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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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Glad to hear that my version of "What Talon did that got her encounter canceled" worked for you :D Talon and Spiral are honestly my favorite characters to write in Outsider; they're just the two young gits out to have fun (while being professional enough that they're not going to *really* cause trouble).

And IMO the loroi wouldn't honestly be that surprised or bothered by learning the full story of the Spartans. I mean, from a human perspective "young children kidnapped from their families and honed into pure warriors loyal only to the state" is horrifying government oppression. From a loroi perspective, I think it would be closer to "business as usual." Loroi kids *don't* grow up in families anyways, and being trained to be a warrior and *only* a warrior is essentially what loroi culture considers to be a high honor. Now, Spartan training (especially for S-2 and S-3 generations) *is* rather harsh even by loroi standards, but not massively so.

TL;DR I think the loroi would just consider Spartans to be "Oh. Human teidar. Got it. What was the reason for all the secrecy, again?"

And since I'm playing a bit fast-and-loose with how slipspace works in this story, I'll say that time passes normally (or close to it) for ships in slipspace. However, Soia stasis-modules (and human cryotubes, but those don't really work over massively-long timespans) *do* completely prevent the passage of time for the volume/mass within their field of effect. Hence why that one Soia Mozeret in an earlier chapter was *literally* frozen mid-sentence for ~275,000 years.

(Actual spoiler):
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The human ships have docked aboard a Soia moonship and transferred their crew to Soia stasis modules. Every few ~thousand years, they wake up one ship's crew and go out scouting around the galaxy in Slipspace, seeing if there's anywhere that they can safely re-enter realspace. At first, they sent two Infinity-class that had been refitted as warships to try and destroy whatever source of the disruption they could detect (UNSC Mandelbrot and UNSC Mobius), but when neither ship was heard from again after leaving slipspace the surviving UNSC ships decided to try the less risky option of just 'waiting out' whatever had happened to slipspace. But as the eons have dragged on they've gotten more desperate, hence things like Grafton risking a flight alarmingly near a black hole.
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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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Urist wrote:
Mon Jun 17, 2024 7:48 pm

And IMO the loroi wouldn't honestly be that surprised or bothered by learning the full story of the Spartans. I mean, from a human perspective "young children kidnapped from their families and honed into pure warriors loyal only to the state" is horrifying government oppression. From a loroi perspective, I think it would be closer to "business as usual." Loroi kids *don't* grow up in families anyways, and being trained to be a warrior and *only* a warrior is essentially what loroi culture considers to be a high honor. Now, Spartan training (especially for S-2 and S-3 generations) *is* rather harsh even by loroi standards, but not massively so.
Exactly my thoughts on the government oppression part. The Spartans are kickass, but it never sat well with me how some Halo fans try to rationalize or justify kidnapping innocent kids to be indoctrinated into soldiers, of which only half survive the procedure.

And I’m sick of Catherine Halsey being praised as a hero. Her logic is so flawed in so many ways.

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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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Yup. It's one of the reasons why I really dislike the later Halo games/books (Everything after Reach/ODST is bad fanfiction as far as I'm concerned): they forgot that the setting was *supposed* to be a "gray versus black" morality sort of thing. The UNSC were the 'good guys' only in the sense that they're human and the Covenant aren't. Halsey isn't supposed to be an utterly-evil Mengele-type, but she's also not a good person by any means. She's supposed to be a "Morally-flawed person who made an awful choice and came to regret it too late" character, fitting the rather tragic arc of the Spartans.

I've tried to keep some of that tone in this fanfiction. The UNSC-Soia war wasn't a "Heroic humans versus the eeeeeevil murderous aliens"; literally nobody left even knows who actually started the shooting, and the UNSC actually killed far more Soia civilians than the other way around. It was essentially a rather 'standard' war of Conquest (the Soia were out to incorporate humanity into their Empire relatively peacefully, not slaughter them all) that the *UNSC* turned into a genocidal conflict.
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Chapter Fourteen: Discovery

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“Approaching to selected location.” said Spiral, as the Did Ever Plummet Sound neared the approximate area where the loroi/UNSC refugee fleet supposedly waited. “Am seeing nothing strange on sensors.”

“As expected.” responded Alex. “The coordinates we got only indicated a region of slipspace just outside the system, nothing specific. And we know they tried to back themselves into a local pocket they’d found, to hide from any Soia pursuers. We can pop into the system and hope they left a beacon or something, but that would be a uh, surprising move for guys trying to hide.” He craned his neck back. “Unless you’ve managed to pull any more detail from the Admiral’s message, sir?”

Colonel Jardin shook his head, keeping his arms crossed over his chest as he glared out of the cockpit windows. Eyebrows bunched low over sharp eyes, and a deep scowl marred his features.

He wasn’t exactly making it hard for Talon to see why among humans, males were accepted as warriors.

Alex turned back to his console, muttering lowly “[Nuts to that, then.]” He highlighted an upcoming slipspace thread and added to Talon “Put us on that course once we reach the optimal transition point. It will take us on a perimeter run around the system, should give the sensors a good eye-full.”

“And give to us time to think.” filled in Talon. “Can it be hoped that you know what methods a fleet would use to hide in this slipspace?”

“Heh.” Alex huffed. “I’m a pilot who’s been attached to ONI for most of his career. I know how to hide a ship in a slipspace pocket… but I’ve got less experience at actually finding one.”

Beryl leaned over from where she stood to Alex’s side, her back pressed up against the wall in the crowded cockpit. “Perhaps it is best to start then with the methods for hiding a vessel away in slipspace.”

As Alex launched into his explanation, Talon detected a flurry of sanzai between Beryl and the mizol parat, distant in the crew compartments of the ship. Leave it to the mizol to immediately want to ‘listen in’ on this new subterfuge.

“—nd if you pulse your drive core at just the right point mid-way between two filaments with enough separation, you come to a halt without fully transitioning back to realspace; like the ship is uh, resting ‘on’ the barrier, I guess you could say.”

Spiral said “It is maybe like a water submarine, sitting on the seafloor?”

“That’s a good analogy.” Alex bobbed his head. “And with whatever the Soia’s Ring did to the slipspace-realspace barrier, I imagine it’s probably easier than ever to get the ship balanced right on the boundary. Doesn’t help us find them, though.”

<Fascinating.> Beryl sent, her side-channels picturing what Alex described. <What a strange idea, to stop a vessel mid-jump.>

<Stranger still that they can actually do it.> added Spiral. <But I can see how that would make them very hard to find. You would have to know just which two filaments to jump between, and then ‘pause’ your engine core at the exact same place as the other ships had!>

Talon laughed to herself. <It is certainly strange to think that vessels as large as those dreadstars could be ‘hard’ to find!>

<Yes…> Beryl agreed, but her side-channels faded off in a blur of distraction.

<?> sent both tenoin.

Instead of answering them directly, Beryl asked aloud “Alex, did a vessel ‘sitting’ so on the slipspace barrier cause any change in the gravitational plane? It is known at least that large masses in realspace seem to affect jump drive travel; perhaps the reverse also has an effect?”

<Interesting idea.> sent Talon.

“Hmm.” Alex paused. “Not that I know of, but it’s not exactly my, uh, specialty. How about—?” He turned in his seat, pausing as he saw that Colonel Jardin had left the cockpit at some point while the other occupants were discussing.

“He is speaking with our mizol parat.” explained Beryl.

“Ah. Well, I guess a ship would influence the local grav-plane, if it was big enough. And a moon-ship definitely is. But the barrier’s taut enough that—” he cut himself off, eyes going wide. “Of course!”

Alex hunched over his controls, tapping away while talking distractedly, as if to himself. “[Greater slack in the barrier, ships kept getting stuck in transition. But with a wider imprint from any mass sources—]”

Beryl spoke in his same language “[—a large vessel may be detected at greater range!]” She beamed as Alex whirled to stare at her.

“You, uh, learn fast.”

“[Thank you!]” That phrase of the aliens’ language was already known to Talon. <He agrees that a search for gravitational disturbances not generated by observed planets or stars may yet find these missing ships.>

A buzz of mental activity leaked through Spiral’s sanzai. <It will be like surveying a new system for a faster-than-light jump, then. I will prepare a searching procedure!> The narrat’s excitement matched that of every other person in the cockpit.

Alex turned around to Talon. “Go ahead and put us on— oh.” He nodded as he saw that Talon had already jumped the prowler onto the next slipspace thread to take it into the nearby system. “Good initiative. And...” he spun in his seat to address Spiral.

The junior tenoin only smirked back at him, the sensor display above her station already showing the prepared scan parameters.

“Huh. Guess you all learn quickly.” the human said with a smile.

Talon boasted “We are warriors of the 51st Strike Group. We are the most skilled of the most skilled of the Loroi Union.” The fact that the loroi were obviously the most skilled of the peoples in the Union seemed to be not worth stating aloud. Non-sanzai conversation had its advantages!

Besides, from what Talon had seen of Alex’s piloting earlier, he was up to their same standards. As good as any loroi.

Who knew — perhaps that quietly-sent theory that Talon had overheard from the soroin on their earlier trip back from the Ring was correct, and the humans were somehow related to the loroi. It would explain why they were such good warriors, able to stand up to the Soia Empire!

“I can, uh, see why.” He held one finger against his headset, using the ship’s radio. “[We might have a search solution here, sir. We’re going to enter the system and try it out. I’ll update you if we find any leads.]”

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Some four cycles later, and Talon found herself increasingly thankful that she had been an interceptor pilot for all of her career, and not a ship navigation officer.

<Is it still searching?> she asked.

Beryl remained infuriatingly calm. <Yes. The search parameters had to be defined widely enough to catch a dreadstar-sized mass at an unknown distance, and so will require a great deal of time for the algorithms to analyze all the false positives.>

<There is no way to make it go faster?>

<No.> Beryl’s side-channels flared. <But it is indeed remarkable that a ship this small possesses sensors accurate enough to perform such a scan at all! The intensity of this search is similar to that of a vessel attempting to chart a new and untested jump route to a new star, which is normally done by specialized craft.>

<Then we have nothing to do but continue to sit here and wait for the computers to find something.> Talon confirmed. With Alex stepping out of the cockpit a few hundred solon ago, she’d rapidly became bored without his stories of the Wars against the Soia.

<It is not the worst duty that can be imagined.> Spiral sent, her sub-channels blurry as the narrat half-dozed in her padded seat. Bootsteps sounded on the corridor outside the cockpit, and the door opened. <And there are some nice luxuries...>

“And there we go.” Alex stepped in, one arm cradling four food packages. “Stuffed, uh, ‘pozet’ for everyone.” He handed out the fist-sized foodstuffs. “Hope they’re better than ONI rations.” The tall alien folded himself down into his seat, staring down at his own food without much enthusiasm.

<One of these days someone is going to tell him what it normally means for a loroi to bring food for another.> Talon mused.

<I would be surprised if it actually means much different among humans.> Beryl sent. <Almost every known intelligent species — and many non-intelligent animals — uses gifts of food as a way to establish friendship.> Her sub-channels only flickered for a moment as she added <Or as an invitation to mate.>

<Yes,> sent Spiral as she passed the rapidly-warming pozet from one hand to the other, <but it certainly would not feel the same if it was a barsam or nissek being friendly in such a way.>

<Certainly.> Talon quipped. <For one thing, you’d have to make sure just who the nissek was offering as food!>

The three loroi chuckled, causing Alex to start and look around. “Ah. Sharing a— oh, I nearly forgot!” He set down his alien rations to one side and stood, making for the exit. The human ducked out into the corridor and returned a few solons later with two drinking cups. He placed one down on his spot and held the other out to Talon. “You seemed to like the coffee last time, so I got you another.”

“That is uncommon kind of you, Alex!” Talon said with a smile, accepting the gift. She glanced at the two other loroi in the compartment. <Do you wish to try it? It does not seem to cause any negative effects.>

<Thank you, but I have sampled some already.> Beryl sent, her sub-channels conveying her lack of desire to repeat the experience.

<Spiral?> Talon asked, looking over when her diral-sister did not immediately respond.

The narrat’s sanzai relayed the sight of Alex smiling warmly at Talon’s back as he sat down again. <Sharing food definitely means something similar for humans.>

A burst of satisfaction flared in Talon’s core.

Spiral finished with <So I think Alex brought the drink for you specifically.>

Talon let her sub-channels express how she felt about that idea. Aloud, she asked “Are there loroi foods which you can eat and be safe? I think maybe it is unbalanced that it is always you bringing us food.” And he didn’t even seem to be happy with any of the human food aboard the prowler, strangely.

Alex made a face. “I’ve, uh, tried loroi foods before. There’s not much that can be safely — let alone enjoyably — eaten by both; our biology’s just too different. It’s pretty much limited to dilute drinks.” He hefted his own coffee cup for emphasis.

“Interesting.” Talon said. <Perhaps… do we have any noillir in our supplies?>

<Yes.> Beryl replied. <I will prepare an extra amount of it next time, a small amount to be safe.> Her sub-channels flashed teasing amusement. <Unless you would prefer to share a single drink with him?>

That would be rather bold of her. And if it was viewed similarly by humans… <Perhaps I might.> It was also nice to see that the listel seemed to have lost her earlier protective, almost matronizing attitude towards Alex.

Beryl asked “What did the loroi of your era eat?” <It is a question that many have long wondered. We know that the Soia introduced many species of flora and fauna suitable for consumption, but those were planetside.>

“It varied between Legions. And also which ship.” Alex responded with a shrug, poking a straw into his own ration pack. “The big moon-ships grew lots of food the old-fashioned way — plenty of room and spare energy on those things — but the smaller in-system boats usually just distilled everything in vats.

“From this one time Tempest walked us through it all — and that was a Thanksgiving to remember, let me tell you — pretty much everything was Soia-engineered.” He started ticking off on the fingers of one hand “There was this super-grain, grew like a weed and was good to eat… if you’re also Soia-engineered.”

“Misesa grain, it seems.” Beryl observed. “It grows on each of the Sister Worlds, and has been found on many other planets in the area.”

“Hah. Of course that stuff survived the Wars.” Alex chuckled. “Probably can grow in a vacuum, for all I know. We constantly had problems with it cropping up on some of our own worlds — God only knows how the first seeds got there — and being impossible to stamp out. Conservation groups were fighting their own little war against it right, uh, until it all became irrelevant.”

His face fell. Briefly. Then he took a breath, ticked off a second finger and continued “Anyways, there was also this, uh, spiced meat-thing. Tempest wasn’t too sure exactly what animal it came from, but one of her top commanders who always ate with her swore by the stuff so she ordered some.”

“Was it perhaps called ‘miros?’ Beryl asked. “They are a waist-high animal raised for meat.”

“Not a word I’d heard.” the human shrugged and waved his own ration packet. “But then again, it’s not like one can find ‘cow’ printed anywhere on this thing’s ingredient list.” In his own language, he muttered “[I’m not sure there’s any actual ‘beef,’ either.]”

One of these days, she would have to ask Beryl to teach her some of the human’s language. Assuming that it was something she could learn, without a listel’s memory skills. All those strange, alien phonemes…

Spiral interjected “What else foods were eaten?” The narrat’s pride in the ancient successes of misesa grain — practically the symbol of her birth-world Maia — colored the curiosity leaking from her mind-signature.

“Well, there was this citrus-like fruit-nut, real hard shell but inside—” Alex began.

A buzzer sounded from the console.

“Never-mind that discussion, then.” he finished, sitting up and peering closely at the display. “Looks like the scans have finished, with… eleven mass measurement anomalies that the computer’s flagged for our attention.”

“That is common for mapping new systems.” said Beryl as she leaned over Alex to get a better view of the information. “Can these anomalous readings be compared to the local system map as well as observed vectors and distances to nearby stars?”

“Already on it.” replied Alex, tapping commands into his display.

Talon stood from her seat and walked over behind the human. She pointed at a pair of the data tracks, ones that looked recognizable to her. “Two here will be caused by that binary system nearby. Their gravity influence is mirrored.”

“And this one seems to be the local system’s exoplanet cloud.” said Beryl, highlighting a broader data point.

“Uh-huh.” Alex acknowledged, removing each reading as it was identified. “And I’ve seen this type of point-source before, that’s a distant pulsar’s beam.”

Talon felt a burst of frustration from Spiral. <I do not know the spoken-word for it, but those over there are just the signatures of the gas cloud that is present in this region of space.> The narrat’s sanzai indicated three of the dwindling number of unexplained readings.

With a smile, Talon relayed “And Spiral recognizes a nebula’s influence, here.”

“Ooh, good spotting.” Alex nodded. “That one had me, for a moment.” While Spiral mentally preened herself, he added “That leaves us with four signatures in the right mass range, and each on a very different bearing.”

“Then it seems that that will not be too difficult to attempt travel to each.” Beryl said.

“Might as well.” he replied, typing in commands to the Did Ever Plummet Sound’s piloting systems even as he radioed a brief message, presumably to his uncle.

The deck shuddered underfoot in a now-familiar pattern as the prowler cut its way back into slipspace.

A few solon later, Alex removed one of the four targets. “We can cross that one out. Parallax puts it way out past even the nearest system. Must be an exotic superjovian or something. On to the next.”

<Impressive work.> came the smooth sanzai of the mizol who led their little expedition. Talon turned as the parat stepped into the crowded cockpit, with Colonel Jardin having to remain standing in the doorway behind her.

<We cannot guarantee success, unfortunately.> sent Beryl. <We are acting on an unproven theory.>

<That is understood. Nevertheless, the fact that the four of you worked together to achieve a testable theory in such little time deserves praise. It demonstrates that no matter what we may or may not find here, humans can learn to work closely with modern loroi. This will be of great use to the Union even if the Ancients’ refugee fleet is not found.>

Talon’s skin itched at the near-matronizing tone of the parat’s sanzai. Of course, what was supposed to be a private thought earned the tenoin a sidelong glance from the red-eyed mizol, and a brief quirk of her lip.

