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- Sun Jun 09, 2024 3:42 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
- Replies: 185
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Re: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
Hey, ever wondered how a Listel would conduct an interrogation without a Teidar or Torrai around? Find out... elsewhere.
- Tue May 14, 2024 5:38 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
- Replies: 185
- Views: 2730786
Re: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
any content that appeals to the prurient interest This means porn. All of it. Across the board. Maybe! Who knows! They refuse to answer any questions about it. So I'm just posting whatever until I randomly get banned, or never do; just get to sit there with the sword of Damocles dangling over me fo...
- Thu Apr 25, 2024 6:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
- Replies: 185
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- Wed Mar 27, 2024 7:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
I think keep going with the story as written. A corner is just a challenge to write yourself out of. Plus like I mentioned before, there are limits to sanzai and you've kept that going with Ben's abilities; both Loroi and human have to be receptive, for example. Arrogance and hubris are perfect narr...
- Wed Mar 27, 2024 4:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
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Re: A Chorus of Stars
Arrogance and hubris are perfect narrative methods of causing a character to make a mistake which is obvious to the reader without the character just being stupid for no reason.
edit: It would be an interesting way of reconnecting Ben with his mom.
edit: It would be an interesting way of reconnecting Ben with his mom.
- Sun Mar 24, 2024 12:54 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
I am reminded of the themes and story of Jingo here.raistlin34 wrote: ↑Wed Mar 20, 2024 9:07 pmI'm impressed with Greywind pulling Vetinari Job Security as the means to remain in charge.
- Wed Mar 13, 2024 1:57 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
A very interesting climactic scene, this has been a great few chapters.
- Sat Mar 02, 2024 10:22 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
Oh wow. So we come to the reference of the title which I thought had already come and gone. Very well done.
- Thu Feb 08, 2024 6:12 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
I don't think it's implausible for an underground element to form in a society of aliens that aren't that much different than humans, with similar impulses and foibles. The range of sanzai is limited, save for farseers. A criminal would simply need to be a little farther away to be mostly secure in ...
- Sun Feb 04, 2024 10:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
Going from a high heel competition to that, you sure know how to give the reader whiplash!
- Sun Jan 14, 2024 4:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
Entertaining to be sure. As for the intro, that's just how writing goes. Trimming the fat. If on re-reading a section you find yourself hurrying through a bit to get to "the good stuff" then that part is probably superfluous for now. Keep the stuff you don't use now because it might come in useful l...
- Sat Jan 06, 2024 5:39 pm
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
- Replies: 41
- Views: 376162
Re: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
...That's my main issue with these tools, is not them existing, but them utilizing sources for training data without the explicit consent of their authors. Since they literally can't and never will function without doing that, it actually comes down to, "Do you care about the artists/actors/voice p...
- Tue Dec 26, 2023 4:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
Ooh, this should be an interesting bit of world building.
- Tue Dec 26, 2023 7:13 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
- Replies: 41
- Views: 376162
Re: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
Well yeah, it's blindly regurgitating artist's works and artists for the last few thousand years have worked out chiaroscuro pretty well. It's not surprising it copies art sort of accurately. There are workarounds, but it quickly reaches the point where spend as much time fiddling with it as you wou...
- Tue Dec 26, 2023 12:17 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
- Replies: 41
- Views: 376162
Re: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
That's because AI image generators don't know anything about Outsider, and thus can't make anything that actually resembles the setting, characters, or outfits.
- Sun Dec 24, 2023 5:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
To me they have some resemblance to Watto from The Phantom Menace.
Which had come out a little over two years before the comic started by the way, in case you haven't felt old today.
Which had come out a little over two years before the comic started by the way, in case you haven't felt old today.
- Sun Dec 24, 2023 7:53 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
The poor Neridi always seem to get the short end of the stick with humans...
- Sat Dec 16, 2023 11:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 267923
Re: A Chorus of Stars
Oh this is gonna be good.
- Fri Dec 15, 2023 7:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
- Replies: 185
- Views: 2730786
Re: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
Honestly? Not sure that registered until just now. Might have had a subconscious influence.
- Fri Dec 15, 2023 7:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
- Replies: 185
- Views: 2730786