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Re: Dawn
Luckystar addition to the story made the Hospital scene more believable. Excellent fic !
Re: Dawn
Twoface having a panic attack and not wanting to give the baby to Livewire is believable. I just don't get why the Emperor wants to raise the child.
- Tue Apr 06, 2021 12:38 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Fan Fiction] Caught in the Crossfire
- Replies: 28
- Views: 19741
Re: [Fan Fiction] Caught in the Crossfire
Why Jardin dont talk to this Brook dude? Beryl also not interacting with him. It is almost as if he is a ghost.
Re: Dawn
Second Disclaimer: this story attempts to tie into the fan fictions Looking forward to the Mirror and Reforged , which are the works of Dragoongfa, whom I hope approves. The fanfic can stand on it own actually. Is way harder to try fitting a hibrid child in the Reforged setting than making a fanfic...
- Sat Jan 16, 2021 11:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Fan Fiction] The Entry of the Gods into Valhalla
- Replies: 20
- Views: 6917
Re: [Fan Fiction] The Entry of the Gods into Valhalla
Pretty good. Just need to correct "Lorei" and "Sentai" for Loroi and Sanzai.
- Fri Jan 15, 2021 11:11 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: How would the Loroi Army invade a planet?
- Replies: 25
- Views: 7548
Re: How would the Loroi Army invade a planet?
The short version is that in any situation without some kind of effective ground defenses against orbital bombardment (like the Rebel's shield generators in Empire Strikes Back, or perhaps some way to blind the enemy in orbit), once space superiority is achieved around a planet, any ground invasion...
- Thu Jan 14, 2021 2:20 pm
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: How would the Loroi Army invade a planet?
- Replies: 25
- Views: 7548
How would the Loroi Army invade a planet?
Assuming they want to capture the civilian population without damaging the local industry too much. Sextantis is a planet similar to Earth with three continents about the same size with two near one another and the other one far (almost at the other side of the world), water covers 83% of the world....
- Mon Oct 05, 2020 10:21 pm
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Page 189: GO AWAY!
- Replies: 114
- Views: 1227950
Re: Page 189: GO AWAY!
Blue is the civillian color, so the bigger one might be a caretaker and the small one might be a young Teidar. Fireblade uses the same clothing in the Teidar academy.
- Mon Oct 05, 2020 12:18 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [WP] Not alien aliens
- Replies: 5
- Views: 6997
Re: [WP] Not alien aliens
Still with us Novius? This fic is looking pretty solid. I hope you still have some ideas for the next parts.
- Thu Sep 24, 2020 4:03 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
- Replies: 2709
- Views: 1638977
Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Traps are gay, dammit!
- Tue Jul 28, 2020 8:04 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread
- Replies: 6272
- Views: 4303655
- Sat Apr 11, 2020 3:29 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
- Replies: 2709
- Views: 1638977
Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Fireblade wrote:Yes, Beryl, I totally want to talk with your pet alien instead of sleeping.
- Tue Mar 17, 2020 11:00 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
- Replies: 2709
- Views: 1638977
Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
After. Tempo's WIP is 176_3 and the girls is 176_1.GeoModder wrote:Now I wonder if Tempo's WIP comes before or after the WIP where the girls look shocked.
- Mon Dec 30, 2019 1:04 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Writing Prompts
- Replies: 1194
- Views: 440817
Re: Writing Prompts
Any chance of Echo appearing on next update? Or will you wait for her to appear in the comic first?
- Mon Dec 30, 2019 1:02 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Writing Prompts
- Replies: 1194
- Views: 440817
Re: Writing Prompts
Nice chapter! It's great being able to read another prompt with Alex interacting with Loroi.dragoongfa wrote:And there, finally sat my ass down and soldiered through the final part.
- Fri Nov 29, 2019 12:37 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Page 167: This one's out early
- Replies: 40
- Views: 17248
Re: Page 167: This one's out early
Arioch even did the math about her boiling people brains in seconds. She can also heat metal to the point it becomes weak.If not explicitly stated anywhere else
- Thu Oct 24, 2019 12:33 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!
- Replies: 67
- Views: 23385
Re: Page 164: Smells like buttocks!
What are their sleep postions ? Who got to spoon Alex ?
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Who will be spooned by Alex ?
- Wed Oct 02, 2019 12:35 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
- Replies: 2709
- Views: 1638977
Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
He was allowed to wash and relieve himself, as long he was "observed" during the process.icekatze wrote:I'm not sure what kind of hygiene Alex was allowed to practice while in solitary confinement for days on end, but he probably could use a clean up by now.
- Wed Sep 25, 2019 11:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Fanfiction] Writing Prompt: For what dreams may come
- Replies: 27
- Views: 15011
Re: [Fanfiction] Writing Prompt: For what dreams may come
I always thouht she was pale and Fireblade that was pigmented.And that's the first instalment. I figured that Tempo is quite pigmented for a Loroi, and would therefore be quite pigmented as a human.
- Sat Jun 22, 2019 3:28 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Adeptus Astartes Episode 2
- Replies: 33
- Views: 28168
Re: Adeptus Astartes Episode 2
We will see in 4 months. Hopefully...NOMAD wrote:Part 5 should be interesting to see what in the sphere?