“Two’s a bust.” Alex called out, as the ship briefly popped out of slipspace. “Just a large exoplanet. On to number three.”

“Here’s hoping.” intoned the Colonel.

The cockpit crackled with energy, as six pairs of eyes locked on the pilot’s display in front of Alex’s seat. Talon and Beryl leaned in where they stood behind Alex's seat, heads almost touching as they awaited the next arrival.

“Coming up on our jump point.” Alex announced. “Drive’s set to cut out forty-nine milliseconds after the hop, should put us right on the mass reading. And here we—”

The prowler shuddered twice in quick succession, and a half-solon later the display updated.

But nobody was looking at it.

It had been made redundant by the cockpit windows.

The brief, bright flash of a slipspace transition had illuminated a blue-purple metal hull in front of them, stretching off in all distances out of sight.

Even with the light gone, the afterimage remained.

“—go.” Alex finished. “I, uh…” He shook himself, and reached overhead to flip a switch. “Turning on the forward lights.”

The sight blinked back into view.

“[My God.]” Colonel Jardin murmured.

“It’s… yeah.” Alex replied. “Uh, range to target fifteen klicks, horizon curvature puts it at seventy-five klicks across. It’s a moon-ship, all right. Getting no carrier signal from her, else I could say which one.” The pilot’s voice raced, clearly overflowing with emotion. “Pinging all frequencies, see if we get a response.”

A solon later, and Alex continued, voice lower and full of wonder. “My God. We… actually found them.”

<It is an amazing—> Talon began, before a warm, alien hand wrapped around the side of her face and drew her head downwards. An instant later, and even greater heat bloomed onto the opposite cheek.

She turned in shock just in time to see Alex planting a kiss on Beryl’s cheek as well, before turning back to his controls. The human’s own face burned bright red, even as the two loroi exchanged a glance over his head.

Talon amended her earlier thought, sub-channels radiating happiness. <It is a very emotional event.>

A brief burst of sanzai had Beryl take a half-step back, making just enough room for Spiral to lean in on Alex’s left. “Me also!”

The human pilot’s face had turned so red that Talon could feel the radiant heat. No wonder the humans ate so much food, if their body temperatures could run that hot!

But after less than a beat of hesitation, Alex leaned over and planted a kiss on Spiral’s cheek as well. As he turned away, Talon could see a broad smile fighting its way onto his face.

The narrat’s sub-channels gave only a momentary warning, flaring with mischievous delight even as Spiral chased his head back.

Planting her own kiss on their human’s cheek in turn, Spiral purred in his ear “Thanks ever so… Alex.” She straightened up with a wink at Talon, before slinking back to her station.

A strangled half-noise escaped from Alex’s throat, just as his uncle let out a laugh.

And from the mizol parat in the center of all this… <The joys of youth.> her sanzai came through with its sub-channels clear, Tempo’s genuine amusement shining brightly in unusual honesty for one of her caste.

From the display, a brief chime sounded.

“We’re, uh,” Alex began in a strained voice. He coughed once and continued “we’re getting a signal response. IFF check.”

Whatever an ‘IFF’ was.

<They are letters.> Beryl helpfully supplied, the happy glow of her sub-channels matched by the fascination clear in her main channel. <It must be one of the humans’ ‘acronyms.’>

Talon tried to follow the concept as the listel briefly described it. Tried. <They put spoken-word puzzles into regular usage of their language?>

<Yes!> replied Beryl. <It is similar to a data-compression algorithm, but whose use seems to date to well before the humans used computers!>

<They are crazy, these humans.>

Spiral interjected <Crazy but fun!>

“Exchange established. Code sent.” Alex announced. “And… huh. System’s not liking it. Getting an audio channel back.”

A voice spoke in Trade, regimented and clearly artificial. “Unknown vessel tracked at nineteen-thousand mannal. Transponder not recognized. Report identity and intent.”

A chill ran down Talon’s spine, at the same moment as Beryl’s mind-signature burst with excitement. An ancient Soia — no, Loroi — artificial intelligence!

“This is the Winter-class light prowler UNSC Did Ever Plummet Sound. PRO-five-two-nothing-four-one-two.” Alex replied.

“Identification does not match known status for that vessel. Prowler Did Ever Plummet Sound listed as missing seven-seven-seven-seven-seven-seven-seven year-fractions previously.”

Not a very good artificial intelligence, evidently. Then again, perhaps the original programmers could not be much faulted for not having designed the system to cope with such ludicrous timespans. It was impressive enough that it still worked, really.

The Colonel called from the back of the cockpit. “AI, this is Colonel Pierre Jardin. Match my voice-print. Identify your vessel and prepare a docking bay.”

Several solon passed.

Talon returned to her seat in the co-pilot’s position. It seemed that she might be needed to help from there.

And then “Voice-print recognized, Colonel. You have two messages waiting. Access to docking bay three-seven-four will be opened in sixty-one beats. Alert: Praefect Crimson has advised that all vessels are to exercise special care when docking. Voice message attached.”

“Huh.” the older human said. “AI, play message.”

A loroi voice sounded. Oddly, it spoke in the humans’ English. “[Jeff, I swear by all that you hold holy, if you put another dent in my docking bay, the next thing to try translating back to realspace will be you. Alone in a lifepod.]”

Alex chuckled. When Talon looked over with one eyebrow raised, he murmured “Sounds like one of Second Legion’s hangar officers has been arguing with a UNSC pilot.” Louder, he added “We’ve been fed a route to bay three-seven-four, sir.”

“Bring us in.” Colonel Jardin ordered. He snorted. “And, ah, don’t ‘dent’ the bay.”

“Wouldn’t dream of it.” Alex responded as he entered commands into the controls.

Did Ever Plummet Sound nosed forwards and down, diving slowly towards the alien — to modern loroi — vessel.

<Amazing.> sent Beryl, eyes wide and gaze fixed out of the cockpit windows. <A Loroi Dreadstar. One that is active, yet has waited here for...> her sanzai trailed off, as the greater details now coming into view distracted the listel.

<Perhaps since before any of our ancestors set foot on Perrein.> finished Tempo, the parat’s sanzai oddly… subdued. Apparently even the mysterious and aloof mizol was not immune to the sheer awe of the occasion. <Or Deinar, or Taben.>

The prowler’s forward lights played across the glimmering purple-blue hull — when the Soia picked a color theme, evidently they really stuck to it — as the two ships neared each other. Well, if calling the colossal Dreadstar a ‘ship’ was really appropriate.

First, the eye could make out tiny shadows. Blades of darkness cast over the hull. Only after many more solon of closing could Talon recognize them as massive cylinders jutting upwards from raised bumps in the hull.

Turrets. And weapons barrels.

The Plummet drifted down past them, into what could only be described as a canyon of sorts, a deep recession in the hull. Without any way for the eye to judge scale, Talon had to bring up the sensor controls on her station.

<Two-thousand, five-hundred mannal wide, this canyon.> She sent. <And those turrets...> To Alex, she asked “What are those? The weapon emplacements?”

“Hmm?” He responded, eyes fixed on the view ahead. Right, probably busy. “Uh, probably hellbores, this close to the hangar trench. There to keep enemy ships from running in while the bay doors are open.”

In only a few beats, the tiny dot of light ahead of them exploded in size into an open hangar bay. Colossal shapes cast shadows, knife-sharp in the airless void.

Other craft docked in the bay.

Shadows reaching their claws out towards the approaching prowler.

Did Ever Plummet Sound slowed as it entered the hangar, and Talon stared up wide-eyed at the ships looming over them. “Are those—“

Infinity-class transports, yes.” Alex answered, a solon before the prowler thumped down gently onto the decking. “Looks like they’ve got the lights and gravity on for us. Uh, no atmosphere in the hangar, though.”

<It would be best for us to don our armor, in any case.> sent Tempo. <If we are to meet our… ancestors.>

The mizol’s sending finally made it truly feel real to Talon. <Are we all to leave this ship?>

<It seems unlikely that we would need to leave rapidly, unlike the previous Dreadstar that we boarded.> replied the parat. And wasn’t that a phrase which no loroi — no modern loroi — thought would ever come up.

Slightly faint from distance, sanzai came in from the lead teidar <We are prepared back here. The human soldiers are also donning their own armor.>

Talon scrambled off of her chair, bending down and taking her armor from where she had stacked it on the floor. The two tenoin helped each other into their suits, as Alex shut down the ship.

Her heart thundered in her chest as they finally assembled at the top of the prowler’s boarding ramp.

Here goes history.

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Fireblade strode down the ramp, precisely in-step with Tempo. The two of them set foot on the ancient Dreadstar’s hangar plating simultaneously.

<Satisfied, mizol?> she asked Tempo with a mental smile.

<The symbolism is established.> Tempo sent. <The military and diplomatic sides of the Union proceed side-by-side towards this meeting.>

<Which means little, if they’re not observing us.> Fireblade replied. <The pilots report only having talked to a rather simple artificial intelligence, rather than any living crew.>

<But Beryl is watching, and the loroi who crew this vessel are not the only ones whose opinions matter. Such an image of unity may be of great use within the Union.>

The two Jardins left the ramp right behind them.

“Over to the main doorway, right there.” Colonel Jardin said, pointing past them to the inner wall of the hangar bay. “We get to use the front entrance this time, not the maintenance tunnels.”

It… was almost hard to believe that this hangar bay was on a similar scale to the one they had boarded shortly after leaving the Ring system. It felt so much more crowded with the colossal human transport ships looming overhead. Especially as with only those light arrays directly over the prowler lit, the massive ships stretched far into the shadows and out of sight.

The sixteen-strong procession winding their way through the hangar were like a tiny swarm of fish, swimming through Toridas harbor beneath the gigantic maritime cargo vessels. The sort of craft that had looked so small from her favorite perch atop the ancient citadel walls, but when one was down at the waterfront looking up at them…

She shook herself, quickly checking that her thoughts had not leaked into her sanzai. She knew that her body language had not betrayed any of her nervousness — that was trained out of any and all who graduated from the academy — but a mistake in the much more complex arena of one’s mind-signature was another thing. And a teidar was duty-bound to lead her warrior sisters of the other castes, which meant that she must set the example.

Brave, fearless, and doubtless.

Maintaining that image did come easier when one could bend a cargo pallet inside-out with only a passing thought.

Tempo asked aloud “Is the corridor beyond this door serving as an airlock?”

“No.” Colonel Jardin answered, a smile in his voice. “The door itself is.”

<?> came from all the loroi nearby, even as the door in question slid open.

“[They’re really rolling out the red carpet, aren’t they?]” said Alexander Jardin.

No detectable rumble came through the decking underneath them as the slabs of metal — which had to be many mannal across! — floated aside. Beyond, pale-white walls stretched upwards, engaged structural columns trimmed in gold disappearing off into the distance on either side of the reflective black tiling of the floor.

No visible barrier took the place of the opened doors.

<I will go first.> Fireblade stepped forwards.

The briefest, most fleeting tingle flashed over her skin.

The teidar’s eyes widened as she saw the new readout on her helmet’s interior display. <There is… atmosphere. On this side of where the door was.>

<Amazing!> came the predictable — and endearing — outburst from Beryl as the rest of the group followed Fireblade through. <It can only be some form of energy field, capable of separating vacuum from atmosphere without a physical barrier!>

“Fancy, isn’t it?” asked the younger Jardin.

“It is the most fancy!” agreed one of the tenoin.

Meanwhile, Colonel Jardin turned to stalk off towards a holographic display — perhaps a console interface — on one side of the spacious corridor. “Wait here. I’ll go have a look to see where they want us.”

Fireblade, of course, followed him.

The display pulsed once as the human stepped up to it. The same computerized voice from earlier spoke from it “Greetings Colonel Pierre Jardin. Note: Ship personnel will be available to meet with you in— alert!” The artificial intelligence cut itself off. “Unidentified personnel detected.”

“They’re with me.” he immediately said.

“Scan complete. Unidentified personnel identified as loroi. No recognized Legion tag signatures. Alert: Ship security personnel have been informed. Please remain at your current location. A security team will arrive shortly to take custody of your prisoners.”

Fireblade bristled, even as the Colonel blurted out “They’re not—” he let out a sigh and muttered in his alien language “[Oh, for fuck’s sake...]” Then back to Trade “AI, flag unidentified personnel as friendly. Repeat friendly.”

“Requested redesignation is not possible without valid Legion command tag.”

“Of course.” Colonel Jardin reached up and took his helmet off, holding it tucked under one arm while the other hand rose to rub at his temple.

In the silence of the corridor, even the rest of the group a dozen paces away would have heard the whole exchange. Still, <It seems that there may be some complications.> Fireblade sent.

<To be expected, although it is unfortunate that they arose so quickly.> replied Tempo. <Remain at ready, but take no combative actions unless provoked. There should be no need to fight our… ‘cousins.’>

“AI,” the Colonel continued to ask “How long until this security team arrives?”

“Personnel are being made available, Colonel Pierre Jardin. It is expected that they will—”

A stern voice sounded from down the corridor — but not far down. “We have seen enough.”

Fireblade — and everyone else in their group, loroi and human alike — whirled towards the sound.

Just in time to see three loroi simply appear out of thin air, blinking into view in quick succession without a sound.

One stood ahead of the others, arms crossed behind her back. The other two held strange energy weapons — different from the ones the human warriors bore — held at the ready, barrels only barely low enough not to bear on any of Fireblade’s party.

The foremost of the three snapped her sharp gaze across the group, coming to rest on Colonel Jardin. Her polished-gold armor had no faceplate for her ornate helmet — although the energy-field over the door earlier showed that perhaps she didn’t need one — and so her stony expression could be easily read.

Colonel Jardin spoke quietly “[That makes things faster.]” He stepped forwards and in a louder voice spoke “I am—”

“I know who you are.” The lead ancient-loroi said. Fireblade finally put her finger on what was so unnerving about the three of them — her tone was so level that no emotion could be read into it, and her mind-signature was hidden underneath a near-perfect lotai! It was all that Fireblade could manage to even detect that there was a mind there, and then only when she concentrated on the ancient being. “I am more interested in where you found these.”

Tempo stepped up. “We are an exploration and diplomatic team from the Loroi Union. Until we found and allied with Colonel Jardin” she stressed the important words “we had no remaining knowledge of the ‘circumstances’ surrounding the collapse of the Soia Empire.”

“I see. The honesty of that claim will have to be verified.” Not even the faintest trace of a sanzai probe accompanied her statement.

<They are entirely mind-blind!> sent Fireblade. Of course the humans had told her that the ‘original’ loroi did not possess sanzai abilities, but it was still a shock to actually feel it firsthand. It made the three loroi in front of her seem almost more alien than the humans.

For his part, Colonel Jardin’s voice quite clearly conveyed his frustration. “It’s been three-hundred-thousand years, Tribune. They didn’t even know what the Soia were, not really. They thought the Soia were their direct ancestors, or something similar.”

“That is precisely the thought which concerns me.”

“Colonel Jardin has informed us as to the true nature of the Soia Empire. And what they did to our actual ancestors.” said Tempo.

“Not yours.” the ‘tribune’ corrected, eyes narrowing. It was not a word that Tempo recognized, but it was apparently a rank or such descriptor. “Your ancestors were the slaves who remained ‘loyal’ to their masters.”

“That realization had occurred to us.” Tempo conceded, doing an admirable job of keeping both her voice and her sanzai level. “We do not consider the actions or beliefs of such distant ancestors to represent us, or to dictate our actions today. There seems to be no reason to think otherwise, Tribune…?”

The ancient leader did not supply her own name, only staring flatly at Tempo for several solon.

The Colonel finally answered “Tribune Hammerstave, it is thanks to the aid of these loroi that we even found this ship, this fleet. And it is thanks to them that we can navigate the changed slipspace boundary.”

That got her attention. For the first time, actual emotion flitted across the tribune’s face. A brief flicker of hope, mixed with surprise. Then she returned to her neutral expression.

The two-pronged ornate headpiece that she wore bobbed slightly. “As evidenced by your arrival here.” Unless Fireblade was mistaken, the tribune’s voice was slightly less sharp than it had been. Perhaps they were making progress? It was so strange to be in conversation with a loroi whose mind was so utterly unreadable. “Nevertheless, your… 'associates' will remain here until sufficient security personnel have arrived to keep them under watch.”

Fireblade eyed the two warriors flanking the tribune. Their steel-gray armor was much less ornate than that worn by their leader, but the long-barreled energy weapons held with great familiarity in their arms gave no doubt as to their status as experienced warriors. Especially given how the three of them had simply appeared right next to the human & loroi group.

Warriors that were invisible both to sight and mental senses. And Fireblade had been observing them long enough now that she was increasingly certain that they weren’t truly ‘choosing’ to speak aloud rather than use sanzai; rather, these loroi did not have sanzai. Not so much as a trace of mental signature leaked through, even when their tribune’s control over her facial expression flickered.

<These three loroi seem to be old enough to predate the Soia Civil War.> Tempo sent, reaching the same conclusion.

<Indeed.> Fireblade recalled the half-humorous warning of one of her instructors at the Teidar Academy, a withered old rozerrei stooped over with age who had nonetheless repeatedly demonstrated that the staff she carried for walking remained a dangerous weapon in her gnarled hands. ‘Always beware an old woman in a caste where most die young.’

<Wise words.> sent the mizol, apparently having read the phrase out of Fireblade’s mind. A helpful hint that she’d need to find time for some more mental-defense exercises. Surely not all of these ancient loroi would be mind-blind, and it would not do to meet them with one’s defenses inadequate. <Doubly so, if these are loroi who had then survived the fifty years of war that followed the split.>

Colonel Jardin said levelly “Then we will all wait here until they arrive.” He leaned against the corridor bulkhead, and crossed his arms. “How long until Airburn is available?”

