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Reminder... again: Chapters 17 to 19 were changed, as was ending of chapter 16. Anyway, I am amazed how quickly I cranked this one out. I hope you enjoy! XXI - A Chorus of Stars === (+) === If there was one other benefit for Greywind to remain on Deinar, it might hasten Project First Son’s progress...

Reminder: as I stated in my previous post, so as to not create confusion, I have changed the end of chapter 16 as well as chapters 17 to 19. The original version of the chapters have been saved just in case. But I think this makes for a better story. Though only you the reader can decide if you lik...

Incoming message from the Tech Level 16 Spatial Temporal Regulatory Commission: Due to undesirable events leading up to the present, the Tech Level 16 Spatial Temporal Regulatory Commission has ordered an existential reset. Immediate changes shall be noticed by outside observers to the following eve...

Arrogance and hubris are perfect narrative methods of causing a character to make a mistake which is obvious to the reader without the character just being stupid for no reason. edit: It would be an interesting way of reconnecting Ben with his mom. By rolling with the original story I've written so...

Arrogance and hubris are perfect narrative methods of causing a character to make a mistake which is obvious to the reader without the character just being stupid for no reason. That does seem like a problem in some story and world building. There seem to be inevitable inconsistencies. Any further ...

Hey ya'll. I'm afraid I might have written myself into a corner. I had not anticipated until now that, as soon as word of subconscious telepathic contact reaches the gangers' ears, they'll panic. I have some ideas of how this could play out and how the gangers are likely to react. So before I give a...

XIX - The Decision === (+) === After the twelfth day of familial celebrations, the guests began slowly leaving the island. A few, including Ashrain, remained as per Greywind’s request, though for what would not be answered until Greywind returned. Every guest took with them a unique memory from the...

I understand that all Loroi males are wards of the state and therefore provided for. And this next question perhaps does not apply to the Nedatan order, but are there any menfolk involved in business? Are there any rich male tycoons or magnates? Male entrepreneurs?

I am reluctant to put an exact number on it. But here is a rough guess along with what I guess their targets or motives might be: Terran Raiders (ever since gaining access to the Great Wastelands, humanity has experienced a population and industrial growth spurt. So no surprises they would have the ...

Damn it, it was really interesting to read objectively, you make really good content on this universe, I read it in one shift, this uncontrolled chat can really mess things up One shift?! Damn called me impressed as well as flattered, Gigachad. :mrgreen: I'm happy that you and everyone else has enj...

XVIII - The Little Things A shuttle arrived the next day to take Greywind’s mother back to Toridas. Rainlash packed her belongings and left without objection. Nightgale decided to leave with her mother without even saying goodbye to her sister. Nightgale would always be on their mother’s side. Fest...

Ooh, the title makes sense now! And we've got Good news and Bad news: Good News: The human-included sanzai network seems to be coming online. Bad News: It's basically an unmoderated chatroom which moves at the speed of thought, with exactly the results anyone would expect. ;) Correction: the subcon...

How do you quell the flames of Loroi menfolk?

XVII - The Emperor’s Turmoil Greywind sat upright and formal, sipping her tea. Rainlash did likewise, sitting across from her daughter. They were alone within the dining hall. Greywind had commanded the night guards to ensure no one came near. >Despite our Perreind ancestry, I have found flowery tea...

XVI - Prayers and Songs === (+) === Nedatan Titennus Sage Glory wanted to pay the shrine a visit. He did not find comfort in spiritual iconography or ritualistic recitations. But the atmosphere of spiritual gatherings offered serenity. He was also eager to speak with Sister Judith de la Cruz. He fo...

How much of the Loroi menfolk populace is enrolled within the Nedatan order?

Disclaimer: This chapter contains some suggestive themes. === (+) === XV - A Brazen Incident === (+) === Ben did not feel well. His body ached. His head spun. His awareness moved in and out of focus. One moment he thought he recognized his surroundings before his mind went blank. In the next second...

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Fri Feb 16, 2024 2:05 pm

Or beer belly men?
I mean, they´ve never seen fat huge men bevor?

Or, more close to the topic: Arioch, are some few Loroi men exceptionally tall? Like 6 ft tall?

I wouldn't count on it, but in a cosmos of infinite possibilities... who knows?

Father me many.

Or:

Give me many children.

Would Loroi ladies freak out if they saw a ridiculously muscled over masculine guy on par with Gigachad man? Would they be intimidated lol? Slightly lust after him (fringe Loroi I know, since they prefer boyish looking types, not some overmuscled gigachad)? I think they would find his chin hideous.