ed_montague wrote:What could happen. Also, brief language. Probably could scrape by as PG-13.
Good one.
ed_montague wrote:“I was selected for the Listel caste, not Doranzer. I have no idea. Although from the variety of imprecations she is currently using, some of which are nearly archaic in their usage, I would suspect that she’s just fine.”
This one needs work. AFAIK, most Loroi are born in their caste. And I think that especially holds for specialized castes like the Listel.
Oh, and I'm pretty sure Fireblade wouldn't break the silence barrier for a rollercoaster. She'd simply accept the "challenge" through the accompanying diplomatic personnel.
Fixed. I kept the part with Fireblade speaking because it's gotta happen sometime, and it might as well be now. In any case, she is issuing a formal challenge to the designers of the themepark. (Loroi take their rollercoasters pretty seriously, dontchaknow.)
Ensign Jardin is my name
And Terra is my nation
Deep space is my dwelling-place
The stars my destination
Lesson for us all:
DO NOT TEMPT THE CARTOONIST WITH AMUSING PICTURES!
We already got telepanticly disrupted from receiving 98 and 99 :p
And do you know how complicated a roller coaster really is? and how hard the perspective is?
I foresee almost a month of redrawing the picture to get the proportions right between the characters and the cars.
And to think: I was about to try tempting fate again -_-
I do rather look forward to meeting the Emperor or at the least a Loroi Diplomat from the home-worlds.
Edit:
Imagine Beryl and the others looking at a merry go round.
Half would climb on just to try it, the other half would stand and watch amusedly as they interact with the human children.
And Fireblade? Would probably just glare at Alex for suggesting they try it.
The first one to turn this into a Demotivational, though, will be set on fire with my mind.
Words cannot describe my love for that image. Truly, thou art a god amongst men. (And amongst women, no doubt, although traditional Greek/Roman gods spent a disproportionate amount of time among women, if the legends are correct...)
Ensign Jardin is my name
And Terra is my nation
Deep space is my dwelling-place
The stars my destination
Riess wrote:The first one to turn this into a Demotivational, though, will be set on fire with my mind.
*dives into the nearest body of water*
(coloured version forthcoming)
prepare for death. From above.
Great pic Riess!!!
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