The tribune’s eyes flashed. “Starwind Legate Airburn—” she emphasized what must be a clan name and rank title: it fit the form of the names that loroi from each of the Sister Worlds had used before the Imperial period. “—has been notified of this… development.”

Her eyes snapped to Fireblade, narrowing. “Once I am satisfied that a meeting would be safe, I may allow such an event.” She turned her head back to the Colonel. “You… ‘trust’ this Guard?”

Fireblade raised one eyebrow, staring back at the ancient loroi. To Tempo, she sent <It seems that they are especially wary of me in particular.>

<Strange, given that you have not used any psychokinetic power since arriving on this vessel.> Tempo responded.

<Agreed.> And Fireblade’s helmet had its amplifier built into the frame, not easily visible externally. So how did they recognize her as a Teidar?

Beryl added <It is possible that they have some mechanism or ability to detect latent psychokinetic ability. The Soia were known to possess much greater knowledge about the mind than we have managed to uncover.>

“Yes.” Colonel Jardin spoke aloud. “Several weeks ago and shortly after these Union loroi found us, we boarded a fragment of Grand Unity.” Hammerstave’s eyebrows shot upwards at that name. In the meantime, the human jerked his head towards Fireblade. “During that boarding action, Teidar Pallan Fireblade engaged and disabled an actual Guard overseer. She displayed no sign of hesitation during that combat, nor has she expressed any sympathy for the Soia since.”

Not that the human could have received any sendings from her. It was an odd feeling, to hear an alien so deceive a loroi... and herself feeling thankful for it.

He continued, voice hardening. “Not that any of that comes as a surprise, given that again, three-hundred-thousand years have passed since the collapse of the Empire. There is nothing of the Soia’s influence left out there.”

“None of which requires any changes to our security procedures.” Hammerstave snapped back. She drew in a breath and spoke haltingly, as if forcing the words from her mouth. “But if you, Colonel, personally vouch for her reliability then I will... conditionally accept her into the presence of my Clan Leader.”

Fireblade sent privately to Tempo <If necessary, I am willing to return to wait aboard the human prowler.> She certainly wanted to see more of the inside of the vessel — although nobody’s excitement came close to the sheer anticipation vibrating off of the listel behind her — but if it was the only way to proceed…

Jardin slowly swung his head around to fix Fireblade with an exasperated look. “Promise to play nice?”

Fireblade blinked at the strange wording, before nodding once.

The human turned back. “There you have it.”

Hammerstave stared back at him for several solon, jaw visibly working. Then, “Very well.” She gestured with one hand.

A warm, yellow glow surrounded each member of the group, intensifying rapidly. It quickly blocked out all sight; all that Fireblade could see was the blinding light.

Sanzai cries of surprise rebounded between the loroi.

“[Oh, not thi—]” Alexander Jardin could be heard grumbling, before the glow engulfed everything.

And then it was gone.

She stood in the exact same position… but now in a cavernous, circular room perhaps two hundred mannal wide. The same off-white ceiling domed overhead, and the solid-black reflective tiles underfoot gave the impression of standing on a thin layer of water. Soft lighting suffused the room, with no point-source lights visible.

Several thuds sounded from behind her, as some of the human warriors dropped to one knee. Alexander Jardin had one hand grasping at the front of his neck, a grimace on his face as he swallowed repeatedly. “[I’d hoped those damned things might have stopped working after all these years.]”

“[No such luck, kid.]” grumbled one of the ODSTs said as they stood up.

<Teleportation!?> sent Beryl. <It is amazing!>

<And it appears to have a similar effect on non-Soia-engineered peoples as does a starship’s jump drive.> noted Fireblade. There hadn’t been any such flash of yellow light when the tribune and her two guards had first appeared to confront the party — a different form of teleportation, or had Fireblade’s first guess at an equally-advanced optical cloaking system been correct?

Tempo pinged all of them with her sanzai, indicating the figure standing alone in the center of the room. With her jet-black, all-covering armor, she almost blended into the floor. A cloth hood hung low over her face, leaving only a flash of blue visible. <I believe that will be this vessel’s commander.>

The mizol paused. <And yet...> a faint curl of unclear memory leaked out of her sanzai. <There is something about this room. Its shape is...> her sending trailed off.

Hammerstave stepped off to one side, saying “Colonel Jardin, you may approach. And one representative of these… ‘new’ loroi.”

Tempo and the Colonel walked towards the distant figure. They were only halfway there when Tempo agitatedly sent to Fireblade <I recognize it now! This room is an ampli—>

<Greetings> came a forceful sending from the ancient loroi in the center of the room.

The visiting loroi each flinched at the sheer pressure of the sanzai.

Fireblade grimaced, forcing herself to stand straight even as the powerful voice reverberated through her mind. It reminded her of— <A farseer.> she sent to Tempo.

<Correct.> the voice intoned, apparently intercepting the focused sanzai. <And… intriguing that your people have that concept.> For all that here was finally an ancient loroi who could send properly using sanzai rather than lowering herself to vocal speech, her sending lacked the sub- or side-channels of a normal loroi.

A mark of distrust, or was that somehow normal for the loroi of her era?

Tempo sent <The abilities of farseers have been cultivated since before the loroi — our loroi — achieved interstellar travel.> Her own sanzai was level and polite, an impressive achievement when she was so close to the forceful sending of the Ancient. <Although they are often kept sequestered from society, both to better hone their talents and to keep their own… intensity of sanzai from intruding upon others.>

Fireblade quirked a corner of her lip in a faint smile. That was unusually ‘direct’… for a mizol like Tempo. Perhaps she wasn’t as unaffected by the Farseer’s painfully-strong sanzai as Fireblade had thought her to be.

<I see.> Came the response. <Then I will try...this.> The farseer reached up with both hands and lifted her gold-trimmed hood.

As if an unnoticed spotlight trained on her had been suddenly switched off, a… ‘pressure’ ceased to press in upon Fireblade’s skin.

No, upon her mind.

Only noticeable now by its rapid absence; how long had it been present?

Off to one side, Hammerstave’s head snapped around to stare at her commander. “Legate, you—?”

“The Legion will manage without my oversight for the length of one conversation, tribune.” Her voice came coolly. <I assume that this unamplified level is more comfortable for you?>

After only a moment, Tempo responded <Yes, it is. Your politeness is appreciated.>

Interesting. Hammerstave, for all her apparent inability to send or receive sanzai, seemed to have perceived the change in her superior’s ambient power. Perhaps her lotai was not as absolute as Fireblade had assumed.

A distant echo of that earlier pressure returned, as the Farseer turned her head slightly.

To stare straight at Fireblade.

<Your Guard is observant.> For the first time, a recognizable sub-channel accompanied the Ancient’s sanzai, surprise and sudden wariness mixing together.

Well, if the Legate was so direct as to read the conscious thoughts right out of her mind, then Fireblade would be equally direct.

<I am a Teidar.> Fireblade emphasized, even before Tempo granted her permission to send. As Fireblade had known she would. <I have heard of these ‘Guards’ only recently, and have already fought one in combat. They are nothing like my caste-sisters.> She pressed into her side-channels all of the contempt she felt for the Guards and their slavish loyalty to their abusive Soia masters.

For over a solon, there was nothing. No spoken speech, no sanzai.

Then <You are an intriguing mystery, young warrior. Step forwards — I would see you properly with my own eyes.>

Tempo sent a sub-verbal agreement for Fireblade to walk up to her and the Colonel, closer to the Farseer.

At Fireblade’s first footstep, Tribune Hammerstave now spun to her. “You—!”

Once more, her spoken — therefore slow — sentence was interrupted by Legate Airburn. “Let her approach.”

Grinding her teeth, Hammerstave did nothing but glare as the teidar stepped past. Fireblade would have felt more than a twinge of sympathy for her, if the ancient loroi hadn’t been brusque and suspicious enough to make Stillstorm look friendly by comparison.

Well, almost.

She drew even with Tempo and the colonel, the human waiting silently with one eyebrow raised as he looked between the teidar and the legate. The three of them walked side-by-side closer to Airburn, stopping perhaps five mannal distant.

Now that she was closer to the center of the room, Fireblade could see that Airburn stood atop a slight rise. Just enough that the teidar now looked up at the farseer, sharp-green eyes meeting deep-blue.

Airburn herself looked different than Fireblade had expected. Without much to judge by thanks to her trimmed and formal sanzai, one was left to judge age by the Ancient’s facial features. No visible wrinkles, short ears but a tall nose… if Fireblade had to guess, she would have said that this loroi was perhaps of an equal age with Stillstorm.

Ignoring the hundreds of thousands of years of suspended animation, naturally.

The Legate mused, <You are indeed no Guard. Not only Sanzai, but also Psychokinetic power, all free of the Soia’s control and reproducing naturally.> A bemused smile tugged at one corner of her lip. <How the Soia would have howled, to see such a danger running loose!>

Fireblade bristled, but Tempo beat her to a response. <The Teidar are loyal to the Union, and are a 'danger' only to our enemies.>

<You truly trust them so—?> Airburn began, before her sanzai jumped onto a new sentence <Of course! You each can speak to each other’s mind and read thoughts. Such obligatory honesty between equals. Yes, I can see how that would… change things.>

Her eyes snapped back and forth between Fireblade and Tempo, also jumping up to stare presumably at Beryl before returning to rest on Fireblade. <And different… ‘castes,’ you called them. Specialization, perhaps overly so… yes, that would serve.>

Fireblade was still composing her response to such a statement when Colonel Jardin coughed at Tempo’s other side. “I trust that the introductions are over, and that we may now compare our situations and plan our next moves.”

Taking a half-step back, Fireblade let the mizol handle the talks. “That seems wise. You know the ‘Legate,’ then?”

“You can say that.” the human responded, as he turned to face Airburn. “And I may as well get the bad news out of the way first. Tempest is dead.” He delivered the line flatly, without feeling. But Fireblade caught the slight tensing of his shoulder and facial muscles, could feel the suppressed emotions.

Airburn closed her eyes, drawing in a slow breath.

Held it.

Then released a sigh. “As we expected. You would not have returned without her, otherwise.” Airburn opened her eyes, turning her gaze on Jardin. “She died well?”

“The last of the Soia perished along with her, by her hand. As did Grand Unity.” the human glanced aside at Tempo and Fireblade. “The Empire is gone, and so thoroughly that even their own scattered descendants remember them in only the vaguest legends.”

“So I have heard.” the Legate followed his eyes, and nodded to Tempo. “I also see that you have found some way of overcoming whatever it is that the Soia did to the slipspace barrier.”

“We have.” Jardin explained. “It was a joint discovery, to give credit where it is due.” He turned around, gesturing to the mixed crowd of human and Union warriors waiting at one side of the chamber. “The white-haired one and the two in orange armor worked alongside my nephew to find a route through. You will have to ask them for the details.”

“Ah, young Alexander. It is good to hear that our people can still work together, no matter whose exact descendants they are.”

<’Alexander.’> Tempo sent. <The use of an isolated first name is a mark of familiarity among humans, I believe. You know these humans personally?>

<Of course.> the Legate replied immediately. <They are my grandfather-in-law and adopted cousin-in-law, effectively.>

Fireblade frowned, eyes darting aside to Tempo as the mizol put the teidar’s thoughts more politely. <We do not recognize this terminology, ‘in law.’>

<A human phrase, meaning one’s relatives by marriage.>

<I… see. They merge clans by way of pair bonding?> Tempo sent.

Fireblade had heard of some of the few remaining native clans on Deinar having vaguely similar practices — a male of one clan gifted to another clan as a way to cement an alliance — but for such traditions to survive even as a species advanced to starflight?

<Indeed they do.> Airburn sent.

<But with pair-bonding being common among their species, would that not mean that a great percentage of clans are so merged, with an endless series of links between parents, siblings, and these ‘marriages’?> Tempo asked.

Airburn sent back a burst of weary indifference. <It works for them... usually. The humans seem to like their social systems complicated.>

<And how did—> Tempo cut herself off. <We are straying from the point of this conversation.> Aloud, she said “Our people have been impressed with Colonel Jardin and his warriors. We look forward to continuing to work together with humanity.”

“An opportunity which I do not doubt that you will have.” the Legate replied. “Once we have put together a technical team for your experts to explain this slipspace discovery to.”

“And how long will that take?” the Colonel cut in.

“I have begun to awaken the UNSC leadership in stasis aboard this vessel and alerted the Eleventh Legion.” She said to the human, before turning back to Tempo. “They will need some time to process this new information and determine whom they wish to send to speak with you. This should take no more than ten-thousand beats.”

Unexpectedly, Airburn then stepped towards them, down off of the raised dais on which she had stood. “We will await them in the nearest habitation section.” As she passed the group, the Legate clapped one hand onto Colonel Jardin’s shoulder, pulling him along with her. “And you will tell me everything of grandmother’s final mission. She will be remembered properly.”

“I’ll tell what I can,” the human said, as Tempo and Fireblade followed the two back towards the rest of the group. “but… I wasn’t there for her last fight.” His voice was grim.

“She ordered you away.” It was not a question.
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Chapter Fourteen-point-five: More Discovery

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While the two continued their conversation, Tempo sent a tightly-focused message to Fireblade <Their leader seems to be very friendly compared to the tribune. It is difficult to tell how much of that is honest.>

Taking a few solon to carefully shield her own thoughts from the tribune in front of her, Fireblade responded <It may be useful to get a sense of how distant we are from the docking bay with our prowler in it, and the route from here to there.> She noted only after sending that the Did Ever Plummet Sound was now in her mind as ‘their’ ship, rather than solely the ‘human’ vessel. When had that changed?

She continued <We should ask to send a few warriors back to the ship, on some pretense.> It would be Tempo’s job to come up with said pretense, of course. <Without the use of their teleportation.>

<A very good point. It will also be interesting to see if the humans’ Colonel will seek the same.> Quickening her step slightly, the mizol drew even with Legate Airburn and spoke “If we are to recount our pilots’ exact methods for adapting the humans’ slipspace navigation, it seems best for some of our personnel to retrieve recordings and other data from our ship and present that at the later meeting.”

Tempo eyed Colonel Jardin. “It seems likely that your pilot may wish to do the same.”

The human leader nodded in agreement. “Good idea. And… I think it’d be appreciated if we all could skip the teleport. We’ve got the time to spare, after all.”

Airburn strode towards the curved wall of the compartment, where the floor continued to rise into a smooth meeting with the descending ceiling. The waiting human and loroi warriors split ahead of her like the sea before a ship. “That can be arranged.”

She gestured with one hand, and the wall split open along an invisible horizontal seam around head-height, the floor flattening down as the ceiling rose out of the way.

Outside was a corridor just as over-sized as the one they had seen earlier in the ship. It led off into the distance, no side-branches that Fireblade could see closer than several hundred mannal. Not so surprising for a Farseer’s amplifier chamber to be isolated, but the sheer scale of this vessel…

Two platforms waited for them, floating half a mannal above the floor. Their coal-black horizontal surface was ringed by thin, golden railings which slid aside as the group approached.

Airburn gestured to one of the things. “This freight transporter will take your chosen personnel back to your vessel. All others will be taken by the other to the park where we will await the representatives of the UNSC and the Eleventh Legion.”

‘Freight transporter’? The small craft was far more finely-decorated than that title would imply, for all that it did not shift at all as Alexander Jardin stepped onto the first one. The human waved one hand over a section of the railing, and a holographic screen burst into being. Evidently he was familiar enough with the vehicle.

<Who shall accomp—> Fireblade began to send, but Tempo beat her to it.

<Arrir Talon, Teidar Mothwing and Tozet Beryl.> The former already had her hands on the railing ready to haul herself up onto the transporter even as Tempo sent her list.

Not that Fireblade disagreed with her choices. The teidar added <Mothwing, Beryl, ensure that you note the path this vehicle takes between here and the hangar bay, as well as the route back to our eventual meeting point.> That would give one listel who would never forget the route, and one teidar who would know what to look for in terms of how easy it would be to travel there in case of any… 'sudden necessity.'

Not that Fireblade expected any such unpleasantness to arise, but it was a teidar’s duty to be prepared.

Tempo finished <Arrir Talon, you and Beryl are to work with Alexander Jardin to have all the records of our flights in that vessel made ready, as well as your observations and commentary on them.>

Fireblade knew from experience that that would take the hard-working listel only a few thousand solon. They would return well before the other representatives would arrive at the Legate’s meeting.

Which made it all the more surprising when Tempo sent <Take what time you need to pursue other objectives before returning. You will not be needed here within two cycles from now. We will have a message sent to you if that changes. If it helps, you may consider yourself off-duty until then.>

It took Fireblade a moment to recall what the mizol was thinking about. Of course, the flare of excitement from the tenoin arrir did help jog her memory. <’Other objectives’?> Fireblade mirrored Tempo’s phrasing, sending privately to her mizol friend. <Is that truly still worth pursuing?>

<It remains as important as ever.>

<Even now that we have already found this refugee fleet? And with surviving human leadership, surely Colonel Jardin will return to his people. And his nephew will follow.> For all that Fireblade was certainly glad that the ‘task’ had fallen to the tenoin and not her, she did recognize that the peculiar human warrior-males were warriors. Alexander Jardin would not be distracted from his duties to his people, even when pursued by two eager tenoin.

