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I'll make an entry here when I make edits to already-posted pages, for those who are keeping track of such things. In most browsers you have to hard-reload (Ctrl+F5 or Ctrl+[click refresh button]) to see modified images.

24 April: Page 128_2: adjusted Moonglow's dialogue to make it a little less awkward. It was about 3AM when I wrote the original version. :D

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Page 129_3: The estimated distance of the deep jump group from the primary was changed to 64 light-solon. The original was a hasty/poor estimate, used diameter instead of radius, and then converted from seconds to solon in the wrong direction. :D

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Page 047_2: Fixed a typo in "accommodation."

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Page 143_1.5: Added an additional panel to make it more clear that Talon is speaking.

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Page 175_4: Updated the blush effect on Beryl.

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Page 177: Added Spiral's missing necklace in panel 3, and added missing shadows on the deck rails in panel 2.

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Page 109: I reworded Tempo's dialogue in the middle bubble of the second panel. The previous wording was leading to the misconception that she was saying the Loroi fired first in the Ukko incident.

I also removed Alex's left hand in the last panel. This change was made some time ago, but wasn't uploaded until now.

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Page 162: corrected Reed's title in the second panel to Soroin Pedeir.

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Page 195: added the missing background to panels 3 and 4.

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Page 196: I updated the projection graphic for the Crossfire board in panels 2-4. The distance and color differences between the gravity well levels are increased, and there is a rearrangement of the starting configuration of the pieces.

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Page 197: changed Talon's dialogue in the second and fifth panels from "construct-things" to "puppet-things."

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Page 20: I adjusted the drawings of Beryl so that they don't look quite as awful as they did before.

Page 126: Slightly changed Talon's nose in both panels.

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