, but unless humanity rubs off on them, note love in the conventional sense of the word. It's more on the level of "Remember last year? I wouldn't mind a repeat performance". Loroi ma...
by novius
Mon Nov 25, 2019 6:42 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 166: Not so true!
Replies: 16
Views: 5984

Re: Page 166: Not so true!

Also are we going to see Fireblade out of armor, and as relaxed as she could get? It would be interesting to have some panels where she is going through some telepathic PTSD possibly to "humanize" her in Alex's opinion. Also it might be good to get some of the Loroi characters backstory to flesh ou...
by novius
Thu Nov 21, 2019 8:40 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 166: Not so true!
Replies: 16
Views: 5984

Re: Page 166: Not so true!

Though, it is a sign that they all feel sort of relaxed around Alex if they're comfortable to talk about even more touchy or depressing subjects. They would have cut it any time if it would be otherwise, especially after his fauxpas. Remember, most Loroi don't do tact. I'm not sure they have a conc...
by novius
Mon Nov 18, 2019 7:31 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 166: Not so true!
Replies: 16
Views: 5984

Re: Page 166: Not so true!

...and here we learn together with Alex that Loroi do have their own set of superstitions, and that the Loroi/English dictionary may need an update. And, really, Talon? Dissing Spiral's language skills? :) Though, it is a sign that they all feel sort of relaxed around Alex if they're comfortable to ...
by novius
Fri Nov 15, 2019 8:03 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 165: Dalid is Dalid
Replies: 51
Views: 17259

Re: Page 165: Dalid is Dalid

I can also see Temp's question, and by extension that of Beryl, is probing Alex to see how he does under pressure. A potential allied race in a war this bloody would need to be able t handle themselves in bad times. Abandoned, alone, and in the heart of an enemy assault of tremendous size, this wou...
by novius
Tue Nov 12, 2019 7:04 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 165: Dalid is Dalid
Replies: 51
Views: 17259

Re: Page 165: Dalid is Dalid

Of course Tempo would prompt him to ask questions. Every question he asks would be a chance for her to learn more about the humans in turn. And Beryl? I'm pretty sure that she can read Alex well enough by now to know that he's got something weighing on his mind, but without sanzai, she had to ask ou...
by novius
Tue Nov 12, 2019 6:58 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 165: Dalid is Dalid
Replies: 51
Views: 17259

Re: Page 165: Dalid is Dalid

Both extreme fear and reckless abandon are dangerous. Extreme fear just stuns you and renders you passive even when you need to act to avoid or counter the dangerous situation, and reckless abandon just lets you ignore what will get you killed. Fear in moderation is good. It makes you stop and evalu...
by novius
Wed Oct 16, 2019 12:23 pm
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!
Replies: 67
Views: 25236

Re: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!

raistlin34 wrote:Why do you assume this is a bad guys(or gals) vs good guys scenario?
It has been said from the very start - it's not about picking the good guys, it's a choice what would be the lesser of two evils.

If it would actually be a choice and not decided for us humans.
by novius
Wed Oct 16, 2019 8:51 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Fanfiction] Writing Prompt: For what dreams may come
Replies: 27
Views: 15855

Re: [Fanfiction] Writing Prompt: For what dreams may come

Since it's labeled 'Writing Prompt', I decided to add my two cents in here. Hope I didn't derail things too much :) Think, Tempo, think. Let's recount the facts. We're in a shuttle, adrift and dead in space, he fell asleep and I tried to establish sanzai contact... Then, what is this place? She trie...
by novius
Wed Oct 16, 2019 6:57 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 462944

Re: Writing Prompts

Thing is, humans are a quite violent species. It is just a thin veneer of civilization that keeps us on the narrow road... well, most of the time. I'm pretty sure almost everyone had his or her moment with an obtuse clerk, clueless cashier or (the horror!) customer support service where one plays ou...
by novius
Tue Oct 15, 2019 8:47 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [WP] Beacons (Story Thread Only)
Replies: 125
Views: 85979

Re: [WP] Beacons (Story Thread Only)

Beryl was not having a good shift. Sure, Torimor Shadow was easy enough to deal with, for a high-ranked Mizol after all, but ever since Tempo's fall from grace Beryl had become the first and foremost source of information about the humans in general. She still felt her ears heating up when she fina...
by novius
Tue Oct 15, 2019 6:08 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Replies: 2709
Views: 1803270

Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

That leaves fireblade, who will probably be Alex's last choice but the one most capable of defending him from threats (or more realistically the others from him). Alex made his opinion about Fireblade abundantly clear, and with the others, except Tempo, Beryl could always pull rank - he is her resp...
by novius
Tue Oct 15, 2019 5:55 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!
Replies: 67
Views: 25236

Re: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!

I think Tempo's eyes look more concerned than the typical bedroom eyes she has been giving during her other screen time. Like, Oh crap oh crap oh crap, I have a diplomat/potential shell spy on my hands and we are going to die! Granted every pixel of her design screams sultry any given frame she is ...
by novius
Mon Oct 14, 2019 11:40 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!
Replies: 67
Views: 25236

Re: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!

And, as for Spiral's comment? I think she looks quite pleased about shoving that part of a Loroi female's anatomy into Alex's face, or a part of their anatomy close by. Even if it's done in a rather indirect way....

:mrgreen:
by novius
Mon Oct 14, 2019 10:38 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!
Replies: 67
Views: 25236

Re: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!

Or is it possible that she is still "playing the game" with Alex in an attempt to get inside his head? Of course. I wouldn't put it past her that every word or gesture is carefully calculated and weighted to maximum effect. She is a trained diplomat and spy/interrogator, after all. And her current ...
by novius
Mon Oct 14, 2019 10:29 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!
Replies: 67
Views: 25236

Re: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!

And finally Tempo makes her appearance, going all doe-eyed on him.

Might be she just waited for the others to butter him up or to gauge the general mood before making her entrance.
by novius
Mon Oct 14, 2019 7:17 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 163: Mysterious hair grooming device
Replies: 55
Views: 21681

Re: Page 163: Mysterious hair grooming device

You can see it whenever Alex asks something. Beryl keeps giving him these very obvious answers, as if his species doesn't have combs or knives. I don't think she sees him as an equal (yet). Well, to a certain extent that's just being scientific... you can't assume that an alien understands the same...