Tempo indicated Tribune Hammerstave, standing rigidly off to one side of the group. <It is evident that not all of these ancient loroi trust us. But they do trust the humans… or at least are more receptive to their opinions. It is therefore still important that we publicly demonstrate a certain ‘friendliness’ to the aliens.>

The mizol had laid out her thoughts dispassionately, but a hint of amusement worked its way into her sub-channels with her final note <Besides, the tenoin and Beryl have achieved a great deal with their piloting work, and it seems appropriate to grant each of them the reward that is so clearly on their minds.>

<Certainly, and—> Fireblade’s thoughts stumbled to a halt. <Beryl!?>

Now there was definitely mirth in Tempo’s sanzai as she responded <Her boundless curiosity is well-known to all of Stillstorm’s crew. Especially when it comes to alien cultures.>

That was certainly the listel that Fireblade had come to call her friend, but still…

Tempo added ruefully, her sanzai going faint <And she is young...>

Which, for all its truth, was something that Beryl did not like being reminded of.

<She is wise enough, for her years.> Fireblade sent.

Which admittedly meant that she would not appreciate Fireblade second-guessing her decisions. The teidar looked on as Beryl stood at Alexander Jardin’s shoulder, the light from the holographic controls reflecting brightly in her eyes.

<And you can relax, Fireblade.> Tempo sent, with a burst of wry humor. None of which reached her face, as the mizol kept her expression carefully neutral while she watched Colonel Jardin giving some final instructions to his nephew. <She won’t be able to do anything today — the moment that the three of them have the data prepared, that tenoin arrir is going to monopolize him.> Her side-channels conveyed some of the thoughts which Tempo had gleaned from the arrir’s mind.

Thoughts which Fireblade chose to not examine too closely. <I see that Arrir Talon’s mental defenses are far from being as strong as she thinks them to be.> She closed her eyes for a solon, suppressing a smirk. <Pilots.>Without a sound, the cargo transport departed, gliding smoothly away. Legate Airburn watched it go. “Ah, to be young again.” She then turned back to the group, her voice dropping to a more serious tone as she gestured to the remaining transport. “Now, on to the meeting.”

Once all were aboard, the black-and-gold vehicle departed. Fireblade quickly adjusted her footing, as the expected sense of acceleration failed to materialize.

Inertial dampeners? On a tiny craft no more than fifteen mannal long?

<I am glad to see that there are still some things which we can teach you younger civilizations.> sent Airburn. Fireblade thought she was being humorous, but with her clipped sanzai devoid of sub-channels it was near-impossible to tell.

By contrast, Tempo’s sanzai retained its full spectrum, although Fireblade noted where the mizol was evidently carefully phrasing her thoughts. <There seems to be much that the Union would be interested to learn from your ‘era.’ It is to be expected that technology is among that category.>

<Several of our technical experts are being awoken now and will attend the meeting. They may even be ready before the representatives from the Eleventh Legion or the UNSC arrive. It will be discussed at the meeting just how much we will open talks and trade with your people.>

Fireblade’s gaze darted aside to catch the tail-end of Beryl’s own transport as it rounded a curve off down its own corridor. Beryl would definitely wish to be present when those topics came up.

In the meantime, Tempo kept any concern out of her sanzai as she nonchalantly sent <It seems understandable that your people may not feel immediate fellowship with ours, but know that we hold only honest curiosity towards yours.>

The fact that the mizol chose to list her emotions so bluntly in her sending indicated that she thought that Airburn genuinely was stunted in her own ability to receive the full spectrum of sanzai.

Instead of answering directly, the Legate then spoke aloud in the humans’ language “[Colonel, what is your impression of these loroi? Of their Union? Are they trustworthy?]”

The senior human responded immediately “[I’ve only spoken with these few here with me, their junior flag-rank leader, and her superior officer. They’ve been perfectly honest — a bit bluntly so, if anything — in every dealing I’ve had with them. Can’t speak to their society as a whole, though; you and I know well enough how little a government may resemble the troops at the front lines.]”

“[I see. How much have you told them?]”

“[Enough to get us here. A few things that weren’t classified… or didn’t need to be anymore.]”

“[That open, really?]” Fireblade couldn’t understand the words, but the playful bite in Airburn’s speech crossed the language barrier. “[I see it only took three-hundred-thousand years to melt a bit of that old ONI secrecy, then. I should be jealous of them.]”

“[They haven’t shot at me.]”

“[I did miss, you remember. And once they get to know you I’m sure—]”

The Legate shared a brief laugh with Colonel Jardin.

<Interesting.> sent Tempo in a tightly-focused message. Hopefully private, then. Yet her compressed side-channels showed that her focus was not on the two senior aliens — and these Legion loroi were at least part ‘alien’ from Fireblade’s perspective — but on the face of Tribune Hammerstave, standing off to one side of the moving platform and watching the conversation impassively. <Either Hammerstave is very well schooled at controlling her features, or she truly does not understand the human language any more than we do.>

Fireblade glanced over at the Tribune, whose own eyes immediately snapped over to meet hers. And tightened, as a scowl pulled at the corners of her mouth.

<It seems that we can assume the latter.> Fireblade sent back to Tempo, careful to keep her sanzai private.

The trick for reading a person’s feelings by gauging only their facial and body language was one of the aspects of training common to both mizol and teidar. Admittedly, Fireblade’s own instructors had not taught their pupils much beyond how to gauge a warrior’s hostility by how she carried herself — or to see an impending strike coming even before the opponent began to move.

But the uncanny degree of accuracy that an experienced mizol like Tempo could reach in her visual readings still sometimes unnerved Fireblade.

The transport whirled around a corner, the corridor ahead decorated the same way as the rest of the dreadstar’s interior that Fireblade had seen — and built on just the same colossal scale.

As the vehicle settled onto its new trajectory, Airburn turned to look at Tempo over her shoulder. <I have noted with some surprise that there is no loroi among your group who can far-speak. Is this… normal in your time?> There came a pause. <Or was this talent not given commonly to your ancestors? It is known that the Soia granted many powers to those loroi that stayed loyal to them, but their full extent is not known to us.>

<’Far-speak.’> Tempo echoed the thought back, examining it in her side-channels. <It seems that this is what is practiced by those we call ‘Farseers.’ The ability to sense minds at a great distance, yes?>

<So you do know of it.>

From experience, Fireblade could tell that Tempo was carefully formulating her thoughts before sending them. <Farseers form an important part of the Union’s capabilities, although they rarely seek leadership positions. It seems that this is not the case for your Legions?>

Given that Farseers were a civilian caste, ‘rarely seek leadership positions’ was a serious twist on the thought. One that was obvious by Tempo’s clipped side-channels, but these Legion loroi didn’t seem to sense anything via sanzai other than one’s main thoughts…

<Truly? How do your leaders then coordinate their forces on campaign?>

<That seems to be the duty of fleet and force commanders. The ability to Farsense is rare enough that those with the talent are not to be risked near the front lines.>

Fireblade noted that Tempo had not said anything about the farseers deployed aboard strike-group flagships such as Tempest.

<I see that there are certainly many difference between our peoples, cousin.> the Legate sent. <But surely they would not be in— ah, of course!> Airburn’s sanzai halted and stumbled over itself in a mimicry of verbal speech, a very peculiar thing to receive. Were her thoughts truly that disorganized, or was she having difficulty sending them? Then again, if the humans’ story was correct, the Legate would have been from one of the earliest loroi generations to even have sanzai… a thought which still made Fireblade’s ears itch at its strangeness.

The ancient loroi in question continued <Severed as you were from the Empire, you would not have your own dreadstars. Your people, then, must live aboard what smaller ships they can construct.> Airburn smiled broadly at both Tempo and Fireblade. <It must be a reassuring feeling to be aboard a proper starship, now.>

Tempo took a few solon to answer. <It is indeed a great honor to stand here.> She paused in her sending. <But while our own myths of the Soia only mention the dreadstars, were they truly the only starships which the Empire used?>

Fireblade’s mind went to the massive hangar that they’d landed in earlier. It was full now of human transport ships, but presumably it had been designed for other craft...

<Of course not — that’s why they made us! The finest starship crews that the Empire’s science could produce.> Airburn boasted. <Not that they ever trusted us to command them independently, of course.> It was hard to follow the precise implications in her sanzai without any sub-channels, but it did not take a mizol to recognize the resentment in that last phrase.

The transport vehicle took another corner at speed, and by now Fireblade was accustomed enough to the tiny craft and its inertial dampeners that she resisted the urge to lean into the turn.

<It is mentioned in our legends that the Soia kept tight control over their subject people’s travel between star systems.> Tempo sent. Unlike the ancient loroi, her sub-channels were clear enough to read. <Did they truly apply this even to loroi?>

<Of course the paranoid bitches kept a watch on every last ship that moved within the Empire!> Airburn grimaced. <They couldn’t run the risk of somebody doing anything the Council didn’t expect and plan for, now could they?>

Tempo turned her head slightly, exchanging a surprised glance with Fireblade. A rapid blur of sub-verbal sanzai between the two of them, and then Fireblade sent to Airburn <That seems like a poor pool to pick military leaders from.>

<You can say that again.> the Legate replied.

Fireblade frowned, and then shrugged to herself. If honoring that strange request was what it took to be ‘polite’… <That seems like a poor—>

Airburn waved one hand, as if to brush away the sanzai. <Human metaphor, nevermind. But if your memories of your foremothers’ Soia masters are incomplete, let it suffice to say only that they were absolutely dedicated to controlling all that they could. All interplanetary traffic was tracked and inspected, and all interstellar vessels had to be under the direct command of a Soia.>

The legate grimaced, but then her expression softened. <You should count yourselves fortunate to have been born in your time, and not have to answer to a class of civilian overseers breathing down your neck at all times. Double-guessing your every decision, questioning your communications...> her sanzai trailed off without a proper ending.

Fireblade glanced aside at Tempo, carefully trimming back her side-channels.

By the raised eyebrow she got in return from the mizol, Tempo understood her thoughts all the same. And by the barely-perceptible upward quirk of one corner of her lip, Tempo also saw the humor in it.

Tempo turned back to Airburn and sent <The Union does not place its warriors under civilian oversight.>

After all, mizol were warriors. Even if some grumblers might occasionally say otherwise.

<That is reassuring to hear. How is your empire organized?> the legate asked.

<I am… uncertain how much I may completely reveal without the permission of my superiors.> Tempo sent. Apparently even senior mizol couldn’t make such calls on their own — unless Tempo was priming that as an excuse to be more reticent on future answers? Trying to wrap her mind around all the thoughts & subterfuge made Fireblade’s head hurt… and also made her glad to be teidar and not mizol.

Tempo continued <But it would be certainly acceptable to explain that the Union is lead by our Emperor Greywind, fourth to hold that title. She is appointed by the Diadem Council, which is made up of the senior commanders of the Union’s military forces.>

That covered all the information given to children in their first year at a creche, at least.

<That is as I would expect of our people.> Airburn sent after a solon or two. <But truly none of these leaders are ‘farseers’?>

<None.> Tempo confirmed. <A farseer’s duties are… strenuous, and therefore those who reach the age expected of senior combat leaders no longer possess the stamina required for that role.>

That matched what Fireblade had been told about that caste. Working within an amplifier mechanism so large that it encompassed an entire compartment, hurling one’s senses outwards over the vast gulfs between the stars…

Her head throbbed, right where her amplifier terminals burrowed down through the skin behind her ears. To imagine having to strain one’s powers for long bursts at a time, knowing that the entire strikeforce’s fortunes depended on your doing so?

Civilian caste or no, the farseers were as determined and brave as any loroi could hope to be. They were fellow warriors, in her eyes.

Although even then, the fact that farseers were civilians was the main reason that they were never found in warrior’s roles, certainly never in command positions.

Fireblade began to organize her thoughts into sanzai to point this out, when she caught herself.

Perhaps she had spent too many years working alongside Tempo, listening to the mizol as she spoke with neridi, barsam, historians, all the lesser races of the Union. Perhaps some of the manipulative mizol’s perspective on conversation and negotiation had slipped through to stain Fireblade’s own mind… but she thought she understood why Tempo had held her thoughts.

After all, Airburn would probably not appreciate learning just now that her Union counterparts weren’t considered to be true warriors.

As if she had detected the faint beginnings of Fireblade’s cut-off sanzai, the ancient loroi snapped her gaze over to the teidar. <I see.>

Fireblade held her breath, clamping down hard on her sanzai channels to hold in her thoughts.

Airburn continued, without breaking eye contact <And I can well imagine the… stresses of using one’s powers. My own have certainly aged me well beyond my years.>

Now Fireblade blinked in confusion. Airburn already looked younger than she would have expected for the commander of a dreadstar, appearing to be just short of her first century judging by her ears and nose. Younger-looking than Stillstorm, certainly, and now she said that she was not even of that age?

<How old are you?> The thought fought its way loose from her mind before she could suppress it.

To her surprise, Airburn quirked a thin smile. <If your people are thinking of working with the humans in the future, you would do well to learn to avoid such a question. ‘Never ask a lady her age.’>

A strange custom — how else would you judge a warrior’s experience in her role than by her age?

The legate continued <But all jesting aside, I have—> she paused. <You would not know the length of an Empire’s Year. I shall say thirty-seven human years, then.>

Fireblade glanced aside at Tempo, whose own sanzai filled in <Thirty-seven Deinar years.>

Airburn let out a single bark of laughter. <The very same? An amusing coincidence.>

<It does seem unlikely, yes.> sent Tempo. <But is such… 'youth' common among leaders of your Legions?>

<It shouldn’t be.> the ancient loroi’s mood darkened rapidly, settling like a chill over the conversation. <But the Second Legion has fought through the harshest of the fighting, all the way to the end of the War. The Legion has survived, but many of our sisters did not.>

A pang of understanding echoed from all four of the Union loroi standing in the vehicle.

Tempo was the first to ask <Even here on your dreadstar?>

Airburn glanced between Tempo and Fireblade. <When one fought against the Soia, none who extended her mind’s senses beyond her own body was safe. My predecessor had her mind burned away half of a year before our attempted departure at the end of the War.>

Colonel Jardin turned to look at Airburn, likely in response to her earlier laugh. “How long until we’re ready to begin the talks?”

The vehicle sped towards a looming doorway, a vast circular portal which slid aside as they approached.

Airburn answered “I have received notice that the representatives from Eleventh Legion and the UNSC have arrived at our docks. They will join us within minutes.”

Whatever a ‘minute’ was.

Fireblade looked to Tempo. All would be up to the mizol, now.
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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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For anyone curious, the architectural style inside the Dreadstars is based on the Orokin architecture style from the game 'Warframe.' I got bored of that game from a *gameplay* perspective long ago, but the visual design that their developers put in is fantastic. I used to spend hours just walking around Orokin derelicts, simply taking in the scenery and thinking of how it would have looked back when it was operating. So here, the Soia are in love with the same "black reflective floors, soaring white walls, gold highlights" theme.
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Chapter Fifteen: Negotiations

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The scene was both familiar and unfamiliar to Tempo, in equal measure.

Familiar, for the four groups of people stood at the center of an open room, gold-and-white walls curving gracefully overhead as diffuse light filled the space. None of the elaborate meeting tables of the Neridi, or a Barsam negotiation’s rigidly-ordered speaking, but a sort of rolling negotiation that was not entirely dissimilar from how different factions of loroi would negotiate with each other.

And yet unfamiliar because it was all done aloud.

“—have given us no actual reason to trust them, let alone move to their aid.” the speaker for the Eleventh Legion continued. Colonel Jardin had given Tempo a quick description of the various representatives… which turned out to have been rather superfluous when it came to the leader of the Eleventh Legion’s small group. Lesein — 'Retainer,' an odd title for a nominally-diplomatic speaker — Bronzeknife had made her character quite obvious.

She made Tempo miss arguing with Stillstorm… somehow.

Colonel Jardin had spoken quietly to the UNSC representative earlier, but had then walked back to stand with the Union’s group by the time the actual talks began. An unexpected show of support… and one whose necessity became obvious as soon as Bronzeknife had begun speaking.

The human in question cleared his throat. “As I have already explained to Legate Airburn, it is thanks to the Union that we even can navigate Slipspace, after what the Soia did to it.” His support was certainly welcome, but Tempo wondered what he would someday ask for in return...

Bronzeknife made a dismissive motion with one hand. “Which they very clearly provided in the hopes of looting whatever remains may have been left by us, rather than any kindness in their hearts.”

She was… mostly wrong. Duskcrown, Stillstorm and Tempo had supported Jardin’s team and their exploratory mission with that goal in mind, certainly, but that had been before they’d learned that some of the ancient loroi and human fleet had survived.

The Eleventh Legion spokeswoman continued “It is also more than clear as to their actual ancestry. The descendants of those too servile or craven to turn their backs on the abusive Soia cannot — must not — be trusted.” She glared across at Tempo, one corner of her lip lifting into a barely-concealed sneer.

Now it was the UNSC’s formal representative who spoke. She certainly looked as old as the thousands of years that had passed: deep, drooping lines etched across a face wreathed by only a faint dusting of pale-white hair. Yet her voice was strong; her eyes, piercing. “We have trusted those who had directly served the Soia before, and each of us here owes our very survival to that choice. Or do you need me to elaborate on your decades of unflinching service to the Empire, Lesein?”

The ancient loroi twitched one eye, her head snapping around to face the human speaker even as she flung one arm out to point at Tempo. “We are nothing like them.”

“Correct. They had only ever had the faintest of memories of the Soia, and knew nothing of the Empire’s actual nature.”

“And yet they bear the marks of the Council’s own favor.” Bronzeknife said. “They speak with their minds, just like those chosen by the Soia. I have heard that they even count a Guard among their number, one granted the powers of a minor Soia herself!”

Tempo kept the frown off her face, but her thoughts soured nonetheless. She had hoped that sending Fireblade back to the ship to notify Beryl to return would keep the Teidar’s powers out of the discussion. She well remembered how shocked Jardin and his warriors had been by the fact that some Union loroi possessed telekinesis, and had anticipated how that would look to the Legion Loroi.

