WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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hi hi

I wouldn't be surprised if the Historian construct decides to troll Beryl, but even if that's the case, I have a feeling that the house of cards is only going to have a more spectacular collapse, the longer it keeps building up.

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Don't know what it is.. but Beryl looks particularly kissable in that scene..lol!
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boldilocks wrote:It's a crude stick-figure with boobs, the world "Beryl", and an arrow. Obviously she's not going to be flattered.
Worse - she now gets the visual proof that Loroi arguably have considerably less in the chest department than human women do have.

At least that's what the contents of the tablet would suggest. :mrgreen:

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It would appear Fireblade is trying to teach Alex the ways of the Force. :)

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Well, no shoes....
Feeling comfy, or finalizing donning the gear?
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Krulle wrote:Well, no shoes....
Feeling comfy, or finalizing donning the gear?
He didn't have time to put them on before getting interrupted by the pad and by Beryl.

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But still. He put the pad into a poket on the suit, and closed the zipper on it. (link)
Either he found a second pad, or he took it out again (but movement looks like he's about to pik it up from the "floor").

I guess I'll have to wait until I get to read what's happening.
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This thing looks like a ration packet. The pad would have straighter lines and more rectangular form.
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Ah, my fault then.
So, someone needs a snack before hitting the pillows?
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SVlad wrote:This thing looks like a ration packet. The pad would have straighter lines and more rectangular form.
Considering the biochemical differences between humans and loroi interesting things could happen once he opens that ration pack. For a human the content could be yummy but for a loroi it could perhaps stink up the place. :mrgreen:

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Spiral looks Very pleased about some thing... women and their secrets! lol!

How very ...odd that she would ask Jardin to hold her Diral keepsake while she gets...er comfortable? Is there some 'secret' meaning behind that?
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hi hi

Where does she say she wants Alex to hold the blade?

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icekatze wrote:hi hi

Where does she say she wants Alex to hold the blade?
Opps sorry... she does so in cell #2 on the same page... but you can't see that unless your a patron.. my bad!
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sunphoenix wrote:
icekatze wrote:hi hi

Where does she say she wants Alex to hold the blade?
Opps sorry... she does so in cell #2 on the same page... but you can't see that unless your a patron.. my bad!
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Alex got dressed in pilot colours? A subtle flex by the aerodynamic duo, or just pure coincidence?

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boldilocks wrote:Alex got dressed in pilot colours? A subtle flex by the aerodynamic duo, or just pure coincidence?
According to page 149 it was one of the emergency spares from the shuttle, so it's more than likely simply pilot caste colored by default.

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folti wrote:
boldilocks wrote:Alex got dressed in pilot colours? A subtle flex by the aerodynamic duo, or just pure coincidence?
According to page 149 it was one of the emergency spares from the shuttle, so it's more than likely simply pilot caste colored by default.
Fitting. He is a pilot.

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Also, you know, his actual uniform is orange.

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Whale wrote:Also, you know, his actual uniform is orange.
The Tenoin caste should adopt him as a mascot. :mrgreen:

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