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by wolf329
Thu Apr 25, 2024 6:54 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
Replies: 181
Views: 1868170

Re: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon

Hope everyone's having a happy "Pixiv might be blocking US users from posting or viewing adult content but they use DeepL to write their press releases so it's completely unclear" Day! Here's a pic I made to deal with it and chill me out.

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by wolf329
Wed Mar 27, 2024 7:53 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

I think keep going with the story as written. A corner is just a challenge to write yourself out of. Plus like I mentioned before, there are limits to sanzai and you've kept that going with Ben's abilities; both Loroi and human have to be receptive, for example. Arrogance and hubris are perfect narr...
by wolf329
Wed Mar 27, 2024 4:16 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

Arrogance and hubris are perfect narrative methods of causing a character to make a mistake which is obvious to the reader without the character just being stupid for no reason.

edit: It would be an interesting way of reconnecting Ben with his mom.
by wolf329
Sun Mar 24, 2024 12:54 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

raistlin34 wrote:
Wed Mar 20, 2024 9:07 pm
I'm impressed with Greywind pulling Vetinari Job Security as the means to remain in charge.
I am reminded of the themes and story of Jingo here.
by wolf329
Wed Mar 13, 2024 1:57 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

A very interesting climactic scene, this has been a great few chapters.
by wolf329
Sat Mar 02, 2024 10:22 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

Oh wow. So we come to the reference of the title which I thought had already come and gone. Very well done.
by wolf329
Thu Feb 08, 2024 6:12 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

I don't think it's implausible for an underground element to form in a society of aliens that aren't that much different than humans, with similar impulses and foibles. The range of sanzai is limited, save for farseers. A criminal would simply need to be a little farther away to be mostly secure in ...
by wolf329
Sun Feb 04, 2024 10:07 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

Going from a high heel competition to that, you sure know how to give the reader whiplash!
by wolf329
Sun Jan 14, 2024 4:31 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

Entertaining to be sure. As for the intro, that's just how writing goes. Trimming the fat. If on re-reading a section you find yourself hurrying through a bit to get to "the good stuff" then that part is probably superfluous for now. Keep the stuff you don't use now because it might come in useful l...
by wolf329
Sat Jan 06, 2024 5:39 pm
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
Replies: 41
Views: 250946

Re: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!

...That's my main issue with these tools, is not them existing, but them utilizing sources for training data without the explicit consent of their authors. Since they literally can't and never will function without doing that, it actually comes down to, "Do you care about the artists/actors/voice p...
by wolf329
Tue Dec 26, 2023 4:41 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

Ooh, this should be an interesting bit of world building.
by wolf329
Tue Dec 26, 2023 7:13 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
Replies: 41
Views: 250946

Re: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!

Well yeah, it's blindly regurgitating artist's works and artists for the last few thousand years have worked out chiaroscuro pretty well. It's not surprising it copies art sort of accurately. There are workarounds, but it quickly reaches the point where spend as much time fiddling with it as you wou...
by wolf329
Tue Dec 26, 2023 12:17 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!
Replies: 41
Views: 250946

Re: Merry Christmas 2023 everyone!

That's because AI image generators don't know anything about Outsider, and thus can't make anything that actually resembles the setting, characters, or outfits.
by wolf329
Sun Dec 24, 2023 5:13 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

To me they have some resemblance to Watto from The Phantom Menace.

Which had come out a little over two years before the comic started by the way, in case you haven't felt old today. :twisted:
by wolf329
Sun Dec 24, 2023 7:53 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

The poor Neridi always seem to get the short end of the stick with humans... :lol:
by wolf329
Sat Dec 16, 2023 11:27 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Chorus of Stars
Replies: 75
Views: 180159

Re: A Chorus of Stars

Oh this is gonna be good.
by wolf329
Fri Dec 15, 2023 7:44 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
Replies: 181
Views: 1868170

Re: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon

Honestly? Not sure that registered until just now. Might have had a subconscious influence.
by wolf329
Fri Dec 15, 2023 7:05 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
Replies: 181
Views: 1868170

Re: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon

Urist wrote:
Fri Dec 15, 2023 6:53 pm
I always love the great teasing-sisters energy that Spiral and Talon have, both in Outsider canon and so many fanworks.
This line right here?
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Tail-wag!
Inspired me to make everything... alternative... that I have done.
by wolf329
Fri Dec 15, 2023 6:49 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
Replies: 181
Views: 1868170

Re: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon

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Talon: Stars, most of us not since diral graduation leave.

Spiral: Some of us not do it before at all in fact.

Talon: Shut mouth!

Alex: Well, at least now I know. Er. I... mean, I know what uh, I dreamed.
by wolf329
Fri Dec 15, 2023 4:30 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
Replies: 181
Views: 1868170

Re: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon

Seconding the fact that I'm pretty sure Jim said it.