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Chapter Nine: Takeovers and Talks

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Gunsmoke drifted across the harbor as the cannon’s roar echoed outwards.

Hornguard stood with one arm wrapped in Wavestrider’s mast-netting, both feet balanced on the gunwale while her free hand held the far-glass to her eye.

Behind the far-off waterfront, a gray puff of masonry dust burst skywards. A half-beat later a black cloud thundered up to devour it, red-orange whorls swirling throughout.

Nodding in satisfaction, Hornguard sent <Excellent shot, on-target and with the fuse cut to precision.> She allowed herself a few solon to bask in the radiating satisfaction of her forward gun-crew, and for a moment she was many degrees south and decades in the past: congratulating her gunners while their harpoon-line played out behind the stricken leviathan. A hard life, yes, but full of adventure and promise.

Then her teeth gritted together, and the far-glass lowered from her eye. One finger traced over the brass bump in her pocket, the gifted watch and its precious age-worn picture.

All that truly was left, of a life that had been stolen from her.

Narrowing her sending, Hornguard added to her ship-master <Congratulate Spout-caller on her excellent vision, as well. That building does indeed seem to have been an ammunition stockpile.>

<As we all expected.> Mist Glass responded privately, and by the brief — and rare, these days — undercurrent of warmth within her sending it was clear that she, too, had been taken back in time for a moment. Just another instance where Wavestrider’s oldest crew-sister had used her peerless eyesight to spot something that others had missed. It was how she’d earned her name, after all, many tens of years ago. Only now instead of sighting a herd of leviathans on the horizon, she had tracked the bustling of Sezabi’s defenders on — and behind! — their battlements. Had followed the figures, tiny moving dots even through a far-glass’s lens, and spotted where they’d moved what surely must be the last of their gunpowder stores.

That now made three ground-shaking explosions which had rocked the port’s waterfront over the last few days. Everyone knew that Northerners were obstinate & fish-headed as well as bloodthirsty, but even they must be nearing the realization that they were losing this siege.

<Just as well, frankly.> Mist Glass added, responding to the thoughts which Hornguard had let leak from her mind. With only the two gun-crews on deck and the marines still at rest below, it wasn’t like there was anyone nearby enough to mistakenly receive her. <We’ve only enough powder and shot left for a hundred or so more tries.>

Hornguard snorted, even as she collapsed the far-glass and dropped down to the flying bridge. <And they only have enough buildings left for half that.> She waved one hand behind her to take in the pall of smoke that hung low over the sheltered harbor, hemmed-in by the low hills surrounding the town. <They’ll already have a cold time of things come winter, this far north. Another few days of bombardment and there won’t be a ‘Port of Sezabi’ anymore.> Her thought was punctuated by the delayed arrival of the distant crump of the explosion, traveling along with the flattened-wave over the water.

Returning the far-glass to her pocket, she turned and regarded the distant waterfront with the unaided eye. In particular, the ruins of the harbor-tower that had — initially — guarded the narrow inlet leading into the wide bay. Its shattered remains still reached skywards, a ground-funeral place for the few dozen Belerids who had tried to use its height to fire down onto Wavestrider’s deck.

And a fitting tribute to the one crew-sister whom their rifle-shots had actually struck down. Cloudflash's body was stored below, in a brine-tank that had been emptied of preserved foods. It would not be fitting, after all, to commit the mortal remains of a daughter of the warm Isles to the icy embrace of Northern waters.

Pulling in a breath, Hornguard drew her thoughts back to the present. <Anything further to report?> she asked more for routine’s sake, given how Wavestrider had done little more than sit at anchor and exercise her guns for the last eight-day.

<Nothing that requires our intervention.> Mist Glass shrugged, red locks bouncing atop her shoulders. <A few of the engineering crew are getting restless with so little to do, but Hair-thin has them under control.>

There could be little doubt about that. Hornguard let a thin smile curl at the corner of her mouth. Anyone foolish enough to laugh at the diminutive stature of Wavestrider’s chief engineer learned most quickly that her temper more than made up for her male-sized height.

Then again, it was best to minimize any grumbling from the crew to begin with, and Stars only knew that this blockade was unlikely to see much need for the full engine-room stoker crew any time soon…

Eyes briefly narrowing in thought, Hornguard peered across the waters as if she could read the intent of her barbarian opponents. Then nodded to herself. <I think that it would be appropriate if the ship’s pinnace were fitted for a half-day’s expedition or so, and loaded with nets and line.> She turned to regard Mist Glass over her shoulder, one eyebrow raised. <We can spare one shift of stokers, and no-doubt a good few fisherwomen may be found among their number.>

Her captain nodded immediately, even before the thought had been fully sent. The experienced sea-officer had almost certainly reached the same idea herself, and probably had begun the preparations even before Hornguard gave her assent. One of the perks of having worked with the same lead-captain for more than half a century, to have her commands anticipated with such reliability.

<At once, Warlord.> came the formal response. <With your permission I would add a brace of marines, just to keep the Sezabids honest.>

Hornguard snorted. <A hopeless task, that. But a good idea nonethele—>

<Cannon-smoke!> came the lookout’s broadcast from far above amidst the mast-tops. <Two points off the right-bow, atop that low rise!>

In one fluid motion, Hornguard spun on one foot, pulled the far-glass from her coat, extended it, and put it to her left eye to search down Spout-caller’s sighting. Only a split-solon later, she found the puff of dirty-gray gunsmoke against the background of dirtier-gray building-smoke.

And not terribly much gunsmoke, at that. The Sezabids had had enough harbor-defense guns knocked out already; were they now using small mobile-guns to move between firing positions? That would be harder for her to destroy, but any cannon that would put out so little smoke must struggle to at all reach Wavestrider so many hundred cable-lengths out from the shore…

Her questions were answered a few solon later as a bright flame licked into being at the base of the dissipating cloud. A gun-carriage with its barrel dismounted, clearly soaked in leviathan-oil, plunged over the edge of the bluff and down into the surf below.

A gesture whose intent was recognized throughout the world-sea, evidently even here among Northern barbarians.

Nodding in satisfaction, Hornguard lowered her far-glass. <It seems that the fishing-expedition will have to wait. We will need the ships’ boats to properly accept Sezabi’s surrender.>

///////

Much later, Hornguard stood alone on the stern of her ship and watched as the lantern-dotted procession of boats rowed back-and-forth. In to shore, loading themselves full of wrapped cargo while under the watchful guard of a triple-company of marines, then back out into the harbor. Across the placid nighttime waters, to the devastated guard-tower on its sandy peninsula-tip. As good a place as any to hold the town’s confiscated stocks of food, now held hostage to the Northerner barbarians’ good behavior.

She shook her head, ruefully correcting herself. ‘Hostage to the Sezabids’ good behavior’, more like. Their capitulation was one of the final steps to implementing her plan, and the whole point was that they would not remain ‘barbarians’ for long. She would bring civilization — peace, trade, and no more raids — to the backwards inhabitants of Beleri, at spear-point so they knew she meant it. They would learn the new rules... or their surviving kin would learn. One way or another.

Of course, that also meant that they were now her people, in every way that that mattered. They had surrendered honorably enough, and thus were owed the proper treatment accorded by the customs of civilized disputes.

One corner of her mouth ticked upwards. Perhaps she had been perhaps a bit slow in explaining to the barbarians just what their ‘rights’ were under the Codes. But by the time they learned that, she would be firmly established as their suzerain.

If only the shredded city’s actual leader was here!

Her smile fading into a scowl, she whirled on one foot and marched her way back down the stern-walk. An open door waited ahead, out of which poured light and warmth.

And within which waited a pair of minds too intimidated — wisely — to direct their attention outwards at all unless directly sent to.

Hornguard strode back into her trade-cabin, specially-weighted boots thumping heavily against the floorboards. A tactic that had served her well through the many, many negotiations driven home in this cabin… albeit those had been struck with oil-refiners and sail-merchants, not cowed barbarians.

Still, the principles seemed to be much the same.

<The horizon remains empty of your town’s war-vessels, even now after three days.> she sent without preamble. <It seems that they will not be coming back.>

The two Sezabids seated before her desk glanced up only briefly, before their eyes dropped from hers. The elder of the two sent back <This… is possible, yes.> Her tone was that of one who knows her duty, but was having to struggle to make herself actually see it through.

Unfortunate.

<Then you are prepared to put your name to the Document?> Hornguard placed herself behind her desk, glaring down at the two representatives of her vanquished enemy. The enemy who had thus far refused to actually sign the Document of Surrender despite their ‘informal’ but absolute capitulation.

<Once the requisite ninety days have passed, yes.> ‘Miros-fond’ replied once more. Her weary resignation was underlined by an iron resolve, for all that the Northerner’s body did not quite match the heft implied by her strange barbarian name. Yet the scars visible on her skin showed that here was indeed one who had known battle.

<You would not yield your city for more than eighty days yet?> Hornguard asked, carefully redacting the frustrated irritation out of her sending. Of all the times for the barbarians to discover the ‘joys’ of legalism, now? She held their city under her guns, she held their people’s very food under guard, and still they would not ‘formally’ recognize her victory for nearly a full season?

<I can not.> Miros-fond admitted. <It is not within the powers of my office to break this law.>

Hornguard turned her back on the Northerners, now free to roll her eyes. They were barbarians; what need did their primitive peoples clinging to such a rocky coast have for codified laws beyond ‘I have the bigger spear, therefore I make the rules!’ She had expected them to decide matters of court by clubbing each other over the head, not such pettifogging quibbling over words on paper!

Admittedly, ‘clubbing them over the head’ was becoming a more and more attractive option to her by the day.

<Your elected-leader seems to have chosen a most poor time to wander the seas.> Hornguard let her contemptuous thoughts leak out into open sanzai. But at least these Sezabids had elected leaders; she’d first expected to be negotiating with some tribal hereditary-chief. Probably clad in stinking furs, for that matter.

<She did not ‘wander’!> the younger of the two Sezabids finally opened her mind. Clearly not what her elder desired, by the sharp sending that immediately flashed her way. Yet the — well, not a ‘child,’ but undoubtedly no more than two decades waited behind those flaring eyes — other representative of Hornguard’s conquered people nevertheless sent with obvious pride <She went out to conquer!>

Yet more pointless slaughter, spoken of with such zeal? Hornguard let a thin sneer out onto her face, staring down her nose at this blood-maddened Northern barbarian. <Then it seems better indeed that she will not return.> Even as eyes widened in anger at her sending, a thought struck Hornguard and she added with rising fury of her own <Whom did your Warlord set out to ‘conquer’?>

If the Belerids had set out on yet another of their pointless — but often bloody — incursions south into the Isles, and she had missed destroying them in harbor by what appeared to be only a bare few days, she’d—!

Hornguard’s knuckles whitened where they gripped the back of her chair, heat pouring into the glare that she sent down at her prisoners. Her hostages. Those whom she had sworn not to harm as they traveled under the mantle of peace, yes… but certainly there were others in this surrendered town who would really not be missed. Pirates, murderers, criminals of that sort… if indeed one could find any within this school of biting-fish that weren’t such themselves.

Miros-fond eyed those paling digits, and quickly leaned over to nudge her shoulder against the younger representative of her people. Then swallowed hard and turned to meet Hornguard’s eyes. <Crownholder Minzanarrir departed to attack the arrogant and domineering Clan Whirlpool, and took the entirety of our remaining war-fleet with her.> Something hardened deep in her eyes, and she added <It seems that while few of our own City’s warships returned from the season’s… expeditions, fewer still survived to return to Redrock.>

Hornguard snorted. Then she had missed a few of the Northerner’s raiding ships, in her endeavors before Truce. But perhaps not so many of them, and of course the savages had evidently fallen into infighting as soon as their battered number had limped home anyways.

Typical.

<Call her by whatever title you wish, but I deem her ‘Warlord.’ I do not use this term out of any abundance of respect.> Hornguard sent back, nostrils narrowing. She’d had the term thrown onto her as a pejorative by those back home too gutless to do what must be done to stop the Northern menace, yes, but it wasn’t like they were entirely wrong. A brutish title for a businesswoman forced into employing brutish methods: one who led those under her employ only to violence and destruction, much as the Belerid savages did.

She shook her head to dismiss the thought. <Then if she has not yet returned from her attempted attack against her fellow Belerids, it seems that we can assume that she will not be returning.>

<You may assume so.> Miros-fond sent, pressing her paling lips together. <I cannot. It is not within the powers granted to my office.>

Hornguard let out a frustrated sigh. It was tempting — so tempting — to pitch these two barbarians over the side with ballast-stones tied to their ankles, but if Sezabi’s second-highest leader here was so bound to her city’s rules then it seemed likely that such a violation would result in open resistance from the surrendered city. Which in turn would mean either Hornguard had to expend more cannon-powder that she didn’t have or her marines would need to patrol the city in person. And while Wavestrider’s two cannons, proudly forged by the finest of smiths back home, could easily outrange and out-shoot the Belerids’ primitive smoothbores… the corresponding advantages of her marines’ rifles would mean little within the confines of a town.

And the entire point of this punitive journey was to stop her fellow Amenalids from dying pointless deaths at barbarian hands.

So. What options did she have, then? She could sit here almost an entire quarter-year until the thick-headed Northerner in front of her recognized reality and formally acknowledged her obvious rule over these barbarians. That was… workable, yes, but slow. She had intended to have message-boats sent out to the other Northerner villages known to her new subjects to proclaim her intent to pacify them all… but that would only work properly if it were Sezabid message-boats doing the proclaiming. The three warships of her fleet were more than a match for any Northern barbarian flotilla, but they could still only be in three places at once. If Beleri was to be pacified, it would have to go along with it… not resist her in battle.

Which left one interesting option.

<Then I will go to Redrock.> Hornguard declared, pushing herself up from the chair’s back. As two shocked Northerners stared up at her, she added <They will kneel to me as you have, and then you will hear what news they may have of your no-doubt deceased former ruler.> Her eyes narrowed in thought. <In fact, you both will come with me in person.>

That should meet all of her objectives, with a minimum of additional time spent. The Sezabids had surrendered their town to her conditionally, yes, but with honest intent that was clearly received. She would leave a strong garrison by the remains of the harbor-tower, with a few of the ships’ boats armed with cannon to patrol the harbor against any — unlikely — armed uprising. Perhaps even leave Swelldancer behind; the broad-bellied but lightly-armed supply vessel would be less useful in a bombardment than would Wavestrider and Finchaser.

Those two warships then would fall upon this ‘Redrock’, the only other town that she had heard spoken of as a potential leader of Beleri’s fractious barbarian tribes.

And she would flatten them.

///////

Archbrook closed the door behind her and walked down the hallway. In her wake, the pain-thin sanzai of those still recuperating in the healer’s rooms faded with distance.

But did not disappear entirely.

Rather, the traces of anxiety which leaked through their sendings were mirrored by so many of those who marched rigidly about their duties throughout Redrock. Such as Archbrook herself. For the veteran warriors who had accompanied Grandmother on her near-fought victory — those few who had come back — were more aware than most just what dire straits the Clan found itself in.

It would take at least two or three years to build their numbers back to what was needed to maintain the preeminence among the lesser Clans of Beleri that Goldenshawl had carefully arranged. Years in which even those weaker — formerly weaker — peoples may feel emboldened to attempt to seize the title of de-facto Foremost of Beleri for themselves.

And worse yet, they might succeed.

The same thoughts kept swirling around within the confines of Archbrook’s mind, and the strain of keeping them contained as best she could was beginning to tell. A constant headache had hung about her like a looming cloud for the past many days, and a dull pain hovered behind her eyes.

She paced through into the kitchens, nodding absentmindedly to the warriors working there to sort what little food had been pulled from the sea by the thinned flotilla of fishing-boats that Clan Whirlpool could now put to sea. It would be enough, yes, but that really only said much about the many mouths that would never again find their seat within the Grand Hall.

<Five barrels salted and packed just today, Clan-Heir!> sent one of the kitchen-workers from behind her just as she neared the door in the opposite wall. Archbrook turned to meet the eyes of a newly-Named warrior who could not be quite through even her tenth year, wearing armor that hung awkward on her too-small frame.

And whose mind rang with the fragile energy of a sending that the barely-not-a-child clearly knew was but the smallest of comforts amidst the worry smothering the entirety of Clan Whirlpool.

Yet still, Archbrook could not find it within her to call her young clan-sister on it. <Well done.> she nodded. <See to it that they are stacked into the cliff-grottos and sealed away correctly.>

Her gaze played over the several other warriors laboring in the kitchens’ briny air, seven other youths watched over by a single senior warrior from two generations before Archbrook herself. The elder met her eyes and they exchanged a nod; each one recognizing that Archbrook had given no command that wasn’t already obvious... and also each one knowing just why she had still sent it.

<Of course, Clan-Heir!> chorused two more of the young ones, their minds reverberating with the same anxious energy and (poorly) suppressed awe as the first. Reinforcing Archbrook’s decision to give the worried children what reassurances she could. And also—

She turned quickly back to the door, hopefully fast enough that none caught the frown which crossed her brows. And also, there was that title again. ‘Clan-Heir,’ a position that Grandmother had not yet returned her to. Yet one that many within the Clan — most disproportionately the younger warriors… and child-warriors — had spontaneously draped across her shoulders all the same.

Archbrook snorted, closing the door behind her to seal away the salty stink of the fish-preparations. She had warned Grandmother, when Goldenshawl had first insisted that Archbrook and Dovindr demonstrate their ‘innovation’ all those days ago. Her proposal of ‘ski-warriors’ had long faded to ash in her throat as the toll paid by Whirlpool’s warriors had become obvious to her, yes, but even her darkened soul still admitted that it was a clever idea. And perhaps even training the youngest warriors, those most open to learning such a new and strange skill, in the use of the wooden snow-gliding planks was a natural choice.

But Archbrook had sensed immediately that Goldenshawl had not been mostly thinking of martial utility when she had ordered Archbrook and Dovindr to put on their demonstration. No, Grandmother had demanded it for its morale benefits, to give the Clan a sense that there was some new trick of the warrior’s art that only they knew. That would warm the guttering fires of their despairing souls to dream once more that the Clan’s supremacy would go on unchallenged and unthreatened, thanks to the clever discovery of one of their foremost warriors.

Archbrook shook her head, turning down the corridor, walking to nowhere in particular. The impressed sendings and wide eyes of those gathered warriors — far too many standing on crutches, or shielding their eyes against the snow-glare using the only functioning hand left to them — had been honest enough, but the burgeoning wave of hope that had flowed through the crowd was still tempered with realism.

After all, one couldn’t ski on water.

A soft scuffing of boots against floorboards — and a soft laugh — pulled Archbrook from her wandering thoughts. She raised her downcast eyes to find herself standing in front of a door that had become surprisingly familiar to her over the last many days.

<You seem to be spending more time here than anyone else.> Iceshard sent with a bemused smile, standing at her usual guard-post outside the door to the Males’ Quarters. <All that new training out in the snow doesn’t tire you out enough already?>

The tone of her sendings made their joking nature obvious enough. It also conveyed that Iceshard was deliberately injecting some levity into the somber atmosphere of the Hall.

An effort that Archbrook appreciated… and matched, harshly forcing back the gloom away from the forefront of her thoughts. <If anything, it works up an appetite!> She winked at her friend, worries temporarily retreating to the back of her mind. <And I am surprised to see you still posted here as the Wing’s guard, now that you’re on the list yourself.>

The waiting list for access to the Clan’s males, a list that had grown faster than even their enthusiastic efforts to keep pace over the last few days. With so many gaping holes torn into the ranks of Whirlpool’s warriors, Grandmother had become rather more lax in terms of who was honored with the right to bear the next generation.

<Low on the list.> Iceshard shrugged, the spear leaned idly against her shoulder bobbing slightly. Then a glint entered her eye, and when her sanzai came again it was full of entirely-honest teasing humor <A list that I noticed does not bear your name. Is Goldenshawl having second thoughts about calling you her foremost granddaughter once more?>

<No.> Archbrook corrected immediately, but held the rest of her answer until she could think it over for herself. Why hadn’t she sought out the opportunity to join the honored ranks of warriors with children, a rare accomplishment for one of her youth? It hadn’t even crossed her mind to ask Duskflame to add her name to the list; why? Was she truly thinking instead to—

Before Archbrook was able to properly analyze the thoughts leaking from her own mind, Iceshard’s smile broadened. <I thought that was it!> Bracing her weight on her spear’s grip, she leaned forwards and sent more privately <So, what is a Dain male like? Yours is the smallest, but he is still taller than any of ours; is he proportionally—?>

<No.> Archbrook interjected, repeating herself more forcefully. Then quickly added <That is, I don’t know. I haven’t sought an encounter, and he hasn’t attempted one.> Although, as a few memories crossed her vision to remind her, it certainly seemed that he had thought about it.

As had she.

<Truly?> Iceshard asked, blinking, clearly taken aback by the truth in Archbrook’s sanzai. She straightened back up, briefly chewing at the inside of one lip before sending slyly <Then you wouldn’t mind if I were to specifically request him?>

<What?> Archbrook answered faster than thought. Her lips fought their way down into a revealing scowl despite her best efforts to stop them, efforts that came in vain as she felt her thoughts leak past the attempted lotai to block them.

<I knew it!> Iceshard sent, blood-blue eyes widening in elation as she poked one finger at Archbrook. <You’re your grandmother’s daughter, that is indeed most certain! Already set on monopolizing one single male?>

<No.> Archbrook shot back… mostly truthfully. To cover her thoughts from her friend — and to avoid examining them too closely herself — she quickly added <What I mean is that Sun Master thinks that we might not be able to derive children from the Dain males. He sends that the ancient stories don’t mention anything about loroi ‘encountering’ their non-loroi subjects that way.>

<But you’d like to find out yourself, wouldn’t you?> Iceshard smirked.

Archbrook tried to force her thoughts to say ‘no.’ But eventually was forced to yield. <Yes.> she admitted, more to herself than to her friend.

Whose gleeful expression then softened into a warm smile. <Good. Your grandmother has evidently taken much happiness from having a male whose cleverness and determination is a rare match for hers, and from what you have told us of your adventure up north it seems that perhaps you have found someone similar. It is more pleasurable, I am told, with someone who is almost like a fellow warrior.> Iceshard nodded solemnly, doing her best to portray a wisdom greater than that of her seventeen years.

And Archbrook finally saw an opportunity for some teasing revenge against her friend. With a sly grin, she sent <You’d know.>

<Hey!> Iceshard rocked back on her feet as if struck, yet her smile only widened. <Flamedance and I work on only each other’s hair in the baths because we know best the braiding we each like, nothing more!> Then she dropped the act, and winked at Archbrook. <But also yes.>

Shaking her head with a softer smile, Archbrook pulled open the door into the Males’ Quarters and stepped through, followed by the sanzai laughter of her childhood friend.

///////

Dovindr’s hand slipped and the knife jumped towards him. He almost managed to snatch his other hand out of the way in time, but still the point burned across the very tip of one finger. Dropping the tool to the floor with a clatter, he quickly brought up his wounded hand for an inspection.

Only a shallow cut, good. He’d just have to be more careful.

“You will get used to them.” came Eadberht’s deep voice not a moment later, from where the southern-born sailor knelt at the other side of the room. He did not even glance up from where he also leaned over a plank of shaved elf-wood.

But at least his actually looked almost like a ski already, not still just a squared-off log.

“I think I might have cut mine too thick.” Dovindr mused wryly, leaning back onto his heels.

That did get Eadberht to raise his head, although the carpenter’s-knife in his hand still kept up its steady movements. “Better than cutting too thin.” He finally paused, setting the knife down with a quiet click and running one broad thumb over the wood. In what qualified as a long speech by his normal standards, he then added “These elf-trees have much sap. Flexible, not hard.” Wide shoulders rolled in a slow shrug. “They will work.”

The two men — for Dovindr certainly considered himself to belong to that group now, after his fraught journey to the north with Rozelsarad! — returned to their quiet work. For some time, the small bedroom echoed dully with the rasping of iron on wood. Frida slept silently in the corner, whetstone resting at her feet much as Halfdan rested in her arms. Bitter fumes wafted up from the sap-wet wood… and perhaps one or two more muttered oaths from Dovindr as his knife slipped again. But he was getting better at it; the wooden plank underneath him that had started as a raw log was slowly coming to better resemble an actual flattened ski. Vaguely, anyways.

He’d gotten so used to the routine that it took a while for him to properly notice the slight chill breeze that whispered through the cozy room. Frowning, Dovindr glanced up towards the entrance.

And found Rozelsarad standing quietly in the door, her red-orange eyes clouded as she looked down at him. But only for a moment, before she smiled and stepped inside. “Greetings Dovindr.” The elf-woman crouched next to him, balancing on her toes as she ran one hand over the almost-ski at his feet. “This seems to be finished soon! It is a good ski, yes?”

“Uh...” his eyes flitted automatically to the many nicks and cuts that marred the soft wood. None were large enough to be anything more than a visual blemish — he’d learned better, after his first try had to be relegated to scrap wood — but they still betrayed his product to be very much the work of an inexperienced craftsman. He smiled wryly, “It’s a ski, yes.”

She chuckled, patting the plank with one hand. Then, after a moment, she brushed aside wood shavings to make a clear patch on the floor. Sitting down with a soft thump, the elf-woman rested her chin atop her drawn-up knees. And said nothing.

Dovindr paused, torn between returning to his work — he was proud that Eadberht had chosen him to be the one taught to split wood this precisely, the other men having been judged too ‘thick-fingered’ — and waiting for Rozelsarad to speak. The silence stretched on, and yet it felt rude for him to ignore her and go back to—

He flicked one finger against his other hand, the tiny prick of impact a self-inflicted chastisement. Rozelsarad of all people — of all women — would hardly be likely to mind him working instead of paying her full attention. In fact, she would probably like to learn what he was precisely doing. “See here how the wood is made to split along the, uh...” he searched for the elf-word for ‘grain,’ even as he otherwise echoed Eadberht’s teachings from earlier that morning. “Wood-lines?”

Rozelsarad laughed quietly, one finger reaching out again to trace along the length of the half-formed ski. “The word is ‘soiston.’”

“’Soiston.’” Dovindr carefully enunciated the elf-word. Their language was strange indeed, yet it… fit coming from Rozelsarad. And the way that his not-quite-right pronunciation never failed to draw more laughter from his friend was, if anything, only a positive. Sharing a smile with the elf-woman, he shuffled the ski further along to expose more of the raw and un-shaped portion. “Then the bottom-side is made not-rough, and the upper-side only flat.” He spun the knife still in his hand and held it out grip-first to her. “You want to try, maybe?”

As expected, she instantly took the tool from him. He shuffled off to the side, letting her straddle the ski for a better angle.

“Like this seems to be the correct grip?” she asked, pausing before putting blade to wood. The others were right — she was clearly one who had experience at working with her hands; ‘learning well’ was its own talent, after all.

It was good to see that she did indeed have skills and interests that did not involve bloodshed; Dovindr’s mind still felt a bit strange when he tried to reconcile this headstrong-but-friendly Rozelsarad who crouched here before him with the blood-stained Rozelsarad who fought three other elf-women and left one of them gut-sliced.

She was a strange woman, and he wasn’t quite certain how to feel about her. “Yes, that is almost right.” He reached out, placing one hand over hers and correcting her grip slightly. “Now it is.” The cool, blue hand underneath his was yet another reminder of just how different this elf was from a man of Midgard like himself.

He had seen her hold much larger blades than the knife currently wrapped in those deceptively-fine fingers, after all.

Swallowing, he applied a slight bit of pressure to pull the knife towards where he crouched next to Rozelsarad, shoulder against shoulder. She followed immediately, slowly dragging the notched rear-edge of the blade along the wood at an angle. Small shavings curled up and split off, dropping behind along with the bitter-sharp scent of this strange wood.

For a while, he and Rozelsarad worked quietly. One hand atop the other as he guided her through the basics of smoothing the wood, a task familiar enough to him from a childhood spent helping maintain Harbor-glory at Father’s instructions. Applying the same skill to making skis from elf-wood was similar enough in principle.

Although it certainly did feel different to be showing it to Rozelsarad. What he would have thought to be a mere passing — or performative — interest in the muscle-straining work from any other woman was likely an actual curiosity, with her. She genuinely did want to learn how the skis that had so excited her were made… and he found himself definitely enjoying showing her.

For one thing, despite how cool her skin was against his Dovindr still felt his shoulder burning with warmth where it pressed against hers.

The last time he could remember something like that, it had been more than a year ago when Elgiva the mead-maker’s daughter was showing him how to carve honey out from the wicker-hives that her family made for the bees which brought them their produce. She had excitedly showed him the woven-straw cap that she had placed atop the skep, moving his hands over the exposed opening and explaining how she thought she could now draw honey from the hive while leaving her beloved bees mostly alone.

An affection that the stinging buzzers did not seem to quite return — both Dovindr and Elgiva had sported quite a few angry red welts by the time they withdrew. But the small handful of waxy honey that they’d come away with, however sweet it was, had been as nothing compared to seeing the proud, rosy smile on his childhood-friend’s face.

She’d chosen Hammarsten the blacksmith over him only later that summer, yes, but Dovindr knew that it had been a close choice. Perhaps even for the better, in the end, as he was exiled along with Father and Frida shortly afterwards.

And besides, if Elgiva had chosen him then he wouldn’t have met Rozelsarad. The elf-woman turned to him then, her own smiling face only a hand’s-width away. He could feel her breath on his nascent chin-hairs as she said “It seems to be most fun! Like carving fish-scales.”

Dovindr nodded. “That is a good...” he searched for the word for ‘analogy’ “’thing-equal-thing?’”

She cocked her head, brows furrowing slightly. “’Thing-equal-thing’?” Then her face cleared, and that smile returned to light up the room. “Thing-equal-thing!” Rozelsarad snorted, quickly pulling her hand back and leaving the knife embedded as her chest rocked with laughter. Rocking that did… interesting things to her figure, dressed in lighter metal-plated robes than he normally saw her in. “Moio sagit! You Dains seem to be the champions at twisting words!” Her eyes narrowed in thought. “Or perhaps that is a specialty of Dain males, like with loroi males?”

He didn’t know about elf-men, as while the only one he had actually spoken to definitely appeared to be a clever fellow, that wasn’t very much to guess from. But still, “There are men who twist words in music and, uh,” how to say ‘poetry’? Well, she’d seemed to find his last guess at her language amusing, so... “’word-story-music’ to sing of heroes’ glory, ‘skalds.’ There are also women who use word-magic to change fate or to heal, ‘wise-women.’”

He was rewarded as Rozelsarad laughed again, shaking her head. And she appeared as interested as always when he spoke of home. “This ‘word-story-music,’ what is it?” The elf-woman sounded out the words, clearly at a loss.

“Uhh… words placed in patterns, to tell a story?”

“Spoken words only?”

“Well, yeah. We don’t have your ‘sanzai.’” he used the elf-word that she had described to him before. A strange concept indeed, but they were elfs after all.

“Yes,” her face fell, and her darkening eyes bored into his. The wood-carving knife sat forgotten, unmoving. “that is sad.”

“Oh.” Dovindr shrugged. “We talk well enough together.”

“True, but talk only.” For whatever reason, that did seem to bring Rozelsarad’s mood down. She turned away,

Well, he can’t have that! After chewing on his lip for a moment —well, several — he hesitantly voiced a basic four-line stanza that he had quickly put together. Coughed after the first word, and then lowered his voice to the best mimic he could manage of a skald filling a dimly-lit evening hall with hero-tales of old:

“Nenzit-armed did the warrior go forth,

nenzi-focused on her mission of duty.

Sillar-dark was the night when the hero Rozelsarad left, but

sillat-bright was the victory with which she returned.”

That… mostly sounded like a poem, right? He was really pushing his knowledge of the elf-tongue, but he thought he’d gotten the opening-strong words of each line to rhyme… sort-of.

He peered anxiously into Rozelsarad’s eyes, waiting for her response.

He didn’t have to wait long.

At first, the elf-woman’s brows only lowered further. Clearly not familiar with the concept of skaldic poetry, as she had explained; her lips moved silently to shape out the words. But then her eyes shot wide open, her mouth parting slightly. A soft breath escaped, unformed words drifting within it.

That was… a good sign, right? That she’d actually liked—

Her arm reached out around his back, and pulled him closer.

Then a cool-warm pair of lips slammed into his own.

Dovindr blinked in surprise, but certainly didn’t object! His nose rubbed against the side of her cheek, and the exotic-but-pleasant scent of elf — or maybe it was specific to Rozelsarad? — filled his nostrils. Her warm eyes stared into his own from no distance at all, and he could trace every red-orange fold in her irises.

Soft lips pulled at his own, and—

Oh.

A corner of his mind chuckled that now he did have more experience with ‘elf-tongue’!

But the rest of his mind remained… distracted.

After a moment which lasted for days, she pulled back. Only far enough that they no longer quite touched, rapid breaths panting warm across each other’s faces.

Rozelsarad’s smile widened further, and her eyes danced. Voice low and purring, she intoned “A warrior’s thanks for your… ‘word-story-music,’ you called it?”

“Skáldræði,” he breathed. And here he’d thought that the boasts of those thin-armed poetry-men had been inflated! Yet this elf-women here before him evidently appreciated his poorly-composed work just as much as those gray-beards had claimed!

Maybe he should have listened to them more.

“’Sgald-reishi.’” she approximated carefully, nodding slowly. Then her darker-blue lips — still glistening in the light that bounced in through the high and narrow window set into one wall — curled into a knowing smile. “You will have to speak more of this to me, later.”

Yes... yes he certainly would.

The elf-woman nodded again, more firmly. As if confirming something to herself. Then asked “Your father is the one who truly seems to lead your group, yes?”