It was probably for the best that she had not at all mentioned her own powers. She hadn’t yet come up with a surreptitious way to steer the elder Jardin into telling her if the Soia could manipulate minds as mizol were taught to do, but she feared that she could guess the answer anyways.

Now the Colonel spoke again, further repeating several of his points from the earlier argument with Tribune Hammerstave. “The Teidar, as her caste is called, has fought against an actual Guard. Defeated her soundly, and saw her executed when she might have been spared.”

Bronzeknife snorted. “The Soia were never bothered when they had to sacrifice a loroi life or two — or a thousand — in pursuit of their own goals and trickery. You would have us believe that these daughters of the Soia would be any different?”

“They have been nothing but open and honest in their dealings with me and my people.” Jardin shot back. “They resupplied my prowler, they have fought alongside us in three battles already, and they have been entirely friendly while in cramped quarters together with us aboard a small prowler.”

“Your opinion is hardly surprising, Colonel. We have heard your testimony of events aboard this ‘Ring’ of the Soia’s creation.” the Lesein’s nose narrowed as her gaze slid sideways to look over Tempo. “Your own… tendencies when it comes to loroi whom you rescue are well-known.”

Jardin bristled, but it was Legate Airburn who spoke next, voice full of iron. “You will keep your comments civil aboard our vessel, Advisor. Clan Starwind will hold Clan Dustfall responsible for any personal insults here that demand repayment, no matter at whom they are directed.”

The two ancient loroi glared at each other, and finally there was enough of a break in the talks for Tempo to get her own time to speak. “The Loroi Union has been shocked to learn of the nature of the Soia Empire, and we are as appalled as any of you to discover how they betrayed you… and our ancestors.”

Bronzeknife’s eyes narrowed, and she opened her mouth to retort.

But Tempo kept speaking, preventing her from easily interrupting — rather easier to do aloud than having to overpower someone else’s sanzai. “Yes, our ancestors. They made their choice, and while I cannot understand what thoughts could have driven them to that end I do not doubt that further Soia manipulation was involved. Our ancestors chose poorly, yes, but perhaps not solely out of their own flawed reasoning.”

That should steer the hostility away from the Union, hopefully. Guessing at the motivations of her own very distant ancestors was a completely baseless assumption on Tempo’s part, yes, but one that was plausible… and more importantly, would play to the biases of these Legion loroi.

A dry laugh rattled out from the UNSC negotiator. “I daresay that this loroi is cut from the same cloth as any of yours, Lesein.”

“Sark, I need not—”

“’Vice Admiral Sark,’ Lesein.” The human emphasized, voice light. “The rules of this chamber accord each speaker their full title, regardless of seniority… or personal opinions.”

Bronze knife’s mouth pinched, but she ground out “Vice Admiral, then. I need not remind you that your people have even more to lose by some...” her eyes slid aside, glancing at Tempo briefly before returning to the aged human “subterfuge than do ours. Yet you support this foolishness?”

“We have yet to fully hear what her Union actually suggests, Lesein. I can hardly argue against ‘nothing,’ yes?” Pale-colored eyes turned to lock onto Tempo — was that faded coloration normal for humans, or a result of their alien aging process? “I suggest that we let her speak her part.”

All eyes in the room turned to the mizol. She bore the weight of their gaze easily enough; even Bronzeknife’s bluster thus far was no worse than Stillstorm in a towering rage. “The Union did not expect to find living survivors from your Legions or further survivors from the UNSC, yes, but we are gladdened beyond description to have done so.”

Beyond verbal description, that is. It would have been simple enough to convey her feeling via sanzai, but Bronzeknife held herself utterly closed to mental communications and the human Admiral seemed to have her lotai-machine fully engaged.

She continued “It is my intent as the leader of this Union expedition to make two offers to you, in a spirit of friendly cooperation and hope for future exchange. One: once my technical expert returns from the human prowler,” Beryl was no gallen, but she was the closest thing that Tempo’s small team had right now “she will gladly speak with any navigators that you choose, and explain what we have found about directing ships through ‘changed’ slipspace.”

She snapped her gaze from one person to another, ensuring that each understood the full import of that offer. “Your people will no longer be stuck here as you have been for some time.”

Legate Airburn nodded cordially, asking “And the other point?”

“While the Union’s expedition was brought here thanks to the aid of Colonel Jardin and his vessel and we cannot make an offer with a craft which we do not control, we would like to invite a contact team from any and all factions — Legions and UNSC — to visit the Union and open formal diplomatic talks there, traveling aboard whichever ship you feel best.” Her eyes lingered on Bronzeknife. “We will provide navigational routes to one of our core worlds where further negotiations may take place.” The trust inherent in that statement would be even more obvious if it was not specifically pointed out.

Although given the colossal scale of the UNSC starships, and especially the genuine Dreadstars of the two Legions, it would probably be a wise idea for them to stop at an outer Union system first, and allow for a warning message to the Diadem Council to precede them deeper towards the Sister Worlds. But that could be arranged later.

From her side, Colonel Jardin added “I volunteer the Did Ever Plummet Sound for any such trip. She is well able to evade any threat — however unlikely such an incident may be — and I can have her navigational data ready to be scrubbed at a moment’s notice.”

Tempo nodded at that. She had never doubted that the humans were taking such precautions when transporting her team of loroi — she would have done the exact same, in their position — and it should now help to assuage any fears on the part of the 11th Legion representative.

The ancient loroi in question worked her jaw silently for a few solon, before saying “There is then the matter of selecting just who would be sent on such a journey. Sufficient guards and escorts would have to be provided, of course.”

“Which will definitely make everybody friendly, that many people crammed onto a prowler.” muttered Colonel Jardin, quietly enough that hopefully only Tempo could hear.

Nonetheless, Bronzeknife bristled and her sharp gaze slid aside to Jardin, but she did not respond.

Tempo blinked slowly, stealthily letting out an exasperated breath. This really was all too similar to many loroi negotiations that she had experienced — or perhaps ‘survived’ was the better term — before.

Hopefully Beryl and Fireblade would return soon.

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Fireblade stood silently, arms at rest behind her back, wrists touching. Looking out at the front of the transport vehicle as it sped through the dreadstar’s halls, nothing of her body moved, but her eyes drank in every turn, every detail of the route that they took to the hangar. She was no listel, yes, but Fireblade had led soroin footsoldiers and her fellow teidar — and before that, fellow Seren resistance fighters — in battles through all sorts of terrain and ship interiors.

She would remember this route and these corridors… just in case.

At the same time, her ears strained to listen behind her, waiting for any movement from the ODST that accompanied her on the trip. She knew full well why Tempo had sent her away at the start of the negotiations, but it had been surprising when the Colonel had done the same with one of his warriors.

Fireblade was… mostly certain that the human warrior hadn’t been sent to keep an eye on her. At least, not solely for that purpose.

She glanced over her shoulder, noting that the ODST was still leaning back against the handrail of the vehicle, head lowered and gaze focused on the datapad in his hand. If he had been tasked with keeping her under surveillance, he didn’t seem to be working too hard at it. But then again, warrior or no, he was a male; it was understandable if he got distracted from his duties at times.

Suddenly, the transport burst out of a doorway into what Fireblade recognized as the corridor immediately outside of the dock where the Did Ever Plummet Sound had landed. The high, arched ceiling overhead made the vehicle’s speed feel almost slow, and yet the corridor flashed by in a bare few solon before the transport unceremoniously halted immediately by the doorway to the hangar.

“[Looks like that’s our stop.]” The ODST said, straightening up just as the boarding gate slid open. He looked over at Fireblade and gestured to the opening. “[Ladies first, Red.]” The alien paused, and said in broken Trade “Be pleased to go first, warrior.”

A strange custom. But it should be fine — like Fireblade, the ODST did not carry a weapon.

And unlike Fireblade, the humans lacked telekinesis entirely. There was little threat here.

She stepped down off of the platform, still impressed with how it seemed to not shift at all as two armored warriors removed their weight from it. Passing through the energy-field that acted as a near-miraculous airlock to the outer hangar was also just as impressive as the first time.

The prowler sat ahead as before, but now with some unseen overhead spotlight trained on it, illuminating the deck for several mannal around the craft. This also highlighted the several small vehicles now clustered around it, carrying machines whose cables now trailed underneath the prowler and disappeared into the sharp airless shadows there.

Maintenance systems, most likely; they looked similar enough to those that she’d seen aboard hangars from Tempest to Storm Surge. Perhaps the people speaking at the negotiations were not the only ancients who had been awoken in response to the Plummet’s arrival.

A loroi-oid shape stirred in the darkness among the shadows, shuffling out from underneath the prowler and revealing itself to be one of Jardin’s human warriors. Fireblade peered at the identifying marks on her armor — it was the alien gallen, their technician. Behind her, vague movement could be seen; likely another of the humans working on restocking their vessel.

Her ODST escort jogged past her, waving towards the other human “[Hey Anders, is that who I think it us under there?]”

“[Uh-huh. They woke him up right after we got here.]”

“[Hah! Guess you owe someone over there a favor, now.]”

“[Worth it. What’re you two here for; couldn’t send a message?]”

“[Long story. We’re here to grab the elf geek and take her back for the talks; is she up in the ship?]”

“[Yeah, her, the kid and the elf pilot.]”

“[Hah, all three of them? Didn’t know the kid had that much game!]”

“[Down, boy. The geek’s keeping watch in the crew quarters; it’s the other two who’ve locked themselves away in the cockpit. Make sure you knock before entering.]”

By now, Fireblade had reached the bottom of the boarding ramp. She glanced aside at the ODST who had traveled over with her — would he be entering the ship or waiting outside?

The warrior in question followed her up the ramp, while calling back to his fellow alien. “[The Old Man didn’t say anything about you being needed at the talks, so I guess you two get to pick your own corner of the ship afterwards. Unless you want to fool around in the shadows down there…?]”

“[Mmm, tempting...]” the two humans shared a laugh, as Fireblade entered the ship.

The first thing she noticed was that one of the many cables from the machines outside snaked its way up the ramp as well, leading to a metal frame that had been erected just inside of the top of that entrance. The frame stretched out to each side of the floor, up the walls, and met overhead.

Fireblade’s guess turned out to be correct: as soon as she stepped past the thin, dark-metal construct her suit beeped an alert that breathable atmosphere was back.

She paused, turning to peer again at the device. A portable energy-field airlock? And trusted by these humans to be reliable enough that the doors leading further into the ship had been left wide-open, a great risk to anyone inside if the field suddenly failed or leaked?

Remarkable.

Ahead down the narrow corridor, Beryl’s head suddenly poked out of the doorway from the sleeping compartment. <Fireblade! Isn’t it amazing!?> For all the near-manic excitement clear in the listel’s sub-channels, she still wore her helmet. Yet there could be no doubt as to what she was referring to.

That quelled the worry sinking its teeth into Fireblade’s gut — Beryl, at least, was taking no risks with the unknown-but-ancient machine. <Indeed so. Are you ready to join the talks deeper aboard the dreadstar? They should be beginning soon.>

<Certainly!> Beryl sent, although her sub-channels expressed her confusion. <But you didn’t need to come all the way out here just to tell me; why not send a message?>

<Tempo was concerned that my presence and my powers may have negative… ‘associations’ to these Legion loroi that would impact the negotiations.>

Beryl’s brow creased, and she frowned. <That’s not right of them. You’re...> her sanzai paused momentarily. <not a Soia. Or a Guard, or whatever they think.>

Fireblade smiled at her friend. Beryl’s earnestness was as endearing as always. <Thank you.> She nodded towards the front of the ship, and the cockpit. <Do you think that the pilots will wish to join us?>

Beryl’s smile widened, and a faint blue hue lit up her cheeks as she sent <I think they might be a bit busy ‘joining’ each other right now...>

<Even still?> Fireblade’s eyebrows rose. <It has been nearly a cycle since you left! Did they only recently enter the cockpit together?>

<No, they went there immediately.> Beryl tilted her head, glancing aside at the forward bulkhead. <Although they are being quieter now than earlier; perhaps they are finished.> She broadened the scope of her sanzai, and sent <Talon? Are you still distracted?>

Fireblade could detect the alien pilot’s mind, so he had his lotai-implant disabled, but she had chosen not to inspect too closely the human’s thoughts. A brief look gave her the fleeting impression of one's nose pressed to the thick mop of blue hair atop a certain arrir’s head, a cooler-but-pleasant weight wrapped in her arms, and a warmer grip—

Fireblade yanked her sanzai senses back.

After a few solon, a languid blur of sanzai filtered through from the pilot, channels all entwined together. <Warm...>

Nothing further was sent.

Despite herself, Fireblade had to struggle to keep the grin off her face. <It seems that she is still busy.>

<Talon,> Beryl sent <the talks are soon to begin; do you wish to follow us there?>

This time, the pilot’s sanzai was a pure burst of emotions — and sensations — that sent both Fireblade and Beryl shivering in unconscious response. Normally such… ‘broadcasting’ was not a problem aboard a warship; those few warriors who chose to seek such distractions in each others arms were disciplined enough to keep their thoughts politely to themselves. Those who weren’t that disciplined… were quickly corrected by a senior officer. In four cases over the last deployment, that duty had fallen on one Teidar Pallan Leinnol.

But evidently Talon had no such discipline… or she was too distracted to control her sanzai.

Beryl asked again <Perhaps Jardin might want to—>

By now, Fireblade was able to let the next wave of the tenoin arrir’s instinctual sanzai broadcast wash over her without reacting.

And while Beryl’s smile only deepened — and her blush brightened — Fireblade had had enough. This might not be a Union warship, but the tenoin was a Union warrior: a certain level of discipline was expected.

Channeling her best ‘displeased senior officer’ tone into her sanzai, Fireblade barked <Warrior! Quarters inspection! You have thirty-two solon to be ready for evaluation!>

Beryl’s eyes widened, and she clapped a hand over her mouth to stifle a laugh.

A heartbeat later, and the first loud thud echoed through the ship, coming from the cockpit.

Fireblade quirked one eyebrow at Beryl. <Listel Tozet, shall we make ready to inspect the junior officer’s readiness?>

<Certainly, Teidar Pallan!> the listel chirped back, eyes dancing.

The two of them left the crew quarters, coming to stand outside of the cockpit door even as further thuds and bumps echoed through from that compartment. Fireblade counted down the solon, even as she blinked in confusion at the article of alien clothing which had been draped over the control panel for that hatch.

A human foot-covering?

Her countdown reached bishires even while the noises of hurried activity were still ongoing, interspersed with quick mutterings in Trade too quiet to understand through the metal.

Fireblade forced her face into a grim, stony neutrality and opened the door.

And blinked at the darkness for a beat, before Beryl turned on the lights.

Tenoin Arrir Talon stood, eyes locked on empty space a hand’s-span above Fireblade’s head, her hands straight at her side in perfect attention-rest. Next to her, Alexander Jardin also stood straight, his right hand after a brief pause racing up to his head in what Fireblade recognized to be the aliens’ method of showing deference to a senior officer. Wise of him.

Of course, the effect would have been better if either of the two wore clothes.

The tenoin’s undersuit was bunched up around one ankle, while her armor layer was piled in a distant corner of the cockpit. More articles of human clothing than Fireblade had ever wanted to see lay thrown across the back of the two forward seats, and a pile of blankets lay rumpled on the floor behind them.

Fireblade closed her eyes, counting to four. At least she was more fortunate than Beryl; the image would not be forever burned into her memory.

Although by the barely-perceptible thoughts leaking from the listel’s side-channels, perhaps the white-haired loroi didn’t mind so much…

<Teidar Pallan!> Talon sent the formal recognition phrase clearly, her earlier distractedness utterly gone. Fireblade was proud of having that effect on people, especially junior officers. <Tenoin Arrir Nesin, ready for inspection!>

Fireblade flicked her eyes up and down. Ready for a doranzer's physical check-up, perhaps… <So I see. Arrir, Tozet Beryl asked you a question earlier and no response was provided. Correct this error.>

<I—> the brief confusion in the junior loroi’s mind was palpable. Fireblade could feel her sorting through her recent memories… and thankfully not sharing them too clearly. <The Listel Tozet asked if I wished to accompany the two of you back to the diplomatic talks.>

<Yes.> Fireblade sent. Her eyes slid sideways to look at Alexander Jardin, gaze carefully staying above the neck. She returned to the tenoin. <Unless, perhaps, you are still… busy with your activities here?> Carefully kept her humor out of her sanza. <Aerobic exercises, perhaps?>

The two pilots were off-duty and had every right to remain there, but someone as obviously-flustered as this tenoin would be unlikely to insist on that right now.

<Negative, Teidar Pallan! We just finished.> the loroi sent. In a quick burst too rapid to be conscious thought, her sanzai added <Three times.>

Fireblade fought to keep her face stony, staring down at the other loroi as the tenoin’s cheeks rapidly flushed a bright blue. <I see.> And Fireblade really didn’t want to see. Although she couldn’t quite resist adding <Your stamina is to be congratulated.>

The tenoin’s eyes widened, and her mouth twitched. But she kept her disciplined, neutral expression and did not respond.

Good. She could learn.

<Now,> Fireblade continued <Ask your… fellow warrior if he will also be following us. And get the two of you cleaned up. I believe that Alexander Jardin knows where a bathing facility can be found aboard his ship.>

An image — thankfully brief — flashed through the tenoin’s side-channels. Quickly suppressed.

Fireblade finished with <I doubt you will have time for that. The talks begin in five-hundred solon. We depart in two-hundred.>

She turned to the human, holding his gaze with her eyes. He met her levelly, and after a beat or two he nodded. Fireblade returned the gesture, and turned to leave.

And paused just beyond the doorway, noting the lack of footsteps behind her. <Beryl.>

<Yes…?> the Listel sent distractedly, before jolting into action and wordlessly following her out of the cockpit. Fireblade didn’t need to look back to see the blush she knew was still shining out from the tozet’s face.

