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Author:  sunphoenix [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 12:25 pm ]
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I think the Umiak would dig this...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hpDvtIt6Lsc

Author:  Werra [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 3:38 pm ]
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Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?

Author:  sunphoenix [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 5:06 pm ]
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Werra wrote:
Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?


"You can't Conquer a Free Man...", but you sure as hell can overwhelm him with Desire!

Author:  icekatze [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 5:40 pm ]
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hi hi

That's maybe a little bit closer than holding hands.

Author:  Zarya [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 5:55 pm ]
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Far better than a Vulcan mind meld

Image

Author:  harlequin2262 [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 7:03 pm ]
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And the opening skirmishes in the Jardinbowl are continued with a breathtaking counter-attack!

Author:  GabrielGABFonseca [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 7:33 pm ]
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*inhales*

*Out of the top of my lungs*: "ENZIN TII EILIS MÉ, SIBREG RANII TÓ LANZEDAD"

Author:  sunphoenix [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 8:09 pm ]
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Zarya wrote:
Far better than a Vulcan mind meld

Image


Ahem..{Geek moment}...you Sir are incorrect.. what you have depicted is the "Vulcan-Death Grip"... a technique with no basis in Vulcan culture which Cptn Kirk and his first officer Commander Spock cooked up as a ploy to fool the Female Romulan Captain.. that the 'Rogue' Starfleet hothead Captain Kirk was dead... by the hand of the Vulcan first officer she was so attracted to... ALL so they could Steal a Romulan Cloaking Device. I believe the episode was titled ~ 'The Enterprise Incident'

:)

Author:  novius [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 9:57 pm ]
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:shock: Loroi. Give them a finger, and they take... well... not just the whole arm.

No wonder Alex looks a bit surprised/shocked in that panel.

Author:  Logannion [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 10:00 pm ]
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Why hasn't anyone commented about her other hand that is touching Jardin right below his ear?

I think its important somehow. :|

Author:  novius [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 10:05 pm ]
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Logannion wrote:
Why hasn't anyone commented about her other hand that is touching Jardin right below his ear?

I think its important somehow. :|


Because everyone dismissed it as something like her thinking a single touch on his hand would not be enough, and it was the only other 'safe' spot for skin-to-skin contact, especially since it is where she already had her left hand?

Author:  boldilocks [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 10:35 pm ]
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Werra wrote:
Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?


"To my surprise, telepathy turned out to be quite easy when you're not chained up to a table with a 15-pound probe shoved up the old back-alley"
-Alex Jardin, the auto-biography

Author:  novius [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 10:44 pm ]
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Werra wrote:
Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?


Perhaps :) Or it could simply be that he now realizes that past the "touch barrier" Loroi seem to virtually have no inhibitions. That she had to inch closer to him for her left hand to reach around his neck? Suuure, all just incidential, no hidden intentions behind it :)

Author:  Arent [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 11:43 pm ]
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Werra wrote:
Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?


Is it just me, or does Arioch have more fun (And therefore works quicker) drawing the recent story arc?

novius wrote:
Werra wrote:
Alex is looking awfully surprised. Mayhabs Beryl did actually manage to get around the Lotai?
Alex is receiving that one pic, right?


Perhaps :) Or it could simply be that he now realizes that past the "touch barrier" Loroi seem to virtually have no inhibitions. That she had to inch closer to him for her left hand to reach around his neck? Suuure, all just incidential, no hidden intentions behind it :)


I think she is touching her forehead against his.

Author:  Krulle [ Fri Jun 08, 2018 11:46 pm ]
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Why has no-one quoted the original post?
Arioch wrote:
Image

And now Arioch is just trolling us.
Thank You, Arioch!

Also, Beryl looks so relaxed. Deeply relaxed.
As if all stress levels are falling away.
As if she found *home*, and feeling safe.

Author:  entity2636 [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 12:41 am ]
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"Sure, go on, I don't mind touching hands with you" and the next moment she's all over him :D

Alex looks like Beryl either caught him completely off guard or did he experience telepathy?

Btw, note how Alex himself is no longer holding Beryl by her waist but already almost by her butt.

Author:  Sweforce [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 1:33 am ]
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entity2636 wrote:
Btw, note how Alex himself is no longer holding Beryl by her waist but already almost by her butt.


Not as she seem to mind. :)

Author:  boldilocks [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 2:27 am ]
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entity2636 wrote:
"Sure, go on, I don't mind touching hands with you" and the next moment she's all over him :D
Alex looks like Beryl either caught him completely off guard or did he experience telepathy?
Btw, note how Alex himself is no longer holding Beryl by her waist but already almost by her butt.


"Touch hands? Oh sure, make yourself at hooooh-jeez, ok, that's my crotch"

Author:  Voitan [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:36 am ]
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Krulle wrote:
Why has no-one quoted the original post?
Arioch wrote:
Image

And now Arioch is just trolling us.
Thank You, Arioch!

Also, Beryl looks so relaxed. Deeply relaxed.
As if all stress levels are falling away.
As if she found *home*, and feeling safe.


Looks like Beryl's mind is going to sleep/Zen, and Jardin is seeing into infinity.

Author:  Krulle [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:46 am ]
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That made me think of the possibility, that Beryl's relaxed mind gets lotai'ed by Alexander's mind. And her total relaxation then results from the extended lotai, and her total quietness of mind...

Author:  novius [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 4:12 am ]
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Sweforce wrote:
entity2636 wrote:
Btw, note how Alex himself is no longer holding Beryl by her waist but already almost by her butt.


Not as she seem to mind. :)


She didn't seem to mind even on pg. 133. I was on the verge of commenting that his hand wandering southwards would already have earned him a slap to the face from a human woman.

Author:  Krulle [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 4:21 am ]
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Image

Author:  Overkill Engine [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 5:37 am ]
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Heh. Looks like Humanity's contribution to the war might be acting as Therapy Aliens for Loroi with PTSD.



"We're medicinal."

Author:  raistlin34 [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 6:09 am ]
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"Embrace eternity, Alexander Jardin". :geek:

Author:  novius [ Sat Jun 09, 2018 7:14 am ]
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Krulle wrote:
Also, Beryl looks so relaxed. Deeply relaxed.
As if all stress levels are falling away.
As if she found *home*, and feeling safe.


I can imagine the following:

Tempo: And she touched you ... where? Right there, below your ear?
Alex: She did. I... uh... just assumed it would be reaching out with her hand, nothing more, nothing less, nothing like that....
Tempo: ....intimate?
Alex: If you wish to put it that, way, yes.
Tempo: Perhaps it should have been Tozet Beryl's place to explain, but it was very much that. Intimate. Since time immemorial, a touch at that particular spot is seen as an invitation and consent to further intimacy, because it was said to link two Loroi as one, even deeper than her simply placing her hand on a male's.
Alex: *now very flustered* Wait, you mean... uh...
Tempo: That if you were a Loroi rather than a Human, she would have grossly overstepped her bounds and initiated an unsanctioned male encounter. But since you are not a Loroi, there could be ... mitigating circumstances.

raistlin34 wrote:
"Embrace eternity, Alexander Jardin". :geek:


In a nutshell, yes.

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