Dovindr blinked in surprise once more, his mind lurching from one wagon-track to another to follow Rozelsarad’s change of topic. “Yes…?” he confirmed hesitantly.

“That is good. He does not seem to object.” her grin sharpened. “I will ask him directly later.”

Ask Father what? Dovindr frowned. Wait, was she thinking—?

The elf-woman continued, and even with his much-improving grasp of her peoples’ language the focus required to understand her still required his full attention. “Are you… completely needed here, helping with the ski-making?” She bit her lip, clearly waiting with some trepidation on his response.

Ah. He was now quite sure he knew what she was asking... and he was now equally certain of his answer.

“Not for some time, no.” Dovindr breathed back faster than thought. But then a trickling reminder of duty traced its way down the back of his skull, and he added “Or, actually wait.” Rozelsarad’s face paused mid-smile, while Dovindr turned away from her to ask Eadberht “Is it, uh, all right if we— if I take a break for some time?”

The Saxon raised his head from his work, and even through his thick mustache it was clear that he was fighting back a smile of his own. It appeared that even his much-lesser grasp of the elf language had been enough to follow what Rozelsarad was asking… or perhaps the deep kissing had, uh, been something of an obvious hint.

Either way, the twinkle in the sailor’s eyes redoubled the heat blooming on Dovindr’s face. “Aye, ‘tis no hurry. Go, young man.”

Dovindr had to cough before he could manage “Thanks! I, uh, will.”

Turning back to Rozelsarad, he nodded hurriedly.

The blue flush that broke out across her own cheeks probably matched his own. “That is most good to hear!” Her smile halted, and her forehead creased slightly as she glanced around “Yet this room seems… crowded, perhaps.”

Oh. A cold flush raced down his spine. Frida was deep-asleep, yes, but while Eadberht’s deep focus on his work was a well-known trait of his there surely were limits—

Rozelsarad turned her head again, staring for a few moments at one blank wall. Then her smile returned, and she pushed herself to her feet. “But it seems that there is space in another room.” She held out one arm to him.

“That’s, uh, very good to hear.” he echoed her previous words, staring at her proffered hand. Then grasped it, yet standing up by himself. The elf-women did indeed do things differently… but he also still had his pride as a man.

And it certainly didn’t take much strength for her to ‘pull’ him after her out of the indeed-crowded room.

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Author's NoteShow
I pulled the rhyming method there from Beowulf. It was written at least a few centuries after Dovindr’s lifetime, but we sadly don’t have any good records of Norse/Germanic verse from this much earlier than Beowulf. So I’m just assuming that the rhyming method is the same, where instead of the last word(s) in a line rhyming (as is the standard for rhyming verse today) it is the first word(s) that are meant to rhyme. Making that (mostly) work with the limited Loroi Trade vocabulary on the website was fun, though!

And while loroi really don’t do ‘romance’ in any way recognizable to humans, they do seem to appreciate their stories of warrior heroes. So I figure that the closest to a ‘romantic gesture’ that a loroi would understand was to compose some story/poem/etc. praising her as a warrior. It’s like roses and chocolate, but lasts longer!

Come to think of it, I wonder if (higher-class) loroi males get handed a report on their ‘clients’ a day or two in advance. <Your next one’s a gallen, been working as a carrier hangar-technician for her whole career. Two years ago she won her crew a commendation for containing a warhead chain-detonation and diverting it outside the ship. So make sure you bring up how war is a ‘team game’ and the support personnel are at least as heroic as the dashing pilots, and how the most praiseworthy thing for a warrior to do is to risk her life to protect her ship from danger.>
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Chapter Ten: Plans for the Future

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Short chapter this time, showing some more of what Archbrook's planning. This was originally part of Chapter 9, but that had gotten too long so I split it off into its own section.
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A long time — and yet also no time at all — afterwards, Archbrook carefully closed the bedroom door behind her. Dovindr slept soundly atop the bed inside, hardly surprising after the… energy that he had shown.

But sadly, even the happy afterglow which still suffused her mind wasn’t an excuse to shirk her duty. And while Grandfather had been so kind as to inform her of which room in the Males’ Quarters was available, his sanzai had also carried the note that he wished to converse with her once she was no longer ‘busy.’

Buckling the last of her light work-armor back on, she padded down the hallway. Wearing the thinner armor intended for heavy labor outside in the sun’s heat had been a bit cold here inside the heavy stonework of the ancient building, but it had indeed been worth it. There were times for a warrior to garb herself in heavy battle-plating… and there were times for a warrior to choose instead the lighter padding which showed off her figure all the better.

And besides, she certainly didn’t feel cold now.

With a satisfied smile on her face, Archbrook announced herself outside of Grandfather’s door. And noted with some confusion the great many other minds glowing within that room, seemingly all of the Clan’s males at once. At Sun Master’s acknowledgment, she pulled the light-wood open and stepped inside.

And paused, her brows rising in surprise.

If the room given over to the Dains had been ‘crowded,’ then this smaller-still one was instead ‘full!’ Clan males in their ornate robes sat or reclined on every surface, leaving only enough room for her to stand just inside the door. Each of them had their back to her, instead following the halting speech of the tall-but-thin foreign male… ‘Lucas,’ that was his name.

And if his command of Trade was perhaps not quite as good as what Dovindr had reached, the heartfelt energy in his voice still shone through. The aged gray-white robes he wore swirled as he jabbed one finger aloft, intoning “And it is to His example that we are all called to follow, to bring light to this Fallen world as He brought His light to our Fallen souls!”

Archbrook leaned back against the doorframe, directing a question to Grandfather. <Sounds dramatic. What has he been speaking of?>

<He... seems to be expounding on the good character of a friend of his, another male from his homeland.> Grandfather noted, many further thoughts swirling around underneath his receivable sanzai.

One of the other males, a younger fellow whom Mother had taken home from a raiding expedition a few years ago, added <A furniture-carver, he said.>

Archbrook nodded, a proud smile crawling its way back onto her face. <Dain males do seem to be good at carpentry, yes.>

<And also other things, by the glow of your mind!> laughed another male, one of the two squeezed into sitting next to Grandfather on his bed.

As if a spell had been broken, Lucas’s audience broke the rapt attention that they had been paying him and instead turned to Archbrook.

Grandfather sent first, and firmly enough that he overrode the nascent sanzai of the others <I would converse with you momentarily... and more privately.> His eyes darted around the males gathered around him, pointed disapproval and humor both intertwining within his sanzai.

“Pff.” the older male sitting next to him vocalized. <You’re just hoping to learn that you might end up a great-grandfather after all! We have each felt you thinking it all this time, you know.>

<Well?> another asked Archbrook, looking up from where he sat cross-legged on the floor. He jabbed one thumb over his shoulder at Grandfather and sent <Are you going to be bringing this old Chief’s-Pet here a great-granddaughter?>

Archbrook’s smile twitched, as a laugh started to fight its way up her throat.

But before it could escape, one of the other males next to the latest speaker reached over to smack their bony knee. <She’ll hardly know right now, you skinny spear-haft!>

<Who’s ‘spear-like,’ you axe-faced—!>

<What I want to know,> yet another asked forcefully, overriding the others’ sendings as he pushed himself heavily off of the bed where he had sat next to Grandfather. Without his considerable weight — for a male — its compressed cushions sprang upright, nearly toppling Grandfather over the side, <is when someone is bringing us our afternoon meal. Listening to this Dain speak of his ‘loaves and fishes’ has worked up quite an appetite, you know.> He patted his belly and glanced at Archbrook with an expectant tilt, as if she would suddenly produce a hearty fish-stew hidden away within her elbow-length sleeves.

She was starting to get a sense for why the rest of the Clan’s warriors were happy to let Iceshard and Flamedance ‘manage’ the males. They could be something of a handful.

Behind them all, Lucas paused. A drawn-in breath that had clearly been meant for more vocal lecturing was instead let out slowly in a disappointed breath as he watched his audience’s attention desert him. He likewise then turned to regard Archbrook, and for a brief moment an irritated scowl flitted across his alien-pale features.

But then it was gone. “Rozelsarad.” He inclined his head in a shallow bow. “You perhaps wish to hear what I have to tell?” The male’s voice spoke slowly, clearly yet unused to the language, but with impressive accuracy in grammar and word-choice.

Grandfather answered before she could, standing to his feet and sweeping his hands down the front of his robes to straighten them. “I think instead that my granddaughter calls on me, for a discussion between blood-relatives.” He nodded to Lucas while carefully threading his way across the crowded floor. “I would like to hear more of your recountings later, certainly, but for now you must continue without me.”

<You can’t leave us here with him!> The first male sender objected with mock horror. <His tales go on forever, and half of them are boring!>

<Oh, I wouldn’t say that.> sent another, in clearly-habitual disagreement. <That one about whipping merchants sounded quite nice. Give those sword-less cowards a good thrashing, send them back to Sezabi!>

Archbrook stepped backwards through the door to make room for Grandfather to follow, even as he shook his head in amusement. <It seems that some of you were paying rather less attention than others.>

<Yes, I—> the last sender replied with obvious pride, before deflating slightly as the pointed intonation of Grandfather’s sending finally dawned on him. <Hey!>

The door closed behind Grandfather, hiding from view the now-laughing males and one confused Dain — no, he had said that he was a ‘Frisian,’ as hard as that was to pronounce.

With the greater privacy afforded by this distance, Father looked up at her for several moments in solemn silence. Then a smile broke out onto his age-sharpened features. <I see that you did go ahead with your ‘experiment,’ then.> He reached out to grasp her hand, pouring familial affection through that much-broadened sanzai link. <Good.>

<It was!> she agreed, smiling in recollection. <He was—>

Grandfather raised one eyebrow in mock chastisement. <I think I can guess well enough, young warrior.> He patted her hand twice before letting go and walking down the corridor, black hair bobbing along in curls behind him. Pulling open the door to his own room, he darted inside while gesturing for her to follow.

Only a thin mid-day frost gathered around the windowpane, softening the light that poured directly into the small chamber. Most of its space was taken up by a forest's-worth of papers, shelved neatly in rolled-up scrolls alongside and above an inclined writing-desk. Grandfather plopped himself down into his seat there with long familiarity, and pulled one text-covered page over. One hand hovered above the pen waiting in its inkwell, while he turned to regard her with a thin smile. <I take it, then, that you will not be asking to be added to the queue?>

<No.> she shook her head immediately, no further evaluation needed. <I am satisfied, and there are others who desire higher places on that already-long list.>

<’Satisfied...’> he echoed, smile fading. Then nodded slowly. <Yes, that I do not doubt.> He snorted in wry amusement. <You have much of your Grandmother in you, more than one would expect given your Mother.> His eyes bored into hers, searching for a thought that she knew him to be skilled enough at sanzai to pluck from her mind.

But still, she shook her head. <I do not say that I would never wish to see another, only… not now.> That was close enough to the truth, even if she was far from sure that she wanted to examine her own thoughts on the matter immediately.

A point that Grandfather clearly received, however unsent. He drummed his fingers against the desk, still holding her stare, daring her to glance away. <Archbrook. You are your Grandmother’s favored descendant… her only descendant, now.> He worked his jaw, swallowing hard. <The last one she will ever have, if I am not mistaken.>

<That is—!> she objected by reflex.

He sent over her <Her foes fell six-to-one to her blade, in this last battle against the Sezabids.> His own childhood having been born within Sezabi’s High Citadel sat between them, silent but impossible to not notice. No doubt a few blood-relatives of his own had perished at the hand of the warrior to whom he had bound himself so tightly.

Sun Master’s eyes hardened, and he added <But she was crippled, all the same. She has insisted that we… try in the days since then,> he skirted close to a series of thoughts and images that Archbrook very much did not want to receive, <but it is now plain that she will never again bear another child.>

She dropped her gaze, silently acknowledging what everyone in the Clan had guessed at for days. That Archbrook — recently cleared of the stain of her ignoble defeat by an Amenalid murderer, but still an heir of far less stature than Grandmother’s continent-spanning fame — was now the only direct heir that Grandmother would ever have.

The family-line of Beleri’s most-famous warrior, now hanging by a single heartbeat. Hers. Which only made her… preference for Dovindr more of a challenge, given what Grandfather had speculated on previously. Yet—

<What if you’re wrong?> she blurted out. Couldn’t quite bring herself to finish the thought.

Grandfather unsurprisingly received it all the same. A faint smile broke out past his dour expression. <Then I — and Goldenshawl, you may rest assured — will be most happy to hear of our first great-granddaughter.> The smile vanished once more, and he jabbed one finger at her. <But what if I’m right?>

She recoiled, as if the extended digit had been a blood-hungry spearpoint. What if he were right? <Then I will… seek to live a life unlike that of Grandmother.> she granted form to the thought that had lurked around the edges of her mind for quite some time, now. <I will set myself apart from her — and from Dovindr — and lead the Clan as a more-normal leader would.>

Which would be difficult enough, as she well knew. Grandmother’s shadow loomed large above Clan Whirlpool, their battle-fame almost synonymous with hers. And yet Grandmother’s notoriety as a peerless warrior — a swordswoman without equal — was only barely greater than her notoriety as that most strange and un-warriorly thing: a monogamist.

Grandfather chuckled lowly, chair creaking as he leaned back against its thick padding. <A reputation that has worked quite well for her, I might add. A skilled warrior’s fame might not be spread quite so wide by her opponents in arms, if only out of petty jealousy. Yet a warrior possessed of such an infamous flaw will find her story shared in every sailor’s-hall and merchant’s bazaar across the Island. Who could resist such gossip?> He smiled, eyes staring through her into the far distance for a few solon. <And there are worse lives to live than as the ‘unfortunate’ male caught in the ‘possessive clutches’ of one so obsessed.>

Then with a sharp shake of his head, he regarded her once more. <But that life, however well it worked for she and I, is perhaps not the best of options. Goldenshawl is quite aware — has always been aware — of how you have mimicked her, consciously or not, ever since you first learned to hold a training-sword in both hands.> His smile slowly thinned away. <But please remember also that this lifestyle of hers has in many ways hobbled the Clan diplomatically. You are also my only surviving descendant; I have no daughters born into other Clans to forge closer ties between our peoples.>

Archbrook finally sent back, as Grandfather seemed to have reached a pause in his extended sanzai. <I… know this, Grandfather.> She evaluated her own thoughts on the matter even as she sent, probing against tender and sore spots that she had left alone for quite some time now. <And I never intended to emulate Grandmother in quite this way.> She smiled wryly, <Although that determination was perhaps easier when the ‘choice’ of males was limited only to the ones here that I have known for so long. There are none there that seem to be a promising ‘heir’ to you as I will be to Grandmother.>

A thin smirk played its way onto Sun Master’s face, and he nodded. <Understandable.>

For a moment, grandfather and granddaughter only smiled at each other. But then Archbrook sighed, glancing aside. <Yet...>

<’Yet’> he echoed wearily, waiting.

<Yet I have also seen how you and Grandmother work so well together.> She turned, gesturing to the many stacked records crowding his private quarters. A room used far more for record-keeping — for using the sharp mind that he had been born with, hidden behind his far-spoken beauty — than for the usual use that a male put his bedroom to. The ‘proper’ use, most warriors would say.

But most warriors didn’t know Sun Master.

Archbrook continued, <How so much of what she has accomplished as Clan Whirlpool’s leader has been because of you standing at her shoulder, closer than any warrior advisor could ever be. It was you almost as much as her who saw Whirlpool elevated from being merely one prominent Clan among many into now the rarely-disputed leader of all Beleri.> Her sanzai softened, and she finished with <I want that, too. All of it. Not just for myself, but for the Clan that it is my duty to lead.>

For several solon, neither sent anything more. Only stared at each other, concerned Grandfather and defiant Granddaughter.

Then Sun Master let out a long, slow — and heavy — sigh. <You think that this Dovindr can give you this? Can give the Clan this?> A ghost of a smile worked its way around his pressed-tight lips as he too gestured to the lifetime of records crowding his desk. Careful notes on what Clans had sent in formal negotiations, details on what goods were brought home from the South by which warriors, all the way down to which other Clans had requested which ones of Whirlpool’s males for a season of ‘strengthening diplomatic ties’.

And also, in a secret known only to a select few in Clan Whirlpool’s leadership, detailed notes on exactly what those males had ‘inadvertently’ received from the understandably-distracted minds of the foreign warriors whom they had encountered. An espionage network that Grandfather had worked quite hard to train ‘his’ males to establish. <I say with no false modesty that males with this breadth of interests and the focus to use them are indeed rare.>

<I believe so, yes.> she affirmed, her sending getting stronger and more certain. <But while I do not think him suited as a spymaster, the idea of how to deceive the Northern Forest Tribes into honoring their obligations was in large part his idea. That and our conversations on the Clan history during the return journey south have convinced me. He might not have sanzai, yes, but there is still a sharp mind behind his eyes. He will grow into his talents in time, I am sure of it.>

Grandfather nodded slowly, his eyes dropping pensively. <Then let us hope that you are correct, in both of your assumptions. I should hate to see the Clan perhaps delivered into the grip of Brightvoice of all people.> He shuddered exaggeratedly, in mock horror. <We would be a forgotten backwater within forty years, I tell you.>

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Waves, tall and curling even this deep inside the elfs’ fjord, crashed rhythmically against the cliff-shore below. The salt-stained air rasped at Dovindr’s lungs, ever-thicker the further he descended the winding path down to the floating harbor. A thin, more-or-less in-tune whistling bobbed along merrily in the air in his wake… completely swallowed up by the roaring surf below.

He didn’t care.

Dovindr’s boots finally thumped against the wood planking of the dock. With a broad grin splitting his face that cared not at all for the icy rivulets of water that ran down from his spray-soaked hair, he paced across to where Harbor-Glory sat tied off, bobbing contentedly. A ‘new’ mast waited on the dock next to the knorr, its own shattered-off tip waiting to be cut to length once Father determined how tall he wished it to be. Part of the trade for the skis that Eadberht and Dovindr were carving, the once-’yardarm’ as the elfs had called it was no longer needed for their own mauled vessel.

The sight of which was the only thing that finally caused his cheerful whistling to trail off. It had been many fast-passing days since, but he could still remember the bloody sight of that stricken craft lurching into harbor here. The procession of dead and crippled elf-women being carried off by grim-faced survivors of their pitched battle out at sea.

One corner of his mind could not help but imagine Rozelsarad with such grievous wounds, the fate that she had thought awaited her in her one-way journey north. Before he had intervened in her three-on-one ‘duel.’ For what if that spear-thrust had connected instead of scraping shallow across her cheek? If her tallest foe had been that much faster with her sharp sword, if—

He shook his head, banishing the unwelcome thoughts. The scars which his elf-woman boasted — two more of them that he now knew, and in places where very few others would have seen — were one thing, but to imagine the beauty he was now familiar with marred by even worse injuries?

Swallowing, he put one hand on Harbor-glory’s gunwale and paused. Rhythmic thuds of iron against wood, muffled cursing echoing up from the knorr’s central hull… “Hallo the boat! The mast-foot is still resisting, is it?”

“Aye,” Father complained, “and doing so as fiercely as the rest of the mast didn’t.” His exertion-reddened face popped up over the deck-edge from below, and he waved Dovindr over. “Here, your back is young enough; you have a go at it.”

Smirking, Dovindr hurdled the gunwale and stalked over. Dropping down to the lower section of the hull, he took the narrow-tipped axe that Anaoc wordlessly extended to him. Then knelt by the shattered remains of Harbor-glory’s last mast, where it hadn’t quite been chopped away from the reinforced mast-foot that connected it to the hull.

Nodding, he stepped back and hefted the axe. “The nails are out, yes?”

“Earlier today, yes.” Father confirmed, leaning back against the swell of the hull and crossing his arms. He jerked his chin towards the remaining stump. “Normally I’d pull the Glory out onto the beach and roll her onto her side, hammer out the cross-plugs from below. But they were twisted aside in the storm, and, well,” he shrugged his broad shoulders, “don’t exactly see much ‘beach’ around here, do you?”

The three men laughed, and Dovindr brought down the axe in a heavy swing. Then put his foot against the wood, levering the head out of the deep groove it had slashed into the mast-stump. “I wondered, when the two of you didn’t return even now so close to sundown.”

“Is it?” Anaoc asked, pulling himself almost up to the gunwale and glancing about. “Ah. So ‘tis.”

Something in the old sailor’s voice caught at Dovindr, and he narrowed his eyes while he hefted the axe once more. “You didn’t notice?”

The other two men exchanged a glance, punctuated by another heavy blow.

“We’ve had warm enough work to keep us here, even against the evening chill.” Father said, rubbing his hands together as he eyed Dovindr’s thin indoor-coat. “A chill that doesn’t look like it’s bothering you today.”

“Nope.” Dovindr answered, smile widening. Another swing, and he added “Oh, and Rozelsarad said that she wishes to ask you a question when you next see her.”

His cheeks ached faintly from smiling too much ever since he’d awakened, but he could hardly care about that now, could he? After all, given what he’d come to learn about how the elfs ran their strange town here, he could well guess what ‘question’ his—

He paused his thoughts with a frown, idly levering the axe free once more. What… was Rozelsarad to him? He certainly knew what he wanted there, but what did she think she was to him? Or him to her, for that matter.

Dovindr shrugged, swinging the heavy axe above him once more with a smile. No matter what, he was quite certain he’d enjoy finding out what Rozelsarad wanted him to be. It would be another adventure alongside the elf-woman, one that he fervently hoped would see rather less fighting.
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Still catching up and soon will be starting Chapter Nine. But what an adventure! I am also intrigued about Hornguard's character and personal motivations. It is nice to read a story told from two sides. It is also clever and realistic how you seem to display both the Belerids and Amenalids; both are driven by their convictions of having been wronged by each other and are out on personal quests for justice or vengeance. I cannot help but wonder who this male that Hornguard is intent on avenging was, yet I have my suspicions.

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Snoofman wrote: ↑
Fri May 23, 2025 10:05 am
Still catching up and soon will be starting Chapter Nine. But what an adventure! I am also intrigued about Hornguard's character and personal motivations. It is nice to read a story told from two sides. It is also clever and realistic how you seem to display both the Belerids and Amenalids; both are driven by their convictions of having been wronged by each other and are out on personal quests for justice or vengeance. I cannot help but wonder who this male that Hornguard is intent on avenging was, yet I have my suspicions.
Very glad to hear that you're enjoying the story! It's been great fun to write a very different story from almost all of the others on the forum here, one where the *antagonists* are loroi. Makes it possible to examine how scary the militant (pre-)space elves can be when they're pointing their weapons at *humans* rather than the rather-unlikeable Umiak.

That said, for a conflict like that in this story I didn't want to make it a straight good-versus-evil fight; both sides have their heroic and nefarious characteristics. The Belerids are basically loroi vikings; whether they're 'heroic adventurers' or 'murderous pillagers' depends on which end of their swords you find yourself staring down. The Amenalids, on the other hand, are modeled more on the Eastern Roman Empire: they're happy to pay minor (for them) bribes to get the raiders to go away, but every now and then a leader comes along who decides to really match the barbarians in savagery (e.g. Basil the Bulgar Slayer). Personally, I myself would probably align more with Hornguard than with Goldenshawl... but the story works better with the very-lost norsemen ending up in Beleri rather than Amenal.

As for Hornguard's lost male, I'll put his story in spoiler tags even though he's very much a background character:
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I mentioned that Mist Glass was born into essentially 'Amenalid nobility' as the eldest daughter to a leader of one of the more prominent leaders in the archipelago. She and Hornguard became very close friends over many decades of working alongside one another, which led to Hornguard feeling all the more of an 'outsider' because of her lack of high-class background despite her great wealth. Couple that with how Arioch has noted that powerful/wealthy loroi can purchase or negotiate for control over the exclusive mating rights to a prominent male... and I figured that Hornguard would seek to boost her own status by gaining that level of control over Mist Glass's brother. Hornguard would gain in status, and Mist Glass's family would forge close ties with a very wealthy businesswoman. Much as how in human history the children of noble families were often married off to the children of wealthy (but non-aristocratic) businessmen.

This all went wrong when Hornguard actually *fell in love* with Bright Dwelling, the male in question, as did he with her. As Arioch has noted, loroi stories of 'love' are pretty much all tragedies, and so it is with this one. Hornguard decided she wanted him to live with her rather than her simply dictating his encounters... and then the ship carrying him to the island where she operated her business from was raided by Belerids. Specifically, by a ship commanded by Archbrook's older sister.

Bright Dwelling, realizing that he was about to be taken prisoner and likely never see his love again, tried to hide deep in the ship. Like, near the powder magazine. And so when Archbrook's sister went searching down inside the ship for the mind-signature she could faintly detect, he panicked and ended up lighting off the gunpowder... thus destroying the ship and all aboard. Maybe he deliberately committed suicide, or maybe he just knocked over a lantern; who can say?

Hornguard took his death... *poorly*, and that was what really spurred her into her quest of revenge. She's dressed it up as being 'for the peace and security of all Amenalids' but it's really personal revenge that actually drives her. Mist Glass knows this, and is torn between her own desire to see her brother avenged versus her concern over her longtime friend's deteriorating mental state.

The irony, of course, is that Archbrook's anger over her own sister dying in the same explosion is also one of *her* motivations to hate the Amenalids. Not only that, but neither she nor Hornguard know that the other has any ties to this same event, yet they will end up crossing blades over it all the same.

As a last note, 'Bright Dwelling' is a rough translation of 'Lenore,' a character from a series of poems by Edgar Allen Poe. Most notably, his famous poem 'The Raven' is centered on a man driven into depression and mania by the death of his lover, Lenore. Hence it seems an appropriate name for a loroi (albeit a male) whose death in the backstory sets so much of the plot in motion! :P
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After all, one couldn’t ski on water.
I pity that the Tabenids, and humans of their time in turn, would not live to see the wondrous invention of waterskiing in a thousand years, tugged by the power of a motor boat no less. That last bit just might be a Tabenid’s wet dream… quite literally in point of fact!

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Snoofman wrote: ↑
Sat May 24, 2025 7:48 pm
I pity that the Tabenids, and humans of their time in turn, would not live to see the wondrous invention of waterskiing in a thousand years, tugged by the power of a motor boat no less. That last bit just might be a Tabenid’s wet dream… quite literally in point of fact!
I was hoping that someone would catch that joke! :D And as the distant Epilogue will show, *some* traces of human ideas just may survive all the time from 715 AD to ~2160+ AD... ;)
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Chapter Eleven: Succession and Siege

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<A cripple, no matter how glory-crowned, cannot be the one to lead the Clan!> Brightvoice sent angrily, sweeping her arm across the table for emphasis. <It is not the way that—!>

Archbrook made to lunge across the table at her distant cousin, only for Grandmother’s calm and level sanzai to crack out like a whip to interrupt her and Brightvoice alike. <No. No it is not.> She glared her junior blood relative down, refusing to yield so much as a finger-width.

For several solon both warriors glared hotly at each other, gazes locked.

Archbrook eyed Duskflame, standing on Grandmother’s other side. The veteran warrior and foremost bodyguard to the Clan Chief stood at ready, yes, with her feet in stance and her hands free… but she did not yet so much as rest her hand on her sword’s grip, let alone draw the weapon openly.

And if Duskflame thought that Brightvoice did not seem quite ready yet to strike, to grant physical action to the thoughts clearly foremost in her mind, then Archbrook’s own concern ebbed slightly.

But her indignation remained.

<Look about you, cousin.> Brightvoice eventually ground out, even as she lowered her hand in an admission of defeat… for now. <Just receive the truth of what dire straits our Clan has been led into.> But she did let her own wide-eyed daughter, standing behind her, reach out to pull her a step back from the High Table. No doubt sending messages of great caution through that touch.

Still, Grandmother’s own glare pulsed warningly. <You believe that another would have done better? The Sezabids’ diplomatic maneuvering has been overturned, and even their sudden assault in our moment of great weakness has been repulsed. Their so-called ‘Crownholder’ now feeds the fish and leviathans in the darkest of the Depths, as do her foremost warriors.>

<As do far too many of our warriors.> Brightvoice stressed, although at least now her sanzai had taken on the tone of a ‘cautioning subordinate’ rather than ‘rebellious cousin-claimant.’ <We could not weather another such assault, not reduced as we are now.>

Grandmother waved her hand dismissively… the only hand she had left, now. <There will not be ‘another assault.’ We have been dealt a blow, this I acknowledge, but the Sezabids have been hit all the harder. They will need as much time as we to rebuild our numbers, and that’s if their disorganized sham of a ‘government’ does not now fall into infighting yet again.> She emphasized her final thoughts, less-than-subtly chastising her cousin for stepping up to the very edge of ‘infighting’ within her own Clan.

A point that was clearly — and unhappily — received, by the narrowing of Brightvoice’s nostrils. <And then when we do reclaim our ability to impose our will upon the lesser Clans? You would have us march behind a leader who lacks a leg, an arm, and an eye? One who can no longer even walk?>

Archbrook’s fingers paled where they clenched into a fist, hammering against her thigh. To insult Grandmother so by belittling her battle-won wounds, taken in the very final defense of Redrock itself?

<Then, cousin dear, that will be the time to consider your… suggestion.> Grandmother chose to ignore the insult dealt to her. <Not now.>

<There is nothing that will change between now and then, and you know it.> Brightvoice muttered, her eyes finally leaving Grandmother and turning their furious glare instead on Archbrook. Who straightened painfully upright and drew her shoulders back, responding in kind as best she could.

Brightvoice only snorted, turning back to Grandmother and waving her arm at Archbrook. <Unless you would instead leave us in the hands of this obsessed child.>

Grandmother had borne her cousin’s insults against herself with only slight indicators of her ire, but now she leaned forwards in her chair, hand gripping the rest in rage-white knuckles. Duskflame reached over to grab her shoulder, lest the Clan leader overbalance herself now with her legs no longer functioning. <Be most careful with your insinuations, warrior.>

The pointed change in how Goldenshawl addressed her cousin hung in the air of the Great Hall for several solons, echoing loudly in the silence.

But Brightvoice did not back down, instead defiantly raising her chin. <All have known that she seeks to emulate you ever since she was an infant stumbling along in your wake, Clan Chief.> she mirrored the lack of cousin-recognition. <And it is good that she has become so skilled with both blade and nautical arts, yes.> Her finger jabbed out at Archbrook, and then slowly drifted to point at Goldenshawl. <But one would have to be blind not to notice how else she seeks you copy your… less-than-warriorly habits.>

Grandmother glanced at Archbrook out of the corner of her eye.

Archbrook kept her posture, meeting her Clan Chief’s gaze without flinching. As she had told Grandfather, she had made her choice. Let others think of it what they wished.

<And which 'habits' might that be?> Grandmother eventually asked, gazing down at her cousin with one raised eyebrow. That it now arched over an empty eye-socket only added to the heat of her expectant stare. <Perhaps the one that has seen me make use of the cleverest mind for intrigue of our generation, no matter the body which supports it?>

<The one that has made you a laughing-stock throughout all Beleri!> Brightvoice shot back, and for all the anger in her sanzai it was impossible to ignore the certainty with which she sent. Whatever one may think of her motives for this argument, it was clear that she honestly believed her sendings. <The one that has neutered our Clan’s former alliances, the one that has made us dependent on fear of our warriors and that fear alone for what influence we retain among the other Clans and cities!>

Grandmother snorted. <Lesser Clans, and merchant-rabble cities.> She shook her head. <A leviathan takes no notice of the fish that surround her, save for when she seeks her next meal.>

<And when the leviathan is caught in a storm?> Brightvoice took to Grandmother’s near-simile with surprising rapidity. It seemed that Goldenshawl was not the only one of her bloodline who had an unusual appreciation for a male-like twisting of thoughts and concepts… <When she is exhausted, wave-tossed in her nest in the shallows, battered by the surf? What then, when the hungry biter-fish come circling?>

<What biter-fish?> Grandmother deadpanned. <Tell me which Clan would be the first to venture within range of our yet-mighty jaws, however temporarily-exhausted they may be? Who exactly would be the first to bear the brunt of our ire, when we would still smash even any two or three of them together?>

Archbrook nodded along. She knew well enough how thin Clan Whirlpool’s warrior-ranks were right now, but she also knew that each one of those veterans who remained were yet a match for multiple warriors of other Clans. And the yet-to-be-named children that drilled in the practice-yards outside the Hall at this very moment would not remain unhardened youths forever…

No, if any foe wished to strike at Whirlpool, they had only a short time to deliver their underhanded blow. Time that would also have to see them organize their warriors together, arrange for a united assault that would not be defeated in detail, and most of all confirm for themselves if their proposed ‘allies’ would or would not betray them in turn even if Redrock’s daughters were overthrown.

They did not have that much time, surely.

<The same one that put us into this choice-less situation in the first place.> Brightvoice retorted with a scowl.

<Sezabi is done.> Grandmother growled. <Shattered, leaderless, defeated, neutralized.>

Her cousin only shook her head. <I do not refer to the Sezabids; I agree that they seem to have been even more stricken by foolishness recently than have we.> She pointed to one corner of the room… to the south. <I speak of the Amenalids.>

For nearly an entire solon, only surprised emptiness reverberated over sanzai. Then <The Amenalids?> Archbrook blurted out.

