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by Zarya
Wed Sep 12, 2018 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)
Replies: 49
Views: 34469

Re: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)

‘Snow, can you please check on Natan and Poisoned Claw?’. Argent took a deep breath and looked at the torimor without saying anything. Leaning on the backend of her stick, Bastal in turn observed the white haired leader and nodded at her. The only sound in the background was the crackling of the fi...
by Zarya
Mon Sep 10, 2018 8:03 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

It’s vague enough to carry forward I think?

(edit typo)
by Zarya
Mon Sep 10, 2018 7:48 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

Sorry Werra, introducing another delta, upping the value of diral + natan for the Mizol
(running with dragoon’s punch on the chin suggestion).
by Zarya
Mon Sep 10, 2018 7:42 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)
Replies: 49
Views: 34469

Re: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)

Bastal, who had still been standing, suddenly started walking in the direction of the smaller cabin. Argent felt her hair rise, her heart skipping a couple of beats when she realised that the Mizol was out of control. On the brink of ordering Bastal’s way blocked she saw how the Torimor was suddenl...
by Zarya
Sun Sep 09, 2018 5:01 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

Okay, I am not a believer and would have a hard time writing about the revenge-test Would seem to me that the torimor wants to know if the alien isn’t dead yet, as well as the relation with the mysterious lotai-effect. She would probably want to muster the warez while in the neighbourhood. And she s...
by Zarya
Sun Sep 09, 2018 10:15 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

I just fail to see how jumping through the Mizol hoop is a good deal right now. This also has a lot to do with the style of communication adopted by Bastial and the group. Things have gone horribly wrong. The Mizol ‘beams down’ in order to fix that, but then embarks on adding insult to injury while ...
by Zarya
Sun Sep 09, 2018 9:41 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

There’s just two on the entire group of 48. Both exhibited adjustment issues. Coincidence? I think not...
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Wanted to give the Mizol to give another good reason to stop playing games. Without any mutual trust the diral won’t be able to get Natan out of the closet
Edit: corrected Firebrand typo
by Zarya
Sun Sep 09, 2018 9:00 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

Welcome back Dragoon - do you have your fanfics backed up?
(Personal favourite is Looking Forward to The Mirror).
by Zarya
Sun Sep 09, 2018 8:16 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)
Replies: 49
Views: 34469

Re: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)

‘ Argent, I don’t like this’ Firebrand sent extremely loud to all. She then stepped into the light of the fire looking straight at the Mizol. She cleared her throat, mustering courage. “Torimor, my mother is a Mizol and I have fought her long enough to recognise what you are doing with us. I don’t ...
by Zarya
Sat Sep 08, 2018 9:29 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

For the story I propose to take a bigger leap. Bastal is Charlie and the diral are her Angels :mrgreen: They can play as equals. Bastal is willing to coach and respects the diral. She’s looking for a win-win, not a ‘I force you into submission if you loose my game situation.’ Her angels have the gif...
by Zarya
Sat Sep 08, 2018 8:46 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

My impression is that this makes Argent and the others look weaker than they deserve. How so? Because they got played in the deal or because of only facing 6 Loroi? And yeah, that Torimor knew exactly how to stack the deck against the kids. But since she is showing obvious signs of aging, she's 350...
by Zarya
Sat Sep 08, 2018 5:23 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

Argh, difficult Mizol proposal and playing the kids.
My impression is that this makes Argent and the others look weaker than they deserve.
by Zarya
Sat Sep 08, 2018 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

One step forward to talks around the fire pit.
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Natan won’t be part of this. Argent shields him from direct scrutiny and we need some trust building.
by Zarya
Sat Sep 08, 2018 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)
Replies: 49
Views: 34469

Re: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)

“What makes you think our achievements aren’t our own?” Argent threw back. She couldn’t help but feel provoked, and the last thing she wanted was exposing Natan to scrutiny by a Mizol. Bastal’s mouth formed a thin stripe as she pressed her lips tight against each other. She realised she had come ac...
by Zarya
Sat Sep 08, 2018 7:07 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

Short contribution to NF, brave old Mizol going in.
by Zarya
Sat Sep 08, 2018 7:03 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)
Replies: 49
Views: 34469

Re: [WP] New Frontiers (Story Thread Only)

Mizol Torimor Bastal had already lighted the end of her stick before she was dropped amongst the trees at a short distance from the settlement of the Diral. The bright light she carried on a stick held pointed into the air was an ancient custom from Perrein. A signal she was unarmed, alone and here...
by Zarya
Fri Sep 07, 2018 6:51 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

Agree with Razor ...Nelonial has had it... Bastal takes over and goes in, in person, and tries not to get killed by a livid bunch of adolescents while doing her Mizol's finest. Bastal is in a position to make promises. The loose end I’d like to see wrapped up is the portal. Bastal has been looking i...
by Zarya
Thu Sep 06, 2018 11:46 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 138-139: Brace for Impact
Replies: 40
Views: 27621

Re: Page 138-139: Brace for Impact

If Fireblade is abord, isn’t that something similar as pulling yourself up by your bootstraps?
Despite the novelty factor of psychokinesis, I suspect Newton will still be spinning in his grave.
by Zarya
Wed Sep 05, 2018 8:47 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Writing Prompts
Replies: 1194
Views: 458787

Re: Writing Prompts

Regarding the World Wars discussion, I recall reading someplace that there was an alternative school of thought that actually regards it as one big war with a 21 year armistice, a given considering how the treaty of Versailles basically assured a second war would occur. A contemporary view was put ...
by Zarya
Wed Sep 05, 2018 4:57 am
Forum: Outsider Discussion
Topic: Page 138-139: Brace for Impact
Replies: 40
Views: 27621

Re: Page 138-139: Brace for Impact

Well done Arioch! I hope the station has adequate shields.

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