WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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Arent wrote:
Arioch wrote:There probably won't be any WIP's for the next two pages, because I think that would not be appropriate.
Huh? I just expected some space battle. Now I'm really curious what will happen ;)
All the pages so far, especially the Insider and Ariochs forum posts were just a dream. Next page Alex will wake up and go to work his 9-5.

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Werra wrote:
Arent wrote:
Arioch wrote:There probably won't be any WIP's for the next two pages, because I think that would not be appropriate.
Huh? I just expected some space battle. Now I'm really curious what will happen ;)
All the pages so far, especially the Insider and Ariochs forum posts were just a dream. Next page Alex will wake up and go to work his 9-5.
Alex messed up repairing a drive-plate and now he's gonna wake up from stasis to find himself 6 million years into deep space as the last human alive.

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So is another group of khalka divisions going to show up at the Tizaba depot, forcing black razor to cut through the deep jump fleet and push through to the gora relay?

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boldilocks wrote:Alex messed up repairing a drive-plate and now he's gonna wake up from stasis to find himself 6 million years into deep space as the last human alive.
I could do one better:
Bill? Bill! Wake up! It's me, Deanna! You had an accident on the holodeck....

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Both of them seem pretty irritated with each other, honestly.

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I bet Beryl tried to take care of Alex bubu and Alex isn't in the mood to be (s)mothered.

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harlequin2262 wrote:Both of them seem pretty irritated with each other, honestly.
Jardin got throw at the wall. Beryl got throw out of her favorite seat.

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Beryl's hair are intimidating in a way, I don't want to imagine how Fireblade's will look in poor lighting and in Zero G.

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harlequin2262 wrote:Both of them seem pretty irritated with each other, honestly.
I thought so too, but it seems more like a mix of odd lighting angle and expressed concern.
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Dark. Miner's delight....


I wonder how much Beryl is concerned with the blood on Alex' forehead.

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hi hi

To be fair, both of them are having a pretty bad day all around. I'd wager it might even be the worst day in Beryl's life, and possibly the second worst day in Alex's life. (Measured on the "I almost died today," scale.)

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Interesting. To me it looks like Alex is upset at Beryl for something, while her expression and arm gesture could be something along the lines of "no, I am/do NOT" but I could be wrong. Could also be that she is just concerned and wants to use her cuff light to have a better look at Alex's bump on his forehead while he's all like "it's just a scratch, don't worry".

Either way, looking forward to the next page.

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So that explains why her hair was all over the place. Woop woop looking forward to monday!
If nothing else works, a total pig-headed unwillingness to look facts in the face will see us through. General C.H Melchett commander of some unknown british regiment in the western front.

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Wait a sec. Did Alex lose a shoe again (bottom left of the picture)? :D
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GeoModder wrote:Wait a sec. Did Alex lose a shoe again (bottom left of the picture)? :D
Doesn't look like it to me. Let's not start a running theme that every time Alex loses consciousness he winds up in some state of undress. :lol:
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She's getting annoyed that he halfway passes out from every little love tap.

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Note how she's holding both hands away from him.

Either it's just for the lighting, or it's the sort of "It wasn't me!" gesture? :)

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At the rate this is going, Alex is going to be a concussed paraplegic by chapter 5.

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All i want for chapter 5 is one scene like this!
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Please Arioch, pretty please make it happen :D
If nothing else works, a total pig-headed unwillingness to look facts in the face will see us through. General C.H Melchett commander of some unknown british regiment in the western front.

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Jericho wrote:All i want for chapter 5 is one scene like this!
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Please Arioch, pretty please make it happen :D
Someone made it NOT happen, removed from Youtube... :cry:

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