<They are no threat to us.> Grandmother pronounced with finality. Brightvoice made to interrupt, but before the thoughts had even properly left her mind Goldenshawl raised one hand to interrupt. <I well remember this attack of theirs.> Her eyes bored into Brightvoice’s, a furious spark glowing hatefully within them. <The attack which cost me my sole remaining daughter and heir, and nearly my granddaughter as well.>

She shook her head. <No, as vicious and unusual an act as that was for the fat and cowardly Amenalids, it is not unheard-of. There have been vengeful Southerners before, even one who amassed so much Ancestor-made wealth and tricks as to threaten Redrock itself.> Grandmother’s eyes swept the room, before returning to her cousin. <She shattered and broke against our defenses, as you should remember from our own dear grandmother’s youth-stories.>

<As I do remember.> Brightvoice ground out. <And was the Amenalid menace of Great-grandmother’s time able to sense our ships through a driving storm, and beyond sanzai-range? Was that battle-mad Amenalid possessed of ship-guns that shattered our heir’s warship before she could so much as draw her sword?>

Grandmother’s jaw bunched at the reminder of her daughter’s ignominious death, matched by the rising fire in Archbrook’s chest. <Were our warriors forewarned of the threat, then?> Goldenshawl sent back, mockingly echoing. <Was our Citadel equipped with guns of its own, then?>

Goldenshawl smiled coldly. <Besides, they are far to the South, many many days of sailing distant. Do you think that some Amenalid of all people would risk the late-Spring storms? Those equatorial shallows-sailors, who have never once seen a true storm but they fled in terror from it? Even if they do come for us with the same fury that they went after our ships, it will be many seasons from now, perhaps even longer. Time enough for us to prepare against whatever they may bring.>

Brightvoice did not respond immediately. The muscles in her neck tightened, and she clearly fought to swallow. When she finally sent back, it was with a clear and non-hidden note of fear in her sanzai. <Will it be enough?>

Grandmother snorted in derision. <A warrior does not worry about such things. We have done all that we can: the garrison at the Diving Citadel is reinforced with as many veterans as we can spare from the training-lists, sentries have returned to the ancient lookout post atop the bay-mouth cliffs, and while we have fewer sword-arms to count among our numbers that also means fewer mouths to feed with our stored provisions. If a foe — any foe — is foolish enough to assault or besiege us, it shall be their doom that awaits, not ours.>

She chuckled coldly, waving her arm to Archbrook. <And we even have a new and unknown innovation ready at hand, if any should plot to bypass the Citadel and attack by land. Or do you think that even your feared Southerners know of ‘skis’ and their great mobility?> Brightvoice did not rise to the bait, and so Grandmother pressed further with <An innovation that we have thanks to my Granddaughter’s… inheriting of my own strategies as leader.>

Archbrook nodded. It had been Dovindr’s showing to her of how his skis worked — and especially the way that he had clearly caught on to her ideas of how to use them to aid a warrior’s duties, even making some decent suggestions of his own — that had inspired her to echo Grandmother’s indeed-unusual taste in males. Or ‘inherit’… yes, she liked the feel of that better.

Despite the tension-fraught atmosphere in the room, a thin-but-warm smile crept onto Archbrook’s face. The ‘Skáldræði’ of his — a word that she could not quite pronounce, but the memory of his strange low-yet-intriguing voice pronouncing the alien term was held close within her mind — certainly had something to do with her choice as well, of course. That he could command spoken-words so was an admirable trait in a male by itself, to twist them into such a pleasing meter yet more so… and in praise of her own warrior-deeds!

She yanked herself free of her memories, to find that both Grandmother and Brightvoice were looking askance at her. Brightvoice’s gaze dropped slightly, and Archbrook quickly banished the happy smile from her face at the same time as she hastily erected a thin lotai around her mind. Not enough to be a hostile gesture, but enough that her thoughts should not again leak into the discussion.

Brightvoice took another step back, half-turning to leave. <I can only hope that you know well what you are doing, the both of you.> She raised one hand, running it wearily over her face. <For you are my Clan Chief, and this is indeed not the time to… dispute that.> She chose her thoughts carefully, avoiding a direct admission of what it was painfully clear that she had indeed been contemplating. A polite fiction that none present saw any need to pierce.

Pulling in a long breath, the nearly-rebellious warrior drew her shoulders back and nodded heavily, as if to herself. <I will take up my station at the watchtower, as promised.> She glanced back over her shoulder at Grandmother, her eyes briefly darting aside to Archbrook. <If you seek my advice in the days ahead, I beg that you do not hesitate to ask for it. The journey is not so far nor so treacherous that I would not make it when called.>

Nothing more was sent as Brightvoice and her daughter left. Only once the great door at the end of the Hall echoed shut did Archbrook send quietly <Little enough chance of that.>

Grandmother let out a slow sigh, her remaining hand rising to rub at the empty eye-socket that marred her face. <Brightvoice is no fool, Granddaughter. She is merely… ‘conventional.’>

With the privacy afforded by only the three of them being left in the broad room, Duskflame evidently chose to let her own concerns through into her sanzai in a rare moment of openness. <These times do not call for a ‘conventional’ response to the Clan’s dire situation.>

<No...> Grandmother drew the thought out, gazing at the closed door. <No they do not.>

///////

Hornguard carefully folded her uniform and slid it into her hammock. It sat there unmoving, the seas outside her frost-covered cabin windows finally giving the ship’s weary crew a break. A break that they were using to set up a lively game of Corner-the-Leviathan up on the main deck.

And thus giving her the privacy she sought.

Bare feet padded out into the midships corridor, tracing the steps that she had taken oh-so-many times over her career. Marching forwards to oversee the great blubber-vats that sat low in Wavestrider’s broad hull just aft of the bulky engines.

But this evening she was after something much more pleasant than even the overpowering stench of leviathan carcasses being rendered into valuable fuel-oil, the smell that had promised her great wealth over her long career.

Those vats had sat cold and empty for years, now, as she sought out and drew in every fellow-victim of Northern pirate raids that she could find. But they had not been removed, too bulky to take out of the ship without an expensive and lengthy rebuild in dry-dock. A cost-saving measure made to stretch her savings just that much further in pursuit of revenge… and one that had yielded an unexpected catch.

She ducked around a double-shrouded lantern dangling from the ceiling above, left slightly lower than the others as an indicator that she now stood abreast of the vast steam-boilers that drove her craft through the water. The reinforced walls to either side showed neither buckling nor damage, but no sailor wished to stand about here any longer than she needed to. Yet it was those same boilers that promised her a relaxing evening, for the first time in more than ten days now.

The faint hissing and occasional burble of steam followed her within the walls as she continued forwards, emerging out into the rendering-compartment. Or what had been the rendering-compartment. The moist, warm steam that rose to caress her face was a far cry from the blood-miasma that had filled this chamber for all of Wavestrider’s previous life.

Waste-heat from the engines wafted pleasantly up from the two vats still filled with water, metal platforms installed inside to make them shallow enough to bask in. Barely visible through the thick steam, exactly as Hornguard had hoped for. Wavestrider’s old crew that she had commanded for so many years were only a small fraction of the vengeance-seekers that now called the crowded ship home, and while Hornguard was proud to lead them on their shared mission they were still not truly ‘her’ people.

But the rowdy game of sport that fought its way back-and-forth on the deck above them meant that she would have the solitude here that she sought. She held her mind shielded behind a half-lotai to avoid distracting the battle-weary crew venting their frustration at so many earlier days of siege, and climbed down the ladder to the vat level.

And paused, as a loroi shape drew into visibility once she approached the vat-edge. Reclining against the edge of the ersatz bath, her arms stretched out to either side along the rim. And a mind half-asleep yet still reflexively shielded so well that she hadn’t sensed it until now.

Ah. Hornguard smiled all the same, at the familiar face she recognized through the drifting steam. It seemed that she was not the only one who sought an evening of lotai-shielded privacy.

Hornguard made a polite point of loudly splashing the water with her feet before she lowered herself into the delightfully-warm bath.

The other loroi didn’t respond. Hardly a surprise, given that her ears had probably long since given up on hearing much of anything other than a piercing steam-whistle or clang of metal.

A warm smile broke out onto Hornguard’s face, and after a moment’s thought she made a cup with her hand and splashed water towards her bath-companion.

Who spluttered slightly as the wave crested against her lips. Blinking, her half-dozing mind snapped fully awake and searched around. Immediately finding Hornguard, she gave her decades-long captain a nod. <Skipper.>

<Hair-thin.> Hornguard greeted her chief engineer. It was fitting that the wiry old wrench-swinger got to enjoy the relaxing yield of her own nets, her own idea to ‘recycle’ the boilers’ hot exhaust through a secondary set of water-tubes. It diverted power from the pistons and couldn’t be maintained when Wavestrider sought anything more than a slow ambling across the waves, but the price was most certainly worth it. <Finally got the new crew ready to mind the engines on their own?>

<Aye, they’re good enough by now.> Hair-thin shrugged the narrow, bony shoulders that graced her skinny form. <Figured it’s their turn now to feel the oil and the grime build up on their skin while I pop down here.> She tiredly closed her eyes, but a smile still quirked at one corner of her mouth. <Test that the diverter pumps are working right, and all that.>

<Of course.> Hornguard replied with a matching shallow grin, as she folded her legs underneath her and sunk below the surface of the water. Fingers worked at the dark-green hair that floated out in a halo around her, kept shorn to shoulder-length in mourning. Only once the Belerid barbarians were removed as a threat would she let her once-proud mane regrow, and perhaps still then never again as far as her waist. A tribute to the memory of what she had forever lost. Whom she had lost. <Any developments with the engines that I should know about?>

As soon as the thoughts left her mind, she grimaced, bubbles streaming from her nose in an irritated snort. She’d certainly come here to the baths at this time to avoid thinking of her duties, at least for a time. No doubt Hair-thin had sought the same.

By the short laugh that she heard echo through the still water, it seems that at least her long-friend engineer knew she’d sent more by long habit than anything else. <Finished going through the rendered oil we took on from Sezabi. Got enough of the impurities out; should be fine to dump into the main tanks now.>

<Good.> Hornguard shook her head as she stood up from the water, running her fingers nails-first down her arms to scrape the thin layer of gray soot that had built up over the last several days. The command-bridge perched atop the two wheel-covers was excellent for visibility around her ship, but when sailing slow with a following wind the oily-black smoke from the chimney further aft tended to… ‘catch up’ with her.

She eyed Hair-thin, whose healthy dark-blue skin was rather closer to black-blue in places. <Enough time to actually scrub clean, for once?>

Her old friend chuckled wryly. <Gave up on that long ago. Grease & soot’s just part of me, now.>

That explained much. And, of course, there were few aboard Wavestrider brave enough to offer their famously short-tempered chief engineer a rub-down anyways. ‘Rank is left outside the baths’ was a rule that applied as well at sea as in the grand bathing-halls of home, yes, but anyone who’d received a sanzai-lashing from the irate wrench-turner would think twice all the same.

Hornguard hauled herself half-out of the baths, the steam-filled air amusingly cold across her wet skin. Just far enough to reach out to the storage-box placed nearby, pulling a slippery bar from inside as well as a blunt wooden scraping-knife.

Dipping back into the warm embrace of the soaking-tub, she drifted across towards Hair-thin with a formless offer projected foremost from her mind.

After a moment, the engineer turned around, draping her chest over the rounded rim and leaving her back exposed. <Never could quite get between my shoulders right.> she grumbled, as close to outright permission as Hornguard could expect.

Running the soap and blunt scraper along the other loroi’s back, for several solon Hornguard simply relaxed into the companionable silence. Gentle waves lapped warmly at her side, steam drifted calmly overhead, and only the occasional burble from the pipes around the compartment. Under her hands, one of the few people who’d truly been with her from the very start relaxed fully, a rare sight indeed.

Hair-thin chuckled into her crossed arms. <It’s been quite a few years, hasn’t it?>

<Fifty-three come this summer.>

<That many?> the engineer rolled her shoulder as Hornguard dragged the wooden knife across it, scraping the soap and oil-grime away. Well, most of it, anyways. <Can’t say I miss those first years, though.>

<Wavestrider’s certainly a big improvement over old Swamp-born. So many freezing nights on watch, aboard a ship small enough that she heeled over when she hauled a leviathan close-in for rendering. What we’d have given then for this!> Hornguard splashed her empty hand through the water.

<I was thinking instead how happy I was to leave the rendering-plant behind and sit between warm engines all day. Oil smells a lot better after it’s been strained and filtered.> Hair-thin sent back with a receivable smirk. <The day you hired that new girl on to oversee the vats was the brightest day of the year.>

<That ‘new girl’ hasn’t done too poorly for herself, either.> Hornguard grinned to herself. And indeed, the young aristocrat who had immediately volunteered to oversee the grimiest, most foul-smelling duties aboard a leviathan-ship as long as it got her away from her mother's domain on Soladra island had gone on to truly impress Hornguard… which was why Mist Glass had long worn a Captain’s brass curls at her uniform-jacket’s throat.

<Aye, and she handles my ship well enough.> Hair-thin turned just enough to throw a smirk back over her shoulder. <Minus losing the entire port-side wheel last year, of course, but I hear that driving full-steam into a storm wasn’t her idea.>

A momentary chill raced through Hornguard’s mind, as the bloody but necessary duty that had called her this far north once more pressed in upon her. Transgressing the shield of calm normality offered by the warm baths, and souring her evening.

<It was necessary.> she kept as much of the frost out of her sanzai as possible. <We confirmed that Spout-Caller could indeed sense their vessels at a greater distance than any other aboard much as she does for leviathans, and also crippled their raiding parties enough to forge this opening into which we now advance. If we had instead let them flee for their lives, we’d still have had to fight them now.>

<Perhaps.> Hair-thin shrugged, pulling herself up a bit higher out of the water as Hornguard set to work on her lower back. <I’m not so sure the barbarians would’ve run anyways, from what tales we’ve been told of them.> She raised one hand to point upwards.

Hornguard paused in her scrubbing to follow the engineer’s attention, to the deck above. Where indeed the steady roll of thundering footsteps had halted in their game, the minds of the crew instead gathering around Wavestrider’s latest… ‘crew member.’

Hornguard rolled her eyes. Great, yet more story-telling.

<—and then we of the second wave were ordered in, even while the first attackers were still limping back! We thought them cowards, to be running from the battle even though many of them could still have fought! They hadn’t even taken the bridge, and all our warriors were stuck on our side of the river only throwing arrows back-and-forth with the Whirlpools. That’s no way to fight a battle!> the younger of the two Sezabids taken aboard told her assembled audience.

‘Purecastle Apprentice Firm-guardian’ seemed to have taken to her new position with quite some rapidity. Even for one of her young age, going from ‘hostage held against her city’s cooperation’ to ‘storyteller on a hand-grasp familiarity with half the ship’s marines’ in only a day or two was an impressive accomplishment.

If only her stories were anything more than a barbarian’s boastings. <But when we got to the bridge, standing astride it on the other side of a carpet of the dead & the dying was but a single Whirlpool warrior!>

<She’s still telling that one?> Hornguard muttered.

Hair-thin huffed a single laugh, reaching behind her to pull Hornguard’s hand back to finish its scrubbing. <The marines keep requesting it. Told you those muscle-necks were half-barbarian themselves.>

One of the riflewomen in question asked then with clear anticipation <Was it ‘her’?>

<It was!> The Sezabid confirmed what everyone had clearly been waiting for. <‘Wrath of the Whirlpool’ herself! With her Ancient-smithed golden armor glistening with sunlight and blood, spattered but un-breached!>

Hornguard set the soap and knife aside, task done. She ducked under the water once more, wishing that the shallow waves closing over her head could have drowned out the sanzai drifting down from above. <And this ‘Goldenshawl’ grows a hand-span taller with every re-telling of the story. When we come to crush her in a day or so, from the stories I half expect her to hurl lightning-bolts from her—>

<Perhaps.> Hair-thin interrupted with some mirth. <But yet it seems to make our marines more eager, not afraid.>

<That’s what I chose them for, yes.> Hornguard pushed up and let the warm water pour down her, drawing her dark-green hair down in thin strands. Then her engineer’s hand at her back pressed her forward against the tub’s rim, and set to reciprocal work with the soap. <Even those of them who have not — yet — felt the sting of loss inflicted by the barbarians still seemed to wish to prove themselves against the Northerners.>

Above, the storytelling had continued on, by the flavor of it to now address a different battle against the barbarians’ favorite forest-haunter. If this ‘Clan Whirlpool’ fought even half as hard as their stories claimed they would, the upcoming battle may be one for the historians to long memorize. <Oh, for that? We drew lots, and Highsail turned out the least-fortunate. So she marched North to halt whatever force the daughters of Redrock would surely send, her and those luckless ones ordered to follow her.>

<What happened to them?>

<She returned home many days later, limping and barely-alive with only one of her warriors left alive! Her and two others had been the ones to find the Whirlpool warriors, and fought them furiously. After a terrible battle with many falling to sword-wounds, she was ambushed!>

Hornguard rolled her eyes, drawing a soft chuckle from behind her.

<’Ambushed’?> One of the marines deadpanned, clearly no more impressed than she. <In the middle of a battle.>

<The very forest itself shot her through-and-through, with an arrow the size of her forearm!> declared Firm-guardian with an insistent flourish.

<The forest.> doubted another of the crowd above. Yet the Sezabid’s sendings did lack any trace of fabrication… or at least knowing fabrication.

<It could be none other — not a single living being could be sensed nearby, and the one who told this to me is most trustworthy! I promise it to be the truth, promise on this very tattoo!>

<That one there, that looks like a leviathan-fluke?>

<Well, it’s supposed to be crossed miros-meat shanks, but yes.>

Hornguard slid slowly down the tub-rim, making her neck easier for the short engineer at her back to reach but also now splashing up bubbles from her derisive snort. <It is a false-blow of a story.> Perhaps an honest mistake, but still nothing more than a trick of the eye fooling a lookout into seeing a broaching leviathan where none actually swam.

<It is true!> insisted Firm-guardian, apparently noticing Hornguard’s pointed thought even through the Warlord’s half-lotai.

Water splashed softly, as Hair-thin shrugged even as the conversation above drifted back away from the two bathers. <Just as well. Let one barbarian share broad-tales of another; that will only impress the others all the more when we defeat this Goldenshawl and her ‘forest’.>

Something sent amidst the crowd above them drew a wave of laughter, inaudible through the heavy deck but easily-received all the same.

Yet then no more than a solon later, the broad-sent report of the night-time lookout came aft from the forward mast-top: <Light on the horizon, high off the starboard-bow! A signal-flare, I would think!>

Hair-thin and Hornguard glanced at each other for only a split-solon before both leapt up from the bath, its comforting warmth forgotten. Each sprinted aft for their respective cabins; no matter the weighty implications of the lookout’s report it was not quite immediate enough for Hornguard to appear on deck devoid of clothing.

For one thing, this far north it was bloody cold out there.

A short while later, Hornguard quickly climbed up the companionway one-handed, finishing the last buttons on her coat with the other. To no surprise whatsoever, Mist Glass already stood at the railing with her far-glass extended. And indeed, off in the far depths of the night a tiny pinprick of orange-red light could be seen even unaided.

<A signal-fire indeed, I would agree.> Wavestrider’s captain nodded, dropping the brass-tube instrument from her eye and handing it to Hornguard without looking.

Who took only a few solon to come to the same conclusion. <Perhaps a few thousand solon distant, atop the cliffs. Could they truly have spotted us at night?>

Mist Glass shrugged, finally turning to face her Warlord. In the dim light of the running-lanterns of the ship, it was easy enough to see her pointedly look Hornguard up-and-down. <It’s a clear night, and even if our lanterns have been dimmed low the water breaking at our bow or under the paddles might catch the star-light.>

Hornguard glanced down, to note the occasional glint of light likewise bouncing off of the two rows of brass buttons marching down her dark-orange coat. Grimacing, she nodded. <Then if the barbarians have lit a signal-fire, they clearly believe someone is close-by enough to see it… and know the meaning. Our surprise is lessened.>

<But not gone.> Mist Glass neatly slid into her long-accustomed role playing the metaphorical ‘Soia’s opponent.’ <And while our slow-steaming meant that we arrived here outside our target far too late in the day to begin the attack, the fact that it has let the crew rest properly was, I believe, worth it.> she gestured past Hornguard.

Who followed her hand to see the north-facing railing lined with orange-clad marines and off-duty sailors. Some were grease-stained machinists, others sun-tanned veterans of many years spent aloft in the rigging. But all stared out into the darkness, eyes locked onto that distant light.

And thankfully it was anticipation that hummed off of the crowd, an eager desire to finally finish the mission that had drawn them together onto this vessel and so far into the north. Leaving their homes and the waters they’d known behind them… all for the sake of protecting those who had for so long been preyed upon by the Belerid pirates.

Hornguard found that her own hand had risen of its own accord to trace the round weight of the timepiece tucked away in one pocket. And, of course, its precious image-capture. The reminder of what she had lost, what had been stolen from her by the barbarians. A heart-rending pain that she would ensure no other Amenalid would have to bear again.

The time of her vengeance drew near.

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Archbrook shuffled aside to make room at the window, as one more of her distant cousins crowded in next to her to peer out into the darkness. At least the press of so many minds, however uncomfortably close, did something to take the edge off of the nighttime chill here in the hall.

It wasn’t like she’d had time to grab anything more than her night-clothes when the sanzai alarm had first echoed through the town.

Her eyes, like those of each other warrior around her, were locked on the distant spark of the warning-light. Burning bright atop the ancient tower that peered down and around from the cliff-spire well to the south of Redrock, at the triangle-tip of land that reached out to sea.

It seems that Brightvoice’s idea all those days ago to re-man that old lookout post had indeed been wise.

<Archbrook,> Iceshard panted slightly as she ran up next to her, <any news more?>

<None save what you can see for yourself.> she sent back. <A ship — or ships — approach, and we can be certain now that it is not one of ours mistaken for a foe.> Her grim thought carried no humor. Carefully pitching her sanzai to only be easily receivable by her friend, she added <It seems that the Sezabids must have prepared a second attack, then. No other Clan would dare attack us, but those merchants just might be desperate enough after their shattering defeat to throw the very last of their ranks forwards.>

Iceshard nodded sharply. <Children and old women, then? Won’t be much of a fight.>

A cold presence at their back sent <Do not be so quick to assume, young one.> Duskflame intoned, her brows darkened and lips pressed white-flat. <The desperate may fight with a fury that no sane warrior can match… if these are indeed more Sezabids.>

<Well, who else could they be?> Iceshard asked.

Her question hung between the three of them for a full solon, neither Archbrook nor Duskflame wishing to guess here where they would be easily received by the whole Clan.

<We’ll know more within a few thousands of solon.> the veteran chief-warrior sent eventually. <If whatever Brightvoice has sighted is alarming enough for her to have ordered the signal-fire lit, she’ll have sent a runner at the same time.>

Archbrook swallowed at the thought. It was a calm and still night, yes, but she certainly wouldn’t want to have been the one sent to quickly navigate the narrow cliff-side road by lantern-light. There was a reason that the old watchtower had sat abandoned for so long.

A weight settled deep in her gut. The other reason why the ancient edifice had sat empty was that it had been a long time since Clan Whirlpool had feared any foe enough to desire more warning-time to meet them. But now with their numbers thinned…

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“’m?” Dovindr blinked at the sudden weight that settled onto his thick bed-covers and yanked him from his sleep. The room sat almost pitch-black, only a dim shadow perceivable crouched above him. By the faintest of glows that trickled in through the window, he guessed that it was maybe early early morning in this elf-land where the moon had not shown its face for so many days. “Hvað er—?”

“Dovindr.” hissed a quiet voice from very close-by, breath bringing with it a scent he happily recognized.

“Rozelsarad?” he matched her hushed whispering; if she clearly did not wish to wake the others who slept in the room then he would follow her lead.

“A battle nears.” she said without preamble. “I would ask that you come with me.”

His heart jolted, a bolt of Thor’s own lightning crashing through him to scour away the remaining spiderwebs of sleep. “Now!?” Father drew in a ragged snore off to his left, and he tried again in a lower voice “The battle comes now?”

That said, he did spin out of the tall and oh-so-comfortable elf-bed. Feet hastily searched around on the floor until— he bit back a wince. Found his boots, all right.

Rozelsarad said no more until she eventually cracked the door open. Torch-light streamed into the room, and he blinked like a stunned owl as he staggered out after her. “An enemy comes. Not now, but perhaps this day. I know not who, but they seem likely to press us hard.” the elf-woman said, pulling him by the hand behind her. Along a route he knew well by now, towards the main-hall of the elf-building.

“You want me to fight alongside you?” he assumed, working hard to keep the trepidation from his voice. He technically had fought along with her already, but a single arrow-shot from the forest was hardly a heroic deed. And he’d ‘enjoyed’ the blood-soaked results of that battle little enough. But… whatever she was to him now, it would be unimaginable for her to go to fight without him. Unimaginable and dishonorable for him to let her.

“Certainly not!” she shot back, whirling about to look at him with a shocked expression. Perhaps some of the indignation that her obvious surprise pulled from him was visible on his own face, for she softened slightly and continued “It seems likely to be a ship-fight this time, at sea.” A faint smile trembled at the corners of her mouth, and she jabbed one blue pointer-finger into his chest. “Not so much room for a forest-archer.”

“Always room for another bowman in a battle, Lucas says.” Dovindr grumbled.

“Perhaps not this one.” She fidgeted, then grasped both of his hands in hers. “I would much prefer to see you stay safe here.”

He squeezed her cool-pleasant hands in his, before pulling free. “And I would much prefer to see you safe, too.”

Her smile sharpened, even if it did not quite reach her eyes. “That is perhaps not always possible for every warrior. But I will have only the best beside me in battle.”

“’The best.’” he echoed doubtfully, concerned gaze turning aside to watch as a quartet of armed elf-women marched quickly past them in the dimly-lit side-passage. Elf-girls more like, all wide eyes and armor clearly a bit too large for their young frames. Yet they bore that armor with obvious pride — and trepidation — and the glinting swords and spears they carried were no child’s training-weapons.

He was beginning to understand why all men who knew of álfar spoke of them as having a sense of morals completely unintelligible to mortal men. He had just barely gotten to grips with the idea of their sending women to battle, but children?

Yet from the sound of things, perhaps the elfs of Rozelsarad’s town had little choice. This was not Rozelsarad traveling north to cross blades with her fellow elfs; this was her own home under attack. Any who could lift a blade was likely being given one as they spoke.

Which made it obvious what he must say next. “I will fight alongside you.” He blinked away the visions which crowded into his mind — blue elf-blood pouring from a sword-wound and dropping to the churned mud below; a death-pale face far too young even to be called ‘womanly’ blackening amidst a pyre’s all-hungry flames — and nodded with far more conviction than he felt.

“A battle of many warriors is most certainly not the place for one without sanzai.” she retorted, the iron-hard force behind her voice rising to match his. Red-orange eyes burned into his, and perhaps that flicker in the torchlight was from a faint glistening sheen around their edge. “Please.”

“I—” he broke off, glancing aside. Without meeting her gaze, he spoke roughly “This battle will not come until the sun rises, yes?”

“Annen.” she said. Yes.

“Then we have some time, I think.” he spoke quickly, hoping to overpower by sheer speed of speech the further objections he knew she was preparing. “Let me wake the other men, and let them give you what advice they have for battle.”

“What do they know of battle?” she asked honestly enough.

Which pulled a laugh from his lips. “More than any dozen other men put together, each.” He eyed Rozelsarad, and now made a point of jabbing his own finger into her chest. “More than any dozen álfar, I would say too.”

Her eyes briefly narrowed, then widened as her brows descended. “Gorm and Lucas, they are truly warriors?”

“Were warriors, yes.” he chuckled lowly at her obvious surprise. “Gorm hasn’t much talent for foreign tongues, or else you would surely have heard his many stories by now.”

“Certain then, yes.” she said slowly. “And Lucas?”

“Has sworn away killing, by the demand of his new God.” Lucas shrugged at the nonplussed expression that his elf gave him. “I do not understand it either, but he does still have his memories.” Dovindr rested one hand on Rozelsarad’s shoulder, pulling her close and looking deep into her eyes. Trying to convey his concern, even if he couldn’t do the ‘sanzai’ trick her people could. “If you insist that you will face this battle without me, please let them tell you what they think of it first.”

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Many thousands of solon later, Archbrook drummed her fingers atop the sea-smoothed battlements of the Diving Citadel, warily eyeing the line of warriors who crowded onto the broad — but oh-so-slippery! — walkway behind the parapet.

After all, only most of those warriors were fellow loroi.

<But by their translated stories, it is indeed clear that they are warriors.> Duskflame sent, briefly turning her eyes away from peering across the waters to the south and glancing over at Archbrook. <Males or no.>

<Strange as it is, yes.> Curve-knife agreed, nodding. The once-captain of Foam-wreathed had withdrawn her warriors into the Citadel, even though the wreck of her ship still slouched high on the narrow strip of beach next to it. But the thick stone bastion should be more useful for the battle to come than the wooden hull of her stricken warship, even if it meant that the fighting may take place outside of the close-quarters brawl where Whirlpool discipline held its greatest advantage. <It seems that there has been many strange developments these last few eight-days, both at sea and here at home.>

Next to Archbrook, Dovindr also glanced over at her to flash a brief smile. And even if it was clearly mostly nervous energy that drove that glint of white teeth, the intent was still there. “This is a strong fortress! As Father said, who could fear within its heavy walls?”

“Who, indeed.” Archbrook mused sourly, even as she nodded in false-agreement. Surely it was not so dishonorable to lie to a male who could not receive sanzai, since he had made it clear that nothing she could say would get him to leave?

<They are as safe here as they would be back in Redrock.> Duskflame stepped past the Dains, grasping Archbrook’s shoulder and using that to send privately. <If the Citadel is overrun, it seems most unlikely that any final-defense in the town itself would then hold. And if we warriors have no intent to flee from danger, it is also true that the Dains have no place to flee to.>

<Yes, but letting them here onto the battle-line in the Citadel itself?> Archbrook tried to ignore the note of whining that crept into her sanzai. She would have fought it down harder in any wider sanzai, but Duskflame had known her since she was an infant and it was pointless to try and hide the full truth from her.

The veteran warrior who had now been entrusted with full command of the garrison eyed Archbrook, the long-healed diagonal scar across her face all the more stark in the early morning light. <They are warriors, that much has been made clear.> She leaned closer, gaze boring into Archbrook. <Even the one whom you are truly concerned for.>

Archbrook gritted her teeth, but did not bother denying the obvious.

A disapproving frown flickered around Duskflame’s mouth, an expression commonly seen on the disciplinarian’s face yet one that Archbrook was unused to seeing directed at her. <I know that your grandfather has warned you about the risks of choosing an attachment such as this. But if Goldenshawl had been hale enough to stand here on the walls, even she would tell you the same as I do now. If Sun Master had been able to take a meaningful place in the battle-line at this desperate time, do you truly believe that Goldenshawl would have denied him?> The veteran warrior’s nostrils narrowed slightly, the most blatant sign of humor that one could expect to see on her stoic visage. <He would certainly have been willing, of that there can be no doubt.>

<Dovindr is sanzai-deaf, as are the other Dains.> Archbrook replied with what even she recognized was pure miros-headed resistance. <He — and the other males, of course — will be a liability in a chaotic melee.>

<If it gets to a fight at such close quarters, perhaps.> Duskflame pulled her hand from Archbrook’s shoulder, and sent more broadly while gesturing to the abandoned ship sitting bow-in on the beach, her bowsprit nearly reaching to the wall-top, <But if the Amenalids attempt to assault us that closely, all the better for us. They will pay a steep price for any approach.> She did not need to elaborate upon the several barrels of leviathan-oil that had been poured onto that vessel, ready at a short notice to be turned into a blazing inferno if any foolish attackers were tempted to use its sloping deck as a short-cut to the top of the fortress’s walls.

A hungry growl echoed back over sanzai from the other warriors — true warriors, her fellow loroi — at their battle-leader’s sending. But Archbrook could only focus on shielding the cold dread in her heart from the others.

After all, while she desired vengeance against the Southerners — and who else could it be, to approach with ‘two large hunch-backed ships without sails, smoking as if aflame yet moving at speed into the narrowing waters’ — as much as did any of her fellow warriors, she well knew what it was like to fight them.

And now it wasn’t only her life on the line, here.

“A formidable building, indeed.” mused aloud Lucas, paradoxically the apparently most-experienced yet also least battle-fond of the Dains as he ran his hands over the heavy stone battlements. Of the four Dains who had come here to the battle-place — Anaoc had glumly spoken that he was too old to be helpful, while none had even made any suggestion that Frida would participate in the fighting — he alone carried no weapon and wore no armor. Only his gray robes, belted around his waist with knotted cords.

Yet the stories he had told — detailed stories that she and the other warriors were inclined to believe, lacking though they were in any sanzai confirmation — had proven beyond doubt that he was, indeed, a warrior of great experience. No matter his present refusal to fight, his advice and suggestions had been well-received… even if his idea to use Foam-wreathed as a sacrificial fire-trap had been initially objected to most hotly by that vessel’s crew.

But she would indeed serve better as a lure to perhaps pull the Amenalids into a shore-battle against the walls than as a crippled warship to attempt a fight out on the water. As much as it galled the proud warriors of Redrock to wait and let their foes dictate the engagement, this did indeed seem to be the wiser choice.

With a meaningful glance at Archbrook, Duskflame left to march down the length of the wall. Her private-sendings to each warrior there and her straight-backed, confident posture would do much to stiffen any flagging battle-resolve that might lurk within the assembled crowd.

If only her iron-lined thoughts had been enough to purge the concern from Archbrook’s mind.

“It will be fine.” Dovindr murmured into her ear, leaning in so close that his warm breath tickled at her. “We are all as prepared as we can be, yes?”

Yes... that was the problem. She eyed the Dain male’s — her male’s — armor, a small sleeveless haubergeon of interlocked iron loops that left anything other than his chest completely unprotected. And what he called a ‘helmet’ was in truth no more than a cap, its narrow nose-strip the only part that reached down any lower than the top of his strange rounded ears. A pity that his head was too blocky for any of the Clan’s few remaining spare true helmets to fit.

