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NOMAD
Joined: Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:34 pm Posts: 379
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DANG IT I knew I was forgetting something thx's Casimir 
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| Fri Jul 15, 2011 11:15 pm |
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Wintermute
Joined: Tue Mar 08, 2011 5:09 pm Posts: 74
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@ Latest WIP update:
I guess it really is time to leave!
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| Sun Jul 17, 2011 6:07 pm |
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icekatze
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 1:35 pm Posts: 297 Location: Middle of Nowhere
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hi hi
Perhaps those Loroi are too used to being able to imply things with telepathy, but if I was sitting on an alien ship that I was totally unfamiliar with and someone told me that I needed to "go." I would sit there stupidly thinking "where am I supposed to go?"
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| Sun Jul 17, 2011 6:18 pm |
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Karst45
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 9:03 am Posts: 582 Location: Quebec, Canada
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OMG she touching him, she touching him, she touching him, OMG OMG OMGOMG!!!!!
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| Sun Jul 17, 2011 6:27 pm |
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Grayhome
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2011 7:11 pm Posts: 202
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If Fireblade knocks Alex unconscious again in a few minutes I'm going to be supremely disappointed in her.
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| Sun Jul 17, 2011 6:57 pm |
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dfacto
Joined: Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:50 am Posts: 116
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"Ok pinky, out the airlock with ya!"
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NOMAD
Joined: Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:34 pm Posts: 379
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Exit . . . bridge Right ( or left for loroi ?) but really is alex is that much shock he needs to be escorts out 
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Wintermute
Joined: Tue Mar 08, 2011 5:09 pm Posts: 74
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"JK Guys all this buildup has been for nothing. Story ends with Alex being thrown out an airlock at the end of this page. Hope you've enjoyed the ride!" It would make a good april-fools joke, at least.
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| Sun Jul 17, 2011 11:21 pm |
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Count Casimir
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Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:50 pm Posts: 189
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That's, uh...this seems grim.
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Razor One
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This round's captions... Beryl: "No Snu-Snu for you!" Alex: "I'm starting to think there isn't going to be any Snu-Snu at all" ~~ Beryl: "NOBODY EXPECTS THE SPANISH INQUISITION!" Alex: "Oh Noes! The Spanish Inquisition!" 
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Ktrain
Joined: Sat May 07, 2011 5:39 pm Posts: 203
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Maybe she is just getting him that sandwich?
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bunnyboy
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:21 pm Posts: 412 Location: Finland
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Beryl: Don't eat that sandwich!
Alex: But this is only with ham.
Beryl: It is reserved for Stillstorm.
Alex: NOO! My sandwich!
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Karst45
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 9:03 am Posts: 582 Location: Quebec, Canada
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Beryl: you are little skinny. You should eat and gain weight so we can cook you
Alex: saywhat!
Beryl: did i say that out loud?
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bunnyboy
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:21 pm Posts: 412 Location: Finland
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Didn't see that first time, but she is not only one. ~~ In messhall Alex eat his sandwich. Beryl and Fireblade is near looking him. Beryl sanzai to Fireblade < Isn't he cute. Like big giantic child. > Fireblade < Actually he isn't so bad looking. Do you feel hot here? > Beryl < ... > Fireblade <...> Alex: Mmm. This is good. Beryl? Why I you smiling? Beryl: No talk! Snu snu!  ~~ What you wanted to see here? 
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Cy83r
Joined: Mon Jun 27, 2011 2:29 pm Posts: 97
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I wish I had the authority to declare this snu-snu meme dead... I am however keen on seeing what the Loroi reaction to human military eating habits is. Alex: this is really good, I just wish it was more filling.
Beyrl: ...is your... rapid consumption typical of your species?
Fireblade: <he eats like a cornered animal>
Beyrl: <he kind of is>
Fireblade: <good point>
Alex: no, not really, just military tradition
Fireblade: <do we really want them as allies if something like that is what they call 'tradition'?>
Alex: ...are you two-
Beryl: just having a private conversation
Alex: ...okaaay...
Fireblade: <he's eating again>
Beryl: <it's actually a little endearing>
Fireblade: <as endearing as something you might be about to kill and eat can be>
Beryl: <be nice>
Fireblade: <fine>
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Razor One
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Snu-Snu goes hand in hand with Amazonian women, which the Loroi fit pretty perfectly. It'll stop getting used when it stops being funny  As for the eating angle... Alex: "I'm hungry, wanna go for lunch?" Beryl: "Lunch?" Alex: "Lunch, you know... the meal you have in the middle of the day?" Beryl: "Didnt you eat earlier today?" Alex: "Yes, that was breakfast. Now it's lunch." Beryl: "You eat more than once a day?" Alex: "Three times a day is normal for my species" Beryl: "... I see... and these meals... they all have different names?" Alex: "The first is called Breakfast, the Second is called Lunch, the Third is called Dinner" Beryl: "I see..." Alex: "Then there's Brunch, Supper, the Midnight Snack..." Beryl: **thinking** Oh Dear God their species is obsessed with eating! They must all be obese!
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| Tue Jul 19, 2011 4:14 am |
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Ktrain
Joined: Sat May 07, 2011 5:39 pm Posts: 203
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I wonder if Arioch would be willing go through and renarrate the story from another character's perspective after this is all done.
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| Tue Jul 19, 2011 4:34 am |
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bunnyboy
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:21 pm Posts: 412 Location: Finland
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Thumb up for you, Razor1. This is how loroi view us. 
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Karst45
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 9:03 am Posts: 582 Location: Quebec, Canada
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Count Casimir
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Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:50 pm Posts: 189
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DAWWWWWWWWW!
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CptWinters
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:20 pm Posts: 123
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Awesome.
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Ktrain
Joined: Sat May 07, 2011 5:39 pm Posts: 203
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What, no Klikie  ? Though a couple of observations: Does the Historian's wink imply a greater role in the plot? *nudge nudge* Who is the Loroi with the yellow eyes and the hair that looks like lamb's wool? Fireblade's blank stare pierces; it's almost as if she is in shock. Like as if one went to Dairy Queen only to discover that they are out of ice cream... speechless.
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TheUnforsaken
Joined: Tue Apr 05, 2011 11:42 pm Posts: 178
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Alex seems happy 
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| Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:17 pm |
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NOMAD
Joined: Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:34 pm Posts: 379
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I shall never call anything cute again, except for that wall tile. Nothing will be as cute as that. and yes the boss is happy because chapter 1 is complete and Finaly moving on with the story.
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Blackbox
Joined: Tue May 31, 2011 7:11 am Posts: 6
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If I recall correctly, that's Welcome Rain; supposedly he's the Tempest Terrible's new Farseer. Yes. He. A Loroi male. One of those horny, territorial Loroi males... Alex suspects nothing. (Also, wow, Cloud really looks adorable in this background...)
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