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Before they actually jump, I might want to add in a small filler scene where Tempo pays him a visit... not what you might think now, get your mind out of the gutter
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Tempo is a bit surprised at his rather 'standard' suggestion, prompting him to explain, especially after what he pulled with the Gora Relay, and on a more personal note, they have a little discussion about the change that puts Beryl and him on opposite shifts.
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War is controlled chaos, until said controlled chaos is joined the best one can do is to predict how the enemy will want to control said chaos and try to throw a monkey wrench at their plan. My plan for the upcoming battle is the Stillstorm's fleet actually remaining a (painful) threat in being at Enedd throws a big monkey wrench into the general plan of the Stray. If Stillstorm manage's to alert the fleet at Sala-128 that she is at Enedd and is disrupting the enemy forces there then the main fleet can withdraw first to Enedd and then at Nezel in relatively good order.
Next comes defense in depth and the adoption of certain Hierarchy doctrines that the Union somehow hasn't picked up, to Jardin's surprise it would be because of politics.
Next comes defense in depth and the adoption of certain Hierarchy doctrines that the Union somehow hasn't picked up, to Jardin's surprise it would be because of politics.
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While I like the idea of a shift change, that's something that might wait until Brightshield and Tempo have exhausted their options. Maybe even by Stillstorm for crew morale.novius wrote: Tempo is a bit surprised at his rather 'standard' suggestion, prompting him to explain, especially after what he pulled with the Gora Relay, and on a more personal note, they have a little discussion about the change that puts Beryl and him on opposite shifts.
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Just posted that little part. And, a shift change doesn't need to mean the end for these two - it makes it more difficult for them to see each other for an extended period of time. And sometimes a subtle hand would do much better than a formal reprimand for Conduct Unbecoming.
In addition, Tempo bringing him food does have a big meaning, one Alex couldn't quite fathom - yet - but we, as the readers of the "New Frontier" storyline and knowing the backgrounds of the Loroi Rites of Passage actually do.
In addition, Tempo bringing him food does have a big meaning, one Alex couldn't quite fathom - yet - but we, as the readers of the "New Frontier" storyline and knowing the backgrounds of the Loroi Rites of Passage actually do.
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Haven't read new frontier, so I do not know about those rituals. And whether they would apply only to dirals of that clan, that planet, or to all Loroi.
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Quick comment, the Umiak are a low gravity species: http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/forum_umiak.htmlnovius wrote:Just posted that little part. And, a shift change doesn't need to mean the end for these two - it makes it more difficult for them to see each other for an extended period of time. And sometimes a subtle hand would do much better than a formal reprimand for Conduct Unbecoming.
In addition, Tempo bringing him food does have a big meaning, one Alex couldn't quite fathom - yet - but we, as the readers of the "New Frontier" storyline and knowing the backgrounds of the Loroi Rites of Passage actually do.
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Whoops, okay. I remembered wrong. Fixed that scene.dragoongfa wrote:Quick comment, the Umiak are a low gravity species: http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/forum_umiak.htmlnovius wrote:Just posted that little part. And, a shift change doesn't need to mean the end for these two - it makes it more difficult for them to see each other for an extended period of time. And sometimes a subtle hand would do much better than a formal reprimand for Conduct Unbecoming.
In addition, Tempo bringing him food does have a big meaning, one Alex couldn't quite fathom - yet - but we, as the readers of the "New Frontier" storyline and knowing the backgrounds of the Loroi Rites of Passage actually do.
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Also thanks for the 'biological and societal' peculiarities angle, it was going to be a major point for one of Alex's propositions about a major shift of battle doctrine for the Loroi in order to better counter Umiak tactics. It's going to take some time to pass and the immediate objective to be fulfilled before Alex 'thinks' of it but I have it planned out and it plays out well with how you served it.
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My pleasure. Of course there might be lots of hurdles to put Alex's more outlandish ideas into action. Deception being an integral part of the successful Gora Relay stunt was something that Stillstorm had trouble accepting, for example, and while she might see that his unorthodox methods do yield results, it's difficult for her to swallow, nonetheless.dragoongfa wrote:Also thanks for the 'biological and societal' peculiarities angle, it was going to be a major point for one of Alex's propositions about a major shift of battle doctrine for the Loroi in order to better counter Umiak tactics. It's going to take some time to pass and the immediate objective to be fulfilled before Alex 'thinks' of it but I have it planned out and it plays out well with how you served it.
And she knows 'it' firsthand. Squad commanders and the upper command levels above her might even have more difficulties accepting a change in battle doctrine.
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I don't think it's realistic of Stillstorm or any Loroi to expect miracles from Alexander. Dirty, underhanded tricks, yes, but nobody would be negatively surprised if Alex shows an understanding of the basics of strategy.
Before he can set doctrinal changes into motion he'll definitely has to prove himself. Right now he's the lowly newbie doing busywork.
Before he can set doctrinal changes into motion he'll definitely has to prove himself. Right now he's the lowly newbie doing busywork.
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What I have in plan is Alex proposing something that the Loroi had already thought off doing (somewhat wrong) but didn't go through with it because of caste politics and pride. And Alex will get to prove himself somewhat from the position he is in.
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I hope people won't mind me eyeballing the hard math a little in regards to the timings involved in the next part. I already got a headache...
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You guys got about 8 in universe hours to cause some chaos on Tempest, Alex isn't required to sleep well, or much, or at all
BTW, did he get a shower after his morning drills?
BTW, did he get a shower after his morning drills?
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I might have an idea how to keep Alex busy and cleaned up.
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Don't forget that someone also needs to get him a uniform, preferably a TCA themed armor that can render him vacuum proof for a few minutes in case of an emergency.
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Your turn by all means - I'll lean back and break out the popcorn
Hmmm... I wonder if entering or leaving hyperspace is only to be done with a minimum safe distance from each other and if so, why...
Hmmm... I wonder if entering or leaving hyperspace is only to be done with a minimum safe distance from each other and if so, why...
Stillstorm gave him leeway for himself to design one and have it fabricated, with the stipulation that its markings should not resemble Loroi rank designs?Don't forget that someone also needs to get him a uniform, preferably a TCA themed armor that can render him vacuum proof for a few minutes in case of an emergency.
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No warrior caste color scheme, the navy blue Scout Corps dress uniform can be seen here under proper lighting:
http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/outsider002.html
http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/outsider002.html
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A Loroi armor uniform minimally adjusted to fit Alex and in TCA colors would be an amazing thing to see. But which pattern to use as a base?
Atomic Space Race, a hard sci-fi orbital mechanics puzzle game.
Homeworld Fulcrum, a Homeworld Remastered Mod
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Alright, a new uniform and an unsoiled Alex. I'm sure he'll be dirty again soon enough.
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Now we know what makes Spiral such a good wingman.
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I leave the next part to whoever wants it since I have taken the battle sequences under my wing although I doubt that Loroi drink alcohol or alcohol like beverage (telepathic self control and all that). Still combat pilots finding suspicious ways to relax after a fight is natural.