WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
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Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?
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"You can't Conquer a Free Man...", but you sure as hell can overwhelm him with Desire!Werra wrote:Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?
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[IC] Deep Strike 'Lt' Kamielle Lynn
[IC] Cydonia Rising/Tempest Sonnidezi Stormrage
[IC] Incursion Maiannon Golden Hair
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"...you can't conquer a free man; the most you can do is Kill him."
[IC] Deep Strike 'Lt' Kamielle Lynn
[IC] Cydonia Rising/Tempest Sonnidezi Stormrage
[IC] Incursion Maiannon Golden Hair
[IC] TdSmR Athen Rourke
"...you can't conquer a free man; the most you can do is Kill him."
Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
hi hi
That's maybe a little bit closer than holding hands.
That's maybe a little bit closer than holding hands.
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Far better than a Vulcan mind meld
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And the opening skirmishes in the Jardinbowl are continued with a breathtaking counter-attack!
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*inhales*
*Out of the top of my lungs*: "ENZIN TII EILIS MÉ, SIBREG RANII TÓ LANZEDAD"
*Out of the top of my lungs*: "ENZIN TII EILIS MÉ, SIBREG RANII TÓ LANZEDAD"
Tauntingly: "Enzin tii Eilis mé sibreg ranii tó lanzedad..."
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Ahem..{Geek moment}...you Sir are incorrect.. what you have depicted is the "Vulcan-Death Grip"... a technique with no basis in Vulcan culture which Cptn Kirk and his first officer Commander Spock cooked up as a ploy to fool the Female Romulan Captain.. that the 'Rogue' Starfleet hothead Captain Kirk was dead... by the hand of the Vulcan first officer she was so attracted to... ALL so they could Steal a Romulan Cloaking Device. I believe the episode was titled ~ 'The Enterprise Incident'Zarya wrote:Far better than a Vulcan mind meld
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[IC] Deep Strike 'Lt' Kamielle Lynn
[IC] Cydonia Rising/Tempest Sonnidezi Stormrage
[IC] Incursion Maiannon Golden Hair
[IC] TdSmR Athen Rourke
"...you can't conquer a free man; the most you can do is Kill him."
[IC] Deep Strike 'Lt' Kamielle Lynn
[IC] Cydonia Rising/Tempest Sonnidezi Stormrage
[IC] Incursion Maiannon Golden Hair
[IC] TdSmR Athen Rourke
"...you can't conquer a free man; the most you can do is Kill him."
Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)
Loroi. Give them a finger, and they take... well... not just the whole arm.
No wonder Alex looks a bit surprised/shocked in that panel.
No wonder Alex looks a bit surprised/shocked in that panel.
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Why hasn't anyone commented about her other hand that is touching Jardin right below his ear?
I think its important somehow.
I think its important somehow.
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Because everyone dismissed it as something like her thinking a single touch on his hand would not be enough, and it was the only other 'safe' spot for skin-to-skin contact, especially since it is where she already had her left hand?Logannion wrote:Why hasn't anyone commented about her other hand that is touching Jardin right below his ear?
I think its important somehow.
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"To my surprise, telepathy turned out to be quite easy when you're not chained up to a table with a 15-pound probe shoved up the old back-alley"Werra wrote:Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?
-Alex Jardin, the auto-biography
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Perhaps Or it could simply be that he now realizes that past the "touch barrier" Loroi seem to virtually have no inhibitions. That she had to inch closer to him for her left hand to reach around his neck? Suuure, all just incidential, no hidden intentions behind itWerra wrote:Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?
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Is it just me, or does Arioch have more fun (And therefore works quicker) drawing the recent story arc?Werra wrote:Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?
I think she is touching her forehead against his.novius wrote:Perhaps Or it could simply be that he now realizes that past the "touch barrier" Loroi seem to virtually have no inhibitions. That she had to inch closer to him for her left hand to reach around his neck? Suuure, all just incidential, no hidden intentions behind itWerra wrote:Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?
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Why has no-one quoted the original post?
Thank You, Arioch!
Also, Beryl looks so relaxed. Deeply relaxed.
As if all stress levels are falling away.
As if she found *home*, and feeling safe.
And now Arioch is just trolling us.[color=red]Arioch[/color] wrote:
Thank You, Arioch!
Also, Beryl looks so relaxed. Deeply relaxed.
As if all stress levels are falling away.
As if she found *home*, and feeling safe.
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"Sure, go on, I don't mind touching hands with you" and the next moment she's all over him
Alex looks like Beryl either caught him completely off guard or did he experience telepathy?
Btw, note how Alex himself is no longer holding Beryl by her waist but already almost by her butt.
Alex looks like Beryl either caught him completely off guard or did he experience telepathy?
Btw, note how Alex himself is no longer holding Beryl by her waist but already almost by her butt.
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Not as she seem to mind.entity2636 wrote:Btw, note how Alex himself is no longer holding Beryl by her waist but already almost by her butt.
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"Touch hands? Oh sure, make yourself at hooooh-jeez, ok, that's my crotch"entity2636 wrote:"Sure, go on, I don't mind touching hands with you" and the next moment she's all over him
Alex looks like Beryl either caught him completely off guard or did he experience telepathy?
Btw, note how Alex himself is no longer holding Beryl by her waist but already almost by her butt.
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Looks like Beryl's mind is going to sleep/Zen, and Jardin is seeing into infinity.Krulle wrote:Why has no-one quoted the original post?And now Arioch is just trolling us.[color=red]Arioch[/color] wrote:
Thank You, Arioch!
Also, Beryl looks so relaxed. Deeply relaxed.
As if all stress levels are falling away.
As if she found *home*, and feeling safe.
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That made me think of the possibility, that Beryl's relaxed mind gets lotai'ed by Alexander's mind. And her total relaxation then results from the extended lotai, and her total quietness of mind...