Well of Souls Forums

Kinky

Pub or bar

What do Teidars and terrorists have in common?

One of my greatest challenges in writing, I think, has been writing dialogue. And not just dialogue. But compelling dialogue. In this chapter you will find segments which focus on dialogue and others more on third-person narration. One more chapter after this. I hope you enjoy! The Egg Song lyrics ...

Is it particularly difficult for Loroi in general to put on noticeable amounts of muscle? Not gigachad swole type, but more Laura Croft or Wonder Woman style of athleticism. They are noticeably stronger, but not to a ridiculous degree like how most comic books portray heroes. Loroi don't bulk up th...

Not error 500 message. But I do notice that when I submit a post on some forums, the page goes blank and I am forced to retrace a step before posting it again.

Where might some of these enclaves and reserves be on Mestirot?

Do any of the sister worlds have reserves or for primitive Loroi, like the reserves for nomadic tribes or aboriginals on Earth?

XXII - The Terrible Truth === (+) === >Remote viewing!< Hope sent excitedly in the observatory room. >The human actually achieved remote viewing!< >Let us not make conclusions so hastily,< Jade warned. >Don’t you realize what we have stumbled upon?!< sent Hope. >Together they received sensory infor...

Reminder... again: Chapters 17 to 19 were changed, as was ending of chapter 16. Anyway, I am amazed how quickly I cranked this one out. I hope you enjoy! XXI - A Chorus of Stars === (+) === If there was one other benefit for Greywind to remain on Deinar, it might hasten Project First Son’s progress...

Reminder: as I stated in my previous post, so as to not create confusion, I have changed the end of chapter 16 as well as chapters 17 to 19. The original version of the chapters have been saved just in case. But I think this makes for a better story. Though only you the reader can decide if you lik...

Incoming message from the Tech Level 16 Spatial Temporal Regulatory Commission: Due to undesirable events leading up to the present, the Tech Level 16 Spatial Temporal Regulatory Commission has ordered an existential reset. Immediate changes shall be noticed by outside observers to the following eve...

Arrogance and hubris are perfect narrative methods of causing a character to make a mistake which is obvious to the reader without the character just being stupid for no reason. edit: It would be an interesting way of reconnecting Ben with his mom. By rolling with the original story I've written so...

Arrogance and hubris are perfect narrative methods of causing a character to make a mistake which is obvious to the reader without the character just being stupid for no reason. That does seem like a problem in some story and world building. There seem to be inevitable inconsistencies. Any further ...

Hey ya'll. I'm afraid I might have written myself into a corner. I had not anticipated until now that, as soon as word of subconscious telepathic contact reaches the gangers' ears, they'll panic. I have some ideas of how this could play out and how the gangers are likely to react. So before I give a...

XIX - The Decision === (+) === After the twelfth day of familial celebrations, the guests began slowly leaving the island. A few, including Ashrain, remained as per Greywind’s request, though for what would not be answered until Greywind returned. Every guest took with them a unique memory from the...

I understand that all Loroi males are wards of the state and therefore provided for. And this next question perhaps does not apply to the Nedatan order, but are there any menfolk involved in business? Are there any rich male tycoons or magnates? Male entrepreneurs?

I am reluctant to put an exact number on it. But here is a rough guess along with what I guess their targets or motives might be: Terran Raiders (ever since gaining access to the Great Wastelands, humanity has experienced a population and industrial growth spurt. So no surprises they would have the ...

Damn it, it was really interesting to read objectively, you make really good content on this universe, I read it in one shift, this uncontrolled chat can really mess things up One shift?! Damn called me impressed as well as flattered, Gigachad. :mrgreen: I'm happy that you and everyone else has enj...

XVIII - The Little Things A shuttle arrived the next day to take Greywind’s mother back to Toridas. Rainlash packed her belongings and left without objection. Nightgale decided to leave with her mother without even saying goodbye to her sister. Nightgale would always be on their mother’s side. Fest...