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Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 8:29 am
by dragoongfa

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:34 am
by man_of_foul_tofu
MindSpeach as experienced by a non-MindSpeach person. Nice to get another page - So nice!

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:58 am
by boldilocks
Talking to skulls. I called it!

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 10:00 am
by gaerzi
Yeah, definitely a Fireblade-infused dream.

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 11:12 am
by harlequin2262
I mean, it's a given that this is Fireblade's memory. I figured that he was sort of sharing her perspective. But now I wonder if he's sort of co-dreaming it with her, two characters in the same story.

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 11:33 am
by Arent
harlequin2262 wrote:
Tue Sep 29, 2020 11:12 am
I mean, it's a given that this is Fireblade's memory. I figured that he was sort of sharing her perspective. But now I wonder if he's sort of co-dreaming it with her, two characters in the same story.
Well Beryl told him to relax earlier on. So, I would assume that in sleep, he is more 'relaxed' and therefore more susceptible to the Loroi's telepathy. Question is whether he is really taking the place of Fireblade in that dream or whether she is just warning him/he will meet her in that dream.

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 11:43 am
by Sturzkampf
Wandering in the chaos the battle has left, we climb up the mountain of human Lorei flesh...

Re: Page 188: Duck!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 12:11 pm
by Krulle
I would've named the thread "Duck!"

Because Alex will need to duck soon, once the adversaries have him in his sights.
And because the dream-adversaries will start duck hunting once they sight him.

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 1:04 pm
by silentstormpt
Now imagine in hes mind, she sounded like Arnold

Re: Page 188: Duck!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 3:03 pm
by DCR
Krulle wrote:
Tue Sep 29, 2020 12:11 pm
I would've named the thread "Duck!"

Because Alex will need to duck soon, once the adversaries have him in his sights.
And because the dream-adversaries will start duck hunting once they sight him.
Time to introduce Fireblade into the psychosis that is human dreaming! (doubt that's next, but a frog the size of a St Bernard casually eating Umiak while spouting the benefits of ataraxia and aponia is fun to imagine)
Alternatively: Alex as that damn dog.

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 3:29 pm
by Ithekro
But, is it the voice of an angel?

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 3:41 pm
by boldilocks
Ithekro wrote:
Tue Sep 29, 2020 3:29 pm
But, is it the voice of an angel?
From Alex' perspective, it's the loroi that are hot!

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 5:37 pm
by kiwi
boldilocks wrote:
Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:58 am
Talking to skulls. I called it!
Alas poor Yorrick,I knew him well

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2020 8:51 am
by Jagged
Ithekro wrote:
Tue Sep 29, 2020 3:29 pm
But, is it the voice of an angel?
I am imagining that we will soon meet Fireblade's saviour and mentor?

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2020 12:53 pm
by Highlord
REM state. Called it.

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2020 4:03 pm
by DCR
https://well-of-souls.com/outsider/outsider027.html
Fireblade should return the request from panel two.

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2020 8:40 pm
by icekatze
hi hi

I'm loving the (presumed) telepathy bubbles. They've been a long time coming, but were definitely worth the wait. I wonder if there's any particular inspiration?

I'm assuming that among the Loroi present, Reed at least knows something about Alex's regular nightmares, since he mentioned having nightmares 'again,' when Reed woke him up to get on the shuttle. So if he jolts awake in an agitated state, it should be at least somewhat expected.

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2020 11:37 pm
by Arioch
icekatze wrote:
Thu Oct 01, 2020 8:40 pm
hi hi

I'm loving the (presumed) telepathy bubbles. They've been a long time coming, but were definitely worth the wait. I wonder if there's any particular inspiration?
I had initially planned to use a modified version of the narration bubble (which is appropriate to what's actually happening): rectangular with some sort of spikes on the edges. This was also similar to how the Pinis portrayed telepathic communication in Elfquest. But I found that using a custom shape didn't work, as resizing the rectangle distorts the shapes, and it didn't look the way I had imagined it anyway.

Image

So I did some more research on bubble styles and digital techniques, and I saw some really interesting examples. Unfortunately, Photoshop can't do all the tricks with vector shapes that Illustrator does (which is what most professional letterers use), so I came up with is a combination of elements: the spikes are more traditionally used as a "radio" or mechanical voice, and the dotted outline is more traditionally a "whisper" indicator.

The old school comic book telepathy bubbles are usually some variant of the thought bubble:
Image
https://blambot.com/pages/comic-book-grammar-tradition

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2020 8:27 am
by Jagged
The other thing I liked about the telepathy in this page was that Alex didn't know which direction it was coming from.

Is that usual for telepaths do you think?

Is Alex remembering what Fireblade felt at the time? Or is it just because Alex is unfamiliar with the sensation?

Re: Page 188: Get down from there Alex!

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2020 9:25 am
by Arioch
Jagged wrote:
Fri Oct 02, 2020 8:27 am
The other thing I liked about the telepathy in this page was that Alex didn't know which direction it was coming from.

Is that usual for telepaths do you think?

Is Alex remembering what Fireblade felt at the time? Or is it just because Alex is unfamiliar with the sensation?
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This is a strange case, because Alex isn't actually "receiving" these telepathic messages -- he's experiencing someone else's memories of receiving telepathic messages. His brain interprets the message as a voice, but it's not coming through his ears, so he doesn't have a conscious sense of directionality. However, as may be inferred from the next page, he does actually know where it's coming from... though not consciously.