But at least his sword was a true warrior’s-weapon the match of any in Redrock’s arsenal, even if the thought of her lightly-armored male going into such close fighting galled her so. He was sanzai-mute, after all, no matter how serious he and his fellow Dains were in their intent to fight: how was he to block a foe-woman’s own blows if he had no ability to spike her mind beforehand… or even read her strike-intent at all?

Swallowing hard, Archbrook only nodded, gripping the handle of her own belted sword hard enough to pale her knuckles.

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Author's NoteShow
You know, for the earlier “Hornguard’s hot tub scene” with the sailors & marines gathering around a story-teller, I’d decided for the fun of it to base it on this scene from one of my childhood-favorite movies. Of course, these are loroi... so instead of singing about former lovers, Firm-Guardian's telling them old war-stories.

Which is also when I realized that Hornguard’s actually got more in common with Captain Nemo than Captain Ahab: she’s revenge-crazy because a foreign nation/people killed her (intended) family rather than dealt her a direct physical injury. Unfortunately, Nemo’s XO doesn’t get as much characterization as Mr. Starbuck, so Mist Glass is inspired more by the latter. Since loroi don’t really do ‘pacifism,’ she’s not at all a Quaker pacifist like Starbuck… but she’s the main voice whispering (err, sending) in Hornguard’s ear that maybe she should calm down a little. That said, the name of Hornguard's first ship 'Swamp-Born' is a very rough translation of 'Pequod.' :P

Anyways, Goldenshawl’s nickname here “Wrath of the Whirlpool” is a very approximate translation of Menelaus. As in, King of Sparta… and husband of Helen. Helen whose name could be translated as ‘Mistress of the Sun’, although the actual etymology of her name is apparently a matter of rather vigorous debate.
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Chapter Twelve: The Assault

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A long chapter, but that fits with it being an exhausting battle that seems to its participants (some more than others) to drag on forever!
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<Halt firing.> Hornguard ordered with deliberately-affected boredom. One foot nudged at the long-shafted arrow embedded near-vertically in the decking next to her. Far from the only one that had rained down onto Wavestrider’s deck from the lookout-post so far above them on the cliff-top, but thankfully still the only one that had even come near to striking anyone.

With palpable reluctance, her marines lowered their shouldered rifles. The few who had squeezed off their own return-fire at the difficult targets almost directly overhead ran loading-rods down their barrels, eyes peering upwards for any sign of effect from their scattered fire.

No bodies toppled down from the cliff-tower overhead, but at this distance it was impossible to verify by any other way whether their shots had struck home.

Mist Glass craned her neck back next to Hornguard, and after a few solon shook her head. Pitching her sanzai to be received by all, she sent <I will credit them for bravery, engaging a warship with bows and arrows of all things, but their effect leaves much to be desired.>

A wave of derisive humor flowed and crested among the warship’s crew. Over the steady thumping of her tall paddle-wheels, a sparse crackling of rifle-fire from Finchaser following well aft of them sounded out. Reverberating throughout the narrowing cliffs to either side, even for many solon after the single volley had ceased.

Leaning closer to her foremost-captain, Hornguard sent privately with a thin smile <I can’t say that our own return fire seems to have done much better.>

Mist Glass shrugged, as behind them Finchaser powered her way into the shadow cast by the cliff atop whose heights the barbarian lookout-fire had burned earlier in the morning. The sun’s early-day light left the cliff-lined valley poorly illuminated, and perhaps it was indeed understandable that neither ship’s markswomen had seemed to score any hits against the distant shadows far overhead. <We still have powder enough for as much rifle-fire as they can give, especially if we use the Sezabid stores we took aboard.> Her brows furrowed slightly. <It is the cannon-powder that concerns me; I would rather not risk untested powder in the great guns. This ‘fortress’ that supposedly awaits us further in must fall to only a few eights of shots, or else we will be forced into a direct assault.>

Hornguard grimaced, but nodded in agreement. <With any fortune, that won’t be necessary.> The harbor-defenses at port Sezabi had indeed come as an unwelcome surprise, far thicker and heavier-built than the archaic, tall-walled castle she had earlier imagined the barbarians would still use. They had sported only a tiny handful of outdated cannon, yes, but evidently the implications of such modern weapons had not been lost on the warlike savages.

A call came from the group of marines crowded into the bow, each one in her orange sea-coat craning her neck to be the first to see around the cliff-curtain that shielded the inner bay from the ocean. <That must be their castle!> Excitement shot through her sanzai… shaded slightly by concern. <It seems well-built.>

Hornguard and Mist Glass exchanged a look, before both of them drew their far-glasses as one. Peering through the slightly-mottled lenses, Hornguard raked her gaze across the low, squat structure. Figures too distant to make out at this distance even through the ‘glass ran to-and-fro atop the battlements, but enough could be counted to see that this was indeed to be a significant fight.

<I see no cannon atop their walls,> Hornguard confirmed with at least some relief, <but those earthen berms around the base concern me. They are well-sited for cannon, for all that they appear empty. It seems that these barbarians have also seen their own copies of the Ancients’ fortress-guides, even if they know not how to make full use of them.>

<Perhaps, yes.> Mist Glass agreed. <But even if they had had cannon behind those berms, they’ve placed them too close to the base of the wall.> Wavestrider heeled slightly to one side, the thrumming of her wheels shifting into two mismatched rhythms as she turned hard around the corner. Both senior officers leaned into the turn by age-perfected instinct, their far-glasses locked unerringly on the distant fortress. <My cannon-crews can throw shells into the wall with their fuses cut long, and let them roll down to explode behind the berms.>

<Then let us hope that the barbarians try.> Hornguard sent. She drummed her fingers against the brass frame of her far-glass for a few solon, before lowering it with a jerk. <We will approach at-slow. Rifle-fire is to begin either once we reach reliable rifle-range or when the Belerids engage us, no sooner. Cannon-fire by my command only.>

Mist Glass nodded in acknowledgment even before the orders were fully sent, no doubt having decided on the same course of action herself. A solon later, Wavestrider’s steam-whistle let out three sharp bursts to letting Finchaser behind them know that the enemy was in sight. A metallic clacking drifted forwards from the stern-walk, where the signal-light blinked out the abbreviated orders to the following warship.

Battle approached.

///////

“Well, you old cross-kisser, it looks like we’ll get to see what the elfs were talking about soon enough.” Father rubbed his fingers together in obvious excitement, leaning out over the elf-castle’s parapet to look down below. “’Cannon,’ they call those things. They look like thick cart-axles to me.”

The four men all craned their necks for a better view, with even Eadberht stirring from his creased-brow staring out at the approaching two ships to turn his eyes on the more nearby strangeness. A pity that Anaoc had been judged too old to be worth bringing to the fighting — a judgment that the wrinkled mariner definitely did not agree with, but one he abided by all the same. If there was anyone who was as far-traveled as Father, it was the old Cornishman; perhaps he might have seen something like any of this before?

“These ‘loroi’ are not ‘elfs.’” Lucas insisted, rolling his eyes at Dovindr over Father’s head as he repeated the claim that he had been making for the many weeks since their arrival here. At what was so obviously an elf-town, for all of the Frisian former-mercenary’s insistence. “I know not what manner of God’s creatures they are, but they are not this pagan fiction of yours.”

For his part, Dovindr certainly didn’t agree with Lucas… but he saw no need to speak it aloud. He turned his head aside, as a warm smile spread his cheeks even against the gloomy weight of approaching battle. He’d seen far more of one of these elfs than had Lucas, after all — and ‘felt,’ and more even than that! — and found that he didn’t especially care what Rozelsarad was; who she was mattered far more to him.

Father shrugged heavily, his chain hauberk clinking softly atop the several layers of heavy fur-coats he wore underneath. Rozelsarad may have insisted that it was ‘summer’ here in elf-land, but the biting-cold sea-wind down here spoke otherwise. At least it meant that there was little enough risk of over-heating no matter how many protective thick layers one wore!

“Whatever they may be,” the veteran merchant said, “they’ve shown us enough marvels here today!” He turned from the approaching smoking-ships that slowly frothed their way up the fjord, and nodded pointedly to the elf-women who crouched low behind the broad battlements. Hiding their numbers from the approaching enemy… and clutching narrow-but-long metal tubes of their own, slow-matches smoking thinly towards the carved wooden stock at the rear. “First these fire-throwers, then the ‘cannon’ that they haven’t yet used, and now those smoking-ships out there!”

Lucas’s frown only deepened, and his eyebrows creased enough to meet in the middle. “So much fire used by them, and all of it stinking of brimstone.” He pressed his lips together, and one hand snaked under his woolen garments to no-doubt wrap reassuringly around the cross that hung from his neck. “If I had not spent such time as I have talking with them, I would have been gravely concerned for their mortal souls.”

“Ah, so they do have souls, then?” Father asked, all battle-dread of the approaching fight forgotten as he saw an opportunity to needle his loved-and-hated law-brother. Grinning, he added “How many of them have you brought around to your ‘congregation,’ yet?”

Lucas glared flatly back at him. “God works in his own good time; I have seen enough to know that they will surely see sense eventually.”

Father chuckled. “From the elf-men I’ve talked to after your ‘sermons,’ I think that perhaps if you could replicate that ‘loaves to fishes’ trick it would convince them more than any of your dry speeches.”

Well, ‘dry’ was perhaps putting it a bit harshly; Dovindr had never yet felt tempted to turn himself over to Lucas’s fervently-espoused God, but he had to admit that some of the stories that the southern missionary told were quite enthralling. For one who preached so insistently on ‘peace,’ rather a lot of blood had apparently been spilled in pursuit of this God’s faith. Really, you’d think that ‘He’ should get along with Óðinn One-Eye and Þórr Thunder-Caller quite well!

Lucas’s glower only deepened. “That was no ‘trick,’ but a miracle; and God does not perform such ‘on demand.’” in the salt-tinged air that whipped around the low-but-thick walls, his next muttered word was barely audible “Unfortunately.”

Father opened his mouth to continue an argument which he was clearly enjoying, but Dovindr turned aside at a flash of movement in the corner of his eye. Below at the base of the walls, a group of elf-women gathered around and lifted one of these ‘cannons’ of theirs. Hauling it forwards, towards the gap notched into the earthen mount before them. “Look, there!” he called out.

All conversation halted as they watched the blue-skinned women set their obviously-heavy weapon-thing onto a wooden cradle, and then quickly step back. While most crouched low behind the piled stone-and-dirt, one of their number stepped forwards. A long slow-match curled smoke from where she grasped it in one hand, while the other carefully adjusted the metal tube to point it at the foremost of the distant ships. Then, she smartly whipped the smoldering match around and held it against the metal.

A blink of an eye — and a thundering roar — later, Dovindr found himself picking his way up off of the stony floor behind the battlements.

His ears ached hard, and only slowly were any sounds other than a high-pitched ringing working their way back into the world. Rozelsarad’s hand held tight to his shoulder, possibly the only reason he hadn’t toppled off the wall to the small courtyard below.

“Hahaha!” Father bellowed laughter with such giddy excitement as surely hadn’t been heard from him since he was Dovindr’s age. His loud voice yet sounded near-mute in Dovindr’s battered ears. “By the Gods, what a thunder!”

Dovindr slowly climbed back to his feet, cheeks reddening as he noted that he was the only one to have outright lost his footing. Somehow the other men had only grasped the parapet all the harder, and none of the elf-women seemed even to have been bothered by the unnatural hammer-blow of sound.

Foul, dark-gray smoke rose in a billowing cone in front of the cannon, along with two more thunder-claps from others of their kind hunched behind the other two earth-mounds. The sea-wind warped and twisted at the clouds, pulling them half out into the fjord and half back atop the battlements.

Rotten-eggs and cinder-fumes assaulted his nose, the acrid-sharp stink pulling tears to his eyes.

Lucas shook his head, as if that would shield him from the miasma enveloping them. “Such a stench, too.”

Dovindr peered out through the thinning smoke towards the two enemy ships. And ‘enemy’ they were, for all that the elf-women who no-doubt crewed them had been no foe of his people until today. But they were Rozelsarad’s enemies, and that made them his as well.

Besides, the elfs of her Clan had been more than generous in the quarters and board they had given Father and the others, even well beyond what could have been expected in thanks for rescuing Rozelsarad from the ocean all those weeks ago. They all owed them, and if there was one thing that merchants and mercenaries agreed on it was that one never let a debt stand unpaid for too long.

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<If there’s one thing that I imagine applies to warfare as well as to business,> Hornguard commented idly as the distant cannon-smoke thinned enough to reveal the barbarians’ fortress once more, <it is that one cannot let this sort of insult stand unanswered for too long.> Ineffective though the small-cannons’ fire had been, it had been impressively well-aimed: only two volleys had splashed harmlessly short into the water before the first inert cannon-ball had skipped across the small harbor-waves to thud into Wavestrider’s hull.

And done precisely nothing against the thick planking of a leviathan-chaser rated for ice-heavy northern waters, but that wasn’t the point.

Marines crouched low along the ship’s port-side gunwale, hiding behind the wooden bulwark that might actually shield them well enough at this long distance. Either way, the fact that no actual harm had come to her crew or ship just yet had been all that delayed Hornguard’s command to return fire.

<The after cannon will be unmasked within a few hundred solon at this pace.> Mist Glass informed her. <We’ll be almost abreast of them in this valley by that point.>

<Yes...> Hornguard nodded absently, peering across the intervening distance as if she could read her opponent’s mind at this great distance. <The interesting thing will be to see what they do once we reach that point and begin to pass beyond their fortification. If they truly lack any meaningful cannon, as seems to be the case, then they have little to use to stop us simply passing them by.>

Let the Northerners dig in behind their fortress, after all. It was most clearly not their actual dwelling-town, and once their homes burned behind them surely even the most bloodthirsty of pirates would see reason and cast down her arms.

Of course, she suspected that they would try something before then. The Belerids were savage, not stupid. They must see as clearly as she could that there was no reason for her to actually give them battle within the effective range of their smaller cannon, let alone shoulder-arms.

<A rather clever idea all the same, I must say.> Mist Glass noted. <Hand-carried cannon, and by the commotion each time it seems that the recoil disappears the gun behind the berm. Had it not been for the shell-guns, we’d have been hard-pressed to put those out of action.>

Hornguard only snorted in derision. <It also cuts their fire-rate by at least half, probably more. They—!>

Wavestrider lurched underfoot at the same time as a horrible grinding sound echoed through her timbers. Both officers grasped at the railing-ropes of the bridge, even as a sanzai shout came from the marines forward who peered over the gunwale and down the side <Something in the water! A line or a cable, stretched across and under the water!>

Matched by a call from an engineer well below decks <We’ve got slow flooding in the forward bilge; we’ve taken on a leak below the waterline!>

Mist Glass immediately ordered <Engines, reverse in sync!>

Wavestrider creaked and groaned as the heavy rocking-arms that drove power to her wheels slowed, stopped, and then reversed. The ship backed slowly, her message-lamp clattering an alarm to her comrade who followed well behind.

<Well, there’s the ‘surprise.’> Hornguard muttered privately, half-following the progress of the carpentry team who sprinted forwards with spare planks and long nails. <A chain of some sort, and evidently fixed strongly enough to halt the ship.>

Mist Glass brought up one hand to scratch thoughtfully at her cheek. <From a simple slow impact, at least. We could nudge the bow against it and open up the engines, see if the cable gives way under heavier force while minimizing damage to the bow-timbers.>

Hornguard shook her head, turning away from her friend. <Too risky for now. But the Belerids have stopped us within ideal rifle-range… it would be rude to not send them a message of thanks for the small hole they’ve cut into our ship.> Pitching her sanzai to carry, she ordered <Marines! Pick your targets and prepare to fire!>

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“Down!” Rozelsarad hissed suddenly, dragging at Dovindr’s shoulder. “Get below the walls!”

The urgency in her voice did more than did the elf-woman’s slight weight pulling at him, and Dovindr dropped down behind the thick parapet. A moment later and the other men followed; the elfs had demonstrated that they indeed knew more of their strange style of warfare than any mortal man yet understood.

Only a few heartbeats later, and a distant clattering echoed across the fjord. Far quieter than the ‘cannon-shots’… but also clearly more numerous. “What was—?”

The rest of his question died under the hailstorm of sharp impacts against the rocks all around them. Chips of rock danced skywards, trailing clouds of dust behind them. A few invisible somethings flew overhead with a noise like cloth tearing.

Not a heartbeat later, and the elf-women who waited with their own ‘guns’ behind the parapet leapt upwards and shoved the long tubes of their strange weapons out towards the ship which had loosed such an… ‘attack,’ however it worked.

Armored gauntlets hammered into the rear sides of the weapons, and slow-matches dipped into open pans.

A parade of hissing double-thunderclaps marched along the parapet, sparky-smoke leaping up from the rear of each ‘gun’ a split-moment before it roared out from the distant end.

Dovindr’s aching ears gave up and went home for the day, leaving only a hollow ringing sound to fill the world.

Father was obviously laughing with the sheer joy of a man half his age, but only the heaving of his chest and his broad smile showed that. No sound at all.

Lucas sat next to him, scowling and holding one hand over his nose in a futile attempt to ward off the sulfur-stench.

Eadberht had his back propped straight against the wall, with his side-knife drawn as he idly ran one finger along its spine.

Was Dovindr the only man who was starting to wonder if perhaps Rozelsarad had been right? What could they add to this battle, lacking thunder-weapons of their own?

A slight hint of resentment curled its way forwards, sinking its wormwood fangs into his thoughts as he glanced around at the elf-women. The elf-women who seemed entirely unbothered by the cataclysmic noise and fury of their unheard-of weapons. They could have warned him!

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<She could have warned us.> Hornguard grumbled, ducking low behind the cover afforded by Wavestrider’s port-side wheel cover. Every now and then a pop from across the water would herald the thwock of a gun-pellet slamming into the timbers somewhere around her a split-solon later.

And, with alarming frequency, drawing a startled-pained yelp over sanzai from one of the assembled marines.

<They are indeed quite capable markswomen, especially for barbarians.> Mist Glass sent privately, from where she crouched next to her Warlord. <Although our Sezabid ‘advisors’ do seem to be honest when they send that they did not know the Whirlpool warriors to be this familiar with such weapons.>

<Another trap.> Hornguard grimaced. <Do these daughters of Redrock truly claim to be warriors or instead ‘builders’?> First their low-slung castle that was such a far cry from some half-wooden barbarian hold, then the harbor-chain, and now the warriors supposedly disdainful of any weapon that did not involve a hand-to-hand melee revealed themselves to be most-familiar with rifled guns!

<The cannon-crews are at-ready whenever ordered, Warlord.> Mist Glass sent, glancing aside to where two marines carried a third below to the waiting surgeons. Even if the wounded markswoman in question was hotly insisting that she was fine, the cobalt blotch spreading across her thigh should be seen to before the blood loss became serious. <We can sweep their battlements, after a few shots to get the range.>

<A few shots that we don’t have.> Hornguard shook her head, even though she knew that her Chief-Captain was knowingly making poor suggestions just for the sake of helping her sharpen her own. <We’d need to keep a reserve to disable their actual cannon at the base of the fort, an absolute necessity if we’re to close for an assault.>

Mist Glass stood on her toes, peering above the top of the wheel cover. Resting her far-glass atop it, she closed one eye to focus better. <If I’m not mistaken, they have casualties of their own atop the walls. We’ve rifle powder enough to keep at this for some time, and thus-far we have no actual dead from their rifle-fire.>

<True enough, yes. But I think we can safely say by now that these Belerids are not fools, and they have little reason to keep trading harassing fire with us forever.>

Another pop, another thwock, and Mist Glass carefully collapsed her far-glass and returned to full cover. She nodded glumly. <And at this distance, neither can read the other over even the faintest of sanzai. They can pull most of their warriors from the wall, leave only one or two as lookouts. Leave us to sit here wasting our time, only to pop up if we close within effective distance to prepare an assault.> Her blue eyes slid aside to meet Hornguard’s. <And while we could have our marines also wait at-ready to fire when they glimpse such a movement, that would leave them exposed to cannon-fire from even their light guns at such a closer range.>

Hornguard nodded. <Whereas if we man the cannon now to suppress theirs first, our few trained gunners would have to spend a good hundred solon in the open before they could train the heavy guns around on target. And if their markswomen are sharp-eyed enough to land shots at this distance, they’re no-doubt also good enough to warn their own cannon-carriers to abandon their posts before our shells arrive.>

There seemed to be few pleasant options. <We… can keep up this rifle exchange for now, at least for as long as they continue to man their own walls.> Mist Glass’s sanzai made it most clear what she thought of that option. Wavestrider had suffered no dead marines yet, yes… yet. But the wounded were indeed piling up, and neither officer held any desire to grind both sides’ markswomen against each other until one or the other simply ran out of bodies.

<Or we see what can be done about their harbor-chain.> Hornguard suggested. <Perhaps trying to shove it aside with the bow remains too risky, but we could wait until nightfall and send divers over the side to search out what mechanism holds it to the cliff-wall on the side opposite the tower. Decouple or remove it, and we can leave this obnoxious fortification behind us and compel their town itself to surrender.>

<That seems to be the best option.> Mist Glass agreed, at the same time that one of the marines spun back from the gunwale, clutching her shattered shoulder. Both officers exchanged a grimace. No one who had served aboard a rough leviathan-ship for as long as they had would still flinch at the sharp-edged mental burr of pain which echoed out, but that didn’t mean they were immune to it.

Minds that had been long-since hardened against sensing a dying leviathan’s pained final moments could do little to shield themselves from one who actively sent the pain of her grievous wound.

<Yes, although it is sadly still not a good option.> Hornguard turned away from where the latest wounded marine was being gingerly hauled below, cursing up a red streak over her shock-clouded sanzai. <And leaves the question of what we do now.> She narrowed her eyes, thinking. Then nodded, a smile growing across her face. <You said that your cannon-crews would be loathe to use full-charges of the Sezabid gunpowder, yes?>

<Correct, Warlord.> Mist Glass responded slowly, clearly feeling along to try and follow where her leader was thinking.

<Good. Have the barrels hauled up to the ready-deck…> Hornguard grinned to herself, <and shake a few hands loose to help bring up the extra ballast we took aboard at Sezabi, as well.>
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Chapter Twelve, Part Two: Bombs Bursting in Air

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“Finally, gods be praised.” Father’s breathed half-prayer echoed well how Dovindr felt.

Finally indeed did the two elf-ships bombarding the castle reverse their strange waterwheels, and slowly push themselves further away back down the fjord. The never-ending intermittent crackle of ‘gunfire’ — a sound that Dovindr had not heard before this morning, and wished never to hear again — even died off as the distance grew too great for the elf-women to take their shots.

He slid down the inside of the merlon against which he had leaned, until he finally came to rest sitting on the cool, damp stone. Which only reminded him that it was no longer ‘damp’ only from seawater.

By some miracle of the gods — and he’d even throw in a thanks to Lucas’s own God, too — none of the men had taken a hit from one of these horrific ‘bullets’… but a good dozen of Rozelsarad’s fellow elf-women lay placed on the ground inside the castle. Most still moved, twitching occasionally with obviously-great pain… but four lay as cold and still as the stones beneath them.

“That was a battle for the skalds to tell of.” Dovindr muttered, or perhaps ‘swore.’ “From sunup to now just short of sundown. An entire day.”

“That was part of a battle, boy. Not the whole of it.” Father corrected wearily, the eager excitement with which he had first viewed all of the strange new devices used by the elves long-since spent. “If those ships out there are not still there come morning, I will eat my hauberk.” A hauberk that had gone entirely unused for the entire day, as both sides of elf-women had seemed entirely content to pluck away each other’s lives from such a great range that each victim was surely visible only as a small dot atop the ramparts or deck. The next time Rozelsarad spoke to him of ‘honor’ and ‘battle,’ he’d laugh in her face!

Not that his having little to do but watch death crash down randomly around him like hailstones had made the nigh-endless battle any better. Dovindr had spent the day helping as best he could with the wounded, hauling crippled elfs down the narrow stairway… and holding them down while an unwounded one stuffed and wrapped their gaping bullet-wounds to stop the endless bleeding.

For someone who had not so much as had cause to draw his sword once, nor even bothered to string his bow, he had rather a lot of blood sticking to his clothes and armor.

If there was anything ‘good’ that could be said about the day — any metaphorical Líf and Lífþrasir crawling forth from the Ragnarök thundering down around his ears — it was that Rozelsarad had gone as untouched as he. Apparently she wasn’t one of the elf-women skilled with their guns, for she had no more loosed one of those deadly projectiles than he had.

He had learned that she could tie a bandage with as much ease and swiftness as she had ever demonstrated in tying-off a ship’s line. A woman of many talents… some of which he hoped would need only the rarest of use in the future. No matter how much he knew by now that elf-women were clearly at least as warlike and battle-seeking as mortal men, it still tore at something in his heart to see her walking around with her arms blue-spattered up to her elbows. And the exhaustion visible in her purple-ringed eyes was easily a match for his own.

One of the elf-woman gunners next to him set her weapon down, leaning it against the parapet. Heat-lines rose from its ‘barrel,’ like a fire-poker drawn out just before it began to glow. The elf in question, her off-pink hair half-grayed by smoke and soot, flashed him a thin and very tired smile.

It took him a moment to even recognize her — she had been one of those who had brought food to him and the other men in their room back at the main hall. “Rannepeio.” He carefully spoke her name, nodding in respect to one who had done the actual fighting today. “You are tired from the battle — should I bring you water?” The other duty he’d taken on during the day, running down to the castle’s cistern with a drinking-bucket or two. Again not the most heroic of efforts, but one that he could do much better than he could handle one of the elfs’ thunder-weapons.

“Thanks ever so, but also no.” ‘Braidbloom’ shook her head. “I not thirsty, and also think maybe you have done enough yet.” It had been a surprise to him when it turned out that many of the other elf-women spoke quite differently than Rozelsarad. He… thought it was ‘worse’, but wasn’t quite certain enough in the elf-language to say for sure. Either way, the relief in her voice was easy enough to understand as she leaned forwards just enough to peer down from the wall into the central courtyard. “Am most glad that Mother is well; that enough for one day.” A laugh, that started brittle but then firmed slightly. “She will be not-so-happy to be fishing one-handed for a time, I am thinking.”

Dovindr followed her gaze, but none of the dozen wounded elf-women below looked like Braidbloom. Nor did either of the two non-wounded, who along with Lucas were inspecting the bandages or bringing food and water to the immobile. “Which one is—?”

His words were stolen away as a distant thump echoed across the waters. Both he and the elf-woman spun about to peer over the crenelations, just in time for a second thump to join the first. Two columns of dirty-gray gunsmoke rose from the nearest enemy ship, and a moment later a third joined from the smaller ship.

He frowned — the clouds definitely appeared to be taller than the shots from before, and that sound had certainly been louder than the ‘gunshots’ earlier. These clouds also were… ‘mottled,’ with small flecks flying forth among the—

A rockslide slammed home behind him.

Clattering, roaring. Something small shrieked past his ear and slammed into the stone parapet. Tiny rock splinters bounced against one slammed-shut eye.

He whirled around to see a puff of rock-dust rising from the far corner of the courtyard. For a moment, nobody moved as elf and man stared in confusion. That… whatever-it-was had come from inside the walls! How?

Then lightning struck twice.

He caught it out of the corner of his eye – a small, rounded container plummeting down from above at a steep angle. It soared over the far wall and disappeared out of sight, just before a crack echoed over the wall. Followed by the clattering landslide-sound of metal against stone.

Everybody moved.

Dovindr sprinted down the narrow stairs — he had no idea what this latest development was, but it came from above. And he’d seen the covered niches built into the walls around the courtyard; that should shield against sky-attacks well enough!

He skidded to a halt next to Lucas, who was just now pushing himself slowly upright. The mercenary-turned-missionary had thrown himself flat over one of the wounded elf-women, and as he attempted to stand his left leg gave out. The worn-gray robe of his newfound profession now sported a growing crimson splotch.

But the wounded warrior underneath him showed no new wounds, at least.

Rolling aside with a pained grimace, Lucas spat at Dovindr “Carry her under that overhang, boy, and be quick about it!”

His words came as Dovindr had already put his arms underneath the elf-woman’s shoulder as she made to stand. Half-walking, half-stumbling over towards overhead cover. Too slowly: the back of Dovindr’s neck itched, awaiting the next thunder-strike from the sky.

Glancing down at the elf-woman he was supporting, she seemed well enough aside from her twisted-wrong foot and the blue-stained bandage wrapped across one eye. The remaining one widened as he bent to put his other arm under her knees, lifting her entirely and now moving forwards at a faster walk. For all their strange fierceness and martial dedication, elf-women were still woman-sized: no heavier than some of the heart-shot beasts of the forest that Dovindr had carried home over the years.

And this one was also clearly wise enough not to object to being bodily carried; evidently the ‘warrior pride’ that Rozelsarad had boasted of so many fortnights earlier could indeed be tempered by pragmatism.

Rozelsarad herself appeared next to him just as he’d set the other elf-woman down in one of the alcoves and behind a thick wooden half-door. She and another of her people had carried one of the more-wounded ones between them, gently placing her next to the other.

Then she immediately turned to Dovindr, eyes wide.

Both he and her spoke at once. “You are not-hit?”

That drew a single startled laugh from each, before Dovindr added “No. What was that?”

Her brows furrowed. “Some kind of cannon, I think. Perhaps a—” her head jerked aside to follow the other casualty-carrier, who had jogged out of the hiding-place. “Later.” Rozelsarad turned to follow, and naturally Dovindr did as well.

One red-orange iris tracked him out of the corner of her eye. Wrinkles deepened on her forehead, and she opened her mouth to say something. Something that Dovindr could see coming, and shook his head first.

His silent message was received, for his elf-woman didn’t even try to tell him again to stay in the protective room.

Of course, others nearby were less ‘silent.’

“Hah!” Father crowed, walking at Lucas’s side. “That’s one to show the valkyries, all right!”

Lucas hobbled onwards, a bandage awkwardly tied at an angle about his waist to loop down over the upper rear of his left thigh. A leg that he still very much favored, but did walk resolutely onwards all the same. Studiously ignoring how Father walked next to him, clearly waiting to catch the Frisian if he toppled. “No such paganisms need apply. When I die, it will not be any of your ‘valkyries’ who will greet me.”

“Ah, yes.” Father nodded ahead to Dovindr and Rozelsarad, not quite putting his hands on Lucas’s occasionally-stumbling self. Then his mouth split into a grin. “So, you’d show that wound to your Saint Peter?”

Lucas’s pale face whitened a shade further, and he shook his head. “It matters not how a mortal man’s body perishes; only the state of his soul is counted. And until that hour comes it is my duty to turn the other cheek, as His son did.” One hand dropped to poke tenderly at his injury.

“I see.” Father agreed in mock-seriousness, but his eyes glinted. “So when—”

A muffled crack split the air once more, and everyone froze. But it didn’t seem to have come from inside the castle. Nor did the loud splash that followed one held-breath later. The enemy had clearly missed with this latest volley.

Nothing more followed, and Father tried again “So when your God said to ‘turn the other cheek,’ do you think this was the ‘cheek’ he had in min—”

CRACK

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Hornguard lowered the far-glass from her eye, nodding in satisfaction. The idea to stagger the cannon-shots had been a good one, if she was not mistaken. One shot from Finchaser and one from Wavestrider’s aft cannon, with the third from the front gun following at a ten-solon delay… hopefully just enough time for the Belerids within the fort to have thought that the entire salvo had missed.

Although she was forced to ‘guess’ at the actual effect, here so far beyond sanzai range. Her lips curled downwards in irritation. At least the activity she could see atop the distant barbarian walls had redoubled after that final shot. With any fortune, the improvised explosives had inflicted enough casualties to further tilt the day’s casualty numbers towards the correct direction.

<Hold fire.> she ordered after a moment. They could little afford to spend much more of the cannon-powder they had, even with the Sezabid stocks being substituted for these low-powered arcing shots.

<With respect, Warlord,> her chief cannon-gunner sent with as much privacy as she could at this range, <I’d prefer to get these charges off of the ship as soon as we can. There’s no safe way to get the ‘fuse’ out now, after all.>

Hornguard turned to look down from the bridge towards the forward mounting, where the experienced gun-handler in question gazed back up at her. Two more small wooden powder-barrels sat at the base of the gun, everything but the underside swaddled in cloth padding to absorb the shock of firing. <It is not safe to store? The fuse is that sensitive?>

She eyed the ‘fragment-bombs’ warily, as if seeing through the wooden casks to the packed musket-balls and powder within, both ‘acquired’ from Sezabi’s surrendered stocks. Barbarian weapons, perhaps, but serviceable enough and well-proven and understood. Yet the ‘kinetic fuse’ that Hair-thin had devised to set off the powder only when the barrel landed was another story.

The gunner shrugged, one hand rising to scratch at her close-shorn gray hair. Few in Wavestrider’s crew could say if the old veteran had been born with hair of that color or if it was simply decades of powder-fumes that had ground their way into her sun-leathered scalp. <This isn’t exactly a well-tested assembly, here. I’m impressed enough that Hair-thin’s idea works at all, but I sure wouldn’t sleep well with them sitting here and nobody but the marines on night-watch to mind them.>

Hornguard snorted. It seems that even the long journey northwards and the subsequent taking of port Sezabi had not been quite enough to meld Wavestrider’s amalgamated crew into one proper unit. The engineering and cannon crew were the old hands, and still chafed somewhat with the marine riflewomen who had been brought aboard for Hornguard’s new ‘career’ of conquest.