Facing away from the other loroi and carefully controlling her sanzai, Fireblade allowed the harshly-suppressed smile to break out onto her face.

Girls fresh from their diral, on their first deployments to the Fleet, might imagine that all warriors yearned for battle. Longed to match strength and wits against the enemy, and to triumph as the loroi were destined to.

But veterans knew that what warriors truly sought was camaraderie with their arms-sisters, the friendships between those giving their all for Azerein and Union. And while the young tenoin back there was still young, still new… Fireblade was finally satisfied that she had enough spine in her to one day fit in among all of Stillstorm’s veterans and misfits in the Fifty-First.

Mind still filled with happy thoughts, Fireblade stepped out from the corridor, into the chamber at the top of the ramp.

And froze.

“[—you sure about that? The two systems weren’t exactly made for each other.]” The human technician was asking, looking down at the figure following her.

The small figure, who was just now removing their helmet once past the airlock-field.

His helmet.

The loroi — male loroi! — looked back up at the human and said in the aliens’ own language as he waved some mechanical contraption in one hand “[I’ve got the parts to rig a transformer between the two. They’re close, anyways, so it shouldn’t be hard to—]” he glanced forwards, eyes stopping on Fireblade.

And now he froze.

For a solon, the two loroi stared at each other. Then—

“[Augh! Guard!]” the male spoke aloud, and darted behind the ODST. His empty hand held tight around her hip, as he peered out at Fireblade.

“[Relax, she’s with us!]” said the human warrior, glancing apologetically at Fireblade before turning her head downwards to the loroi. “[Sorry, should have mentioned her earlier.]”

The loroi who was… 'hiding' from Fireblade? Hiding from his fellow loroi, and behind an alien?

“[A Guard? Are you… sure?]” The male asked, tentatively.

“[Yeah, she rode over with us in the Plummet. Doesn’t talk, but she’s been no trouble. And they call her a ‘Teidar,’ not a ‘Guard.’]”

Beryl stepped past Fireblade. Slowly, she asked “[Who is — no, are — you?]” The listel mirrored her thoughts to Fireblade, allowing the teidar to understand the general meaning of the conversation. An impressive display of concentration from Beryl.

The smaller loroi stepped gingerly out from behind his ODST protector. Instead of speaking in the alien tongue, he said in accented Trade “I’m Maintainer Moiatirai, ‘Age-wise.’ Wise for short. They woke me up when you docked, to look over the Plummet. Who’re you, and the ‘not-a-Guard’?”

At this point, Fireblade was getting very tired of being confused for one of the Soia’s pet telekinetics. Actually, come to think of it, <Ask him how he knew I was a telekinetic.> she sent to Beryl.

“I am Listel Tozet Beryl, and this is Teidar Pallan Fireblade, warriors of the Loroi Union. Fireblade is no threat to anyone not an enemy of the Union and the loroi people. She would also like to know… why did you think she was a Guard?”

“’Cause she’s got an amp built into the brow-lining of her helmet. I can see it peeking down over her brow.”

Fireblade subconsciously raised one hand to trace along that part of her helmet. It was such a small detail, one hard to see, and this male had spotted it in a heartbeat?

The smaller loroi in question looked back and forth between Fireblade and Beryl. Apparently deep in thought, he sucked in his cheeks, causing a small dimple to fold into existence near each corner of his mouth. Rather charming, and—

Fireblade blinked, and shook her head to clear her mind. Apparently some echo of the earlier thoughts transmitted from that tenoin had lingered in her mind. She forced them aside.

In the meantime, ‘Wise’ seemed to have come to a decision. He took a step forwards, and held out his right hand.

Ah, she’d seen this before. Beryl grasped his hand in hers, holding it for a solon before letting go. Fireblade copied the gesture, careful to keep her mind shielded even with the physical contact. No need to further upset the agitated male, after all.

“Right.” Wise said. He leaned to one side, peering around Fireblade. “Now, were you all leaving? And those two, back there?”

The ODST next to him finally spoke “[Don’t worry, they only trashed the cockpit. I locked my bunk earlier just to make sure.]”

Another human warrior — the one who’d arrived with Fireblade — stopped halfway-up the ramp behind them and called out “[You two’d better not use the mess table; we eat off that!]”

A brief pause while Beryl translated the alien speech, and then a fierce flash of embarrassment mixed with humor burst forth from her sanzai.

Fireblade sent a wordless question, and Beryl answered <I will explain later.>

Face still flushed, Beryl stepped past Wise, saying aloud “We are departing for the negotiations. Tenoin Arrir Talon and Ensign Alexander Jardin will follow us soon; we will wait for them… outside.”

A solon later, Fireblade followed her, head turning to track the peculiar male as she passed. In hindsight, she should not have been so surprised to see a male aboard a warship: the Soia-era loroi were known to live solely in space and aboard the dreadstars; where else would the males be?

Still, it was a shocking sight to see a male — a loroi male; the human ones didn’t count — standing so nonchalantly among warriors as if he belonged there.

Truly, these Legion loroi were a strange lot.

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Many cycles later, and a much-more-tired Fireblade climbed back up the ramp of the prowler, exhausted mind forcing her body to put one foot in front of the other. But she’d lived through the Teidar Academy back on Deinar and the worst that Ragan Thistlewood could put the initiates through; this tiredness was nothing by comparison.

That said, Tempo had been the one actually doing the speaking and negotiating during the long, drawn-out talks; how the mizol was still on her feet was a mystery.

<One who falls asleep on watch during her mizol diral has much worse to face than an angry instructor.> Tempo sent; evidently some of Fireblade’s thoughts had leaked out from her tired mind. <They have to face Perreinid wildlife.>

Fireblade shivered. She’d heard the stories — and she was pretty sure that Tempo had only exaggerated some of them. <That oversized human-made bunk seems quite appealing right now.> she stopped at the top of the ramp, and with a force of will wrestled her complaining spine into a rigid, upright stance as she turned to survey the rest of the party boarding the prowler.

Just because she was tired didn’t mean that she was allowed to look tired, after all. A teidar’s duty never rested, and all that.

Admittedly, it helped that now there were other, more interesting sights in the vast docking bay for her to lay her eyes onto. Whereas before the Plummet had been the only scene of any kind of life, now two other UNSC craft had landed, much further out from the tall entrance field into the dreadstar’s interior.

‘Heavy frigates,’ the humans had called them.

‘Light battleships’ was more accurate, going by the sheer size of the warships.

Admittedly, the two of them were still utterly dwarfed by the Infinity-class transports that loomed over them. But the nearer craft, for all its vague resemblance to a logical, loroi-pattern warship shape — mostly in the sense of having two major engine pylons flanking a twin-boom fuselage, although the proportions were all wrong — was still far larger than the Plummet. The tall, white letters painted on its hull, spelling out ‘UNSC Cascadia,’ only accentuated its size.

If that was a ‘frigate,’ then Fireblade was a Diaderet!

Distant voices echoed through the hangar, from the tiny alien figures carrying cargo aboard the vast ship. “[Sergeant Major, I can understand why the diplomatic team has the Jolly Green Giant back there along for security, but how did you come to be attached to this dog-and-pony show?]”

Fireblade focused through the echoes, narrowing in on two human figures standing at the base of the ramp leading up to the Cascadia. She just caught a glimpse of a third alien disappearing into the ship from the top of the ramp, tall and green-armored.

One of the two remaining hefted a large, gray box up from the floor plating and balanced it across one shoulder. Even at this distance, it was easy to hear his voice as he belted out “[Because I know what the ladies like, sailor.]” His free hand patted the crate. “[This here is sixty-six pounds of weapons samples, explosives, and other party favors. I’m the Corps’ own heavily-armed salesman, showing these wayward, lost little elves why their grandmamas jumped ship to fight on our side.]”

The other human laughed, and waved him up the ramp. “[Right, right. Get aboard, then, Marine. We’re running light on this trip, so there’ll be plenty of room to spread out in your quarters.]”
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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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...seriously, Johnson from Halo2 is basically the coolest Johnson ever. And the Master Chief, of course. This guy survived the entire Covenant War and kicked the Didact's ass, given that Spartans basically don't live long even if they don't get shot at - his reflection couldn't have been less... impressive.

In my opinion, they and the Fireblade will look very organic side by side - two silent machines of death, forcing anyone who understands who they see in front of them to produce bricks.

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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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I'm very happy that I seem to have gotten close enough to Johnson's voice for him to be recognizable. Easily my favorite Halo canon character, especially given that (in the books) it's revealed that he's at least as war-weary and exhausted as anyone around him. He just puts on the "Super-moto Marine" act because he knows it keeps the people around him going even as the UNSC is being ground down by the war.

Which, incidentally, is actually pretty close to my mental image of Fireblade's personality: the tough (but mortal) soldier who knows they have to set an example for the others around them.

Anyways, both Fireblade and the Chief get their own chance to shine on a mission towards the end of this story, don't worry :D
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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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Okay, let's see if I can offer some criticism:

1. I haven't played HALO or read any of the books, so I can't gauge how good the "crossover" part is, but, it does feel a bit forced. It's inevitable for a crossover, though.

2. The Humans sound far too "contemporary", it's like watching a series or reading a book about the current US military. No, more about a "fictionalized" US military of the 90s? Can't say that I like this overused trope in a sci-fi setting.

3. Okay, the above two points might be nitpicking, the next part, however, is more about the writing style. The Loroi have accepted the Humans far too quickly and are way too buddy-buddy with them. The same goes for the Humans as well. It's like they knew each other for quite a while before, and now, they simply reunited, everything is way too casual. The Loroi should've been shocked out of their minds, and the Humans utterly devastated.

4. I like the sanzai "subchannel" parts, but it's a bit hard to discern between the Trade/Sanzai/English lines, so how about using cursive for sanzai?

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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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Thanks for the feedback!

1. Yeah, that's hard to avoid for a crossover. I *could* have written out the "UNSC as Soia contemporaries" backstory rather than have it summarized as exposition, but that would easily lengthen the story by ~50% while requiring a large number of OCs. Since I generally want to keep OCs to a minimum when it comes to fanfiction (and especially crossovers), this is the route I went with.

2. "Fictionalized 1990's US military" *is* pretty much exactly the theme of Halo. (To the point where one of the most common human ground vehicles is basically just "open-top Humvee") It's an overused trope in Sci-fi largely *because* the Halo games (and books, which I liked better) made it known to such a wide audience.

3. That, I do agree with. It's one of the reasons I've mostly stuck to Talon's POV: as one of the junior-most loroi, she doesn't "see" most of the distrust between the two sides. That's more at Tempo's level (and to an extent, Fireblade's), and I've at least tried to mention that those two haven't come around to entirely trusting the strange aliens yet. Some more of that gets mentioned next chapter, but you're right in that it's largely skipped over in this story. Adding in that sort of character development (essentially 'slowing down' the rate of each side adapting to working alongside the other) could easily be its own plot/sub-plot, but I decided not to add it in because I felt that it would add too much to the length of this story without enhancing the main plot significantly.

4. I thought about that, but (in my experience) many people dislike large segments of italics or significantly-different text font. And since at least one other writer in this forum sub-section (Snoofman, IIRC) uses >< to denote sanzai I figured I'd do the same. I just couldn't get my eyes used to >This is a sentence.< rather than <This is a sentence.> so I flipped the direction.

Again, thanks for the feedback! I hope that you find this story entertaining enough (for fanfiction) even being unfamiliar with the Halo setting.
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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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Urist wrote:
Thu Jun 20, 2024 10:14 pm
1. Yeah, that's hard to avoid for a crossover. I *could* have written out the "UNSC as Soia contemporaries" backstory rather than have it summarized as exposition, but that would easily lengthen the story by ~50% while requiring a large number of OCs. Since I generally want to keep OCs to a minimum when it comes to fanfiction (and especially crossovers), this is the route I went with.
This is not really a problem. At least one of the actors, or even a group of them, needs to be "Outsiders" in order to fit *this* comic's theme.
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2. "Fictionalized 1990's US military" *is* pretty much exactly the theme of Halo. (To the point where one of the most common human ground vehicles is basically just "open-top Humvee") It's an overused trope in Sci-fi largely *because* the Halo games (and books, which I liked better) made it known to such a wide audience.
Oh, okay, so that's the culprit, then. I assumed this trope to be a more general phenomenon, but since HALO was indeed one of its pioneers, that is quite possible.

The Humans are also speaking and behaving far too contemporary, but that's just a subset of the overall trope, I guess.
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3. That, I do agree with. It's one of the reasons I've mostly stuck to Talon's POV: as one of the junior-most loroi, she doesn't "see" most of the distrust between the two sides. That's more at Tempo's level (and to an extent, Fireblade's), and I've at least tried to mention that those two haven't come around to entirely trusting the strange aliens yet. Some more of that gets mentioned next chapter, but you're right in that it's largely skipped over in this story. Adding in that sort of character development (essentially 'slowing down' the rate of each side adapting to working alongside the other) could easily be its own plot/sub-plot, but I decided not to add it in because I felt that it would add too much to the length of this story without enhancing the main plot significantly.
The issue might be that the Humans were far too frank and very quick about explaining way too much of their background information. This was of course done for the readers, but it's still a bit weird. The "ancient humans" had no idea "who" or "what" or "which faction" the Loroi were, so being a bit more wary should've been natural. Them elves mentioning Tempest is one thing, but all their "low-tech" equipment should've been a giveaway that something is amiss.
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Thu Jun 20, 2024 10:14 pm
4. I thought about that, but (in my experience) many people dislike large segments of italics or significantly-different text font. And since at least one other writer in this forum sub-section (Snoofman, IIRC) uses >< to denote sanzai I figured I'd do the same. I just couldn't get my eyes used to >This is a sentence.< rather than <This is a sentence.> so I flipped the direction.
Dislike? I've been asked to implement that, actually.

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Chapter Sixteen: Home Again

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Tempo had had her suspicions earlier, but now she was certain that Colonel Jardin and his pilot had been carefully underperforming with their prowler’s speed through slipspace. The journey out from the borders of the Tinza sector to the refugee fleet had taken nearly two nanapi… the journey back had taken less than one.

The good news was that there had been little further development in the war since her earlier departure. After their offensive shielded by the recovered human artifacts had been crushed, the Shells seemed to have been content to return to the earlier pattern of intermittent attrition assaults across the Steppes.

That said, Tempo did pick up the shielded half-thoughts that leaked occasionally from the minds of the loroi warriors that came aboard for inspection before the Plummet and her two escorting frigates could advance deeper into the Union. The Shells didn’t need to change tactic; the Union was still on the back-foot, still forced onto the defensive. And now with the heavy casualties that they had suffered in beating back the Hierarchy’s last offensive…

She would certainly not complain that the humans had gotten them back faster than she had expected.

The wide-eyed frontier garrison warriors had soon returned from their inspections of the alien craft, and the mizol parat who led their team formally granted Tempo permission to lead them on to Seren. The Azerein had returned to her forward base, as expected.

And so the orbital space above Seren, already a tolot-nest of activity at the best of times, now found itself abuzz with even more warship traffic than normal.

The Seren citadel itself had ample room in its capacious docks for the Did Ever Plummet Sound; the two human frigates could also have fit quite comfortably had they not chosen to instead remain in a parking orbit nearby and shuttle their representatives over. Whether this was done to keep prying loroi eyes that much more distant from the vessels or for some other reason, the result was that the entire Imperial Guard’s First Squadron moved to join them in what was now a very crowded orbital slot.

The sight of so many Union capital ships looming over the alien craft would previously have filled Tempo’s heart with the warm reassurance of loroi superiority; but the persistent memory of all those Infinity-class ‘transports’ marred the image. She had, over the last few transits of their journeys together, attempted several times to surreptitiously steer a conversation with Colonel Jardin onto the topic of the weapons systems mounted aboard the UNSC’s remaining craft.

And he had just-as-deftly steered the conversation elsewhere, each time.

‘Refugees’ or no, these strange aliens were quite possibly now one of the major military powers in known space… to say nothing of the Legion loroi. Cousins or no, there was no reason to be entirely certain that when those two dreadstars eventually stirred from their hiding places in slipspace that they would move to the aid of the Union.

Regardless, the three-way talks between the Union, the UNSC, and the Legions opened smoothly enough. There was, from Tempo’s perspective, only one problem:

The presence of much of the Diadem Council, the Imperial Guard, and several other very important military formations meant that the discussion chambers were downright overflowing with senior mizol… resulting in one Mizol Parat Sedel being quite apologetically yet firmly pushed aside by a veritable stampede of ruby-red rank tabs.

On the more fortunate side of things, that meant that for the first time in several years Tempo found herself with both free time — that rarest of things aboard the Strike Groups patrolling the Steppes — and a bustling station aboard which to spend that time.

That left only the question of just what to do with this unfamiliar concept of ‘free time’...

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<Was it down this corridor, or the next one?> Spiral sent.

<This one.> Talon responded, as she turned aside and led the small group in the indicated direction. <Does look different from last time, though.> Even though it had only been a few short years since the two tenoin had followed the rest of the High Tide Lowlives along to an observation dome that Waterfall had remembered from her early childhood on the station.

The last time that all fifty of their diral had ever gathered in one place.

The last time that they ever would.

She shook her head to clear away the sad thought, and looked aside at the last member of their three-person group. The sight of Alex walking along, curiosity writ large on his visage as he took in the sights of the Seren Citadel, could not fail to bring a smile to her own face.

A smile which deepened as she imagined how the rest of the Lowlifes would have reacted, had she brought this alien warrior — male warrior, as she could happily vouch for! — to that final rendezvous.

“This is a battle station?” the human asked. “It looks more like a, uh, luxury resort. I keep expecting to round a corner and see an ice-cream shop or something.”

