Greetings. Just saw this today. Read this today entirely, and I must say it pleases me greatly.
I found this via Tvtropes comments.
Although there are two things that have me launch this message.
1- That humans aren't the gods of war (yet) in this setting. It brings me memories of a fantasy webcomic where humans are equally, if not even worse, and the blend with sci-fi is of my taste (due to my science of choice: Physics).
2- Female Space Elves gone wild. Sort of.

I have to confess I once thought of something similar on a remote board no one would care about, but there was a big difference. Those "elves" of mine had become so advanced, they were hellbent on making an Universal Builder... and let's say that a glitchy universal builder is...undesirable.

(Bouncing back from 15/16 to 11 in the scale. You get the idea...)
Here's hoping yours fare better, and I'm expecting to see more of this goodness!