Still, the old grumblers did have a point – the riflewomen that Hornguard had hired away from Soladra’s City Guard were indeed most skilled with their long-barreled weapons… but utterly unused to handling the larger gunpowder charges that a leviathan-hunter routinely worked with. And Wavestrider didn’t have enough cannon-crew to man now two cannon day-and-night, so…

<No point in firing them off now; any Belerids over there who haven’t taken cover already would be too stupid to be a threat anyways. Secure the cannon for the night; we’ll store the explosives in the hand-arms locker by the stairwell until tomorrow.>

That should be enough; they could be inspected for proper stowage before being locked away.

Turning away, Hornguard strode down the length of the bridge and towards the right-hand side of the vessel. Bracing her hands against the wheel-cover, she peered over the side and down along Wavestrider’s tall hull to the waterline. To where one of the ship’s small boats had been lowered into the water, shielded from Belerid observation by the vessel's bulk. Four old-hand leviathan hunters took their accustomed places at the oars, and even the fifth who sat by the rudder had done this many times before. Really, if it hadn’t been for the thinning pall of cannon-smoke that still hung about the ship’s open deck, Hornguard could have been transported back a good few decades by the sight.

<We’re ready to pull away, Warlord.> reported the leader, craning her neck around to meet her leader’s gaze.

Who raised her far-glass to her eyes once more, checking that no further developments could be seen on the barbarian battlements. <Depart. They seem most concerned with the casualties we have hopefully inflicted.> She snapped the glass back, and nodded firmly. <We will advance to engage the fort while you row out; keep an eye on the signal-light for a warning if you need to be recalled before your mission is complete.>

At the distance down to the calm waters, Hornguard only faintly received one of the oarswomen grumbling to the ones beside her <Just not too fast. This water’s colder than a monastery-matron’s heart; I’d hate to have to swim all the way back to the ‘Strider!>

They pulled away, riding smoothly across the wave-less sheltered harbor and into the evening shadows cast by the overhead cliffs. And hopefully would return soon enough, with the two volunteer divers having inspected whatever mounting method the Belerids had used to attach their harbor-chain to the opposite cliff face. It hadn’t budged when Wavestrider had nosed up hard against it, but perhaps if it could be cut free or otherwise disconnected…

Her lips soured as she turned again to regard the still-resisting fort. The fort that was well beyond what she’d expected to find here in the savage North, and indeed much more of an obstacle than the harbor defenses at Sezabi had been.

Yet it was far from invincible.

Ropes whirred and tackle-blocks rattled, as Wavestrider lowered her other two boats over the side. These ones were the larger eight-oar-per-side craft, originally meant for maneuvering floating-but-heavy leviathan carcasses up against the main ship’s side in the right orientation for processing.

They’d have less-bloody work to do today, if dalid smiled upon them. And it was about time for that to finally happen, with the string of unpleasant discoveries that had befallen the expedition ever since they sailed up the cliff-lined inlet early this morning.

The only question remained from whom exactly any improved fortune would flow. A question that clearly sat heavy on the mind of her marines, by the wooden planking they had nailed to the gunwales of the larger boats now bobbing alongside Wavestrider. Thumb-thick ‘battlements’ that would — hopefully — slow a barbarian bullet just enough to spare the life of the riflewoman crouched behind their dubious protection.

Already low in the water from their extra weight, the boats lurched lower and lower as their crew climbed down rope-ladders from the main deck. The Belerids had shown that their cannon-crew were remarkably accurate with the smaller weapons they had, but even then it was only thanks to the long distance of the earlier exchange that no holes had been opened up in Wavestrider’s flanks. The ship herself would not dare approach too close now, for even by starlight a vessel of her bulk would be an easy target if she closed within sanzai range.

Which left the boats, small enough to be a difficult target bobbing only an arm’s-length or so above the waves.

Hornguard watched it all from atop the bridge, fingers tapping a nervous, staccato rhythm against one thigh. She would most certainly prefer to confirm that the marines knew what they were doing… but she also didn’t want to reveal her nervousness to the troops.

Fortunately, that was what good subordinates were for.

<Draw only close enough to verify how many Belerids remain alive within their fortification.> Mist Glass sent authoritatively, from where she had personally taken a position hauling on one of the lowering-lines. With the experience — and musculature — of one who had worked her way up through the hardest jobs aboard a leviathan-ship, she hauled in the heavy cable by herself while she confirmed to her marines <We are not taking the fortress today, only confirming how many defenders we face. A proper assault will wait until tomorrow, if they have been sufficiently reduced.> Her sending was punctuated by the harsh rattling of the ascending lifting-hook as it slammed home against the tackle-block, Mist Glass tying the line off smartly and stepping back.

Hornguard’s nostrils narrowed in bemused appreciation. For all of the veteran ship-handler’s doubts about this entire expedition, Mist Glass had indeed taken to her new martial-focused Captaincy with all of the determination and talent that she had shown throughout her long career atop the waves.

<Affirmative, Captain!> chorused the boat-leaders. <Just keep the defenders’ heads down for us, and we’ll go count barbarian noses for you!>

A good sign, if the marines departed in such good spirits.

///////

Archbrook leaned back against the century-old stone of the Diving Citadel’s garrison-room, doing her best to focus on the reassuring solidity and coolness over the fluctuating heat of her own exhausted body.

And now, her wounded body.

<You have little to worry about, child; I’ve seen far worse than you whom the healers only scoffed at.> A half-joking, half-serious sending came from one of the other conscious loroi in the dark room with her. Blackbeach lay on her side in one of the few beds in this usually-near-empty space, only twitching occasionally as the healer standing over her fiddled with the bandages wrapping one elbow.

The old half-warrior — what else would one call a Clan-sister who voluntarily chose a near-exile to the Citadel even in times of peace, to live placidly there with her daughter rather than venture out onto the sea in search of martial fame? — was clearly about to send more, but was interrupted as a section of filleted leaper-fish was slapped playfully across her powder-dusted cheek.

Braidbloom glared insistently down at her mother and jabbed a finger at her delivered meal, even as she carefully stood aside so as not to jog the healer’s elbow. <Less sending, more eating. You will need the meat to heal!>

With a grin, Blackbeach turned to accept her daughter’s gift.

And leaving Archbrook to her own thoughts once more. Many of which, she had to admit, focused on the stinging pain of her right middle-finger. Well, ‘ghost pain,’ the healer had called it. She held up the bandage-wrapped hand in question, which thankfully sported no other injuries. Still, it did take some getting used to only the three remaining fingers there, a noticeable gap left between them.

But not all of her thoughts centered around her own wound, taken in what had been thus far the last Amenalid cannon-attack. She cast her eyes upwards to the arched ceiling, as if to peer through its many mannal of rock to the battlements above. <Any changes yet?>

<None.> Duskflame replied, one of only two warriors who remained atop the parapet. No sense in exposing yet more of the Citadel’s warriors to any further fragment-attacks, not while the Amenalids seemed content to wait silently well down the inlet. <I can see that there is some motion going on with their ships, but at this distance and with the sun reflecting off the cliffs and against my eyes I cannot see what it is.>

Pity, that. The veteran warrior above her may be the one whom Grandmother had — wisely — entrusted with the Citadel’s command given her own crippling, but Archbrook was still Clan Heir by clear preference of the other warriors. The Citadel was Duskflame’s responsibility, but the warriors within it were Archbrook’s as far as she was concerned.

And thus the question of just what the Amenalids were planning now was the true reason why she could not rest, no matter how the single remaining healer had told her to. The fusiliers — those warriors who had taken to the previously-captured Southerner gunpowder weapons the best, and who took pride in sharp eyes and steady hands more than in an overpowering mind or sword-strong muscles — had claimed many kills among the Southerner ship’s crew, after all. Surely there could not be so many aboard even that large and most strange craft that they would try another exchange of gun-firing?

Whatever it was that they aimed to do, there seemed to be little enough sunlight for them to do it today. Or at least, there hadn’t been when she had been ordered — forced, more like! — into the protected room with the other wounded. And that certainly felt like it had been some time ago.

<Inform me if anything changes.> she softened her sanzai to avert what could otherwise have been received as an ‘order’ to the warrior many times her own age. Another thought burned at the forefront of her mind, but she struggled to frame it in proper sanzai. <Also...>

<They seem fine.> Duskflame replied to her unsent thoughts, the sturdy old veteran’s sending lined with an unusual flicker of outright humor. <I think maybe they are now perhaps the most battle-hungry warriors in the Citadel.>

Archbrook closed her eyes, smirking. That had fit the thunderous look on Dovindr’s face as he had watched the healer burn-sealing her severed finger-stub. <That is perhaps not surprising.> Sobering, she felt around the edges of their exchanged sanzai. It seemed private enough, and so she added <How ready do we stand for another attack?>

<...Ready enough.> Duskflame responded, after just enough of a pause to send a chill down Archbrook’s spine. <They haven’t tried to storm the island just yet, nor force the chain after they first ran up against it. We’ve learned not to stay at-ready on the walls unless needed, yes, but if they try to push against us or past us we can run up the stairs faster than they can row over from their ship. And—> her sending paused, replaced by a spike of excitement that reverberated down the humming sanzai-link <—and here they come! I can see boats by starlight, rowing closer! Three boats, making for the beach!>

Archbrook shoved off to leap to her feet, flinching as her reflexively-planted right hand shrieked with pain where the barely-not-bleeding stump of one finger jammed against the floor. But she made it upright regardless, just in time to receive the thrumming excitement of the other warriors in the fortress running for the stairs.

Let the Amenalids come! They might have shown themselves at least as good at gunnery as Whirlpool’s warriors, but let them just try to land on the island and taste Redrock steel in proper warrior’s combat, hand-to-hand!

She halted, frowning. But.

But this was nighttime. The sharpest eye in the world aiming down the barrel of a gun was… less-than-useful right now. Why would the Amenalids make an assault now, of all times, when their advantage in such cowardly weapons was nullified?

<Good question.> Duskflame sent, over the private channel that had remained open. <Perhaps they thought their gunfire and fragment-attacks were more effective against us than they truly were?>

Possible, yes; those hadn’t exactly been ineffective. Archbrook gingerly ran her thumb over her stump, thinking quickly. If the Amenalids thought them to be weaker than they were, then… perhaps it was best to ‘encourage’ that belief? <Is the distance from the shore to the back of the Citadel within sanzai-range?> She didn’t know it well enough to say offhand.

<Not quite,> the veteran replied, the tone of her sending showing that she had immediately picked up on Archbrook’s budding idea. <but it’s not far beyond. If we move to the rear, they’ll only sense our true numbers a few solon before their keels crunch gravel.> A note of hungry anticipation crept into her thoughts as she added <Just off-shore, the most deadly place to be attacked. A warrior with her feet on the dry sand wouldn’t have to swim if her leg’s taken out from underneath her.>

Duskflame began barking out orders to the readying warriors, and the rumbling footsteps from outside in the courtyard staggered to a confused halt. Archbrook shoved open the heavy wooden door to the quarters — carefully with her left hand, shielding her right — and made her way out into the cool early-evening air. Leading a procession of quite a few of the other wounded, she noticed, even if Braidbloom at the back had to physically pull her way free of the irate healer before limping after her.

And came face-to-face with ill-lit pandemonium, as the flickering of wall-top lanterns showed the lines of armed warriors awkwardly trying to turn around halfway up the narrow stairs.

Archbrook ignored them, turning to call almost directly up at the walls above her. “Dovindr!” Her Dain immediately poked his head out over the edge, shoulder-length hair falling to frame his face. “Stay not-seen by the Amenalids; we aim to surprise them!”

While she still felt most unsure how to feel about the Dain males insisting on being here at the battle-front, it could no longer be denied that they clearly were accustomed to it. Well, the other three, at least; Dovindr had certainly been even more affected by the bloodshed around him here than in the earlier fights against Sezabids up north. Either way, she trusted that they would be able to keep themselves hidden and not disrupt her and Duskflame’s last-solon plan.

<And you herd the wounded back to the healer’s station.> Duskflame sent, the early-evening stars behind her outlining the veteran’s commanding stance atop the walls. Even through the shadows over her face, Archbrook could feel the insistent glare reaching down to her. <It seems that the Amenalids expect to find many wounded among us, so let us show them exactly that.>

Archbrook grimaced, turning to regard the limping and staggering crowd that had pushed their way to freedom behind her. Convincing proud warriors that their duty now was to simply sit and be wounded and maimed, ‘overwhelmed by combat,’ — and to advertise that to their enemies! — was going to be something of a challenge.

<Consider it a learning exercise in leadership.> commented Duskflame drily.

///////

Another gunshot rang out from ahead of her along the gunwale, and Hornguard was even able to track the faint flicker of movement through her far-glass as the shot arced out towards its target.

And dove straight into one of the stone bulwarks that lined the Belerids’ walls. But at least the enemy warrior who had stood next to it, carefully lining up her own shot at the approaching boats, flinched away and ducked down out-of-sight. Not a hit, but it had done its job.

<Any report yet?> Hornguard asked Mist Glass, carefully refraining from instead sending her question to the relay-boat sitting halfway between Wavestrider and the built-up rowboats currently drawing most near to the enemy position. With her own ship’s relay-boat currently serving as a base for her divers to examine the harbor-chain, it was Finchaser’s craft which had taken up the duty of parking in the middle to relay sanzai back-and-forth between the armed boats and the two ships. Which, of course, meant that she didn’t entirely trust them not to spread rumors of any revealed nervousness on her part.

<None yet.> Her chief-Captain replied, the undertones present in her sanzai clearly showing that she followed Hornguard’s unsent thoughts. The two of them stood at what had by now become most-familiar places at the left-hand end of the bridge, shoulder-to-shoulder with their far-glasses braced against the wheel-cover. Their boots had probably worn marks into the planking underfoot by now. <They should be within detection range already, but with as little fire as they’ve taken from the defenders they’re clearly intending to push in closer still for a better sense of who remains.>

Naturally, yes. A show of initiative that Hornguard well approved of, even if it did little to calm the anxiety roiling within her. But one that could go too far… <As long as Hauler doesn’t decide they’ve been thinned enough for her to launch an assault right now.> Something that was a distinct possibility with the aggressive marine commander.

Mist Glass pulled back slightly from her far-glass and turned to regard Hornguard out of the corner of her eye. <I would trust her judgment on a call such as that. Would taking the fortress tonight not be a good objective?>

<For the short-run, yes.> Hornguard sent, her gaze locked on the distant fortress as another half-aimed shot flared out from atop the walls to spit a tongue of sparks and flame into the evening darkness. Return fire hammered back only a split-solon later, but she could not see what effect either had had. <But no matter how overwhelmed the defenders may be, it seems unlikely that they would not inflict any casualties upon our marines. And I intend to rule Beleri, not merely to torch its settlements and leave; an occupation needs warriors. A victory here and now, even with relatively light casualties, may cost more than it would be worth if it means that we lack the troops to garrison what we have gained.>

And that was even assuming that the battle-mad barbarians of Clan Whirlpool didn’t simply fight to the death within their admittedly-impressive castle. Avoiding exactly that sort of legend-inspiring last stand had developed into an art-form among the military-leaders of Amenal, and for good reason. It simply wasn’t good business to give a beaten foe any ‘inspiring heroes’ to rally a resistance movement around.

When Hornguard had shifted to this new ‘career’ of war and conquest, it had been those experienced leaders to whom she had turned for tutelage before embarking. Even before she had first started hiring marines and enlisting the vengeful, she had invested two entire years in learning how to keep what she intended to win.

Leave pointless bloodshed to the barbarians; the whole point of her expedition was to bring Amenalid civilization to the savage north.

<This seems wise.> Mist Glass acknowledged, turning back to her own observations. <Then we should soon have— what is that?>

///////

“What is he doing?” Dovindr wondered aloud, emphasis on ‘loud’ with his ears still ringing from the irregular rhythm of gunfire.

Further down along the battlements, Lucas had just handed off the latest wounded elf-woman to another of her people to carry down the stairs. The sparse lantern-light that barely illuminated the top of the wall was only able to throw shadows across his face, but all the same his determined grimace glinted clearly in the flickering light.

And where he had previously crouched low to pull the wounded fighter to safety, he now strode back fully upright, disdainful of the occasional spatter of rock-dust thrown skyward by an impact against the stone to his left. One hand dug deep into his mottled once-gray robes, red and blue stains alike turned to black by the weak starlight.

He turned out to sea, pulling out his necklace and the wooden cross that hung from it.

Brandished it aloft, and began to chant.

///////

<Well.> Mist Glass noted, as the distant figure toppled backwards a solon before the crack of an almost-as-distant marine’s rifle reached her across the night-still waters. And did not reappear. <Whoever that was, she seems to have learned her lesson. What do you suppose she was trying to do?>

Hornguard shrugged. <A barbarian pre-battle display? An attempt at intimidation? Per the stories relayed by our Sezabid ‘guest,’ these Whirlpool warriors seem to place a great value upon the fear which their battle-record has impressed upon their fellow savages. Perhaps this one was hoping to drive us away by such an obvious display of complete disregard for her own life?>

It was possible; the warlike peoples of Beleri were fellow loroi, yes, but they were certainly a people so divergent from the real inheritors of the Ancestors’ legacy back home as to be often difficult to understand.

Mist Glass snorted derisively. <Well, if that was her goal I rather doubt it had the desired effect.>

///////

“Barbarians!” Lucas shouted in a trembling voice, even as Dovindr and Father skidded to a halt next to him. “Pagans!”

“Yes, yes, I think they heard you.” Father drawled, while Dovindr quickly checked his law-Uncle for whatever latest wound had slammed him to the ground only moments before. Nothing, nothing, nothing… but when his hands went to pull back Lucas’s hood, they came away wet.

“You’re bleeding, Uncle.” Lucas said as calmly as he could manage. But in the dim starlight, he couldn’t quite see where. But at least the mercenary-turned-missionary hadn’t flinched away too much at Lucas’s fingers. “Here, let me pull you closer to—” he paused, as the light grew in intensity. One of the elf-women ran over, crouched double below the wall but holding a shielded lantern out before her.

In her people’s language, Dovindr shot a hurried “Thank you” over his shoulder before carefully checking again. And now could easily trace the bright-red — but thankfully shallow — line that ran up Lucas’s tall forehead, starting just short of his peaked hair-edge.

“You’ll live.” Dovindr grunted, his worry fading.

Father loomed at his side, jabbing one angry finger at his law-brother. “Aye, and I’m far from sure you deserve it! What were you thinking, man, to almost make my sister a widow at her age and with a babe at her breast? A stunt like that?”

In the harsh voice of a man who had seen his efforts cast down before him, Lucas ground out “I offered them God’s promise, of peace to all who lay their swords aside and follow His path to brotherhood.”

“Or sisterhood.” Dovindr interjected lightly before he could help himself.

And received a scalding look from Lucas in return, the weak attempt at injecting humor into the nearly-fatal situation utterly ineffectual. “A promise which they rejected.” He held up his hand, from which dangled his necklace and the cross it bore. The now three-legged cross, with one of the horizontal arms shot neatly away by the same bullet which had come within a finger’s-length of taking Lucas’s life. Once more, he growled “Pagans.”

“Try something like that again, Frisian, and I’ll make those elfs out there look like kindly old matrons!” Father attempted to match Lucas’s tone, but the obvious current of relief running through his deep voice sapped away any real threat.

“There is no such thing as an ‘elf.’” Lucas objected distractedly, staring into the distance through his deformed religious token. Then his eyes hardened, and he looked to Dovindr. “You know these people better than I. Have they a spare sword within these walls that I may use?”

Dovindr’s brows shot skywards, but Father beat him to the punch “What happened to ‘turn the other cheek’?”

Standing unsteadily — well, ‘crouching’ unsteadily, behind the walls — the ‘reformed’ mercenary with weeks worth of battle-tales ran one thumb over his mutilated cross. “That was the other cheek.”

///////

<She is certain?> Hornguard asked.

<Affirmative, Warlord.> the sailor relaying the message sent after a brief delay. <Thirty-eight signatures, of whom ten injured.>

Hornguard nodded, thinking. That was a fair bit less than the marines she had available, between both of her ships. But then, the Belerids had the advantage of a well-sited defensive location, and—

<One more thing, Warlord.> Came another relay. <Barrel reports that one of the barbarians was… ‘undetectable’?> The confusion in the sailor’s mind was palpable, but so was the fact that she truly was relaying each thought exactly as she received it. <The one who stood up atop the wall and was shot down.>

And if the veteran marine commander — who preferred her older name ‘Hauler’ but was nigh-universally called ‘Barrel’ by the sailors and other marines for her stout figure — sent that she could not detect one of the barbarians, then there could be little doubt.

<An impressive feat, especially for a Belerid.> Mist Glass mused.

<Anyone can be trained to project a lotai, given enough practice.> Hornguard disagreed. <The savages have little to do with their time between raids, so finding that some turn to such cowardly arts is of little surprise.>

All the same, it was reason to worry. A warrior who could hide her signature even from one who was actively looking for her — actively looking at her! — was a warrior who could easily become a major nuisance to her society. Sneaking past sentries, evading customs patrols, spying upon rivals’ warehouses… there was a very good reason why training in such skills was so well-regulated by sensible, Amenalid governments.

And also why each of those governments maintained their own corps of such experts.

<Little enough of a problem here in open battle, yes.> Mist Glass pointed out, <But let us hope that any of their warriors with such talents choose to fight us here, openly.>

Rather than sabotage the later occupation of this town, yes. Perhaps she would have to recalculate how many of her armed marines were left behind to garrison each of the two prominent Northern settlements. Unless—

She laughed aloud, a sound that echoed over Wavestrider’s quiet deck. <That will indeed be 'little enough of a problem' — the barbarians themselves have provided us with the bulwark against such deceitful efforts!> Even as she sensed Mist Glass’s quick understanding of where her thoughts were headed, she still pointed out towards the fort far ahead of them. <Their castle here will suffice to keep them contained in the town as well as it has served to keep us out of their town. We need only place our marines atop its walls once it has surrendered, and even the darkest lotai in the world could not sneak past it without drawing a sentry’s eye.>

<Which will mean that we now must take the castle as intact as possible.> Her Captain noted, one hand rubbing thoughtfully at her chin. <That limits our bombardment options even more than does our low reserve of suitable powder.>

Hornguard shrugged. <We are low in cannon-powder, yes, but we are well-stocked in everything else.> One hand swung around her, gesturing to the cliffs about them visible only as tall dark patches against the starry sky. <And this harbor is shield enough for the next few seasons. We have food for more than a year, rifle-powder for days of fighting, and shelter from any winds or waves that might threaten the ship. Let us simply wait here, and see if it will take days or seasons for the barbarians to recognize the inevitable and seek terms of surrender.> She raised one eyebrow at her friend. <Their cousins in Sezabi saw reason soon enough, and surrendered to the siege within two eight-days.>

Mist Glass pursed her lips. <Port Sezabi also lacked a fortification as formidable as this one. By the time they gave up, we had had to set most of their harbor structures alight.> She shook her head wryly <But yes, it seems our most-efficient option… if you trust that the garrison we left behind in Sezabi can keep those locals under their boot for the duration of a siege and not require our return there.>

<Sezabi’s former chief perished at sea, we have their junior-chief along with us and under control, and all of their cannon were removed to the harbor-peninsula under our control. It is as secure as anything can be, under the circumstances.>

<Perhaps you are right, yes.> Mist Glass acknowledged. She snorted in quiet amusement. <I think our divers will be not-so-happy to learn that we won’t be cutting away at the chain they so carefully mapped for us.>

<Or perhaps they will be thankful, that they don’t have to go swimming in ice-water again. They’ll forget any grumbling once we settle down into a waiting-game, and can send out fishing-parties back down the inlet.> Hornguard quirked the corner of one lip into a sharp-toothed smirk. <That clever harbor-chain will serve us soon enough anyways; no sense in destroying it now only to save ourselves a season-fraction of waiting. And besides, these are barbarians behind those walls ahead of us. Who do you think will tire of a drawn-out siege first, our stout leviathan-hunters or their savage brutes?>

///////

<What!?> one of the two sentries left atop the enemy-side wall sent in mixed surprise and outrage. Needless to say, the undisciplined outburst did not come from Duskflame. <They’re turning around, rowing away!>

<They’re getting away!?> shot back one of the other wounded packed into the same room as Archbrook.

Duskflame’s calm-but-insistent sending overrode any others. <They are withdrawing. It seems that they are too wise to attempt an assault tonight.>

Archbrook searched out the veteran warrior’s mind, and sent to her privately <Then this was a false-attack? I cannot imagine that they were scared off by a single Dain male dressed in towel-clothes.>

She felt Duskflame’s dry chuckle over the sanzai link. <No doubt there, yes. I would suspect that they merely wished to test our numbers here. Perhaps had we lost more warriors, they would have made an attempt at the walls.>

Fingers drummed against her thigh in muffled frustration, Archbrook not-quite-sure how to feel about being denied a battle.

<Denied a battle tonight.> Duskflame corrected, before broadening her sending to all within the Citadel <They will be back soon enough, but it seems not until tomorrow at least. Return to your duties… and make ready for a war-of-waiting.>

Archbrook was one of the first out of the wounded-hall, running into the starlight-filled courtyard ahead of the stumbling crowd behind her. Now with even greater privacy, she sent as she felt her way up the stairs <You think that they would simply… not fight us for so long?>

Duskflame glanced back from where she stood peering out over the battlements. <It is the way that their people make war against each other, as we have been told.>

With a derisive snort, Archbrook leaned against one stony guard-pillar. <It is cowardly.>

<It is effective.> the veteran warrior pointed out to sea. <Perhaps we have more food stocked than they do… but they have access to the ocean, and we do not. With their two vessels, they could easily keep us contained here with one and send the other out to fetch supplies, or perhaps even fish for them directly.> Her famous stoicism bent slightly, and a hint of anger bled into her thoughts as she added <In our waters.>

The nerve of them! Archbrook glared at the barely-visible shadows that trailed a tiny wake behind them across the harbor-still waters. Just let them try, and she’d—!

She grimaced. What could she do?

<Good question.> Duskflame let out a slow breath. <We’re well-secure behind these walls, and the chain prevents them from passing us and attacking the town. But with only one ship available to us — and her in bad shape — they are just as protected from any attack we could launch.>

Archbrook chewed at her lower lip, thinking. Letting her thoughts flow out freely, bouncing them off of the veteran at her side. As she’d felt Grandmother do so many times before, in council-meetings that Archbrook had been allowed to attend even before she was as tall as Goldenshawl’s knee. <But they do not blockade us on the land-side, and we have skis. Perhaps we can bring in food from in-land?>

<By hand, even if we can now travel faster than on foot? And we would have to hunt for it; no matter how swift you can travel on your Dain’s invention, there is no town within food-spoiling distance. And it was a cold, long winter this year: the miros will be hungry and on-edge already. We couldn’t send children to harvest them; we’d have to send warriors.> She gestured behind her. <Warriors whose leaving here by boat the Amenalids would surely notice, and see their opportunity.>

So much for that idea. She wracked her mind. <We have trouble enough seeing their boats approach us at night, and they were not trying to be stealthy. Perhaps we could assemble enough of our own small-craft, wait for a cloudy night, and—> No, that wouldn’t work. And its problem was simple enough that Duskflame clearly saw no reason to point out the obvious flaw: the Amenalids would detect the approaching warriors as soon as a group of that size entered into sanzai range. No matter how hard they rowed, that would give easily enough warning to make an opposed boarding of such high-sided ships absolute suicide.

Unless…

Archbrook sucked in one cheek, deep in thought as she ran her gaze along the bastion, finally coming to rest on the four Dains who huddled behind its thick, stony walls.

Her eyes narrowed.

Yes, that was a… possibility.

///////

Author's Note:
Wavestrider's chief of marines, formally named 'Hauler' but nicknamed 'Barrel' for her stoutness is of course a reference to USMC Lieutenant General 'Chesty' Puller. ;)
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For the first sharter:

It's pretty funny that southerners call northerners savages, despite the fact that they clearly know how to cast guns themselves. IRL it was something like creating nuclear weapons now, requiring quite significant scientific resources and industrial infrastructure of a certain level. Having artillery of our own production at least indicates that both nations are comparable, even if both should know about the concept of such weapons from legends.

By the way, for people who encounter gunpowder weapons for the first time, the vikings are simply amazingly cold-blooded. I know from personal experience that even for a person familiar with the Internet and games with a cannon, its real salvo nearby makes an indelible impression. Even if here is something like a smoothbore culverin of small caliber, judging by the description. For an unprepared person, even shots from a hand guns make a big impression.

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Re: [Fanfiction, In Progress] New Horizons, New Seas

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Tamri wrote: ↑
Thu May 29, 2025 5:19 pm
It's pretty funny that southerners call northerners savages, despite the fact that they clearly know how to cast guns themselves. IRL it was something like creating nuclear weapons now, requiring quite significant scientific resources and industrial infrastructure of a certain level. Having artillery of our own production at least indicates that both nations are comparable, even if both should know about the concept of such weapons from legends.

By the way, for people who encounter gunpowder weapons for the first time, the vikings are simply amazingly cold-blooded. I know from personal experience that even for a person familiar with the Internet and games with a cannon, its real salvo nearby makes an indelible impression. Even if here is something like a smoothbore culverin of small caliber, judging by the description. For an unprepared person, even shots from a hand guns make a big impression.
That's one of the things I deliberately wrote in - both the Amenalids and Belerids look down on the other (Belerids call the Southerners 'weak cowards' even though they're clearly willing to bravely engage in battle when necessary, Amenalids call the Northerners 'savages' and 'barbarians' even though they're really only a few ~decades worth of IRL technology behind them), but as has often been the case here on Earth that has more to do with nationalistic pride (/arrogance) than with any actual reality.

As for the Norsemen, I tried to show that Dovindr at least was *this* close to breaking and running, but between having his father there and Rozelsarad he was even more afraid of being seen as a coward. That said, if the Amenalids actually had pressed in for a landing and he ended up having a volley fired *towards* him from close range, I suspect he (and the other humans) would indeed break. Hopefully their bravery here doesn't seem entirely impossible; it's also why I had them emphasize how secure they feel within the fortress's heavy walls (stone fortifications being on the very upper end of 'defensive technology' they'd be familiar with), so since they don't know any better they at the time thought that 'scary loud guns' and 'heavy stone walls' were of equal military utility.

And besides, poor Dovindr gets put through the wringer so much in this story; I wanted him to have *some* nigh-heroic moment that wasn't him shooting an unaware warrior in the back ;)
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I’m surprised the Dains, who had never even seen thunder weapons before, have adjusted so quickly to their dire situation. Then again since they hail from an era where armed conflict was the norm and the rule of the land was ‘learn or die’, I guess it’s not unreasonable to think they’d recover from shell shock quickly. Hell they have to.

I thought the bit where Lucas stands in plain sight of the Amenalids’ line of fire to preach God’s mercy and peace to the Loroi was funny. And ironic, since it’s the same God so many humans have waged wars for. Typical zealots!

I can only imagine what the Loroi must think when they see the human’s totem of a man impaled to a cross.

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Re: Chapter Thirteen: Boarding Action

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Hornguard sprinted down the corridor, grabbing hold of the hand-rail at the corner and pulling herself around onto Wavestrider’s upper companionway. Then, with force of effort, slowed her pace and emerged onto the ship’s snow-dusted deck at a dignified stride.

She trudged through the merely finger-thin layer of cold powder — it was early summer, after all, even if this far north that barely helped — towards the sentry who had sent out the warning. Had sent it privately, in a display of clever thinking that Hornguard made a note to reward later.

No sense in having the marines boil up out of their bunks to spook her ‘guest,’ after all.

<Just the one? You are certain?> She asked, following the lookout’s extended hand into the pre-morning darkness. Even with the help, it took a few solon for her to spot the slight disturbances in the harbor-flat water left by slow-pulling oars.

<Affirmative, Warlord. I tracked it leaving the town some time ago, but it did not make for their fortress; instead it kept to the far-side of the harbor and moved towards us under the cliff-shadows.>

Hornguard narrowed her eyes thoughtfully. Then a sharp grin slowly pulled the corners of her mouth into a smile. A hungry smile. It looked like her initial guess was right, then. In the many days and nights of this siege that had already passed, they had watched quite a few boats row back-and-forth between the barbarians’ castle and their town. At first she had ordered them harassed by rifle-fire, but they quickly learned to hug the side of the cliff-lined inlet that kept them well-shielded from her marines.

For one to now instead row out on her side of the harbor was a most intriguing development. Especially so if they kept within the shadow of the cliffs here… which would only shield them against observation from the barbarians’ fortification.

It seemed that someone wished to ensure that she was not seen by her own people when she approached Hornguard’s besieging ships.

<Keep an eye on her as she approaches, and inform me when she nears sanzai range.> Hornguard ordered, before turning her sending towards the marine-on-watch below. The one whom she’d stormed past, at the base of the stairs. <Wake a few of your arms-sisters, no more than three. Wait at-quick for action, but stay below deck and—> inspiration struck her <—act as if you are playing at chance-games.>

That should make any approaching Belerid assume that the marines would be slow to respond. A little surprise, just in case Hornguard needed them after all. She tapped her fingers against the gunwale, briefly debating whether or not to wake Mist Glass. But after all the effort it had taken to get the duty-chained captain to finally take a full rest period, perhaps it could wait.

Especially if her guess was right as to just what the approaching Belerids wished to discuss. Or, more likely, single Belerid.

Turncoats were rarely team players, after all.

///////

“Okay, that’s close enough!” Rozelsarad hissed under her breath. Quiet, and yet loud in the silent night.

Dovindr exchanged a glance with the other three men, each one nothing but a shadowy prone outline in the cloudy night. Each one lying atop the chests stacked atop the rowing-benches, now level with the boat’s short gunwale.

