Deliverance

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gigachad
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Re: Deliverance

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Endurance deliberately tries to throw civilians to slaughter for the sake of its revenge and ambitions, because all the arsenals and flotillas belong to the army, it will literally be a massacre and the "allies" in the form of aliens will not look at it only from the outside, and yes, I am tormented by the question of what will happen in theory when children grow into adult men? Will it completely reduce their attractiveness?

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May want to put a disclaimer on this story, since the last chapter was... disturbing enough to merit a warning of what content is in the story.

Rape. Lots of rape. And occasional sex.

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Snoofman
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Bamax wrote:
Fri Jun 09, 2023 9:17 pm
May want to put a disclaimer on this story, since the last chapter was... disturbing enough to merit a warning of what content is in the story.

Rape. Lots of rape. And occasional sex.
Thank you for your word of caution Bamax. Done. I have written a disclaimer at the beginning and will also post it here for all to see.

Disclaimer: the contents of this story feature child abduction, brief scenes hinting at sex as well as non-consensual intercourse, but are not meant to be pornagraphic. Real life abduction and non-consensual intercourse is criminal and immoral. This story was written with the rules of the forum in mind. If the managers or moderators of the forum consider the material of this fanfiction to violate those rules, the writer shall be sure to correct the story to the managers’/moderators' approval. But so far no such order has been given.

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Re: Deliverance

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Snoofman wrote:
Fri Jun 09, 2023 9:35 pm
Bamax wrote:
Fri Jun 09, 2023 9:17 pm
May want to put a disclaimer on this story, since the last chapter was... disturbing enough to merit a warning of what content is in the story.

Rape. Lots of rape. And occasional sex.
Thank you for your word of caution Bamax. Done. I have written a disclaimer at the beginning and will also post it here for all to see.

Disclaimer: the contents of this story feature child abduction, brief scenes hinting at sex as well as non-consensual intercourse, but are not meant to be pornagraphic. Real life abduction and non-consensual intercourse is criminal and immoral. This story was written with the rules of the forum in mind. If the managers or moderators of the forum consider the material of this fanfiction to violate those rules, the writer shall be sure to correct the story to the managers’/moderators' approval. But so far no such order has been given.
The chapter before the latest ones made me cringe (where the boy and girl are introduced to wealthy Loroi), but the latest where less civilized criminal Loroi have their way with a boy actually disturbed me as a grown adult man.

On some level this what it's probably how it feels for human female sex slaves. Powerless to stop it, and knowing they must comply or else.

Gang rape is something rather alien to me, because even though I know it occurs I have never willingly read or viewed it online... despite being familiar with you know what as many are. It has and always will be repulsive to me.

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Snoofman
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Re: Deliverance

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Bamax wrote:
Sat Jun 10, 2023 12:52 am
Snoofman wrote:
Fri Jun 09, 2023 9:35 pm
Bamax wrote:
Fri Jun 09, 2023 9:17 pm
May want to put a disclaimer on this story, since the last chapter was... disturbing enough to merit a warning of what content is in the story.

Rape. Lots of rape. And occasional sex.
Thank you for your word of caution Bamax. Done. I have written a disclaimer at the beginning and will also post it here for all to see.

Disclaimer: the contents of this story feature child abduction, brief scenes hinting at sex as well as non-consensual intercourse, but are not meant to be pornagraphic. Real life abduction and non-consensual intercourse is criminal and immoral. This story was written with the rules of the forum in mind. If the managers or moderators of the forum consider the material of this fanfiction to violate those rules, the writer shall be sure to correct the story to the managers’/moderators' approval. But so far no such order has been given.
The chapter before the latest ones made me cringe (where the boy and girl are introduced to wealthy Loroi), but the latest where less civilized criminal Loroi have their way with a boy actually disturbed me as a grown adult man.

On some level this what it's probably how it feels for human female sex slaves. Powerless to stop it, and knowing they must comply or else.

Gang rape is something rather alien to me, because even though I know it occurs I have never willingly read or viewed it online... despite being familiar with you know what as many are. It has and always will be repulsive to me.
Indeed. And should be regarded so. This fiction is meant for entertainment and speculation about the Loroi. And that if Loroi did come into contact with humans, especially those with little regard for humans or human well-being, this could be a real possibility.

And on your comment concerning female victims of human trafficking and sexual assault, that is what I was trying to express through the captives' experience in chapter 6. Being kidnapped (especially for sexual purposes) is nothing to romanticize about. Not for male or female victims.

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Re: Deliverance

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This is possibly the most disturbingly horrifying story I've willingly read in, well, ever. The fact you kept me engrossed despite my incredible discomfort speaks to your talent as a writer. That said, I really want to see justice done. From Lagertha to Eternal Endurance, they all need to be destroyed.
Pleasantly abstruse

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