Even the reminder of some of the Perrein-grade human culinary preferences was not enough to bring down Talon’s mood.

“It seems to be a second capital of the Union.” she said. “Perhaps maybe third capital, after Cry of the Wind.”

“That’s the, uh, big ship we passed on the flight in?”

“Indeed so.” And hadn’t that been a sight, to stare up through the prowler’s cockpit windows and see the mightiest ship in the Union floating serenely above them! The Legion’s dreadstars and the human transports had size, but the Union easily had them beat for elegance when it came to warships.

“Huh. Still, nice station.”

The two tenoin exchanged a burst of sanzai amusement at their human’s words.

Talon sent <He is easy to please, isn’t he?>

<You would know!> replied her diral-sister with a wink.

Where once the teasing would have brought an eye-roll from Talon, now she only glanced aside at Alex. <Yes I do, don’t I?> A warm smile spread across her face.

They rounded one more corner, and—

<See?> Talon sent. <This is the place.>

The compartment they entered had the entire opposite bulkhead replaced by a transparent wall, thick see-through plating curving around to meet the side-walls. Empty but for one bench facing the window, it seemed to be as unused as it had been when the fifty members of the Lowlives had crowded into it long ago and jockeyed for position nearest the far wall.

Just as then, outside the window Seren spread out in all of its silver-blue majesty. If Waterfall had been here, she could have pointed out and named the geographical features hundreds of thousands of mannal below them.

Although without that, the mystery of the sight only added to its beauty.

“You weren’t kidding.” Alex said after a few solons, stepping up and resting his hands on Talon’s and Spiral’s shoulders. Standing between the two tenoin, his eyes played back and forth across the scene in front of them, mouth slightly agape. “That is a beautiful sight.”

“Yes.” Talon said, meeting Spiral’s knowing eyes before each of them returned their gaze to Alex’s face. “Yes it is.”

She eventually dragged her eyes over to the vision outside. And Alex was right: the sunlight from the distant system primary glinting off of the metallic fields dotting Seren’s landscape, clouds swirling peacefully across the oceans, the few lights of settlements distorted by the planet’s famous perpetual natural fog… the sight was enough to take one’s breath away.

Even Spiral didn’t have some playful quip ready.

Then a surprise-tinged bolt of sanzai broke the peace. <What is that?> Above the single observation bench there was suddenly a loroi head, staring at the group with wide eyes. Staring at Alex, specifically. <One of these strange new aliens?>

Knee-length green hair spilled aside as the stranger stood, stepping around the corner of the bench that had hidden her presence — she must have been meditating or concentrating strongly on something; Talon had not detected her mind-signature until she sent.

Light-purple armor dotted with red rank tabs: a listel, and a very senior one.

<He is a ‘human.’> Spiral sent, sanzai carefully emphasizing the pronunciation of the alien word.

<And they truly look so much like us? Are you certain it is an alien?> came the listel’s distracted thought, her eyes darting back and forth as they analyzed the sight before her.

Talon raised one eyebrow. Perhaps Beryl had colored her impressions — being the only listel that Talon had ever interacted with, before — but the tenoin expected less… inane questions from one of this caste.

She sent the first thing that came to mind, not bothering to hide her clarifying side-channels. <No, he’s the Soia Emperor.>

The listel stepped up to the group, uncomfortably close to Alex.

Ever-friendly, he did not step back but instead said “Hello. I am Ensign Alexander Jardin of the UNSC.”

Ignoring his words, the newcomer raised one hand, reaching out with one finger as if to poke Alex to see if he was some sort of illusion. <It has been examined before being allowed onto the station, yes?>

Spiral sent privately to Talon <Examined most closely, yes!> Yet her heart wasn’t in it, sub-channels carrying as much discomfort with this stranger’s rudeness as Talon herself felt.

Talon stepped in, moving to bat aside the rude gesture. <He has been cleared to enter the station, yes. And he is here as a warrior, part of his people’s diplomatic team.>

Yet Talon paused her movement just before contact, as the listel’s shifting posture revealed her armor’s right shoulder plate.

And the thick, black stripe which ran diagonally across it.

Imperial Guard.

Now, by this stranger’s red rank tabs she was at the very top of seniority for her caste. Much further along than Talon was, or Spiral. That alone would not normally have stopped the tenoin — either of them — from telling the rude listel to take a step back, or preferably several. Yes, listel were warriors — anyone who tried to say that Beryl was anything else would answer to one angry red-haired teidar — but they were a support branch. By contrast, tenoin were to be found where the fighting was heaviest, and so were obviously the senior caste.

But the Imperial Guard went by their own rules.

<Fascinating.> the Guardswoman sent. <It appears so like us… you are certain that it has not been altered in form for diplomatic purposes?>

Talon bristled. <He has engaged in no such trickery!>

<Indeed?> For all her brusqueness, the listel’s sub-channels contained no malice. Her side-channels revealed only single-minded curiosity. <Where did it come from?>

<You may ask him yourself.> Spiral sent.

<It can talk?>

Talon stared at her, brow furrowing. <He just did.>

<Oh?> Finally, a pause in the listel’s questions. Her side-channels ran mechanistically through recent memories, replaying Alex’s polite greeting as if it were a video recording. <So it can. Verbally, at least, if not true communication. How did—>

A fourth mind joined the conversation, flaring into detectability behind them. <It would be best to leave the task of speaking with aliens to the correct caste, yes?>

Talon twisted to face the entrance, as the mizol from their own expedition sauntered into the compartment. The remote compartment, which was supposed to be unlikely for anyone else to stumble into it.

If Tempo received any of the suspicion leaking out from Talon’s sanzai, the mizol didn’t show it. <Interactions with the members of this alien’s expedition fall under my authority.> Her bright-red eyes briefly flicked past the listel, towards the bench beyond. <Does your… ‘presence’ here merit interrupting his scheduled tour of the station?>

For several beats, the two stared at each other. Talon could barely detect the rapid flow of extremely-tight private sanzai rushing between each of them. Then <Negative, mizol parat. I will leave your team to their work.>

The listel took a step back, spinning on her heel and bending low over the bench. Now with a tall handful of datapads, she straightened up and walked past the four of them without a word.

Alex’s head pivoted to watch her go, a confused frown on his face. As the door slid closed behind her he asked Tempo “What was that about?”

Evidently, enough of the discomfort of the standoff had been perceptible, even without sanzai.

Tempo waved one hand “Many sorts of warriors end up assigned to Seren Citadel. Some are fierce fighters, others convivial diplomats… while a few are single-minded archivists. Even by listel standards.”

“Ah. Nerds.”

“’Nerds...’” Tempo rolled the alien word around her mouth. “Yes, let us go with that. I hope that this has not interrupted your enjoyment of this observation dome?”

“No, uh, not at all.” Alex stepped forward, resting both hands on the back of the bench and evidently drinking in the vista beyond.

Talon was not feeling quite so friendly. <Why are you here?>

Tempo raised one eyebrow. <I am enjoying my first downtime in far too long.> She tapped with one finger at her dull-red rank tabs, their light emitters entirely powered down. <And I am off-duty, if that makes you feel more comfortable.>

It did not. <Are mizol ever really 'off-duty'?>

A long sigh. <Sometimes I wonder that, myself.> Surprisingly, her sub-channels were wide-open… and entirely devoid of trickery.

<Yet you followed us.> Talon sent the obvious. <What do you want?>

<Is that not obvious?> Tempo looked over at her, and then at Alex.

A stray impulse bubbled to the front of Talon’s mind. Well, if the mizol said she was off-duty… <There’s a waiting list for that. You’ll have to get in line behind Spiral and Beryl.>

Tempo’s eyes visibly widened — if only slightly — as she stared at Talon for a solon or two. Then the mizol tilted her head back and laughed, wrapping one hand around her abdomen as she shook with mirth. <Moio sagit! I should have known better than to leave an opening for a gibe like that, not when conversing with a tenoin of the Fifty-First!>

Alex turned at the sound, one eyebrow raised in a silent question.

While Tempo fought her laughter under control, Spiral explained “A joke of sanzai. Talon is defending my claim!”

“Your ‘claim’?” the human asked, eyes sliding to fix Talon with their questioning gaze. By the faint pink growing brighter on his cheeks, the alien may have understood more of what Spiral had meant than she had perhaps expected. “Oh.”

“Also of Beryl!” added Spiral, ‘helpfully.’ Her ear-to-ear grin betrayed that she knew exactly what she was doing.

At least it meant that now Talon wasn’t the only victim of the teasing Maiad.

Alex turned his head aside and coughed into one hand. “Right. Well, uh, back to the view?” He stepped around to the front of the bench. “There’s room for four, if, uh—” he cut himself off.

Spiral sprang forward as the human sat back in the middle of the bench. She took a seat to his left, and Talon quickly claimed her spot on Alex’s right. Leaving just enough room for a fourth to perch on the end of the seat. If, of course—

<Will you be joining us?> Talon sent.

It was an honest invitation. Tricky mizol or no, Tempo was a fellow member both of Strike Group 51 — no matter how long long they’d been detached from Stillstorm’s direct command — and of the small team of loroi who now had been working alongside the humans for many transits.

And it helped that Tempo did seem to be honest enough about being off-duty, even if her motives for following the two tenoin remained suspect.

<Thank you for the offer, but I have seen what I came to see.> Tempo sent, with a nod towards the back of Alex’s head. <I did not lie when I said that interactions with these aliens do still fall under my purview, and I intend to ensure that their experience meeting other Union loroi will remain positive.> A faint thread of playfulness worked its way into her sanzai. <I see that you two have that well in hand.>

Talon turned now to see Spiral practically pressing herself into Alex’s left side, reaching up to pull his left arm around her shoulders. Even knowing that humans did not view such physical contact in quite the same way loroi did, it was still rather… bold.

<What?> sent Spiral amidst a bubble of self-satisfaction. <I’m ‘off-duty’!>

<So you are.> agreed Tempo. Then she added aloud “I thank you for your offer, Alexander Jardin, but I am needed elsewhere. Please enjoy your further wanderings aboard this station.”

She left the compartment. Just as her receding mind-signature was about to pass from sanzai range, Tempo sent <I have arranged so that you will not be bothered in this compartment for the next half-cycle. Do not do anything ‘tiring;’ Alexander Jardin — and you, of course — may be called upon at short notice to participate in the diplomatic talks.>

Talon settled in on Alex’s right side, the two diral-sisters sandwiching their alien between them. And they had the room to themselves for a half-cycle? Perhaps mizol weren’t so bad after all.

It would only have been better if Alex had opened his mind to them, but now that he had shown her the full truth of their 'lotai-machines' she could not blame him. To imagine that his species held a natural lotai, and that the machine implanted in his mind actually suppressed it... at the cost of headaches after each use of more than a solon or so. She could not really blame him and the rest of the aliens even for lying about that — the thought of an alien species with an in-built lotai was too unsettling; it would definitely have colored the way she viewed the humans if she had not already come to know one of them so closely before learning the truth.

Talon smiled to herself. Of course, there were ways to distract Alex from the pain of such headaches, but perhaps not with only a half-cycle...

If Spiral was disappointed at Tempo’s last command, no evidence could be found in her sanzai as she sent <You were right. He is warm!>

<Agreed.> Talon awkwardly reached with one hand for her hip-pocket, and withdrew a datapad that she’d prepared especially for this outing. Flicking it to life, she held up the semi-transparent screen between the three of them and the window, overlaying the labeled map on the ‘pad onto the actual view. “Seren is often spoken to be one of the most good looking planets in the Union. You see there the moon, Menet, rising over the sea.”

And from this distance, none of the horrific scars left by nine standard years of Shell occupation were visible. Talon knew they were there, of course — every loroi raised after the liberation of Seren had seen the video recordings: shattered cities, mind-broken survivors, and death camps surrounded by decayed bodies piled high like mine tailings.

In the more than twenty standard years since, most of it had been cleared away. Buried, but not forgotten. Yet Talon could not look at the sea below — as beautiful as it was, with reflected moonlight playing across the waters — without remembering the bright city lights that should have ringed it.

All gone, now.

She shivered.

“You okay?” Alex leaned his head down closer to her and murmured. After a solon of obvious hesitation, he put his right arm around her shoulder. It really was impressive how good he was at reading emotions despite his lack of sanzai, but then again as a male he was of course more emotional to begin with.

The datapad suddenly felt heavy in her hand. Letting it drop back into her lap, Talon pushed herself into Alex’s side and pulled his arm tighter around her. The warmth of his alien embrace driving back the dark thoughts.

“It is fine. I was thinking of… sad things.” Talon was torn as to how much of Seren’s history to explain. On the one hand, her instincts as a loroi warned her not to burden the male with grim stories. On the other hand, after all these nanapi working with him, her conscious mind had almost managed to get her instincts to accept that Alex wasn’t a male, not in the loroi sense. He was a warrior who just so happened to be shaped like a male.

And to try to shield a fellow warrior from a ‘danger’ as unthreatening as sad thoughts was at best condescending. “The planet Seren was taken by the Enemy early in the war. It was before then said to be one of the most-admired planets in the Union, with many seeking to live there in search of a good life. By the time we forced the Shells off of the planet...” she searched through her knowledge of spoken Trade, looking for the words to properly describe the horrors found by the liberating forces.

Alex finished for her. “The population was gone.”

Perhaps such a… ‘clinical’ way was best. “Indeed so.”

He tightened his arm around her shoulder, pulling her into a side-hug. The soft sound of armor plates sliding against each other confirmed that he did the same with Spiral, on his other side. “Uncle Pierre told me about the history of your war with this, uh, ‘Hierarchy.’ He and Tempo talked it through during the flight over, this last week.”

She mulled over her thoughts for a few solon. This next question she definitely wanted to phrase right. “Was it like that for you? For Humans and Soia I am meaning, during your ancient War.”

He didn’t answer immediately, turning his head to look aside at her. His eyes seemed to gaze through her.

Talon’s pulse skipped a beat. Had she misjudged, gone too far in reopening old memories?

<If that is so,> sent Spiral, her own eyes still closed as she leaned into Alex’s other side, <we do have a half-cycle to cheer him up again.>

Talon did not respond to her diral-sister, too busy thinking of something else to say.

Before she could do so, Alex finally said in a distant voice “Not at first.” He turned to look out of the window, at Seren below. “The Soia meant to conquer humanity, not exterminate us.” The alien nodded slowly, as if to himself. “We had no such ability. So once ONI showed they knew where to point the NOVA-bombs, the Empire had no choice but to respond in kind.”

Those were the weapons which the humans had described as ‘system-killers.’ A chill ran down Talon’s spine at the thought. How did one fight against something like that?

By completely obliterating anyone who might ever launch one, of course.

But Alex wasn’t done. “There’s an old human saying. Pre-starflight." He paused for a moment. "The, uh, pun doesn't quite translate into Trade. Anyways, it goes ‘War does not determine who is right, only who is left.’”

A very alien thought. Talon frowned. “But surely if one side is ‘right,’ then they will win. That is what war shows: which side is superior.” The years-old memory of her creche instructor came to mind, passing down the wisdom of uncounted generations of loroi to the students in front of her. Talon now added her own to that unbroken line, a thought that would have drawn horrified condemnation in her youth. “It is why the Soia Empire is no longer existing. They were wrong. Inferior.”

He turned to look at her again, a slight frown on his face. For several beats, she was worried that she had offended some alien belief of his. After all, his demonstrated proficiency as a warrior was enough that sometimes she forgot that he was not actually loroi. Who knew what strange thoughts and beliefs on war might be arrived at by someone born with such a handicap?

But then his frown was chased away by a thin smile, and her worries followed. “You know, it’s strangely reassuring that you loroi haven’t changed a bit in all this time.” He nodded to the window. “Well, aside from the whole living-on-planets thing. And I hear that there are loroi ‘civilians,’ now.”

Talon was no listel, but the glimpse into what it had meant to be loroi during the Soia era was intriguing nonetheless. “This was not done in your time?”

“Hah! No.” Alex shook his head vigorously, as if to shake off the grip of his earlier morose thoughts. “If you called a loroi — Loyalist or Rebel — a ‘civilian,’ you were in for a fight. Same for ‘planet-dweller.’ A loroi was born on a warship, she lived on a warship, and she would die on a warship.”

“Even the males also?” asked Spiral, voice muffled from where she had pressed her face to Alex’s side.

“Where else would they go? The system habitats of the Empire were managed and run by the centaurs. That’s the, uh, ‘Mozeret.’ Would you trust your males to the care of aliens?”

Talon thought of the six-limbed aliens that the boarding team had fought aboard the Soia dreadstar, soon after linking up with the humans. She had stayed aboard the prowler and never met one of these Mozeret face-to-face, of course, but the mental images sent by those loroi who had had been enough. “Certain no. But this means that loroi males went into combat?”

She couldn’t keep her voice from rising in pitch towards the end of the sentence, at the sheer wrongness of the concept. Males were to be protected, not risked!

“Well, inside a moonship. They were as safe there as they would be anywhere. The Soia themselves stayed aboard the moonships, you see, and they certainly didn’t want to expose themselves to the brunt of the fighting if they could avoid it. No, that was what the smaller ships were for.”

This she remembered from earlier discussions during the flight over. “These are the smaller warships launched from the dreadstars, yes? The ones with no faster-than-light engines?” And the ones that were entirely crewed by loroi under the Empire.

“Yeah, the meatshields.”

Talon blinked at the alien term. “’Meat-shield’?”

Perhaps sensing her confusion, Alex dropped his lotai just long enough to push the meaning of the phrase to the forefront of his thoughts.

A half-suppressed snort escaped from Spiral. <Meat-shield!> the junior tenoin laughed at the concept. Her side-channels constructed an image of a soroin charging bravely into battle… with a squealing miros strapped to the front of her armor.