Then, before he could think better of it, he rolled slowly off the side of the boat.

Holding tight to the secure rope in his hand, he ‘slid’ more than ‘fell’ into the water just as they had practiced for many days now. Barely a sound came out as he dipped into the freezing water feet-first, and even that little could hide behind the ‘clumsy’ splashing oar-pull that Rozelsarad timed perfectly.

With any luck, nobody had heard a thing.

The night remained silent.

Swimming slowly towards the ship, Dovindr let Rozelsarad’s boat pull ahead of him. He had to keep himself upright as he swam, his hands pulling at the water without breaking the surface. No waves, no sign. Even his charcoal-smeared face should be nigh-impossible for any sentry to pick out on a night like this.

Yet the rest of his skin would surely glow under even the pale starlight. But he wouldn’t make the mistake again of asking — asking, not ‘whining’! — why they had to make the attack entirely devoid of clothing. The laughter of both Father and Lucas had been bad enough; it had been worse still when they had sobered enough to point out that any warm coverings would quickly soak through and pull him to a death at the harbor-bottom.

He was now a man with his eighteenth summer behind him, — what passed for ‘summer’ here in elf-land, anyways — and if he perhaps still didn’t know everything about a sea-man’s life then that wasn’t a good reason for him to be laughed at that way!

The sword strapped across his back tapped at his rear as he swam, its weight in the water just barely compensated for by the wooden shield secured over it. They’d tested that many days ago, when this crazy plan that Rozelsarad had brought to him and the other men had finally started to seem actually plausible.

Although certainly still not ‘comfortable.’ And not just for physical reasons, as he watched his elf-woman pull well ahead of him and row alone towards a ship full of hostile fighters.

///////

Hornguard grasped her wrist at her back, peering down at the boat below. A cone of dim light cast by the sentry’s half-muffled lantern showed exactly what she had expected.

A single barbarian, alone in her boat. No armor, no weapons.

<Going fishing?> Hornguard sent with mocking false-sincerity, not quite able to resist a bit of gloating. She’d told Mist Glass that the barbarians would tire of the siege first, of course… but still, to give up already? It hadn’t even been a single full season yet! Some of the trade disputes between island-states back home had been settled eventually by the granddaughters of those who had first started them!

Admittedly, the civilized islands were much more able to feed themselves even without access to the deep ocean. Coastal fishing, diving for shell-mouths, raking in drifting sea-leaves… there were options simply not available to a land which had as its primary and overwhelming feature ‘Cold.’

For a moment, her ‘guest’ did not reply. Then a stubborn-blunt sending drifted up <I am saving my Clan.>

Hornguard rolled her eyes. Practically a child, by the overly-narrow focus of that sanzai. Someone clearly lying to herself, and lying hard.

She shrugged. It was true, she supposed, in a manner of thinking. Just because this siege was short by Amenalid standards did not mean that she — and her crew — would not become… irritated with the Belerids here, if things dragged on too long. Irritated warriors might not be quite so quick to receive the sent surrenders of defeated enemies, not until the foe's numbers had been... thinned somewhat. So perhaps cutting all of this short was indeed in the best interests of the barbarians as well.

<A most honorable choice.> she sent, with some truth behind it. <And you are?>

<I am Archbrook, Heir of Clan Whirlpool.>

That was actually a surprise. The very daughter of the ‘feared’ Goldenshawl? Her eyes narrowed. And the focus of one of the stories shared by that young Sezabid, the warrior who bested three others at once in a duel?

<You are?> She asked, skeptical.

<Yes.> the shadow-limned figure in the boat far below straightened up, planting one foot on the rowing-bench before her to strike what was clearly meant to be an imposing figure.

But thus imbalanced the boat, and had to quickly sit down before she went over the side.

Hornguard raised one eyebrow. The sending was truthful enough, but this was clearly still practically a child. Perhaps a fortunate child to have somehow survived such an imbalanced duel… but fortune did have a way of favoring the foolish at times.

<Very well, then.> Either way, no reason to delay things. Time to be blunt. <I am Warlord Hornguard. Perhaps you would wish to row about to the boarding-ladder aft of the wheel? It seems that your boat will eventually be spotted where you are now, even sitting here so far from your people’s fortress. We may… converse better when neither of us needs fear discovery.>

<I fear nothing here.> the girl sent, an obvious lie. <Nobody knows that I am here.> An even more obvious lie.

Hornguard narrowed her eyes at this youthful fabricator. <Who sent you?> She let a deliberate note of condescension drip into her sanzai, poking straight at this warrior’s youth.

And scored a direct hit. <I sent myself. It is by my plan alone that I wish to speak to you! It is by my orders that—> she cut her last revealed thought off, evidently trying — and failing — to hide that she clearly was working with others. Hard to prepare a coup by one's self, after all.

Yet her first thought had been truthful. Hornguard nodded slowly, taking one step back from the railing. Yes, she could see what had prompted this early ‘meeting.’

The young heir to a famed Clan sees her people bottled up in their own fortified inlet. It would indeed be clear that when her mother was deposed at Hornguard’s hand, then her descendants would have to share her fate.

...Unless the one of those doomed fools came to Hornguard first. Offered to trade her people’s surrender — an inevitability anyways — for her own life. Perhaps even hoping to remain as a ‘trusted’ leader installed by Hornguard… and watched most carefully by Hornguard’s marine garrison.

It was a dishonorable life, but it was a life.

At Hornguard’s nod, the other sentry on deck kicked the rope-ladder over the side. It clattered down against the hull, a far-easier way for one to board Wavestrider than climbing up the harbor-net streaming over the side facing the castle, near the bow. The harbor-net also, as many sailors swore, was kept deliberately slimy and difficult-to-grasp so that any sailor who fell overboard and had to make her way back up it to the dry deck gave plenty of time for her shipmates to mock her clumsiness.

A preparation that was perhaps not always necessary, as this clumsy-indeed Belerid showed. She took her time climbing up from her small boat, barely clinging to the rope-ladder as it rattled against the hull, and—

<What was that?> the sentry to Hornguard’s left sent, frowning and glancing back over her shoulder. <It sounded like— there!> She raised her lantern, clearing away its shrouding-lever with a jerk.

Hornguard spun about, to see illuminated in the lantern’s cone… a ghost.

Deathly pale aside from a pitch-black face and dripping water, it swung its second leg over the railing and thudded softly to the deck. The quiet sound that the astute sentry had noticed.

But she hadn’t noticed the previous two ghosts. Not surprising given how they were not detectable, only visible to the simple eye!

Flickering in the faintest of light that leaked around the lantern’s focusing-tube, they lurched into a run.

Towards her… and drawing weapons.

///////

Archbrook saw the three Amenalids above turn away from her, and felt the distant echo of their startled sending.

The signal she’d been waiting for.

She dropped back into the boat, kicking the nearest chest up with her foot and tucking it under her right arm. Lifted the short sword hidden underneath it, and held its blade securely between her teeth.

Then, one-handed, she climbed the rattling ladder as swiftly as her years at sea let her.

Even by the time she’d pulled herself up onto the deck, the fight had begun. Three sword-armed Amenalid warriors, two with rifles still slung across their backs — and bafflement wafting off of their thoughts in waves — did not so much ‘fight’ the three Dain males as ‘avoid’ them.

They were nude, after all… and evidently males in the dim light, freezing water or not. Not exactly what warriors trained to fight.

She could use that.

“Gorm, the door!” she called aloud, throwing the heavy chest to the deck and rushing at the back of the nearest Amenalid. The one who had faced the Dain leader… and who barely spun about in time to deflect Archbrook’s overhand strike.

As now she had given her signal, the three males snapped into action. Gorm dashed for the heavy door that was the only way down into the ship — or up from within it — while the other two males actually began to fight.

Catching the foe off-guard, as hoped.

Archbrook lunged forwards, taking advantage of her foe’s slow-to-form combat-lotai to hammer forth a mental spike in front of her sword-tip.

The disrupted Amenalid took a split-solon too long to go from ‘baffled’ to ‘alarmed,’ and the blade darted past her too-slow guard to sink deep into her left arm.

Dropping her weapon with a sanzai shriek, Archbrook’s opponent leapt back to save her life. Sea-blue hair whirled about as the Southerner pulled free of the sword, nearly yanking it from Archbrook’s grasp.

Taking her into range of one of the Dain males.

The one named ‘Lucas’ barely seemed to even glance aside from where he dueled Hornguard, but the shield in his left hand lashed out. Its heavy wooden rim caught Archbrook’s opponent in the side of her head.

She dropped bonelessly to the deck, alive but out cold.

A wooden bang from behind her, and the light cast by the single lantern here — dropped early and lying on its side amidst the scuffle — was drowned by a brighter illumination. Another Amenalid stood in an open doorway atop stairs, lantern held high, clearly just as confused at what she was seeing.

Just in time for Gorm to reach his target.

The bulky male led with one meaty fist — large even by warrior standards — and the Amenalid and her lantern tumbled back down the stairs. Disappeared out of sight… and the crashing of glass showed that her lantern had landed hard.

Archbrook turned away from the sight as she sprinted up to Dovindr’s side.

And past him, turning her run into another lunge at the other Amenalid sentry.

Who batted the blade aside in a shriek of steel-on-steel, nimbly stepping back to put the gunwale behind her. Eyes darting between Archbrook and Dovindr.

Widening.

Just in time for the male’s lowered shoulder to catch her center-mass. And knocking her back, off-balance as her legs hit the gunwale.

Her straight-backed Southern sword swung wildly, whistling through the air just above Dovindr's head. But then it — and she — toppled backwards over the edge.

Good, the Dains were fighting just as well as they had in yesterday’s sparring practice. Fighters utterly devoid of sanzai also lacked any instinctive reluctance to close distance, to turn a fight into a brawl.

Something that the Amenalids clearly did not expect.

A pained vocal grunt came from behind her, and she leapt back into a run even before her head came about.

Lucas traded blow for rapid blow with Hornguard, the two fighters — the two warriors — testing each other with probe and thrust.

The spear in the male’s right hand lashed out with speed and precision, but was batted aside each time. Fighting in the Whirlpool style albeit mirrored, Lucas’s left hand sat empty, without a shield.

And at the moment, curled protectively around his lower torso. Flinching even as he twisted away from her searching lunge, grunting again in obvious pain. Not a complete dodge, then. Or perhaps a wound from earlier in their duel.

But his action still put his spear now out-of-position to do anything about Hornguard’s sword, momentarily poised to slash at any point of her choosing on his exposed chest.

Archbrook ran forwards still, Dovindr’s heavy footsteps at her side, but she was too slow. Time slowed, and it was as if her feet dragged through beach-sand as she willed them onwards.

Archbrook saw the Amenalid hesitate to strike the male down. Pity? Reluctance?

Either way, it drew an odd fury to her own thoughts. That was more hesitation than her Mother had received, blown apart in a split-solon without warning!

But then Hornguard’s sword darted forwards again, its already-wetted tip seeking the final blow.

Steel glinted… to Archbrook’s left.

Dovindr’s hurled sword arced through the starlight, turning slightly before impacting the Amenalid’s side.

A risky move, one that disarmed the male and landed flat-on against Hornguard’s brass-buttoned jacket. Didn’t even seem to pierce through to the warrior underneath.

But it did distract her for that brief moment.

Lucas swung his spear's haft, slamming it into the bony side of Hornguard’s wrist.

And her own blade clattered to the deck.

The Warlord’s eyes turned to Archbrook, who held her sword ready and stepped to the side. Searching for a clear thrust without Lucas’s body in the way.

And awaiting the Amenalid’s next move. Would she lunge for her dropped blade, counting on swift movements to be faster than Archbrook’s own stab?

Or would she grapple Lucas, use him as a loroi shield — or ‘Dain shield’ — to cover her attempt to re-arm?

Then again, her combat-lotai seemed most impressive. Perhaps she estimated herself Archbrook’s equal in a mental battle, and would attempt to grapple with Archbrook directly?

Would—

Then Hornguard employed a stratagem that no Whirlpool warrior would have thought of.

She turned and ran.

///////

Hornguard pounded across the deck, pulse loud in her ears.

Through the haze of her combat-lotai, she tracked the single mind behind her. This ‘Archbrook,’ the only actual warrior in this bizarre attack.

An attack that had, embarrassingly, succeeded thus far.

But not for much longer.

She sensed the sleeping crew of Wavestrider abruptly waking and leaping from their hammocks below deck, boiling up through the ship’s passageways. Towards—

<The Marines’ Post is on fire! We can’t get through!> Yelped one of the first to reach there, at the base of the companionway.

The only stairs that reached up to the deck.

Hornguard only gritted her teeth, running for where one of the sentries lay unconscious. Caught off-guard and defeated within the first moments of the fight.

Her rifle still strapped to her back, her sword nowhere to be seen.

<Fire on ship!> Cried the alarm below her. One of the greatest fears of any sailor, especially those used to serving aboard oil-soaked leviathan-hunters.

Drowned out a solon later by Mist Glass emerging from her quarters. The remaining fog of sleep fell from her thoughts as she sent forcefully <Sailors, draw your buckets! Marines, pull the wounded clear! Make for the escape hatch forwards of the wheels, and be prepared for anything on deck!>

The barbarians had assaulted her crew, set fire to her ship! Gritted teeth now creaking in rage, the Warlord shoved aside the alarms as she neared her target. The sentry’s rifle.

All the while quite aware of the mind closing fast behind her. Approaching with deadly intent.

She yanked the dazed sentry up with one hand, the other pulling the rifle free. Shielded her mind as best she could to shroud her actions. Then with one motion, Hornguard pulled back the hammer and spun around to fire.

The Belerid madwoman, Archbrook, was for a split-solon frozen in time.

Mid-stride only a few arm-lengths away, sword held high to slash down at her. Clearly caught flat-footed by Hornguard’s quick action, unexpected and half-shielded behind her combat-lotai.

Red-orange Belerid eyes widened in surprise, met by fury-cold Amenalid blue as Hornguard yanked hard on the trigger.

The hammer snapped closed, flattening the primer-cap underneath. A jet of flame rocketed down into the rifle’s powder chamber, igniting the carefully-measured powder there. Forced outwards by the burgeoning explosion, the hollow base of the bullet dug itself deep into the rifle’s grooves. Amidst a cloud of choking gray smoke, the bullet roared forth out of the barrel.

Just a hair too slow, as the barbarian twisted aside at the last moment. The bullet that should have pierced her snarling face instead soared off harmlessly into the night.

But the powder blast didn’t miss.

A keening shockwave of pain echoed out over sanzai, and Archbrook’s free hand instinctively clapped across her scalded eyes. Inertia carried her past Hornguard, blinded and stumbling.

Best to ‘help’ her along.

Taking the rifle’s barely-warm barrel in both hands, Hornguard swung the heavy weapon around.

And connected, the heavy stock slamming into the barbarian’s back. Who toppled aside, bouncing painfully off of the gunwale. Unfortunately not falling over it.

With a grunt, Hornguard forced herself up to her feet and advanced on her stunned foe to neutralize her properly. And—

A thought tore through her like lightning. Where were the other attackers? The mind-invisible ones? The bulk of the long deck-house that stretched from the companionway back to the weather-sheltered ship’s wheel took up much of her view forwards, but just over there—!

Flickering shadows danced in the fire-light, amidst the roar of building flames.

///////

“That door won’t hold them forever, boy! Help me with the oil!” Lucas’s sharp command halted Dovindr in his tracks.

For a moment, he glanced aft to where his elf-woman had sprinted off into the shadows. She… had ordered him to not follow her after all, and to complete the main mission.

Still, even as he turned away his fingers itched with worry.

So he gave them something to do.

Bare knees barked hard against the elf-ship’s deck as he knelt by the heavy chest that Rozelsarad had hefted aboard. Lucas had finally opened the simple latch — evidently Dovindr wasn’t the only one whose fingers were starting to go numb in the cold air — and now pulled out the clay pots within.

The ones filled high with very flammable oil.

“No time to pour, just toss them while I kindle the flame!” Father suddenly appeared at Dovindr’s side, barely even breathing heavily from the exertion of the battle.

Well, ‘battle.’

Even as he lifted out one of the heavy pots — careful not to spill its dangerous cargo on himself — Dovindr eyed the single door leading down into the ship. The sword of one of the felled elf-women had been thrust through the handles.

An unnecessary precaution: the only thing that had boiled up from that doorway was smoke, which rose ever-thicker.

“I think we might not even need to use these!” Dovindr joked, even as he hurled the fragile pot underhand towards the nearest mast. It shattered just short of it, splashing flammable oil all over the deck. Glistening in the faint starlight.

“Throw them anyways.” Lucas ordered distractedly, as he carefully lifted up the ember-bag. The faintest of glows emanated from it as he pried it open and blew across the charcoal to coax it back towards life. “We’re not taking them back with us.”

“Aye.” Dovindr agreed, grabbing one of the last fire-pots. He hadn’t heard anything from where Rozelsarad had chased the last enemy elf-woman to, and while it had only been a few moments—

Crack!

A gun-shot! From behind him!

He jerked to his feet, and overbalanced himself with the heavy pot. Falling forwards, he reflexively grasped for anything nearby.

His hand caught on Lucas’s arm.

The precious embers fell from the man’s grasp, only barely having begun to glow with true fire.

And hissed slightly as they put themselves out inside an open oil-pot, still far too cold to ignite.

“God’s Bones, boy!” Lucas swore darkly, but it fell on deaf ears.

For Dovindr had leapt to his feet and ran even faster than the Frisian’s irate words could follow, heavy flame-pot cradled forgotten in his left hand.

Rozelsarad was in danger.

The dim light of their captured lantern cut off behind him as he rounded a wooden structure built atop the deck, and—

Slammed directly into someone running the opposite direction.

Not Rozelsarad.

Too tall, too broad… and the furious sneer that he could see glinting in the starlight did not match his elf-woman.

He barely brought his recovered sword up in time to deflect a slash aimed at his side, and stepped back.

Calling out “Rozelsarad!?”

///////

Hornguard bit back a caustic laugh as the whatever-he-was shouted aloud for the barbarian. He would not drop his lotai even to call out to his treacherous deceiver? Fine, then. “She is dead!” she hissed, readying her blade for a second strike away from his guarding sword.

As she had hoped, the strange male hesitated just for a moment at her lie. Gasped aloud “No!” His strange guard-less sword rose just a split-solon too slow to meet hers.

Enough that she felt her sword strike home, sliding past his guard. Darting towards his left main-hand and grinding against—

Ceramic?

Shadows flickered as the male flinched at her strike — or perhaps he threw something.

Either way, a heavy weight slammed into her chest. Bouncing against the heavy leather of her sea-coat, it tumbled and spilled a cold liquid all over her.

A foul smell erupted forth, one that she knew most well. Leviathan-oil, and well-rendered.

Perhaps the most flammable substance known to science.

Coughing at the pungent stench, she swung at the male.

At where he had been.

Footsteps ran away from her, along with more shouting. This time incomprehensible.

///////

“Father!” Dovindr called hoarsely, “There is one left here. I will lead her away — look behind the building for Rozelsarad! She is hurt!”

It seemed to be his best plan. This angry elf-woman had to be lying about her, right? Rozelsarad just couldn’t be—!

His face slammed hard into something heavy and wooden. Visible through the stars in his vision, it rocked back slightly, suspended from davits that hung over the ship’s side. A rowboat?

His nose now smarting almost as much as the shallow cut on his left arm, he glanced back and had only a moment to lurch aside from his pursuer’s thrusting sword. He batted it aside, hitting its tip with his own blade near the grip as Lucas had instructed him.

Flashing iron sliced through rope, and the near side of the suspended boat plummeted overboard.

Dovindr tried a counter-thrust at his surely off-balance opponent.

Whose coat whirled as she danced nimbly aside, much faster than he could move. His amateur strike was slammed down into the deck.

And held. The blade was stuck fast.

He dropped his sword just in time to leap backwards away from a blood-hungry horizontal swipe. Briefly eyed his weapon, so tantalizingly close… yet now sitting right at his enemy’s feet.

He turned and ran again.

///////

Archbrook shoved herself off of the gunwale and stepped forwards on unsteady feet.

Her eyes would not open, no more than the tiniest of cracks. Yet her lungs stung even worse.

That didn’t stop her.

She could feel Hornguard’s fury… mixed with the heart-deep thrill of a warrior whose foe fled before her onslaught.

And wasn’t running fast enough.

So Archbrook forced herself forwards towards Hornguard’s mind-signature. Blind and trusting that her feet would keep their footing on a deck that she could not see.

She also could not see where her sword had gone, knocked from limp hands by the heavy blow which her lungs still felt now many solon later.

Entirely disarmed and with short breath that refused to fully return, she shambled into a run to— do what, exactly?

She’d figure that out when she got there.

For now, she just needed to—

With a loud crack, the deck shook underfoot and she toppled forwards. An acrid stench of gunpowder filled the air… along with sanzai screams from below.

///////

<The marine arms-locker exploded!> sent one of the firefighting crew, pain lacing her sanzai. <It’s those shredded bombs!>

A lance of self-recrimination burned through Hornguard’s heart. It had been her idea to store those there… a cost-saving measure that had now perhaps cost the lives of some of her crew.

<Pull the wounded back from the main corridor!> Mist Glass barked. <Leave the dead; just get that fire out!>

Hornguard turned her irate scowl on the male who still fled before her. Whoever he was — whatever he was — he was fast… but clearly did not know his way around the crowded deck of an armed leviathan-ship. He’d ran into the hunter-boat on its davits, he’d bumped into the funnel, and now he stumbled on the stairs leading up to the bridge.

In the dim star-shadow of the left-side wheel cover, he now crawled on his back away from her. Two sets of blue eyes met each other, glinting in the faint light.

One searching for a mercy that was not offered. He had come here to burn her ship, had led to the deaths of her crew.

She had already done worse things in pursuit of her rightful vengeance than killing a disarmed male.

///////

A broad hand grasped Archbrook’s shoulder, yanking her to her feet. “You not hurt?” came the rough but quickly-spoken trade of Gorm.

“Yes, now help Dovindr!” She ordered, but the male did not let go of her.

Instead, he only said “Lucas is going to him.”

“Not fast enough!” alarm shot through her nerves as she pierced enough of Hornguard’s combat-lotai to read her intent. A pitiless sword rose, unseen to Archbrook’s stung-closed eyes yet felt all the same.

And here she was, far too distant to do anything about it. Unless—

She whirled on Gorm, reaching around the large male to his other arm. Snatching the oil-pot from his grasp and pulling free. Taking two steps forwards and, aided only by her sanzai senses, spun on one foot to hurl the heavy projectile forwards.

///////

Dovindr twisted aside even as he saw the blade descend. Its wicked-sharp tip caught the starlight, glinting even as it dove for his heaving chest.

A muted ceramic crash sounded out just before the blade sank home… deep into the planking next to him. Between his arm and his side, close enough that he could feel the iron’s hungry-cold chill even against the cold night air.

He kicked out at the elf-woman’s half-seen legs, and connected. And also now found himself slipping around on a deck made slick with yet more stinking whale-oil.

Still, at least that went both ways.

Even his quick kick was enough to send his attacker’s friction-deprived feet out from under her, and she thudded to the ground next to him.

Both of them struck at once.

A bony knee hammered into his gut, knocking the air from his lungs.

But his searching hand wrapped around her sword’s hilt. Grasping hard atop the gloved elf-hand already there, and wrenching hard to one side. Slowly, bit-by-bit, he turned the iron blade down towards its owner.

///////

Hornguard snarled as she struggled with the strange male. If that was what he was.

First her attempts to pierce into his mind had been blocked with insulting ease, as if he did not even acknowledge them. Nor did he respond to the furious epithets that she spat through their skin-contact.

And now he somehow was overpowering her grip on her own sword!

Worse even than a mortal danger, it was an insult.

This would not do.

She drove her knee up into his belly once more, and this time yanked the sword aside at the same moment. Gave up her own grasp on the hilt to better shift her grip, and instead angle for the next blow.

In the brief split-solon where his grip weakened, she slammed the back of his wrist against the gunwale’s corner.

The sword fell from his hand… and disappeared overboard.

Good enough.

Shoving herself back, she grunted with exertion as she brought her legs up underneath her and shot to her feet. Brought one heavy, steel-toed boot back for a heavy kick into her opponent’s exposed belly. Not exactly the most civilized way to end a fight, but under the circumstances—

<Stand back, Warlord!> A warning from one of her crew, behind her.

Hornguard sent a glance back over her shoulder to see a half-dressed marine standing in the opened escape hatch not four paces away, a two-barreled boarding pistol held in her outstretched hand.

Hornguard instinctively twisted out of the way to clear the shot.

And only a split-solon too late realized her error. <No—!>

But the marine’s finger had tightened on the trigger all the same. Perhaps she, no leviathan-hunter herself, had simply not recognized the great danger warned of by the stench of oil all around her.

The muzzle-flash of her gun briefly lit up the scene, reflected in the pooling leviathan-oil that had begun to drip down into the open hatch. The pistol spat smoke, a bullet… and sparks.

With a meaty thwack, bullet met too-pale flesh.

And with a roar, the sparks which fell onto Hornguard’s oil-soaked coat ignited.

She instinctively shrugged out of it and hurled the blazing uniform away even as her short-cut hair crisped at the surging heat. But there was nowhere safe for the coat to land.

Now exposed to open flame, the oil spread over the deck of the ship — her ship! — spread into a raging fire.

Which spread down into the interior, following the dripping oil.

<Fire in the main corridor!> shouted someone from below, sending hard to be received over the shrieks of the unlucky one whose mistake had ignited the blaze. <The escape hatch is aflame!>

<It’s spreading down through the drains!> Hair-thin’s recognizable sanzai cut through the alarms. <We’re evacuating the engine room!>

<To where!?> Another called.

For a moment, Hornguard could only stare in utter shock as everything went wrong all at once. She was only torn from her horrified stupor when a hand grasped at her ankle. And pulled, weakly.

Her gritted teeth creaking in rage, Hornguard rounded on the crippled male. Blood, almost red in the fire-light, poured from the hole shot into his right leg.

She raised her own, intending to stomp the life from this whatever-he-was who had ruined her vessel!

And paused, turning as a furious mind approached rapidly from behind.

///////

Oh. The fire was much larger than she’d thought.

Nonetheless, Archbrook continued on through it. Running forwards with near-blind eyes, homing in on the hate-wracked mind she could sense ahead. Conscious of the flames that licked at her evening-coat’s trim, catching on the thin lining.

It would last long enough, though.

Lowering her shoulder, Archbrook slammed into Hornguard.

The two of them fell against the gunwale, and the smoldering flames in Archbrook’s coat spread onto the still oil-soaked Amenalid.

...and also the prone Dain who Archbrook only now discovered lay beneath them.

Shrieks of pain both sent and shouted echoed into the night air.

And from behind them, a panic-filled broadcast <It’s spreading to the magazine! Abandon ship!>

Blind or not, Archbrook could see her only option. The mission had been accomplished, after all. The other Dains had hopefully heeded her shouted order to make for her boat or simply leap over the side. This burning ship was doomed.

Now all that remained was to escape it.

Shoving the burning and — understandably — convulsing Amenalid aside, she dropped to her knees and grasped Dovindr. Then, muscles straining against the Dain’s surprising weight, she hefted him up and rolled him over the gunwale towards the sea below.

Hopefully he was aware enough through his burns to think to hold his breath. At least she knew he could swim.

A splash followed a solon later, while Archbrook climbed up onto the gunwale herself. Grabbing hold of the dangling davit-line that once held a ship’s boat, ready to—

And now a heavy weight slammed into her back.

She toppled over towards the night-black waters below, even as Hornguard snarled directly into her mind and past her lotai. Thoughts too cluttered — flaming agony, despondency, fury — to format as any proper ‘sending.’

The two loroi hit the surface as one, plunging straight into the icy harbor.

Both sank immediately, their bodies frozen unmoving as their minds fought desperately. Their physical grappling left no room at all between their thoughts, neither able to do more than hold her breath as they sank to the harbor bottom.

///////

Dovindr’s arms ached as they pulled him back to the surface. He swam off-target to one side, his right leg limp and unmoving. But at least it had gone numb from the cold-shock, hopefully also slowing the blood loss from the gun-wound there.

And, most thankfully, the flames which had eaten at him had been washed away entirely.

He coughed and spluttered as he broke back into the night air, hacking up the lungful of ice-water he’d swallowed in his unexpected plunge.

And looked around. Where was Rozelsarad? His last glimpse aboard ship had been a wall of flame roaring towards him — surely she would also have leapt over the side after rolling him to safety?

More shadows above him, backlit by the growing inferno engulfing the ship. Gorm and Lucas leaping over the side, the latter dragging a burning foe-woman with him to the water’s safety. More elf-women behind them, also diving overboard. None of them in Rozelsarad’s armor, only the orange button-coats of her foes.

He was in no shape to fight them, as crippled as he was.

Taking a shuddering, deep breath, he dove back down below the surface. Forcing his eyes open against the salt and stinging cold. Searching.

///////

Thoughts snapped back-and-forth, each one testing the other’s defenses.

Finding gaps and driving hard through them.

Hornguard had been accused of many things throughout her career, but ‘soft-mindedness’ was not one of them.

And so even as the barbarian’s lunging mind pierced through the occasional lapse in her own shielding, she shrugged off the attack. Only redoubled her own counter-strikes, even as corners of her mind shut down from interference.

A pointed jab snuck past, and her breath hiccupped before she could stop it. Icy sea-water poured into her lungs.

She forcibly ignored that too, and hammered home a drive into the Northerner’s center. Paralyzing her next thoughts for just a fraction of a solon, making the next attack all the eas—

One terror-frayed thought from outside the battling two snuck in, its desperate urgency impossible even for them to ignore. <The magazine is alight! Leap ou—!>

A crushing pulse rocketed through the clear waters as a cataclysmic explosion cut off the sender with ultimate finality, squeezing the breath from the fighters. Eardrums collapsed under the pressure spike, and two interlinked minds were forced briefly apart by a matching wave of nausea.

The barbarian’s face was now illuminated by a burning glow from behind Hornguard. A glow that came from her ship, destroyed! A ship lost amidst a plume of destruction, along with all aboard it.

Just like the magazine-fire that had taken her Lomiminzan, her male who had promised himself to her alone, all those years ago.

Yet more senseless slaughter… and again at the blood-drenched hands of a vile Belerid!

Her battered mind cast aside all unnecessary thoughts. Breathing, escape, even survival were discarded.

Only one thought remained, burning with manic determination.

This barbarian must die!

///////

Archbrook’s eyes widened as the Amenalid’s murderous thoughts poured into her.

But that wasn’t the only reason for her spike of terror.

A great shadow loomed overhead, backlit by the burning hulk of the shattered ship. It smashed into the water, noiseless to ears that had long since ceased to function.

It plummeted fast towards her, streaming bubbles in its wake. Sinking with the speed of a ponderous chunk of iron, the vast cannon dove to crush her beneath its bulk.

By reflex, she hammered at Hornguard’s mind in a desperate attempt to free herself, to swim aside.

Then thought better of it, instead focusing on keeping the Amenalid frozen in place as their battle continued.

She just had to time this exactly right.

But Hornguard was no fool, and clearly sensed the approaching danger through Archbrook’s mind. Her own strikes redoubled, clearly aimed at freeing herself to swim away.

Archbrook held her in place, batting each mental lunge aside with growing desperation.

All while the descending cannon grew ever-larger in her vision. Blotting out the glow of the burning ship, and—

Now!

With the split-solon time advantage given by her direct sight, Archbrook hurled a spike into Hornguard’s readying thoughts. At the same moment, she freed just enough of her muscles to kick away.

Streaming an ever-thinning trail of bubbles, the cannon swept Hornguard away with its unstoppable weight. The two battling minds were forcibly separated, and a surging wave of relief reverberated through Archbrook.

The damned Amenalid had gone to the Depths, at last.

A clawed hand locked hard around her ankle, and pulled. <Then from the Depths themselves I strike at you!> Hornguard spat the thoughts across, the weakening vitality of her dwindling breath forced aside by the sheer hate in her sanzai.

Grappling with Archbrook to the very last, Hornguard pulled her down as well, into the wake of the plummeting cannon.

Muscles spent what must be the fading remnants of their strength to pull her to her doom, and the waters darkened as Archbrook found herself drawn back below the deadly bulk of the cannon. Its dive could not have more than a solon or two left before it hit the bottom.

And even as Hornguard’s mind faded bit-by-bit into the waterlogged emptiness of the Drowned, every last bit of energy left to her was clearly dedicated to holding Archbrook’s own mind frozen within her body. She had no doubt that she would win, of course, but only far too late.

Unable to clear herself in time, unable to escape. Doomed to—

A shadow flickered alongside them. Undetected, mindless… but alive.

Dovindr!

The Dain grasped her leg and Hornguard’s wrist, wresting both apart.

Hornguard’s mental hold upon her mind vanished, and Archbrook lunged aside. But Dovindr did not follow quickly enough, one blood-trailing leg clearly too maimed to swim clear in the short time left to them.

So she curled her legs up and kicked off of the cannon itself, hugging Dovindr close and pulling him with her.

Even through the soft harbor-floor, the thump as the cannon drove itself deep into the sand echoed through the water no more than an arm’s-length away. Felt, more than heard.

And with it, the last vestiges of Hornguard’s rage-filled mind disappeared forever.

The shock of the close impact knocked the air from Dovindr’s lungs in a great bubble that vanished towards the distant surface. Carrying with it the Dain’s life-breath, and his eyes shot wide in obvious panic.

