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by Onaiom
Sun Aug 19, 2018 1:13 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Fanfiction] A Shout in the Dark
Replies: 79
Views: 53247

Re: [Fanfiction] A Shout in the Dark

Introduction - Part IV.b "I'm aware, officer Moonshadow. Generally shell ships have larger reserves, and follow no fixed building standard. But this one is unusual. Has your analysis on it changed?" "No, I have not been able to determine it's exact model, if it even has one. It's the size of a prop...
by Onaiom
Sun Aug 19, 2018 12:55 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Fanfiction] A Shout in the Dark
Replies: 79
Views: 53247

Re: [Fanfiction] A Shout in the Dark

Split it in two, with a better spacing. Introduction - Part IV.a "Jump signature." "As expected. They've been chasing us this long, why would they give up now?" "Perhaps, now would be the time to turn around and fight. " Torrai Torret Razorleaf contemplated the option. The tense atmosphere around th...
by Onaiom
Sat Aug 18, 2018 8:43 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 462948

Re: Writing Prompts

Maybe this guy can help:

Primitive Technology: Iron prills
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DyGLE0usN_I
by Onaiom
Thu Jul 12, 2018 11:48 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread
Replies: 6277
Views: 4976370

Re: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread

SVlad wrote:What is "shamwow"?
Super absorbent towels that holds 21 times its weight in liquid and will not scratch surfaces.
by Onaiom
Wed Jul 04, 2018 8:55 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 462948

Re: Beacons

Tempo didn't mention that she indeed had another set of ideas to employ humans in mind. Since the regulations around male encounters were introduced to fight overpopulation but kept as a reward scheme, a group of human males on board a ship could doubly serve for ... morale reasons. After all, if h...
by Onaiom
Sun Jul 01, 2018 3:28 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 462948

Re: Writing Prompts

"Writing Promt 1: Alex and friends" sounds more like a prequel for "What to do with Jardin".
by Onaiom
Thu Jun 28, 2018 8:34 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 462948

Re: Writing Prompts

Alex could try to explain the Blue People Trope that is present in many works of fiction:

http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/blue_peoples.html

Beryl would love to read that list.
by Onaiom
Wed Jun 27, 2018 4:15 pm
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: New Page 135 - Barsam Ex Machina
Replies: 44
Views: 37113

Re: New Page 135 - Barsam Ex Machina

RBA-Wintrow wrote:Would it be possible to get the first frame of the page in higher quality so I can use it as a wallpaper?
Arioch made one with the 4th and 5th panel.
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by Onaiom
Tue Jun 26, 2018 7:55 pm
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Replies: 2709
Views: 1803282

Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

SVlad wrote:Like in this video, but imagine rocket reoriented itself before engine ignition.
More like the nuclear torpedos from the Rocinante:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yCIdUSQv-A
by Onaiom
Tue Jun 26, 2018 5:02 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Replies: 2709
Views: 1803282

Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

Damage caused by exhaust gasses is why it is usually a bad idea to start the engine immediately. As such it is probably best to eject the missile from it containment tube with other means like for instance compressed air. It is however possible to launch with the engine active but it can be a good ...
by Onaiom
Tue Jun 26, 2018 1:58 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Replies: 2709
Views: 1803282

Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

Talon: Two torpedos are headed for us!

Alex: Doesn't matter, had Snu Snu.
by Onaiom
Sun Jun 24, 2018 1:56 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Fanfiction] A Shout in the Dark
Replies: 79
Views: 53247

Re: [Fanfiction] A Shout in the Dark

Applied some spell checking and put extra space between the paragraphs: The system was empty. Just one pane of ALON-ceramic multilayered glass separating myself from the inky blackness dotted with points of light. Of light, hope and horror. Magnificence and danger all in one. Some of these have worl...
by Onaiom
Sun Jun 24, 2018 4:27 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 462948

Re: Writing Prompts

Hālian wrote:What's a PDL?
Point Defense Laser(cannon).
by Onaiom
Thu Jun 21, 2018 11:51 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 462948

Re: Writing Prompts

Beryl wrote:"It is really odd to ask that in a moment like this ... but ... did you really just kiss me?"
Alexl wrote:"Yes. Yes I did."
[Beryl will remember that.]
by Onaiom
Sun Jun 17, 2018 5:51 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Replies: 2709
Views: 1803282

Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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It's torpedo time !
by Onaiom
Wed Jun 13, 2018 7:04 pm
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Outsider, but with sansai in panel
Replies: 73
Views: 78226

Re: Outsider, but with sansai in panel

Arioch wrote:
Onaiom wrote:[Telekinect Tsundere intensifies]
Telekinect? Is that a psionic peripheral for your Xbox 2160?
I copied from a post on 4chan without paying much attention...

The guy must have tried to say telekinetic.
by Onaiom
Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:02 pm
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Outsider, but with sansai in panel
Replies: 73
Views: 78226

Re: Outsider, but with sansai in panel

AP123 wrote: Image
Some useful titles for this .gif :

[Mind Rape intensifies]
[Telekineses intensifies]
[Human Throwing intensifies]
[Diplomatic incident intensifies]
[Telekinetic Tsundere intensifies]
by Onaiom
Sun Jun 10, 2018 7:46 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: FanArt OC Characters
Replies: 5
Views: 5291

Re: FanArt OC Characters

I find it utterly bizarre that it doesn't retain the umiak body plan, but *shrug*. "Some Umiak, who still live on low-gravity worlds or aboard the gravity-controlled environments of starships and space habitats, are still very similar in form to the state in which they originally evolved, but many ...
by Onaiom
Sat Jun 09, 2018 9:31 pm
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: FanArt OC Characters
Replies: 5
Views: 5291

Re: FanArt OC Characters

Umiak Hardtrooper Type 1
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by Onaiom
Sat Jun 09, 2018 4:10 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Miscellaneous Umiak/misc. races question-and-answer thread
Replies: 764
Views: 590239

Re: Miscellaneous Umiak/misc. races question-and-answer thre

Arioch, could a Barsam win in melee combat against an Umiak ? And one Umiak against a Delrias ? What about a Barsam versus a Delrias ?