The idea sent Talon over the edge into her own laughter, and in only solon the small compartment was filled with the three of them sharing their amusement.

“How do humans come up with these words?” asked Talon eventually, fighting to speak.

<I remember Beryl thinking that it was an adaptation to their lack of sanzai.> sent Spiral. <They have to compress concepts into short words that they speak aloud instead of just sending the whole idea.>

“Hey, don’t look at me!” Alex chuckled. “I didn’t make the language!”

“I think maybe whoever did should be proud of it. It is always good when more reasons to see humor are added to the universe.” Not a common opinion among loroi, but one that Talon had arrived at as a survival mechanism over the years of training alongside Spiral. If she hadn’t learned to appreciate constant jokes, she’d have gone mad before she even passed her dirals!

<And that is why Maia produces more warriors than any other planet in the Union!> Spiral boasted, sticking her head out to grin at her diral-sister across Alex’s chest. <We know to laugh at the challenges that life sends to us!>

<Right.> Talon drawled, smirking. <And your homeworld’s recruiting numbers surely have nothing to do with Maia simply being the most-populous planet in the Union.>

A familiar trace of humor suffused the narrat’s sanzai. <And how do you think we managed that? You catch males better with humor than with bluster, you know!>

Talon — like all other loroi — had known about Maia since she was halfway through her creche years. The stories quietly sent from one warrior-student to another, of a planet where males — those elusive, never-seen creatures about which the young warriors recently found themselves growing quite curious — lived lives very similar to the civilians among whom they mingled. Lives which left many of them outside of the protection of the monasteries, ready to be seduced by passing warriors.

Or so the stories told. Talon had always had her doubts… no matter how many inflated tales Spiral kept spinning.

“Right.” Alex shook his head. “Anyways, uh, where were we? Before we got side-tracked onto the ‘take the hobbits into battle’ bit?”

That brought Talon up short. It was a bit tricky, trying to work backwards through a mixed sanzai-and-vocal conversation to where… “I remember we were speaking about ancient loroi not living on planets.”

“Planets, yeah. So the—”

Spiral interrupted, a bubble of sanzai confusion accompanying her vocal speech. “What means ‘hobbits’?”

Talon nodded. “It is a good question. I have heard that word used by the humans. I think maybe it is referring to loroi males as a ‘nickname’?” She carefully enunciated the alien term.

The two loroi looked to Alex, who paused for several solon with his mouth slightly open, staring past them. “I, uh… I don’t actually know where the name came from, come to think of it. It’s just one of the marines’ nicknames for the different Soia forms and species, and I guess it stuck. Y’know: elves, hobbits, centaurs, gorillas, goblins, fish, spiders, basilisks, the lot.”

The barrage of alien terms meant nothing to Talon, but she knew one white-haired listel who would love to talk and learn about the other ancient Soia species. “It is a strange word. ‘Hob-bit.’”

“Yeah. Sounds, uh, kinda old now that I think about it.” He shrugged. “Could be pre-starflight for all I know.”

“That is certain ancient.” Spiral nodded.

“’s only, what, three-hundred years?”

The humans fought the Soia Empire to a standstill, only centuries after first leaving their home system? Talon searched her creche memories — that was about the same time after first leaving Deinar that the Loroi fought the Delrias. Fortunately, that war had seen the overconfident aliens quickly humbled and placed under loroi guidance.

“Here, maybe there’s something about it in the 'pad's history files!” Alex reached for a pocket and pulled out his data-pad. Like much of the aliens’ devices, it was blockier and larger than the Union equivalent. Not quite what Talon would have expected from such an ancient people, but then if they were only a single long lifetime distant from their first steps off their homeworld…

The three of them crowded together, Talon ducking to let Alex’s arm sweep over her head and tap search commands into the machine. The two diral-sisters may be tenoin and not ever-curious listel, but it was interesting to learn something about the ancient aliens.

And besides, the energetic, bubbly curiosity in Alex’s voice was a rare moment of male-like behavior from him. It was strangely heartwarming to be reminded that for all his warrior background, he was still a male at heart.

<I thought you of all people would already know that!> Spiral sent with a peal of sanzai-only laughter, evidently having picked up on Talon’s thoughts.

The arrir shot a bemused grin across Alex at her diral-sister, before shaking her head and relaxing as Alex began to read aloud what he found from his search. After all the stresses of their missions together, it was… nice to finally be able to simply relax together, even if only for a half-cycle.

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The door slid aside without a sound, admitting Tempo to the negotiations room. Stepping carefully so as not to make a sound, she strode over to the observer’s bench and took her seat again next to Fireblade.

Their eyes met for a moment before Tempo glanced aside at the four representatives. She sent a wordless ping of curiosity.

Fireblade shook her head. <You have missed little of importance. They are still arguing over every tiny detail of organization.>

As they’d been doing earlier, when Tempo left to check on the pilots. <They still insist on independence?>

Fireblade nodded. <Which is ridiculous! They still hold to it, even after admitting that they and the Humans combined have less than sixty million people!>

Tempo raised one eyebrow, as she suppressed a smile. <They fought a war against their very creators, all to win the ability to control their own affairs. Is it that surprising that they are reluctant to give up that power, now?>

It was also a moot point. Even ignoring their tiny population, the rebel loroi would inevitably end up within the sphere of the Union in time. And not just because they were loroi: their two dreadstars, while extremely powerful as warships, were not self-supporting. At least, not from what she had gleaned from several carefully-steered conversations with Colonel Jardin.

It said several very… ‘interesting’ things that the rebel loroi had planned to be utterly dependent on their human fellow refugees for agricultural, logistical and industrial support even if their flight had worked precisely as intended. Tempo had originally expected that the ancient Loroi would be more rapidly drawn into the fold of their Union counterparts, and that the main thrust of the negotiations would be between the loroi and the humans. Yet instead it seemed that the two 'foreign' groups were closer to each other than either was to the Union.

Regardless, the Union simply had too much to offer the ancient loroi for them to turn away.

The less-predictable factor would be the humans themselves.

<But they have no need for ‘independence’!> Fireblade sent, exasperation blanketing her sanzai. <We are all loroi!>

Tempo frowned; Fireblade seemed almost personally insulted by the Legions’ refusal to yet bow to Union authority. Why was she insisting so strongly on that point, as if to hersel—?

Of course. Those few scattered reports from the various occupied loroi worlds eventually reclaimed by the Union. Especially Seren. <We cannot criticize these Ancients too much, given that even loroi in our own time have shown that close ties to one’s own people cannot be taken as a given.>

The teidar grimaced, turning her head aside.

A deeply unpleasant set of memories, Tempo well knew. She had not taken part in debriefing the survivors of those worlds — had been busy stabilizing the domestic situation back on Deinar at the time — but she had read the reports. Survivors from multiple of the Hierarchy’s ‘experiment facilities’ on Seren had reported overhearing non-Hal-Tik voices working alongside the Hierarchy researchers.

Loroi voices.

Performing their own vile part in the horrific experiments performed upon Seren’s dwindling loroi population.

The traitors had shielded their minds, of course, but there were enough eyewitness reports that not all of them could be trauma-induced hallucinations.

Fireblade eventually sent <This situation is nothing like… that. These Legion loroi seem most unlikely to take arms against the Union; I simply do not understand why they refuse to join their sisters within the Union.> Only one who had known her for years would have been able read in the slight tightening of her lips the irritation which Fireblade kept out of her mind-signature.

But Tempo had known her friend for years. Perhaps this was not the time to be indirect. Setting aside her well-honed mizol instincts, Tempo sent bluntly <They do not fully trust us yet, and they are right to do so. They know that their two dreadstars will be thrown right back into the fighting, now against the Shells. And loroi they may be, but they are loroi who have been fighting a war for many generations. A war that they lost. They doubtless desire few things more than some time to rest and live in peace… time that the Union will not, can not, give them.>

<Surely the Union will begrudge them a few eighths of a year in rest?> Fireblade sent. <Even two entire leave periods would still leave the Torrai enough time to work them into the next offensive. Once the Shells are gone, they can rest then.>

Tempo paused before responding, long enough that Fireblade’s brow creased into a faint frown. For her part, Tempo concentrated on keeping the pity coalescing in her mind from betraying even the slightest hint of its presence.

And though it tore at her to know how insulted Fireblade would feel at being ‘pitied,’ Tempo could not help but feel so. Pity for a loroi who had spent her entire life — from the very earliest age — at war. For a loroi who had never known so much as a solon of actual peace, ever since as a pre-diral child she had looked up to see Hierarchy warships darkening the skies over her birth-world. Who had no concept of what a warrior’s life was supposed to be, other than constant warfare.

<It seems likely that they would wish for a significantly longer rest than that.> Tempo sent.

But how long would it take for a loroi society to recover from the deep wounds of near-annihilation? It was a question that had never before needed to be asked, and one that the Union had not yet discovered for itself. A year? Two years? Eight?

Ten, at least, should be sufficient in Tempo’s estimation. Enough time for the next generation to be molded into warriors, for the existing old guard to see that the future of their people was developing well.

But the Union did not have ten years.

<Many things that a warrior wishes for cannot be granted.> Fireblade replied.

Tempo winced at the harsh tones grinding through her friend’s sub-channels. She knew how… ‘restricted’ Fireblade’s life had been, thanks to her early life under occupation on Seren. Lingering questions about just what the effects of Hierarchy experimentation and a violent childhood would be upon a loroi’s psyche.

Seeking a distraction, she turned to the discussion still ongoing in the center of the large compartment. The actual words spoken she largely ignored — while Tempo was far from a junior mizol, the talks here were still well above her caste rank. Let the attentive crowd of Torimor and senior Torrai arrayed along the far wall handle that; Tempo would find out through her normal channels what of substance was actually discussed.

Rather, it was the other persons who had been brought to the meeting that interested her. Per millennia-old Deinar tradition, no weapons had been allowed to be brought to the talks. Also per Deinar tradition, Teidar were not similarly prohibited, hence Fireblade’s presence here.

Given the… traditional mindsets of many of those clustered too close to the Imperial government — especially those who had been born and grew up on the eldest-among-equals of the Sister Worlds — it was even possible that the Union’s representatives had honestly forgotten that their foreign counterparts would not know of that long-practiced workaround.

Although from the appearance of things, it seemed that at least the UNSC managed well all the same. While the two Legion representatives each had one normal-looking warrior as escort, unremarkable except for her unfamiliar armor, the UNSC’s envoy stood in front of the by-far largest human Tempo had ever seen.

As if reacting to her curious gaze, a green-armored helmet turned slightly to her. Even through the mirrored golden visage of the alien’s visor, Tempo could feel his eyes on her. As much as any being that large could be called ‘male.’ The questions asked about this strange being by the understandably-spooked guards outside the negotiations chamber had caused a — thankfully minor — incident, earlier.

Apparently, there were now two species known to the Union who appended numbers to individual’s names. And while the humans were quite evidently not Shells, such a naming convention still provoked an instinctive dislike in any Union loroi.

Although perhaps the humans had something in common with the Deinarid castes: their towering escort had remained as silent as any teidar, even as sharp questions were asked and harsh glances thrown his way before the situation was resolved.

<The alien is not like my caste-sisters.> objected Fireblade. Evidently the familiarity of long service alongside each other had left open a slight crack in Tempo’s mental discipline, for her friend to receive some of her thoughts that way. <We disdain vocal speech to better emphasize our control over sanzai; the alien seems to have no way of communicating other than vocal speech. It is simply being rude.>

Perhaps it was unsurprising that the ‘instinctive dislike’ was strongest-felt by the loroi in the room who had suffered most at the claws of the Hierarchy. Tempo risked another blunt response, <Or perhaps it is simply wisdom, a warrior holding their thoughts when diplomats are speaking.>

Fireblade took a few solon to answer. When she did, thankfully now some few threads of humor were woven into her sanzai. <But if all warriors were so ‘wise,’ then life would become boring for you mizol.>

<And we can’t have that, can we?> Tempo quirked a thin smile at her friend. <Who would wish to miss such engaging events such as—> she paused, listening to the stilted, formal conversation of the talks for several solon <—technology-licensing agreements?>

<Who, indeed.> While the teidar kept her face as impassive as ever, the glint in her eye reassured Tempo that Fireblade’s dour mood had passed.

Good. After all, as routine as the talks were between the Union and their ancient ancestors — not to mention the strange aliens — they represented the one thing that the Union needed most right now: an advantage over the Hierarchy. The Shells had shown how much they had gained from adapting one of the Humans’ lotai-machines; just imagine what the Union could gain from access to both ancient technology and warriors trained to operate it!

Although, speaking of which— <Has there been any news from the investigation into slipspace?> One of the first things that all parties had agreed on many cycles earlier was to have their technical experts compare notes on the gravitational readings of Union space.

Tempo had had the two tenoin brief her on the topic well enough to follow along: the humans had shown that the Soia’s disruption of the ‘slipspace barrier’ was enough that their larger vessels could not safely cross over back into realspace. Even the ‘smaller’ human warships present here had encountered major difficulties, although the two tenoin and Beryl had been able to work around that. But could their solution be up-scaled to the larger human warships?

Or the two dreadstars?

<Unfortunately, yes.> Fireblade sent. <The say their models show Beryl’s solution only working reliably for ships around the size of the human frigates. For the others, they would risk heavy damage or destruction with each jump.>

<That is better than nothing. But then the larger craft are forever stuck in this slipspace?>

<For now, they say. But that leaves one obvious solution: the Soia’s Ring created this problem, so destroying it may undo the block.> Fireblade’s sanzai flashed a brief burst of eager anticipation. <The humans said that they could track where the Ring departed to from the system where we found it, and the torrai are certainly planning a strike mission even now.> She caught Tempo’s gaze and added intensely <We will be on that mission.>

Tempo raised one eyebrow. <I doubt that the torrai would send any group but ours. We are the Union’s most-experienced warriors at working alongside the humans and Legion loroi.> Sanzai was not a mode of communication prone to false modesty.

<Good.> Fireblade acknowledged, turning away to regard the still-ongoing talks. She nodded slowly, as if to herself. <Fully unleashing the power of two operational Dreadstars? It will spell doom for the Hierarchy.> She turned back to meet Tempo’s gaze. <And I will be there to see it done.>

Flinty red eyes met unyielding green.

<We both will.> agreed Tempo.
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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens

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I'm still a bit unsure about the two operational dreadstars, more so if they get out of slipspace. It's a "bit" of an overkill, or is that also something out of HALO?

Also, four in total or four at once? :o

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Well, 'getting the two dreadstars back to realspace and ready for war' (and, crucially, 'willing to support the Union') is pretty much the end-game objective for the Union, here. That sort of massive overkill turns the war against the Hierarchy into little more than a mopping-up operation and they know it.

And which 'four' are you referring to?
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Urist wrote:
Sun Jun 23, 2024 7:06 pm
Well, 'getting the two dreadstars back to realspace and ready for war' (and, crucially, 'willing to support the Union') is pretty much the end-game objective for the Union, here. That sort of massive overkill turns the war against the Hierarchy into little more than a mopping-up operation and they know it.
It's just that the dreadstars will be overkill against everyone. Including the Union. Or will that be a plot point as well?
Urist wrote:
Sun Jun 23, 2024 7:06 pm
And which 'four' are you referring to?
Just a joke based off that line:
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Alex turned his head aside and coughed into one hand. “Right. Well, uh, back to the view?” He stepped around to the front of the bench. “There’s room for four, if, uh—” he cut himself off.

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Cthulhu wrote:
Sun Jun 23, 2024 7:31 pm
It's just that the dreadstars will be overkill against everyone. Including the Union. Or will that be a plot point as well?

Just a joke based off that line:
Ah. Yeah, the Union are debating how much they want to risk helping the Legion dreadstars return, largely for that reason. It's not a major focus for the POV characters (and only Tempo is really aware of it, and Fireblade to a lesser extent; Talon is too young/junior to really think at that level of politics), but when things continue after the negotiations the Union will have added a few requirements to lessen their perceived risk.

And to be fair, I tried to describe (via history lessons from both Jardins) that dreadstars are far from invincible by themselves; like all capital ships they need their screening vessels to be properly efficient warfighting machines. And neither Legion has anything more than a tiny handful of screening warships left; the dreadstars emptied their bays to fit the UNSC evacuation arks fit in. Meanwhile, the UNSC only has three frigates and one prowler as proper 'warships' here; the Infinity-class can be armed but that takes time to refit.

So while the dreadstars are easily the most powerful single warships in known space, they're only useful by themselves for ambush attacks against Shells that haven't seen them before; given more than a minute or two to think about it the Shells could actually mob even two dreadstars and destroy them, albeit at severe cost (which wouldn't bother the Hierarchy at all). After all, a Shell warship is several hundred thousand tons (several of them mass into the millions) of metal that can accelerate at 20+ gravities; given enough of a run-up to build up speed a thousand or so Shell warships easily have enough kinetic energy to disable a dreadstar via ramming attacks.

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And as for the seating, there is plenty of room for for four to sit side-by-side... by human spacing standards. By loroi standards, they would have to get quite 'friendly' with each other to sit so closely. But they would fit (no, Spiral, that's *not* an excuse for you to sit on Alex's lap!). I put that in mostly to show that Talon *does* consider Tempo to be part of 'their' group of loroi who have fought through the crazy last few weeks. So she's being friendly enough even to the mizol whose sneaky ways she doesn't quite like.
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Ah, okay, I probably understood the issue, it was me getting all the Soia tech levels mixed up, yours, Arioch's and mine (from my fanfic). I'm currently filling up my chapter buffer, you see, so it was an honest mistake, sorry about that.

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Heh, no worries! Fanfiction is all written for the fun of it anyways, so I hope you enjoy getting back to writing your story!
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