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~We shall have the male groom, than have our way with him.~


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The mysterious hair grooming device(TM) is vital for Loroi war efforts.

Once, commander Stillstorm killed five Umiak with only a hair grooming device and a little bit of duct tape :mrgreen:


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Arent wrote:
The mysterious hair grooming device(TM) is vital for Loroi war efforts.

Once, commander Stillstorm killed five Umiak with only a hair grooming device and a little bit of duct tape :mrgreen:

Fire the Wave-Groom Device!

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Fire the Wave-Groom Device!


Grooming is looming on the horizon... :twisted:

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The wave-groom would work better on Ewoks than on hairless beetle-like Umiak....

Cloud: May The Groom be with You!

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Cloud: “It’s not funny! If he’s got lice then I will throw him out the airlock.”


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I hate to do this as I'm not an artist and hopefully it'll be taken constructively, but I've pulled Cloud's eyes back from her nose and made her chin look less like bruce campbell's and more like in the previous page.
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I'm not sure if it's the absence of eye-shadows (which sort of makes sense as she's looking upwards on the new page) or the position of the eyes, but they just looked a bit janky, and her jaw went from looking sort of petite to looking like the Teen Titans Go "Serious" face. I think it might be due to the change to her face being in pure profile.


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At first I wondered if Cloud and Stillstorm were related, but when I checked the bridge pages, I noticed she looks a lot more like the woman in the middle-right panel on this page:
https://well-of-souls.com/outsider/outsider055.html

Are related loroi (mother/daugher/aunt) made to serve on separate ships?


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"We shall overcomb"


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boldilocks wrote:
Are related loroi (mother/daugher/aunt) made to serve on separate ships?

Nope.

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Is that a bottle opener on the back of the comb? Also :lol: at the dis on Alex's classic '90s hair.

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A dis that is pretty rich coming from the equally spiky-haired pilot...


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boldilocks wrote:
I hate to do this as I'm not an artist and hopefully it'll be taken constructively, but I've pulled Cloud's eyes back from her nose and made her chin look less like bruce campbell's and more like in the previous page.
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I'm not sure if it's the absence of eye-shadows (which sort of makes sense as she's looking upwards on the new page) or the position of the eyes, but they just looked a bit janky, and her jaw went from looking sort of petite to looking like the Teen Titans Go "Serious" face. I think it might be due to the change to her face being in pure profile.


I concur, her eyes look a bit strange being so far forward with such a righteous chin.

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The bottom one looks more in keeping with her facial structure.


Edit: Oi! Wotz going on with my pics? :lol:
Edit Mk ll: Thanks.


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Dorfington wrote:
Edit: Oi! Wotz going on with my pics? :lol:


You're linking to the imgur page that displays the image rather than the image itself.
Arioch'd already updated the page and it may have happened before my post, but I'd forgotten to shift-F5 on it.


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boldilocks wrote:
Dorfington wrote:
Edit: Oi! Wotz going on with my pics? :lol:


You're linking to the imgur page that displays the image rather than the image itself.
Arioch'd already updated the page and it may have happened before my post, but I'd forgotten to shift-F5 on it.


Ah yes, that was silly. Thank you.

Looking at the page on the website, it doesn't seem to have been altered.


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You need to hard refresh it, Ctrl-F5

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Has anyone else noticed that they seem to be playing around with grooming and dressing him?


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CrimsonFALKE wrote:
Has anyone else noticed that they seem to be playing around with grooming and dressing him?

"Now sit down, captain, while I apply this medicine to your face that may, to your alien eyes, look like eye-liner and assorted make-up, but which I assure you is vital to the healing process of your unfortunate head wound."


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CrimsonFALKE wrote:
Has anyone else noticed that they seem to be playing around with grooming and dressing him?


"The male must be properly groomed before he is allowed entry to Fort Snuggle."


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Alex: What's this?"

Beryl: A mouth cleansing tool and paste. Your breath still smells of the last food item that did not agree with you.

[2 minutes later]

Alex: What's this?"

Beryl: A Cleansing powder for the body. You have an odd smell.

[2 minutes later.]

Alex: Do I want to know?"

Beryl: It is a dog leash. She says it is time for you to go for a walk.


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Alex: So why exactly am I in this hole?
Beryl: It is for our convenience. Here is some lotion. It goes on your skin.


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Arioch wrote:
boldilocks wrote:
Are related loroi (mother/daugher/aunt) made to serve on separate ships?

Nope.

Head canon achieved!


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hi hi

Time to play everyloroi's favorite game, groomin' the hoomin'.

Shoe girl Cloud continues to be awesome, top tier background character for sure.

(I like how the comb is designed for maximum weight reduction, that's a nice touch.)


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And, noticed something else? Even with the handshake all of them still kept a respectful distance, with one exception.

Beryl asked for his permission to touch him just once, but she's definitely using her newly acquired leeway to get into his private space up to the hilt.

Not that she had many qualms about doing so even before that, though.


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