With the weight of her armor, it would take too long for her to lift him back to breathable air. And with his crippled leg, he could surely not swim there himself in time. He convulsed, doubling over as his instincts to open his mouth and breathe no doubt fought with the equal urge to keep the encroaching water out.

Her choice was obvious.

Grasping the male’s head with one hand, Archbrook pressed her lips to his… and breathed. Pushed air from her lungs to his, as her legs kicked against the water to drive them both slowly to the surface.

The shadowy depths lengthened below them, and out of the corner of one eye she caught a final glimpse of the Amenalid who had caused all of this. Hornguard’s lifeless body faded away, half-buried underneath her own cannon with only her upper torso and one arm visible.

Mother had been avenged. And so here ended the Southerner who had ambushed Windshriek all those many days ago, who had signed her own death-warrant with that treacherous first shot.

If Archbrook had any remaining regrets right now, it was that the chaotic battle here had left no opportunity for her to declare who she was, and what just punishment she owed to Hornguard. A punishment that had now been delivered all the same, by the life-crushing weight of the Southerner’s own cannon.

Fitting.

<By this victory, let our feud lie as dead as this slain warrior here.> Archbrook sent the formal thoughts, knowing full well that Hornguard was long beyond any ability to receive, let alone answer.

The eddying currents played with Hornguard’s drifting arm, her hand drifting back-and-forth as if waving in answer… or in summons. Imploring Archbrook to follow her into the Depths’ cold, final embrace.

Unable to shake her head with her lips still pressed tight to Dovindr’s air-starved mouth, Archbrook could only narrow her eyes to glare down at her slain foe.

Not today.

///////

<That’s the last of them, ma’am.> the sailors crouched in the front of the long hunter-boat reported, both of them leaning back as they hauled another coughing survivor aboard.

The last survivor… and one who may not remain in that camp for long, by how she shivered in the cold night air.

Mist Glass hardly needed to pulse her exhausted mind outwards to sense that Hornguard was not among those huddled aboard the narrow boat. She had sensed her friend go under just as the ship exploded… and that she had not been sensed since was a clear sign.

The Captain let out a long, weary sigh. Or, tried to: her breath hitched immediately as the bone-deep burns across her scorched back woke from their numb shock just enough to spike her mind with agony.

But it was as nothing to the empty hole torn into her heart.

Hornguard was gone. Never to be seen again, not alive.

<Claimed by the Depths, I say.> muttered one of the sailors huddled next to her for what warmth could be found. Privacy even of one’s own thoughts was not exactly possible right now. <She found the end she was always destined for.>

Mist Glass chose not to comment on that, instead responding to the two up forwards holding on to the latest rescuee dragged from the icy waters. <Fit her in under the blanket, then.> To the three who had had enough presence of mind to leap overboard only after pulling oars from their racks next to the gunwales she added <Pull towards Finchaser. I will signal the other boat to do the same.>

One of the two Marines who pressed in awkwardly next to all of the longer-service sailors asked <To prepare a counter-attack?>

Mist Glass… did not answer immediately.

For what would she answer? The fact that she was currently struggling to even pull enough energy from her enervated body to send at all demanded that she call off the attack. Withdraw down the channel, perhaps even lift this siege entirely.

But the greater part of her mind, that which had followed Hornguard for decades — virtually all of her life — balked. Her Warlord lay slain: her commander, her employer… her friend. Mist Glass was most far from a Northern barbarian herself, but she felt her blood crying out for vengeance all the same.

Conscious of the minds around her all waiting on her next sending, she made her choice.

<No.> She sent with as much firm finality as she could force into her sanzai. <One vessel is not enough to maintain a blockade, especially not now that we would have to vastly increase nighttime watch personnel.>

A sailor behind her, swaddled deep within the single recovered blanket — the only reason she still lived at all, with so much of her flesh burned away — croaked <If that would help.>

The derisive thought floated around for several solon, uncontested. For could Mist Glass truly disagree? She had no more idea than any other just what those mind-empty husks had been which had crawled their way up onto Wavestrider’s deck. Recounted only in the confused — and then panicked — sendings of the few armswomen on deck at the time. The only three who had ever seen the creatures directly.

The husks that had set her ship aflame before apparently fleeing, invisible, into the night. And never so much as a shred of thought received from them. No signature.

A shudder passed through the group at the memory… a shudder that eventually led to the other Marine in the boat. Who stuck out her chin and sent with only mostly-feigned bravado <Let them come, then! We’ll be—>

<She commanded them.> All turned to the sailor who had sent, one who lay flat on her back atop a rowing-bench. Blackened and curled strands of her once-green hair had been fed between her chattering teeth that gnawed fitfully at them, and with a faraway look in her eyes she added <Archbrook did. The ocean-melor answered to her. That’s what the sentries on-deck said.>

All flinched back at the shared thought. A palpable wave of dread rose all around them, one that Mist Glass saw she had to get out in front of. <Whatever they were, we’re putting them behind us.> She tried to ignore how the three tired rowers noticeably picked up their pace at that thought. <I don’t know what they were or where this barbarian found them, but we’re not wast— spending any further time here.>

Even as much as Mist Glass had come to… disagree with Hornguard on pursuing this expedition, she still wasn’t going to outright disrespect her admired leader. She winced, correcting herself. ‘Former-leader.’

The pugnacious Marine still wasn’t finished. <Well, I say they probably died in the blast, and—>

<Look!> One of the sailors to Mist Glass’s left called, leaning out far over the low edge of the boat. One arm pointed in alarm… almost straight down into the water. <There!>

The narrow craft heeled over as all who could leaned over to follow her outstretched hand.

Barely visible in the fading fire-light and the glint from the stars above, two corpses could be made out just below. Pale and deathly white, face-down in the depths.

The corpses swam.

Legs and arms moved, but with none of the grace of a sailor… or even a marine. Limbs the wrong proportion, body stretched and paled almost beyond recognition as a loroi. No agility coordinated them… but neither did any mind direct them.

No living mind.

There could be no doubt what they were. The sentries had not lied — these things were not of this world. Nothing so devoid of a mind should be able to move… and yet these melor did. Like child-tales of walking-skeletons, or of mirrors that reflected someone other than she who stood before them, or the like.

Mist Glass slammed down hard on her own thoughts, hopefully before any of the terror that flooded her mind leaked out.

But she could not stop the thoughts within her mind. What would those animated-dead below show her, if they turned their surely water-rotten eyes up to meet hers?

The child-stories said that all who met the gaze of those death-paled orbs would be dragged down to the Depths, to add to the uncounted dead who lay there already. Mist Glass had long since out-grown those fictions… but then again she’d never seen one of them with her own eyes before.

<Nope.> A long-haired sailor next to her said simply, a veteran of many decades at sea. And also one who, just like all others aboard the survivor’s-boat, had gone through a lot this evening and was understandably as on-edge as any other. Frantically shaking her head, she sent again. <No. No. I’ve seen every kind of life that lives on this world, and that isn’t one of them.>

Swallowing hard, Mist Glass caught the eye of the nearest rower. And sent again, with brittle calmness <Back to Finchaser indeed, then. It seems foolish to pursue this siege any further when we already have the port of Sezabi under our control.>

She knew that it was obvious to all around that she was as rattled as any of them… but nobody seemed inclined to raise the point. Even the Marine who had seemed so combative only a moment before appeared to deflate as she shrank away from peering over the side. And kept her mind shut, sending nothing.

Oars raised and lowered rapidly, pulling the narrow leviathan-boat away from the sinking wreck of its former home.

Mist Glass found her gaze drawn to that shattered, wooden ruin. Groaning and rattling even at this distance as the waters slowly claimed it, wooden hull and iron mechanisms alike collapsing under the strain of damage and water pressure.

With Hornguard’s disappearance, that sinking hulk was now the closest thing Mist Glass would ever see to a proper parting-ceremony for the one who had become as a friend to her. The one whose revenge-madness had led them all out here.

Had led her to her own watery fate.

A chill fought its way down Mist Glass’s burned-to-numbness back. One that had nothing to do with the cold evening air, and thus cared little for just how few of her nerve endings there still functioned.

Hornguard’s revenge had gone unfulfilled… and let it remain so.

Mist Glass had years ago set out likewise to avenge her slain brother… but surely after all of this his ever-cheerful memory could be laid to rest? What had been gained by it all, save for more death and destruction?

She shook her head, injecting a sense of finality into the gesture that would hopefully balm her uneasy spirit. No, surely whatever price this barbarian ‘Archbrook’ must have paid to secure the services of such creatures as had been seen here tonight was revenge enough. The stories gave one enough of a guess as to what that price might have been.

Mist Glass let her crew pull her ever-closer to Finchaser, all the while her shell-shocked mind pulled itself together enough to plan her next move. They would fall back to port Sezabi immediately, for one thing. After that… well, Mist Glass and Hornguard had already laid out what they planned to do with their conquered cities, after all. Redrock remained unconquered, yes, but most certainly crippled.

She could use that.

Life went on, after all; the ultimate disrespect to her fallen friend would surely have been to instead throw away what Hornguard had already gained here in Beleri.

...Right?
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Re: [Fanfiction, In Progress] New Horizons, New Seas

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And that's the end of poor Hornguard, dragged down and crushed under the metaphorical *and* literal weight of her own revenge-mania.

One more chapter of the story proper to wrap things up, and then a distant epilogue to show what sort of a mark all of this left on Taben's history. (And then a non-canon joking second epilogue, which I'll probably post anyways because it's funny!)
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Suddenly discovered that I managed to miss the update. To be fair, real life has kept me busy for the last four days. I'm looking forward to the end of the story.

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Chapter Fourteen: Settling In

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[Some time later]

“Like that?” Dovindr asked, sitting back from the marks he’d scratched into the private courtyard’s gravelly ground. He glanced aside and eyed the near-identical carvings next to him, in front of which Sun Master crouched with an air of self-satisfaction about him.

Both men turned to look up at Aunt Frida, who cocked her head to evaluate their writings. Eventually, she nodded. “Yes, that’s right.” She smiled down at them, and turned to Sun Master in particular. “I think that each of you can soon try writing on this ‘paper’ of your people; you both appear ready for it.”

Before the elf-man could answer, Dovindr interjected with a shrug “Beats carving them into stones, I guess.”

Sun Master glanced aside, raising one eyebrow in a pointed gesture and smiling thinly. “I would think that you would have enjoyed that method all the more. You would be better at it than me, for one thing.”

Snorting, Dovindr rolled his shoulder to try and work some of the aches out of his muscles. “Enjoy it? Not after all the exercises Rozelsarad has me running through. I think she wants me to become stronger than Father, at this rate.”

He chose not to comment on his grudging recognition that the diminutive elf-man still had a better rune-writing hand than Dovindr did. As useful as it would surely be for recording ‘secret messages’, it still smarted that Sun Master had, well, mastered the runes before Dovindr. They weren’t even his own people’s script!

“Perhaps she does, yes.” The Clan’s spymaster grinned wryly, before his smile then disappeared. When he spoke again, it was in a lower voice as if he feared being overheard “You know why, of course. She still doesn’t like the idea of you putting yourself—”

Dovindr held up one hand to forestall the rest, turning aside while he searched for how to properly answer. He eyed the rest of the small courtyard, so recently built here behind the Clan’s main hall. Nestled between it and the cliffs behind them, hidden from the sight of any others walking through Redrock. There was even the faint track where he’d decided to carve a new route for Rozelsarad to climb up to reach her favorite point at the waterfall’s mouth. A track which he’d let sit unfinished for some time now, admittedly, after discovering just how much work rock-breaking was. But he’d get back to it.

“Yes, she never lets me hear the end of it.” He admitted, watching as young Halfdan sprinted across the gravel with the manic energy that only a child of that cousin’s age could manage. Running up to his mother, and wrapping arms around her leg that were now almost long enough to meet at the fingertips. Dovindr let the sight — such an oddly normal one, here in elf-land where he now found his home — calm him. He eventually turned back to Sun Master. “But I’ve made my mind up, all the same. I am glad that she sees me as someone in whom she can confide with great privacy… but I insist on doing more than just that for my adopted Clan.”

“If you are certain, then.” the elf-man glanced over at Frida, who had understandably become distracted once more with her young child. Then back to Dovindr, and without having to say anything both men turned to walk back inside.

Perhaps Dovindr was learning some of this ‘sanzai’ speaking the elfs used!

With a thin smile still on his face, he followed his short law-Grandfather into the shady interior. Specifically, the reconstructed area that had been set aside for the mortal men — and one woman, and one child — to be their private dwelling within the village. They were not kept within its boundaries, — not now while only others of Clan Whirlpool were to be found inside Redrock — but it was a place large enough that they could live comfortably within its broad confines for some time. Yet it was also small enough that it would be easy for one walking through the village outside not to realize that there was an entire separate compound located behind these innocuous walls linking buildings that just happened to lack doors on one side.

And if Rozelsarad’s plan was to work right, that hidden design would indeed be occasionally tested.

The scrape of iron — or rather this ‘dolo’ metal of the elfs’ crafting, far stronger still — against bone came to him even before his eyes adjusted. In a chair leaned against the back wall sat Eadberht, the knife in his skilled hand slowly peeling away from a length of leviathan-bone all of the parts which didn’t look like a hand. A small hand, at that… an elf-woman’s hand.

It was a small gift that the old sailor had promised to a maimed ‘friend’ of his whom he had met after the bloody siege of several seasons ago, but it seems that he was determined to see it through.

Eadberht glanced up and aside at Dovindr and Sun Master as they passed, watching them from under one bushy eyebrow. Nodding without a word, he returned to his steady work.

“You will have a chance soon enough, you know.” Grandfather’s soft words crackled loud through the quiet. "The smith-village of Elerba has been... late in sending their tribute of swords to our arsenals. Archbrook has called for them to send an emissary to explain this error, and she wishes for that messenger to receive an appropriate greeting when she arrives."

“What?” It took a moment for Dovindr’s thoughts to churn their way back to the earlier conversation, even only moments ago. But then, it certainly had felt that life had gotten so much more complex in the time since the ‘Amenalid’ raid on his elf-woman’s Clan home. “Ah, that. Yes. As practiced, I will be ready.”

He wracked his mind for the lessons on the neighboring elf-settlements. Elerba... yes. He nodded to himself. That rather non-martial group would be a good option to first test his idea on how to maintain Clan Whirlpool's aura of dread among the other elf-peoples here. Well, his idea and Sun Master's; the shorter man had a very good knack for such manipulations and had loved the idea once its first outline had been presented to him.

And Dovindr couldn't wait to see if the plan worked!

Sun Master fixed him with another unreadable look, even as the older elf led him on through the building, into the spymaster’s private office. “You are certain?”

“Certain.” Dovindr echoed, pulling back his shoulders. By his count, he was nearly nineteen by now, after all! And after the mid-’summer’ battle, nobody would say that he was not a man. Not now when he had two obvious signs to point to: the slight limp to his step that would forever tell of his gun-wound taken at enemy hands, and also the Clan’s new Chief having chosen him for herself.

That last one still felt a… bit strange, admittedly. Then again, as he thought with a growing smile, there were worse fates for a young man out chasing adventure far from his homeland than being ‘taken’ by an elf-princess!

His grin deepened. And after all, if the joint plans that Rozelsarad, Sun Master, and he had put together worked as well as they hoped, she would indeed be an elf-queen soon enough. No mere village chief, however feared her people may be.

He nodded to himself, his fingers dropping without conscious thought to lace themselves over his stomach.

Yes… this new life would do most nicely.

///////

[A few years later]

<Halt engine.> their small messenger-ship’s captain ordered with the boredom of one who had given such a routine command a great many times.

Yet these were not ‘routine’ circumstances!

A soft nudge at her shoulder jerked Crimson from her thoughts, as Ironwind pointedly sent across the resulting privacy <A Diplomat never allows herself to be seen to worry.> She nodded her head forwards to the flag which fluttered proudly atop the banner-mast projecting from the ship’s bow. In boldly-painted letters cast amidst an interlocked pair of formerly-foreign city symbols, that banner proclaimed this vessel to be a formal diplomatic craft of the new Union of Sezabi.

Of course, the fact that it was also the only diplomatic craft of that recently-forged ‘nation’ did perhaps not need to be pointed out too loudly. Ironwind finished with <You represent the finest from two peoples; do not let them down.>

Despite herself, Crimson’s eyes darted briefly towards the planks under her feet. The decking that had just coasted to a halt after sailing deep into Redrock’s bay, tying up alongside the much-feared harbor of Clan Whirlpool itself!

She tried not to think of just how many of her ‘people’ — well, Ironwind’s people, at the time — still lay at the bottom of that cliff-lined body of water, far below the innocent-looking deck under her feet. <I will… try, of course.> She swallowed, punctuated by the thudding of the ship’s boarding-ramp against the harbor. <But it is not so easy as that.>

Ironwind only shrugged. <Not the first time I’ve been to this place. Wasn’t anything worse than just a tough battle then, and that was when it was open warfare.>

Easy for her to say. <Because you were on the ship that actually came back. Never saw the creatures that they say—>

<Overreaction.> Ironwind waved one hand dismissively. <An understandable overreaction, yes, but irrational all the same. We in Finchaser scoured the waters that night and the next day for any sign of these ‘melor,’ but none were to be found. This Chief Archbrook mounted an unexpectedly-fierce attack upon Wavestrider, to be sure, and perhaps some of the warriors joining her surprised the marines with a lotai far stronger than they’d expected. They fired the ship and sent most of her crew to the Depths with that attack, an admittedly impressive accomplishment. And after such a shock it is indeed not surprising that blast-addled minds would react so at seeing a body or two float past them, half-drifted to the Depths already.>

Crimson eyed her fellow emissary doubtfully. But chose not to respond in direct thoughts, unsure if she could keep them… proper. After all, she’d seen the way that the battered survivors of that attack had appeared, even days later when they had returned to Sezabi.

And even now, years later, Crimson could still see etched into her mind’s eye the way that that single, overcrowded ship had dragged itself back into the harbor of her home port. She’d been young and hotheaded enough at the time to see that as weakness rather than exhaustion, and within days found herself organizing the other warriors of her neighborhood to storm the Southerner’s bastion across the harbor.

Thankfully, she hadn’t been the first one to actually arrive at the shore… where the others who had preceded her demonstrated with great finality that Southern rifle-fire and cannon remained most effective here, no matter what battle elsewhere they may have just lost.

The threat of those Southern weapons seemed enough even to ward off the Whirlpool warriors who had appeared atop the cliffs west of the town the next day. A silent standoff that ended with not so much as a single shot or even thought exchanged; the enemy warriors had simply disappeared with the evening sun. Yet their message had been delivered all the same: the belief that their Clan must have suffered grievous battle-losses was clearly wrong, for them to have sent such a host here overland. A host that must have departed many days before that great siege, for them to have made it all the way to Sezabi while trudging slowly through the snow.

Sezabi had received that unsent message most clearly. Both stranded Amenalid and resentful, occupied Belerid now had a common enemy, one that yet may overtop them both. An alliance, a Union, was needed… and in no time at all the usual whirlwind politics of Sezabi had absorbed the Amenalid garrison as merely the latest in the long string of cast-offs who had made their home in the City.

Crimson snorted. The foreigners had the guns, but her people had the organization.

It had taken several years after that for her to work her way into the joint leadership that had begun to set down roots within the conquered town, but she had made it. It wasn’t just her family’s background that had seen her be elected as leader of her neighborhood after all, not at her age. That talent for politicking, her pride throughout her life, had clearly worked as well among Southerners-turned-‘Sezabids’ as it had ever done among her fellow native Belerids. Then again, perhaps not quite: was that why the Two Directors had sent her off here as part of the diplomatic party? Someone that wouldn’t be entirely missed, if Clan Whirlpool proved treacherous?

She finally became aware of how the fingers of her left hand were dancing nervously atop the dull-orange plates of her Office’s uniform. Grasping them tightly with her right hand, she sucked in a deep breath, pulled her shoulders back, and marched towards the boarding-plank with the air of one setting off to battle. It was her duty, either way.

Now if only she could ignore the flare of wry humor from Ironwind, walking quietly along behind her in her matching armored-cloak.

///////

The two emissaries of port Sezabi continued onwards, up the winding path to Redrock proper. If they minded the armed escort who walked in lockstep a — barely — polite distance behind them, then they gave no sign.

And if they thought that the grand entrance hall of the meeting-building was perhaps ‘overbuilt,’ with its long corridor lined with a dozen empty archaic armored plate-suits standing on display per side, then they betrayed nothing of their opinions there as well.

Only marched on deeper into the building, with the door creaking loudly closed behind them and their escort.

Several solon later in the empty corridor, one of the empty armored-suits quietly stepped down from its display plinth.

///////

Crimson stood at Ironwind’s side — exactly at her side, neither in front nor in back by even a finger’s-width, as ordered by the duties of her Office — and did her best to maintain a stony face while the senior delegate continued to deliver her City’s message. <And so while we graciously agree to the proposal of your own emissary sent to the City and do indeed confirm that the years-cold formal conflict between our cities has no need to continue, we must insist that the specific terms require further… specification.>

<...Oh?> The smooth and alarmingly calm sanzai of Whirlpool Chief Archbrook poured over her like an icy rip-current playing at her ankles. Not yet a deadly threat… but promising to become one at any moment. The Chief in question sat on the raised chair within the room, high enough to glance down at the two who stood before her. One eyebrow rose, and her left hand curled slightly around the gray-steel staff in her grasp.

A staff that Crimson was increasingly certain had once been the barrel of an Amenalid rifle, now carved extensively over every visible speck of space. Exotic interwoven designs looped and curled around each other, twisting in an eye-catching way as if alive. It would be beautiful… if it hadn’t also been an obviously-intentional sign that the Chief here felt that she could easily afford to turn such a deadly weapon into a mere decoration.

Archbrook’s next sending snapped Crimson’s attention back to her. <No doubt you wish to… clarify the distance out from Sezabi’s walls that Clan Whirlpool does not lay claim to?> Her eyes glinted in the interior lantern-light as she leaned forwards in her high-backed chair. <I thought that my offer was most generous, if anything.>

Even Ironwind paused slightly before responding, although that was perhaps simply her gathering her thoughts for careful delivery. <It is rather the fact that you have chosen to phrase your Clan’s territorial claims in that fashion in the first place, Chief Archbrook.>

<It is nothing but the truth, Ambassador.> She rolled her staff back-and-forth between her fingers, eyes turning from one Sezabid to the other. <All Beleri belongs to Whirlpool. It is out of charity that I allow Sezabi its independence, nothing more.>

That was enough that Crimson found herself bristling at the slight against her people, regardless of her concern over the fact that Archbrook here was clearly being deliberately provocative. A ruler of a most-militant Clan who was obviously trying to draw out your anger was reason to back off and reconsider, not rise to the bait… but any restraint went over the oarlocks when the City was insulted so.

A sting that it seemed even Ironwind felt too, delivered against her adopted home. <For the sake of honesty, Chief, let us be blunt: we all know that each of our peoples remains exhausted after our brief war. The bloodless stand-offs since have not made that worse, yes, but neither have they made it better. The warriors you sent to the City last time saw reason and withdrew, and that was even before the strengthened fortifications which we have since emplaced. We acknowledge also that the other Clans of this island remain — mostly — under your banner, but that will not last if the Directors press the war further into an actual exchange of blows.> With harsh candor, she added <You have more to lose from this than we. Sezabi will have the entire length of the river-inlet from our docks to the ocean waves, or we will see no purpose to this peace. Our warriors stand at-ready; we do not doubt that yours do as well.>

Crimson stared wide-eyed at her fellow ‘diplomat.’ That… wasn’t at all within the boundaries of negotiation given to them by the Directors before leaving home! What was she—?

But before her mind had gotten its thoughts together and ready to send, Archbrook stood up from her seat. Revealing beneath her flowing, golden armor — that famous artifact handed down from her abdicated grandmother, known by feared reputation to all across the Island — the physique of a younger warrior surely still yet to reach her twenty-fifth year.

But it was not with any hint of youthful hesitation that she sent <My warriors do, yes.> Stepping forwards, she hammered her staff into the stone floor with three crisp strikes. Descending from the slight platform atop which her formal chair sat, she walked up to the two defiant Sezabids.

Well, one ‘defiant’ and the other ‘concerned.’ But Crimson flatly refused to let any of her internal turmoil leak out over sanzai, let alone onto her face. Even if Ironwind had perhaps… ‘overstepped’ her orders, the dignity of the City must be upheld.

Archbrook regarded them both slowly, her eyes narrowing slightly as she peered across at the two. <But so do my… other people.> Her eyes darted past them, softening slightly.

Frowning, Crimson turned to follow the Chief’s look.

And immediately flinched back. Taking one quick step away from the empty armor-suit that had soundlessly appeared no more than an arm’s-length behind her. She, Crimson, and Archbrook remained the only ones in the room, so it could only be indeed empty behind the shadows of its lowered visor.

But who had put it there, and why had she not sensed them? Or heard them, for that matter? It still stood on its own, so surely whatever hidden internal bracing kept it from collapsing remained. Yet that would be difficult to move silently, no? And, of course, the single door to this chamber hadn’t been heard to open, either. She took one step to the side, to look past the statue-armor.

The statue’s helmet turned to look at her.

The helmet moved!

Her breath caught, and for a moment she stared past the visor-grill to the shadows within the helmet. The lifeless helmet, that still somehow met her gaze.

Her hand dropped for a sword that very much did not hang from her belt, and which in fact now sat on the other side of that ornate door from her.

She also only belatedly noticed the drawn knives held in the statue’s gauntlets which hung at its side. Knives that shifted minutely, as the lifeless grip that held them securely flexed slightly. Held low… but blades-bare, a clear message.

<What… are you?> She sent, taking another step back from this strange… thing. And noting that Ironwind had done the same, clearly feeling some of the same thoughts running through her mind.

Even before any answer could come, she knew. This was surely the same as had done for the previous attack against Redrock, years ago.

For what else could it be?

<I have… many who owe me their fealty.> Archbrook commented lightly. The narrowness of her sanzai made it obvious that she was hiding something… but then, that hardly needed to be pointed out, now! <The Forest Tribes tithe their finest timbers to Redrock’s ships, the smiths of port Elerba tithe their new-learned ‘breech-rifles’ to Redrock’s warriors… and likewise the very oceans themselves tithe their greatest assassins to the service of Redrock’s Chief.>

Both Sezabids spun about to stare at her in confusion. One simply did not make such an outrageous claim and expect it to be believed! It was obvious that her shaded sanzai was less-than-truthful, anyone could sense that!

If she felt their unsent bafflement, then Archbrook gave no sign. She only stood with both hands on her ornate staff, the fingers of her left hand playing with her right. Specifically, the stump of her right-hand’s middle finger.

Crimson swallowed. That… was the finger which had featured in one-or-two of the credulity-straining stories she’d heard from sailors stopping by at the Port over the last few years. Quite a few of which centered on this warrior who stood before her now. The older tale that the ‘Young Chief’ of the already-feared Clan Whirlpool had once — alone — struck down an entire party of Sezabid warriors sent to intercept her on land had long since faded to boredom, of course.

But the tale telling of how she had surely sacrificed her own finger — blood and bone, freely given — to the Depths themselves in return for their service was still making the rounds even as Crimson’s ship had left the harbor, days ago. Stories that a sailor would share, insisting that she’d received it from a male in the next port down the coast, or a traveler from afar, or any other such hard-to-verify source. But each tale was close enough to the versions that other passing ship-crew would know, versions traded back-and-forth in harbor-halls across the Island.

As if she could read the Sezabid’s mind, Archbrook’s fingers paused in their idle rubbing. Her eyes darted up to pin Crimson in place.

Finally, the once-rebel turned joint-Ambassador found her thoughts. <I think, Chief, that such a boast is...> she gestured behind her, to where the statue — however the trick was done, perhaps the feared impervious lotai of Wavestrider's doom? — was. And then froze, as the corner of her eye caught the telltale lack of steel glinting under lantern-light.

She whirled around.

The statue was gone!

Once more nobody but the three of them stood in the room, Archbrook clearly bold enough not to feel any need for guards even with two emissaries of her foes in the room with her. But perhaps she was right to show such confidence, with an assassin — maybe more than one? — of such a… nature.

Whoever it was inside that statue, she surely could not have sprinted silently to the distant door in the brief time when Crimson’s back was turned. But then where did the animated-statue go?

When no further thoughts proved to be forthcoming, Ironwind finished for her with as much dignity as the Amenal-born warrior could manage. <...Such a boast is perhaps understandable, under the circumstances.>

And what ‘circumstances’! Whoever this assassin was that worked for Archbrook, it had been made most clear that she could indeed come and go with no warning. If she could manage that while wearing such heavy and archaic armor covering her from head to foot, then no doubt more practical clothing could see her infiltrate most any location not under direct and constant visual observation.

And then there was her sheer emptiness. Crimson fought down an instinctive shudder. Her conscious mind insisted that it was simply a freakishly-strong lotai, yes… but her subconscious mind insisted just as strongly that something seemed ‘hollow’ about that assassin. Something missing, something wrong.

As unsettling as it had been when she disappeared in mere solon, Crimson couldn’t quite deny that she was glad to no longer be in such an eerie presence.

<Very well.> Archbrook intoned with obvious satisfaction. <And your Directors may rest at ease: I have no plans to do more than have my people… ‘track’ your vessels as they transit the river out to the ocean.>

‘For now’ hardly needed to be sent. But surely even a perfect-lotai assassin could still only be in one place at a time, and surely there could only be one such warrior with such unbelievable strength of mind!

Crimson’s memories thought back to the hall of armor-suits by this building’s entrance, all of those ‘empty’ displays of antique protection staring down at her with their shadow-filled visors.

...There was only one of them, right?

///////

The outer door rolled closed behind the departing emissaries, sending deep echoes through the stones of the building.

Placing one hand against the table at her side, Archbrook sagged against it, closing her eyes in exhaustion. Even after Grandmother’s drills, it was hard to keep her mind iron-tight for so long, letting not so much as a single stray thought escape to ruin the carefully-crafted image that she had projected. It was hard to be the Chief... to be seen to be the Chief.

A stray whisper of a breeze blew over her, here well inside the building. A thin smile broke out across her tired face.

When she opened her eyes, it was no surprise that a suit of armor stood before her. Idly, she spoke “You’re becoming most good at that, you know.”

The painted sigil of her great-great-Grandmother Sorremallinar which was splashed across the ornate helmet split, as one hand rose to lift the steel grill aside. A pale, grinning face could now be seen faintly through the shadows… if one knew what to look for, who to look for. “And you’ve taken to your Grandmother’s lessons quite well, by my impression.” Dovindr said, before pausing. “Uh, from what it looked like ‘from the outside,’ that is.”

She snorted, nodding once. “It… worked, I believe. That will be enough for now.” Archbrook took a step back, eyeing Dovindr head-to-foot in the carefully-adapted armor. Steel hip-plates now guarded mostly padding underneath, any difference in his build there hidden underneath an exaggerated armored girdle. Broader shoulders had been shielded behind a blood-blue cloak drawn tight around, and the helmet-padding removed to fit his squared-off head.

Rather a clever bit of metalwork, all the more because it had been done by trusted — albeit inexpert — Whirlpool smiths rather than the Island-famous artisans from down the coast. But it had succeeded all the same; one would have to look quite carefully indeed to tell that this armor was no longer fitted for a loroi warrior.

“They won’t be back, then?”

“They will leave us alone; I am satisfied with that for the time being.” She walked past Dovindr and, knowing what to listen for, could barely hear the tread of his soft-padded boots across the stone floor following behind her. She reached out to press two fingers against a specific palm-sized section of the wall, framed by a particular loop of the decorative waves that circled the room.

The small divot dimpled inwards, followed a moment later by the entire wall panel rotating inwards to reveal a person-sized chamber. Not much more than person-sized, mind you. “At least you did not have to wait overly long in the alcove.”

Sanzai-mute or not, his eye-roll of exaggerated frustration behind her was receivable all the same. “And I thought Father’s arguments with fellow-merchants took ‘forever’.”

Archbrook laughed quietly, even as she carefully pulled the hidden-door closed once more. “Negotiations between Clans — especially handling that strange hybrid-city, Sezabi — are perhaps somewhat more complex than merchants arguing over a price.”

“You’ve never seen Father haggle with Old Bragi back home. Sometimes they’d start in the morning and still be swearing at each other come nightfall.” A pattern of dull metal-on-leather clinks sounded from behind her, as Dovindr began the slow process of removing his customized armor. “Only ever took a break for a meal and friendly idle-chatter, then it was back to the shouting right afterwards.”

She helped him with the back-straps, lifting the heavy plates free and leaning them against the wall at her feet. Really, she could easily understand how great-great-Grandmother had first earned the Clan such a fearsome reputation, if she had been enough of a giant to carry such weight of steel around casually!

That it didn’t seem to actually bother Dovindr either brought a strange flare of pride to Archbrook’s chest. Such an un-male-like quality, his strength, but charming in its own way.

Finally mostly freed of his bulky armor, Dovindr turned around to face her. "You know, I think that Halfdan's almost ready to take his place in the welcoming-hall the next time. He's grown enough, and I trust him not to giggle when holding still anymore. That'll really make his day if you finally let him. And—"

But now that she could see his face more clearly, something stood out to her. Archbrook reached out to swipe one finger across his cheek, silencing him. And nodded at the slightly-coarse texture scratching at her fingertip, glinting with a sheen of sweat from his time within the all-enclosing armor. “You are in need of a shearing.”

"A shave." he corrected reflexively, as always. A shadow crossed his brows, and he cupped his own chin to feel along there as well. “It’s not that bad, is it? I couldn’t even see anything there in the reflection-glass this morning.”

And she knew he certainly did look. But while she’d learned to find Dovindr most interesting despite his decidedly un-male-like height and strength, she drew the line at him sporting these scratchy face-hairs. It was still entertaining to see such strange growths on Gorm and Lucas, yes, but not so much when it was her male’s face.

It was a — minor — argument that the two of them went over quite regularly. He made the right choice every time, even though Dovindr clearly envied his father and uncle’s now chest-length ‘beards.’ But it would perhaps not hurt to remind him of just why he kept coming to that decision...

“Yes, it is ‘that’ bad.” Archbrook reached up and clasped her hands behind Dovindr’s neck. Grinning slyly up at him, she spoke “For it would still itch when I do this.”

With that, she pulled her male’s head down to meet hers. Lips pressed together, the familiar delightful warmth of his skin against hers drawing a matching heat from deep inside.

Perhaps today’s arranged review with Grandfather of exactly what had been agreed between Whirlpool and Sezabi could wait a little while longer. She could admit to herself that she’d clearly been avoiding leaving the ‘audience-room’ to dive back into politics.

Just a short… break before she returned to her duties.

Archbrook smiled into the kiss.

It’s good to be the Chief.
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Re: [Fanfiction, In Progress] New Horizons, New Seas

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And there's the final scene from Archbrook and Dovindr's perspective! Just one more chapter to go, an Epilogue set quite a few centuries later and shows how their strange, nascent Empire went.
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Of course, that's not much of a mystery to anyone who's read the Insider page on the Sister Worlds... where it notes that the continent of Beleri is ruled from Port Sezabi. Oh well, they gave it a good try.
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Re: [Fanfiction, In Progress] New Horizons, New Seas

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Shear the prickly face-hairs! Brilliant!

And now that Archbrook has come face to face with her latest enemy, the beard, imagine the horror she will have to endure when she meets her greatest nemesis dominating her beloved’s earthy terrain:

<Deep inhalation> Chest hair!

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Epilogue: A Life on the Ocean Wave

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[1689 SYU (2038 AD)]

[In a winter storm on Taben]


Lightning flashed outside the cockpit windows, darting horizontal across the driving rain that hammered against the shock-proof panels.

Inside, the droning whine of the turbines was just beginning to worm its way into Tenoin Narrat Medis’s skull even through her helmet’s supposed ‘soundproofing.’

She shook her head irritably, as if that would banish the ache slowly building between her ears. But carefully held her thoughts inside, not letting any of them escape out to bother the pilots up front. Her diral had termed her ‘Steady’ for a reason, after all, a reputation that she found herself having to work hard to maintain on days like this.

Thankfully, just as the shuttle rumbled and creaked its way through yet another rough air pocket, a new update flashed onto her screen here in the rear-compartment here behind the pilot seats.

<Update from Tracking.> she called out, her heart dropping as she read the terse message. <Our target’s transponder confirms she’s foundered. No lifeboat beacons, either.>

Arrir Mezantiie didn’t so much as twitch, her gaze clearly locked on the displays at her piloting station. With sanzai only barely tinged by the great effort of flying straight through such a once-in-a-decade storm, ‘Sand-Toss’ drawled <’Fishing trip’ it is, then. Medis, your diving-cable is at ready to go inspect any floating wreckage?>

<As always.> Medis confirmed, with one reflexive glance across her station readouts. The winch checked out, the stabilizers reported ready, and the cable-spool itself she had checked over just before takeoff. Still, she shuddered as a sudden cross-wind slammed the shuttle hard to one side, rattling loudly. <Not looking forwards to going for a dip, though, not in deep winter.>

<Look on the upward side: at this rate surely you’ll get recognition soon as the foremost tenoin on the homeworld. You’ve been in-and-out of the water more than a false-fish, after all!> Sand-Toss recycled the same old joke once more.

Not like there was terribly much else to do while their shuttle hammered its way through the raging thunderclouds, shimmying and bouncing like it was trying to throw its three-warrior crew out through the hull.

So Medis simply recycled the same old response. <Sure, and now I know how those eager-to-bite fish feel. I keep trying to get out of the water, and you keep throwing me back in.>

All three aboard chuckled at the joke which had gone stale probably years ago, even dour Narrat Traveler in the co-pilot’s seat joining in. Anything helped to break the tension in a flight such as this.

Probably especially because they were building themselves up for what they knew they’d find. A wreckage-field at best, marking the spot where the doomed fishing-trawler had succumbed to this freak storm. Something lifeless, at least, with Medis only dipping in to confirm what the sensors had shown.

At worst… bodies.

Those were always the worst to dive in and recover. Empty floating husks, all life hammered out of them by the pitiless pounding waves. Proof that even in a modern world of shuttlecraft and interstellar flights, the very same world-ocean that gave all daughters of Taben life also was the greatest risk to their survival.

<How many aboard?> Traveler’s sanzai came blunt and clinical, as always.

<Five.> Medis replied without having to check the report. An ill omen, of course. Acting on its own, one hand traced along her chest to follow the beyond-heavy tiny dagger that hung there on its thin strip of fiber-weed. Dalid had taken the ship today, below in the storm. But really, they should have known better than to sail out on a storm-warning day with such a number aboard.

The high-nosed fools from the other Sister Worlds might disparage the thought, yes, but any daughter of Taben knew that five was an unlucky number. Five was ‘T’ after all… T for ‘Tonon.’

‘Death.’

The gray clouds barely-visible through the pounding rain streaking across the cockpit windows did not change, but Sand-Toss announced all the same <We’re approaching the site, dropping through one-thousand mannal above sea level. Radar shows only one contact, a small one. Looks like maybe half a lifeboat, floating tail-up and drifting in the wind.> Her thoughts chilled. <No heat signature.>

Empty, then. Medis gritted her teeth, and not only because she was bracing herself to slide open the side-door next to her. <Jumping anyways, keep one-hundred above the wave-tops.> It was her duty to confirm the loss of all five civilians aboard the ship here today, just as much as it was her — much more pleasant — duty in better times to pull living survivors from their stricken craft.

But one could hardly ‘choose’ their duties each day.

<Steady, you ask? A tall order in a blow like this.> Sand-Toss drawled, even as she brought the shuttle to a near-perfect hover in utter defiance of the howling winds. <Run out as much slack as you can; we’ll send a warning down if we have to lift up suddenly to keep away from a tall freak-wave.>

Like the one that had likely doomed the fishing-ship in the first place. Medis double- and triple-checked her suit seals, confirming that it would take a truly staggering blow to flood her armor.

Of course, Taben delighted in dealing such hammer-blows from her oceans on days like this.

Her checks complete, Medis braced herself against the sliding-door and leaned hard into it. Not because it was tough to open, but because what would happen once she did.

The winds tore at her as soon as the slightest crack opened in the side of the shuttle, ripping inside as if furious that three more souls dared defy the hungry Depths today.

Taking a deep breath, Medis clung tight to the edge of the opening. Cycled her suit-vents closed.

And leapt out into the raging storm.

One solon of free-fall.

Two.

Three.

Fo—

Splash.

The surging waves closed over her head, and the chill of the Depths themselves battered at the thermal lining of her armor. She felt the faint vibration as her heater-elements kicked into high gear, yet she could still feel the chill.

Best to work fast, then.

With a careful tap of one toe inside her boot, she activated the thrusters strapped around her ankles. Powered through the waters, fighting to keep on an even course and heading.

Mostly succeeded, and eventually drew near the single piece of flotsam that was all which was left of the sunken ship. <Looks like a life-boat, all right. Been smashed in from the top, no doubt a—>

Her eyes shot wide as something pinged at the corner of her mind.

<What?> Traveler barked from the co-pilot’s seat far overhead.

Medis took a solon to confirm what she was sensing before broadcasting incredulously <Oh shred me, there’s someone in there!> She urged every pilo of strength from her suit’s thrusters, surging faster towards the barely-floating wreckage. All while one hand reflexively reached up to the high-strength cable fastened securely to her upper back, her thumb flicking open the latch that secured the rescue-float from deploying. In an instant, it inflated and swelled up to a cushioning, broad base. <Faint and fading, but they’re alive!>

<Must be barely alive, for the sensors to miss them.> Sand-Toss noted. A spike of warmth drifted through her sanzai. <Well spotted, Steady.>

Medis ignored her, too focused on scrambling around the sharp-edged bulk of the smashed lifeboat. Carefully keeping the rescue-float away with one hand, she dipped her shoulder underneath one slightly-less-sharp section and flipped the wreckage over so that she could reach inside. <It’s a faint signature. They’re unconscious, but—>

Her eyes widened as she saw who sat inside, curled tight and unmoving into the very prow of the destroyed boat. In thin, casual clothing that was surely no protection at all from the cold — but which was likely just what she’d happened to be wearing when the boat was dragged under — shivered a—

<It’s a child!> Medis exclaimed, carefully reaching out to pull the unconscious girl into the rescue-float. <Can’t be more than five or so.> She yanked hard on the signal-cable, even as she added strongly <We’re secure; lift away!>

The far-above winch snapped into life and yanked the two of them free of the clinging, hungry waters. All while Traveler sent <Confirm that; a child? Were there any on the fishing-ship’s manifest?>

Medis didn’t even dignify that with the obvious answer. It was a civilian fishing-ship, and not even a large one at that. No failed-warrior with enough pull to actually afford a child-license would be caught dead on such a ship… and perhaps that was wise.

It seemed that the child’s mother had some explaining to do… but then she was well beyond any such worldly cares right now. Leaving only this forgotten memory, a fragile life as the only survivor of the entire doomed ship.

<Who are you?> Medis murmured privately to the child, even as she reflexively checked the unconscious girl’s vital signs. Hypothermia and exhaustion, low pulse, and a few heavy bruises. Nothing that the med-suite aboard the shuttle couldn’t handle, thankfully.

As the welcome bulk of the shuttle — yet so tiny and fragile against the raging storm all around them — closed in from above, Medis nodded thoughtfully to herself.

The sixth member of the crew, ‘off-the-lists’ as it were. Surviving against all odds. No longer T-for-Tozon, death.

But A-for-Annen.

‘Behold’ indeed… behold a miracle.

///////

<I’m aware of what the bloody Imperial boot says, Baistil!> Medis all-but-shouted as her temper got the better of her. She shot out one hand, pointing furiously through the wall of her CO’s office and towards the medical wing. <But this isn’t the cursed crowded streets of Deinar; this is Taben!>

Across from her, Tenoin Baistil Highdome ran one hand over her face, rubbing at her temples before rising across the tall forehead that had earned her her name to pull wearily at her ear-length hair. <The census reporting is still the same, Narrat.> she sent levelly enough, but Medis could feel that her frustration was not much less than the Narrat’s own. <That child’s going to appear in a head-count one way or another, and then we’ll have some seed-counter straight from Toridas standing over our backs and demanding answers. And she won’t like the truth.>

Even while a corner of Medis’s mind knew that it was unfair of her to explode at her former diral-leader like this, she still needed someone to vent to. Or vent ‘at.’ <What do they want me to do, fly out and toss her back?>

Highdome glanced up at her, leaning back in her desk chair. In the glaring light of the overhead projector, the faint bags that never quite left her tired eyes rose into stark relief. <They used to do that on Deinar, you know. Some places, they still do.>

<Savages.> Medis swore bitterly.

Highdome did not contradict her.

For several solon, all went still and silent in the patrol-base office. Only the distant pounding of the surf against the cliff-shore could be heard, as the last few dregs of the storm wasted their rage against Beleri’s battered coast.

Then <Look.> Medis drummed her fingers against her superior’s desk. <It was five years ago that we all went down to the monastery, right?>

Highdome nodded slowly, eyes narrowing in obvious thought.

<You conceived your son there, and most of the rest of the diral got daughters to boast of.> Medis drove straight back at one of the few parts of her diral that hadn’t gone quite as she’d wanted. <I still say the male I got assigned was faulty, or something. So...> she reached out to tap one finger against the yet-to-be-filed Identification Record projected on the desk-screen. Resting her fingertip against the pale face framed by a short fuzz of sea-blue hair, the child that certainly looked like the oh-so-Belerid daughter she had dreamed of when she’d graduated with the rest of her diral. <perhaps there was an… error in the paperwork? You’ve said it before, I’m not exactly ‘officer material.’ Maybe I misplaced the birth-records of my daughter, and they simply… took a while to be found and filed properly?>

That got a rise out of Highdome, the perpetually-overworked Baistil of a remote rescue-station actually half-rising from her chair. Her eyes bored into Medis’s. <You would do this, for a civilian’s child? You’ll have to face punishment for ‘misplacing’ paperwork, you know.>

<What are they going to do, bust me back down to ‘Narrat’?> the Narrat asked wryly. <Again, that is. My rank tabs have gone back-and-forth between white and cobalt so many times, you could stick them on a wingtip and call it a strobe-light.> Then she sobered up. <And besides, this child is already a warrior, isn’t she? She’s gone for her dip in the waters, same as any diral girl at her graduation.>

<A bit less ceremoniously, but yes.> Highdome noted dryly. Then she dropped her gaze back down to the image on her desk, the picture taken through the frosted-glass cover of the Intensive Care machine’s dome. The child who had not quite yet regained consciousness after her ordeal… but had clearly been a tough one, civilian mother or no, to have survived at all in the first place.

The Baistil looked back up, and a thin smirk briefly banished the exhaustion-lines from her face as she noted <You know, I think she does remind me of you already. Breaking the rules the very day she was born, and refusing to just roll over when the entire world turns against her.>

<See, that’s the spirit!> Medis winked at her former diral-leader, sensing that her friend was indeed coming around to actually going ahead with the scheme. <This daughter of mine’s got a lot of my hopes riding on her, of course. Who knows, maybe she’ll actually manage to both earn and keep an Arrir’s cobalt-tabs!>

<That would risk proving that she couldn’t possibly actually be your daughter.> Highdome deadpanned.

<Ooh!> Medis tried her best to scowl at her friend’s mock-insult, but couldn’t quite manage it. <Better be careful, Forehead!> She dropped back into teasing diral-names for a moment, giddy as the iron weights which had dragged down her heart for the last few bima finally broke free and fell away. Pausing in the doorway on her way out, she tossed back over her shoulder <She might even come for your rank some day!>

<Now that would be a sight!> the Baistil’s laugh chased her out of the office.

///////

[A few short years later, on a Belerid beach]

The sun finally dipped below the horizon off to the west, bringing the frenetic work to a halt.

In the wind-shelter of the few planks of future-hull that they’d managed to install just yet, the diral huddled together out of the rain.

And, as all of such young age are wont to do, stubbornly refused to actually go to sleep even though there was little else for them to do.

Which meant one thing: stories.

<This rain is nothing!> declared one, pointedly keeping towards the outside of the huddle. <I met my mom once, and she told me she’d once sailed through a storm with waves so tall, she couldn’t even see the clouds overhead!>

After a moment for that image to settle in, for all of the girls to picture the sight of literal walls of water stretching up to the sky on every side, a single thought pierced the story <Your mother is an excavation-supervisor in Amenal. She works in a submarine.>

<Oh. Well, yes.> sent the first with a tinge of embarrassment, even if she did belatedly join in the laughter going around all the same.

Silence stretched a bit longer, with only the hissing patter of rain on shore-sand to mark the passing solon. Then <Remember when we visited the castle-museum last season before the diral?>

<...Yes?> echoed out the others as one.

<And how I almost forgot my winter-coat back inside when we left, and I had to run back for it?>

<Yes!> the sending came again, this time limned with teasing memories of the embarrassment of their creche-mate. How their assigned shuttle-pilot had stood for what felt like a thousand solon in the ever-present Amenalid rain, pointedly checking her suit’s chronometer and grumbling about things like ‘orbital transfer windows’ and ‘refueling hubs’ and other concepts that were wont to pass straight through a young child’s mind without triggering any recognition.

And also letting fly with a few choice muttered words and terms that the girls had taken careful note of for later. It had been educational!

<Anyways,> the child continued pointedly, <when I went back to look there was another group being led through the old museum! It was two warriors in scary black armor, and—>

<Mizol?> asked one, sending the name of that most-mysterious caste about which their instructors had never exactly had much ‘nice’ to say.

<Well, yes, but that’s not the interesting part!> a faint paff came as one child-sized boot stamped at the wet sand in frustration at the interruption. <The interesting part was that they were leading two aliens! They were floating, and had four arms, and their legs didn’t touch the ground when they moved!>

<!> One of the others cried out, as she dug into her backpack for the precious, heavy weight that was sheltered there. <I’ve heard of those! I know them!> She finally pulled out the single datapad granted to their diral, their life-line linking them to the outside world of civilization. Fingers danced across the glowing keyboard, and her thoughts faded down into concentration.

<Should we be using that for this?> Another asked, nodding to the electronic device. <We don’t want to run down the battery when it’s still cloudy out; who knows when we’ll have enough sun for the panels again.>

<I’m not linking it to the network!> the operator insisted. <It’s just a local lookup, on-disk. Barely touches the battery; it’ll be fine.>

A soft rustle of plastic-leather jumpsuit as the questioner shrugged. <You'd know, I guess. You’re the one who’s never let that ‘pad out of your grip since we got it.>

<She’s going to bring it with her when we graduate!> teased another. <We go to the monastery then; she’s going instead to the supply center to get a bigger screen for it!>

Laughter echoed out, briefly driving away the gentle rain’s patter.

Sending a bit more forcibly than was perhaps necessary, the ‘pad-holder announced <That alien was a ‘Historian’! Here, look!> She held out the screen for all to see.

But didn’t entirely let go, keeping one hand on the device while the others crowded around to look. Just to be safe, of course.

<You saw one of those? In the flesh?> a child asked, impressed. <They seem fierce!>

The coat-forgetter admitted <I think they were maybe not actually ‘there,’ not really. I could see them, but not sense them.>

<They were invisible!> declared the submariner’s daughter from earlier. <Like Death Wind!>

<I think instead they were computer projections.> the ‘pad-holder mused.

Incredulity lined the retort <Death Wind wasn’t a projection! She lived, like, a thousand years ago!>

<Not her, sand-for-brains! I meant—>

<Who is ‘Death Wind’?> a curious voice sounded out for the first time that evening, from the edge of the group.

Silence fell, punctuated only by the soft tapping of young fingers against electronic keys.

Then finally someone sent <You don’t know who Death Wind is? Were you raised in the forest or something?>

An empty question, for even the children — or perhaps especially the children — knew exactly where this particular diral-sister came from. The one who wasn’t really supposed to be here at all. The only one for whom all had agreed on a spoken-name already.

Sea-Reject.

But despite the doubtful attitudes each future-warrior had towards the civilian’s-child in their midst — as weighed against the fact that she was still their diral-sister, and none could find fault in her labors alongside them anyways — the mention of such a famous warrior could not help but bring the conversation onto another peak.

<She’s only the Drowned Warrior’s Daughter!> One girl insisted sarcastically, her thoughts carrying the trace of an Elerba brogue about them.

Another disagreed, her sanzai clearly hailing from the Amenalid archipelago. <No, she’s the Hungering Deeps themselves granted form!>

<She was the first mizol ever born on Taben, is what I was told!> A rare off-worlder sent. <It says so, in the story-’vids!>

<Nonsense!> one mind shouted to be heard above all the others, her sanzai flavored with a homegrown Sezabi drawl. <He was just a really, really good spy!>

That much of an unbelievable proclamation managed to shock the others into silence.

A silence that was only broken by the 'pad-holder, who was clearly sending each thought as she read it from the screen glowing into her eyes <’’Death Winds’ is the name given to a covert operative or group of such working for the last Chief of Clan Whirlpool, known to be active between approximately the years 185 Before Unification to 120 Before Unification.’>

<See!> someone hissed. <Like a thousand years ago!>

<That’s closer to two-thousand, biscuit-muncher.>

The reader continued, a little louder <’No direct description of this person or persons has ever been verified, and few ever so much as claimed to have actually met her or them. What is known is that they were able to maintain a perfect lotai even during close combat, a feat that was previously unknown to the pre-Unification societies of Taben.’>

<A Taben mizol, I knew it!>

<’The short duration of time in which this person or persons was known to operate is often assumed to be indicative of the great strain placed upon anyone attempting such a feat of mental strength without amplification or specialized training. The fact that such abilities disappeared then and were not seen again in Taben society goes to show the sheer impracticality of maintaining a corps of psi-specialists before the invention—‘>

<Oh, skip that part, it’s boring stuff for listels.> one requested. <Get to the part where she’s a male!>

<What!?> echoed through the diral, who immediately crowded even closer around the datapad-holder, jostling her elbow as she scrolled lower through the article. A lot lower, past quite a long series of entries using words she wasn’t quite sure of.

She marked those for later.

<Here it is. ‘These long-accepted theories of Listel Sazset Eastvolley have recently been challenged by a novel idea first proposed by Remirlaet Nilodi Morning Mist. He has claimed that the few physical descriptions of Death Wind’s distinctive and clearly-customized armor do not match even an unusually tall and strong warrior, but instead are more similar to—‘> the child frowned, leaning forwards and peering at the night-bright screen as she sounded out the unfamiliar word <’—‘gigantism’ as it is known to be expressed in males.’>

<See!>

<’The technical plausibility of this claim has yet been only tentatively confirmed by biologists working from Morning Mist’s own homeworld of Perrein. However, both of the only historically-documented cases of such genetic abnormalities also lived on that world and the likelihood of such extreme drift occurring as well on Taben is judged to be very low. However, a set of Elerba full-plate armor supposedly associated with—’>

<Death Wind was totally a male, see!> insisted the same diral-sister. <Just like gigantic and misshapen and everything. That’s why he always hid his face and never let anyone see him, because he was so ugly that whenever he showed his face to someone, they died!>

<That does seem useful for an assassin.> deadpanned another.

<Yeah!> Agreed the former, deliberately missing the other’s tone.

The datapad-reader finally came to the end of the article she’d found, and turned from the glowing display to face Sea-Reject. Approximately, anyways, guided more by her own sanzai senses than anything as her eyes were still blinded by the screen’s glare. <Does that answer your question?>

Even before the cobalt-haired odd-sister-out could respond, another answered for her. <Yeah! Thanks, listel!>

<You are welcome.> the reader sent serenely, attempting to simultaneously nod graciously and also glare at her teasing sister.

Neither quite worked.

<Hey,> interjected one who had been quiet until then, <he’s like you, Sea-Reject! He also wasn’t supposed to be a warrior!>

<The article did say that Death Wind is considered to be one of the driving forces behind Clan Whirlpool lasting so long, even as Sezabi modernized far faster than them.> the reader couldn’t help but point out. She hadn’t just blindly skipped over the intervening pages, after all; she’d caught some of them. <Chief Archbrook was a great fighter and a good leader, yes, but Death Wind—> she chose not to grant weight to either theory on just ‘who’ the mysterious figure (or figures!) had been <—was a great spy. That’s what the records all say!>

<Yes,> the submariner’s-daughter sent with an air of one who was not to be interrupted, <she was.>

<He!> came the instant retort.

<If Death Wind had been a male, then why didn’t ‘he’ and Archbrook have any daughters? Their whole old Clan collapsed because they couldn’t agree on who was the next leader when they both disappeared!>

The answer shot back immediately <Because he was ugly, of course! Kills people, remember? He probably didn’t want to wear the helmet to bed, and she didn’t want to—>

<Why would she want a male who was probably bigger than she was, anyways?> That confused question brought them all up short.

After several solon, one girl hesitantly ventured a guess. With the probing thoughts of one who had heard of a concept while recognizing that she didn’t actually understand it, she sent <My aunt sometimes says that ‘bigger’ is almost always ‘better’, I guess?>

<Yeah, that’s why everyone knows your cousin is half-Barsam.>

A soft whump came as a warning-smack thumped into the sender. Followed by <That doesn’t even make biological sense!>

<Does too! They’re Soia-made, like us!>

<We’re Soia-descended, not ‘made’!>

Another mind cut through the squabbling. <Well my mother says that Death Wind was a Farseer.>

That brought a brief pause. Then <Just because your mom managed to catch a farseer male and got you from him doesn’t mean suddenly every unusual person in history was a farseer too!>

<Well, she told me a story that he told her, and it says that Death Winds was known to ‘tell of other worlds’ to those who earned her trust. Or his trust, I guess.>

<Her trust!>

<’Other worlds’?> asked Sea-Reject, her thoughts cutting through the babble like a ship’s prow through the waves. <He saw them?>

<He lived a thousand years ago, he—>

<Two-thousand!>

<—he probably didn’t understand what another ‘world’ was!>

Datapad-reader’s eyes widened in understanding. <Oh, that makes sense! It explains why they were always sailing!>

<...What?>

<The article!> She said, patting the darkened datapad that had by now shut down to conserve what battery it had left. <It said that Archbrook and Death Wind spent most of their known life together sailing around the Great Northern Ocean. Round the world and back again, even. They must have been looking for the ‘other worlds’ he’d seen!>

<She’d seen.>

<I… guess that makes sense?> one hesitantly agreed. <If he— or she!> she added with a pointed glare at the diral-sister seated next to her, <— was like an unamplified farseer, maybe they were trying to find Deinar, or Perrein!>

<Some actually dry land would probably look like the Soia’s own Gardens to them.> ventured the one mind in their group whose sanzai-accent clearly came from the Imperial seat itself.

As always, the gaggle of proud Tabenids ignored her.

<What do you think happened to them?> One asked. <They went out to sea one year, and nobody ever saw them again!>

A mind that was clearly tiring of the whole conversation sent dully <Probably got eaten by a leviathan.>

<Or they conquered a deserted island, that nobody’s ever found since!>

<You don’t ‘conquer’ a deserted island; there’s nobody there to—!>

<I know!> The submariner’s daughter interjected <The Soia got them!>

<...the Soia?>

<Yeah!> She nodded energetically, hair that hadn’t quite dried out yet in the wet shore-climate spattering small droplets over those reclining next to her. <My mom told me all about it. Every few years they find another Soia ruin down on the seabed below the archipelago, and some of them even kept themselves water-tight all this time!>

<Hundreds of thousands of years? No way.>

Ignoring the doubter, she continued <And mom said that once she’d heard that a submarine searching for the entrance got sucked in when they finally pulled it open! The rescue-submersible found them like days later, sitting without any power and trapped inside the ancient chamber!>

<Would have to have been a pretty big one to grab a ship from the surface, wouldn’t it?>

<Oh. Yeah, I guess so.>

<Well,> Sea-Reject sent with an air of wistfulness, <wherever they are, I hope they found what they were looking for.>

A brief silence, as all digested the fact that they’d received more emotion there in Sea-Reject’s normally-placid sanzai than they’d heard in most creche days.

Then someone drew the obvious conclusion. <Sea-Reject wants to encounter Death Wind!> someone gasped out with delighted incredulity.

<Do not!> evidently once the reclusive civilian-born got going, she could reveal a mind as quick-to-anger as any other. That said, the evident truth of her sent denial was hard to argue with… and the raw emotion there made her inner thoughts momentarily easy to receive.

Which led to the almost-as-obvious second conclusion. <Sea-Reject wants to be Death Wind!> sent the same girl, with the same delighted incredulity that had not faded at all.

Their not-quite-legitimate diral-sister didn’t even bother to deny that one, and with the proximity of their thoughts all huddled together here beneath their half-built ship there would have been little point in trying anyways.

<It’s a better name, I guess.> one of the others sent, aiming for a placating middle ground.

And ultimately only succeeding in finally putting the conversation to an end, as fifty-odd almost-not-children finally began to fully realize that the sun had set probably a thousand — or two — solon ago.

The nights were short even in summer, after all, and there was much work to be done tomorrow… and the many days after that.

////////

<Pull to your left!> Sent the leader with as much of her remaining energy as she could muster, as she strained to keep the steering-oar hard over to the right side of the hard-heeling craft. Which meant she was now standing almost inverted, her legs pressed against one gunwale of the narrow ‘ship’ while both hands braced against the rough-sawn oar below her.

And leaving her to watch as the rest of the diral scrambled around the nearly-capsized craft, struggling against both the raging waves and the tearing winds above.

<No, your other left!> she sent, helpless to do anything but hold on tight to the rudder. Keeping the ship from fully nosing over towards the ever-closer cliffs approaching them from downwind.

Rather, the cliffs that they approached, and at an ever-worsening speed.

<It’s no use! We’ll have to cut the sail loose!>

<Lose the sail and we give up any forward speed!> the leader called. <Then we don’t make it past the cliff-tip, and get driven into the bay anyways! Our only chance is to hope the winds back around first, or at least die down and let us row!>

She wasn’t proud of how her sanzai had come… unhinged, but it wasn’t like she had much energy left to keep it under control. Even as she felt the growing panic well up stronger and stronger between each of her sisters as they watched the downwind rail bury itself deeper and deeper under the choppy surface, she could do nothing to keep them from losing it entirely.

Perhaps there were times when it was appropriate to panic.

<Little shredded chance of that happening, isn’t there!?>

<If you’ve got a better bloody idea, I’d love to hear—!>

<The wind will break.> a bolt of sanzai cracked out, somehow louder than any of the lightning that occasionally crackled overhead.

And coming from the most unlikely sender.

Sea-Reject stood with one arm wrapped around the mast, all-but-lying against it as the ship heeled over just finger-lengths away from capsizing outright. She craned her neck, peering over the rising right-side gunwale and into the onrushing wind.

Then nodded again, and visibly took a deep breath to gather energy before thundering again <The wave-patterns are softening upwind of us. Make ready to haul the sail in tighter, and keep that rudder hard over.>

The diral’s leader didn’t even bother to object that this one of all her sisters was suddenly the one giving orders.

She’d happily cling to the iron certainty in that sanzai, just as desperately as others around her clung to their emergency flotation-armors. The orange-and-white plastic vests, among the very few things they’d been provided at the start of their diral period.

A gift that they’d all sneered at: who’d ever heard of a diral-girl living thanks to the tiny things? If a storm was bad enough that she’d stoop to using them, they probably wouldn’t help anyways.

Those laughing jokes somehow weren’t exactly being repeated just now.

What felt like thousands of solon later, the creaking ship let out a great shuddering groan… but her sinking mast slowly reversed course and began to climb higher in the lightning-streaked sky. The buried gunwale even surged up and out of the waves… and did not dip back.

And best of all, the wind stayed just strong enough at their back to let the little craft tack sharply… and turn her nose barely beyond the looming cliff-tip ahead of them. The rocky outcropping that had threatened to herd them into a beach-less cove, where the rocks at the far inside would have been their unavoidable doom.

Flotation-armors or not.

One could feel the tension fall away as if excised by a knife when the towering rocks finally slipped behind them, their foamy wake splashing hard against it… but nothing else.

<Who made you the bloody weather-seer?> asked a near-disbelieving sister as she sprawled over their hand-made windlass. Yet despite the format of her thoughts, one could find no actual reproach in them.

<Forget seeing anything!> another sent, slowly shimmying her way down the mast from where she’d had the misfortune to be when the storm really blew up. <She didn’t 'see' that break in the wind, that was like she made it break at the exact right split-solon!>

If ever there were a time for a bit of obvious fiction, this was perhaps it.

<Yeah! She killed the wind!> One girl sent distractedly, still cranking hard at the water-pump. A constant stream of most-unwanted bilgewater surged overboard from the pump’s mouth, finally outweighing the water pouring over the side and thus now lightening the ship with every passing solon. <We've got our own Death Wind looking out for us!>

For the first time in the year or so since they’d first set to sea, the barbed-teasing nickname for their really-a-civilian sister held not even a shred of bite in it.

<Death Wind! Death Wind!> Came the cheer, all the more resounding because nobody had enough spare energy to express their sudden pride in their sister by any way more tiring than simple sanzai.

Even Screen-Nose looked up from where she had sat atop the central stores-piles and very carefully kept the raging waters away from the datapad wrapped tight in her protective embrace. <How does one actually speak ‘Death Wind,’ aloud?>

Only one voice answered, slurring slightly with the tiredness that they all felt bone-deep. “Tonon Inzil.” She immediately dropped back into easier sanzai. <I think, anyways.>

<It sounds like a male’s name when you speak it out loud.> one grumbled, unhappy.

<That's because he was a male.> another instantly explained. None could quite summon up the energy to get into that argument again.

But they sure couldn’t give their diral-sister a male-sounding name, no matter from whom it had come! Even if it was still better than ‘Sea-Reject.’

Overmatched by the crackling of lightning all around or not, a faintly-illuminated electronic screen flashed into life. A few solon later, all aboard could hear their sister carefully sounding out a new name under her breath. <Here’s another version, it’s an old guess at the name from when the Amenalids were trying again to negotiate with Clan Whirlpool.> “Becalmed.” She spoke loudly, to be heard over the wind. Then leaned closer to her faint screen, frowning. <No, that’s not quite right. It says here you pronounce it different. More fierce, I guess.> She tried again. “’Storm of Stillness’?”

“'Dellasoni.'” their newly-admired sister tried out her new spoken-name, rolling it around her mouth. Then nodded. “Stillstorm.”

White teeth curled into a satisfied grin, lit by the flash of lightning overhead.

“I like it.”

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Author's Note:

Okay, probably most of you guessed exactly who this rescuee was going to be early in the epilogue. But it was fun to write! And I love the idea that, in this AU, Stillstorm is actually named after a Humaniti male… and nobody will ever know!

And yes, if you're wondering, this exact twist was the reason I made up Dovindr's name in the first place :D
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Re: [Completed Fanfiction] New Horizons, New Seas

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The site crashes again...

As for me, the fact that the Storm received a name in honor of a man is rather a “inner joke”, but for me it is much more fun that she received a name in honor of the legendary protoMisole of Taben, the modern caste of which she did not like her entire canon career. And the fact that all educated by Loroi knew about this dualism.

I think that because of jokes and digs on this subject, she cut a lot of hair in duels.

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